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1. nice next part v avahah plx

2. Haadha jure but nais

3. Haadha kure. Ekamu v rah reethi

4. The story is very nice and im really very happy you uploaded the story but the story is way too short. Next time please make it longer.☺???????????????

5. Bayyeh dhn mi. Ehaa zamaan kohfa up kuraa iruves dhe folhuvaiy. Thivarun huttaalaa dhn

   1. Emiliya u should be thankful to her because she saved her precious time and wrote the story what if its too short she didint stop like others right. Its better to be thankful that she uploaded

6. Ehaa lahun up kuraairuves genesdhenee kuda kuda thankolheh?

7. Nuvanyaa vaahaka nuliyhurey

   1. She is trying right

8. Thivarun thikan nukuryma nimunynun

   1. Its really good of her that she is completing the story she started right. Others stop and never write again but she is.. what if its just two lines ir two letters

9. Myhun vaahaka liyaathy liyanshy kiyaigen thelheny dhw

10. These ppl will shout if they didnt upload also..now shouting bcx its uploaded..funny..kuru vias genas dhinee eh nu e vaa varakun..
    Thanks genas dhineema..mi part ves reethi ma sha allah..hope to see soon again

11. Thnxxx kayaani n someone to understanding my situation… n everyone i am trying to write it long n nice.. if i made anyy mistake plxx forgive me.. this is my hobby n dream thats y i am doing it if i am bixy also… thnxx for everyone comments.. thank you

12. vara vara reethi kuriya oy part kiyaahithun inthizaaru ga mihuree vvvv reethi

13. bxy vias kura kameh ehen meehun balaiganna gothah full dedication aa eku kureema hen heevanee magusadhu haasil vaanee. thr r ppl who waits d story to be up so yew shud respect their feelings..

14. Nxt vyma bxy vegen thiulhey kameh kiranvynu???bxy vegen cykle buru jahan dhevey..eh restaurant in aneh restaurant in dhuvey… ekam vaahaka liyaane vagutheh nuvey…thivarun huhtaalan vynu??? Thigothah myhun vaahaka liye tha???

15. Sry bxy vyma……

16. Yaa vaguthu by varakun up kohdhey iru we have to thanks her cox she doing this for us n her n our happines….. Thanks dear take your on time n plx up soon.OK…. Gud job keep it up………

17. Eynayah waawarakun genesdheweythw ehnu ebalanii..

18. nice mi partves….shain and shaain use kohfa hunnaathee varah confuse

19. This is a fuckin story …… Eyna aky med vaahaka liyan kulha dhaana myhehnoon…nufoara fothin foo galhan noolhebala………….

    1. Mr.kada plz liyumuge kurin thi liyanee keekey tho balaafa post kohbala.. ladhuganey thi ves insaanekey bunan… al de ppl r nt lyk u.. they also have a heart and feelings so think before write… :p

20. kankamah kemmadhuvefa thibey meehun story kiann nuulhebala mr.KADA…..thy v hadi kameh..really ..ladhu

    1. I agreeeee…. mr.kada heevanee kuraane kameh nethigen moyavegen ulhwy meeheh hen….. kadatha

21. vaahaka liyaanama jeheyne daily update kuran vaguthakee hoadhaa ehcheh vaguthu libendhen nukoh hunnan ya nuvefa onnaanee ekkameh ves miha lahun genes dhineema kuree part in v nuvee eh handhaaneh ves neh..

22. Waahaka upload kurumuge kurin kuhthah check kollehwun edhen..so dhen everyone can read nicely..

23. Aslu aseel ebunee thedhehh….. I agree with tht comment… Liyuntheriyaa ah kurierun libeyneevex kiyuntheringe comment thakah balaafa ithurah improve kuran ulhuneema hen shabee ah heevanee ….. But still I appreciate ur work author… WELLDONE 🙂 keep going like tht… No matter what comes in ur way jst keep writing the story even once a part in a month… 😉 good luck… Jazakillah khairan 😛

24. Mihaaru esfiyaves haadha kada vejje ey… miha baivaru vaahaka onna iruves up vanee mi haalakun dhivahaku haalakun vaahaka eh.. kiyaa meehun ves foohivaane mivaru vangna.

25. i agree with aish

26. Nuliyebala vaahaka thi varun….

27. Thihaavaru vanya esfiya sight ah thimeehun vaahaka kiyan nuvadhe bala. Liyun therin nah vaahaka liyaane furusatheh libuni ma dho liyevey ni…:p kei kohbala…. shaai continue on ur works… and varah varah bodah inthizaaru kuran nxt paartah.. hurihaa partekey eh fadha in mipart ves varah salhi:)

    1. Dhw naff… Kiyuntheringe kehtherikan Hama kudaeee…. Shabee ah vex VAANEE ehn.. But we should thank n appreciate their work dhw???

28. Thnxx everyone… ☺☺☺☺

29. allah vodigen vanyy keththerinna ekyy..shaai huri magaam gai thimyhun hirinama ehen meehun egothah coment kuran feshyma ingeynyy vaavaru..kuraane ihsaas..i love this part..

30. keep it up

31. v reethi.. ekam thankolhah kuryy + maa lahy up vaaleh… anyway waitin for d next part

32. Good Work!!!

33. Yes of course shabee… reethi vaahaka kiyan kei madhuvaane ekamu ei dhen boduvareh dho…

34. Hmm naff… But gina faharah shabee ahvex vanee ehen… Reethi v ma vaahaagoeh goeh dhw.. Keehkuraanee 😉 but author up kureemathaa gaimuvex kiyeynee… Kithamme rulhi ayas.. Kehtherikan kolhun liyas.. Dhw nuff… Shabee dheynan mi story ah 2nd place 😀

    1. Yes of course, shaai dhen avahah up koh dheeba dhen naff akah ves kei nukurevey ne…. 🙁 🙂

35. thnxx shx naff shabee n everyone for reading my story n giving comments.. thank you so much// 🙂 🙂

    1. Comment kuree ma v ufa veh je… eh baeh kiya kiya foohi nuvey… ehen vi ma mikiyani avah up kohla dhee balaashey

36. finally shaai ge comment eh libijje… ehn ve foni vejje 😛

37. Going to up it soon insha allah… thanxx once again

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