އަބަދުވެސް ލޯބި ދޭނަން….4

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1. Salaam my lovely readers ??Here is the 4th part of my first story ???mi part kuruvi kamahtakai thiya kiyuntherin ge kibain maafah edhen ??maadhama 2 part genesdheveytho masahkaiy kuraanan insha allah ??❤??Thiya kiyuntherin ge faraathun libey supportah thanks ???I’ll try my best ???

2. me first dhw

   1. Yeah,yamikko first dhw??next time ves first hoadhahche ingey…☺☺☺

3. Nice……?????

   1. Thanks Baby girl❤..various happy vejje dear ah mi part kamudhiyaeema ??,luvs ???

4. vrh reethi mi parts vx….n sorry…. School ga busy kamn comment nukurevuny but i read it all…but mi part kudakoh kuru nge then faharakun dhigu kohlache dear….ly

   1. Insha allah, tomorrow ga 2 part neredheynan ingey..dhe part ves miah vure dhigukoh genesdheveytho masahkaiy kuraanan ??luv u more ???❤❤❤???????

5. Aslu mi story liyefa Inna gothakun confuse vanee…nimey sentence aai fasha sentence nueh gulhey…ibaaraai kurun ehgothakah ves kamaku nudhey…ekamakuves mi story sentence thah gulhuvaidhey goi ragalhu kohliyyamu mi story v reethi vedhaane..

   1. Insha allah, I’ll improve it ??Thanks ziff dear…..

6. V kuru..mi baI

   1. Sorry, Anonymous dear, varah undhagoo type kuran..* meethi jeheema undhagoo vany..Insha allah,
      Tomorrow ga 2 parts fenigen dhaane..☺☺☺

7. V reethi mih part vax.

   1. Thanks EHLEE dear ???

8. I had found a mistake,Um that firihenunge nazaru liyan ulhefa aenee ethaa thibi firihenunge eyna ah huttumun..aee olhumakun ingey readers??

9. Ehves kujjakah vaa nuvaa eba engeytha? Engey kujjaku kiyaala deebala. Adives vaa eh nuvaa eh neyge 🙁

   1. Kam dear ??I’m not prefect in writing storiexx ??so it’s betteralhugandu ge vaahaka dheke foohivaa kudhin ehen vaahaka eh kiyya..Dandelion beynumee gina characters laigen vaahaka liyan..??So I can improve it in future, INSHA’ALLAH

10. Thee adhi emme 12 aharuge kujjekey. Loabeege vaahakathah liye adhi kiyaa vareh nuvey. Parents mikahala kankamah maa bodah alhaanulaathy miheh vany. To be honest, your story has a lot of mistakes. Vaahaka eh liyeveyny vaahaka aky koachehkan rangalhah Engigen. Vaahaka aky hamaekani baivaru shahusiyyathu thakeh laafa Loabeege haadhisa thakeh hingaala echeh noon. Vaahaka aky eahvvure bodu echeh. Amilla ah umuruaa Nugulhey vaahaka thi liyany.

    1. Thi teacher gandu beynun vaa gothah medhukandaa laifin..amilla meehaage parents r behibala.Bala ahannah vure kudakudhin loabeege vaahaka liyuneema keehve ehcheh bunan neygeny..Adhi ehchekey kiya the eba…

    2. Kiya ey eba*

11. Kam ehn ebuny nukiyaakah nooney.. because she doesn’t know it.. writer u also have to understand the point..

    1. Ok, but readers ves writers are talk kuran jeheynee reechah dhw ??I understand that point…aee seedhaa kam dear aa dhimaalah buni ehcheh noon..mibuny Dandelion ge story kamunudhaa kudhinnah…gina writers vaahaka thafseelu kohdhineema vessel baeh readers bunaane olhumeh nufila ey..???kury part thah kiyaaleema olhufilaane, insha allah ???

    2. Kohdhinyma baeh *

    3. Ur right. Varah kiyaahithun kiyany ekam hama understand nuvegen buny nuvaa vaahaka. But ehaa rude javaabeh dhinyma varah dheravehje. Ehaa rude koh javaab dhin writer akaa adhi dhimaeh nuvey. Nevermind.

    4. Sorry kam dear ??Aslu gasthu ga eh noon..plxx forgiv me..kuriah huri prt thakugai vaagoiy ingeyne…Dandelion aslu neh kanneyge hadikoh vaahaka dhahkaafa eh..Aslu aee dear aa dhimaalah buni ehcheh nooney bunefa innaane..so I’m really sorry

    5. Its ok ?? ekam ehaa rude koh vaahaka nudahkahchey ehves reader akaa.. readers ge comments tah balaafa improve kuraane n let them be ur fans…

12. story salhi, but haadha undhaguley dandelion kiyan… aslu kiyani kon name eh kan bune dheefaanan tha mind nukuranyaa.ily<3

    1. Dear beynun gothakah keema rangalhu vaane ingey???

13. Samaalu kamah..
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    Alhugandu liyamun dhaa vaahaka,medhu kandaali vaahaka dhannavameve.
    Veemaa kiyuntherin ge kibain maafah edhemeve.mivaahaka Dhen genesdheveynee July mas nimunee maeve.
    Alhugandu mivaahaka liyun huttaly thiya comment kuraa kudhin dhekerulhi ais gen nooneve.

14. oh y medhukandaali. v dhigukoh wait kuran dhw dhn jeheyni. hehe ekam medhukandaalan jehunu sababu bunela dheefaanan tha. varah love

    1. Alhey varah bodah sorry ??☺☺try kuraanan kuruvaahaka eh genesdheveythw..Dandelion ge hithah ery kuda dhuvas kolhakah break nagan the ey…

15. Sorry guys ???I’m so sad

16. No need say sorry.. when i was in ur age i was writing same … but my teacher told first write simple long story with 4 or 2 heroes…..i mean lover…nd second story write more nd more cracters….
    Teachers vess bunney loabbi ge vaahaka liyunass emmeh ragalhey…so i started…nd vrh mistakes hedhun ekam ragalhu kuryma mihaaru perfect iraadhah kurehviyya…
    To u write love story…but write itin urs own imagination so it would be correct….. image first what happen nd next write your feelings about. That imagination u saw…
    Nd there may be spelling mistakes so sorry for that…???

    1. Thanks ❤dear….dear ge thi comment kiyaafa varah gina ideas libun..dear, Dandelion ehn benefa aee vaahaka medhu kandaalan jeheythy ey…heheh,.Anyways thanks ingey???

17. hehehe.. thi varah hevvaa vaahaka eh dhw thi buny.. 12 years ge kujjaku loabyge vaahaka eh liyunyma eii v bodu masala ehh. ekam hama e age ge kudhin boys govaigen ulheyne haa gothakah ulhun eii eves myhakaa behey kameh noon dhw? parents ves balanvy loabyge vaahaka nuliyey tho? aslu 12 yrs ge kujjakaa balaafa vvvvvv molhu hama vaahaka liyan masha allah..

    1. Thanks millton

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