ވެހޭ ވާރޭ ތެރެއިން…15[ފަހުބައި]

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1. Here is the last part and thank u all for the support.. my frst story have funished very nicely cox of u r all support thank u all.

2. Varah salaam vaahaka kiyaa nimunee vahasalaaam.

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3. Aslu dhn ninmaalugoi not nice

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4. Kihineh nimun genaee vaahaka ge nimun hadi

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5. ވާހަކަ ހަޑި

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6. Vaahaka kamakunudhe

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7. Nimun eha ehaa ehnoon…Anyways yuh tried dhw …but I hope next story ehga mistakes rangalhu kohlaane kamah..good luck???❤❤❤????????????

   1. I KNOW IT next time will try my best

8. Vaahakaige ninmun genes dhyfa inn oiyy ehaa ryhcheh noon…. Ekm masha allah… Vaahaka varah rythi… V mistakes faahaga kurevun… Sifa kurumugA vx…. N writting mistakes thah correct kohfa dhn liyaa vaahaka eh upkohla dhehchey… Even i m also a story writer…. Bt elder than u… keep going forward…. God bless u dear….

   1. I know there are mistakes but i tried hard.

9. Vaahakaige ninmun genes dhyfa inn oiyy ehaa ryhcheh noon…. Ekm masha allah… Vaahaka varah rythi… V mistakes faahaga kurevun… Sifa kurumugA vx…. N writting mistakes thah correct kohfa dhn liyaa vaahaka eh upkohla dhehchey… Even i m also a story writer…. Bt elder than u… keep going forward…. God bless u dear…. ❤❤❤

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10. Varah reethi. .and you tried your best … ninmmunves Salhi inge .. love you ♥❤♥ ❤♥❤♥

    1. Thanx a lot

11. All readers please respect her. She is only 12 alhugandu adhi mihaa furihama story eh nudheken. 12 years aa balaafa ok. Vv reethi.

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12. Vaahaka jumulakoh v. Reethi.
    Ekam baeh thanthan kurugalhuvaafahen heevany.
    liyun kuriah gendhey, adhi liyefa ehkoh rangalhah kiyaala, mistake thah amihla ah faahaga kureveyne.adhi, Insha Allah, eyrun kaamiyaab liyun theriakah v. Avahah veveyne.

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13. This story was rushed.. Zombie.. u have potential to write good stories.. I just read the whole story from the start.. Keep the names of characters u create and their relationships noted.. Don’t just write names on a whim.. Btw does is make sense that Iyaan and Ishee didn’t meet at Ayaan and Ishaa’s wedding as in laws? And errashegga ulhey iruves school maahaulun namaves ingeyne noontha? Iththun Oththun.. e dhivehi bahuga hunna basbaheh noon.. ishyneve.. oshoatheve.. migothah badhal kuran dhas kuran eba jehey Zombie.

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14. The next story u write, Imma try and point out ur mistakes and correct them as much as I can

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15. Eesh❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?????Ninmun vvvvv reethi…. Manma akaa bappa aku emeehehge dharifulhu uraalaigen photo eiy negeema mihaa reethi vaane?????? Dhonthi mi vaahakige ninmun kiyaali iru E manzaru v reethi oh sifavi?????? I just loved this story????????????????? And you too ingey??????????????????????????????????????????????????

    1. Thank u so so so much dear for a colourful and sweet comment

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17. NICE story ehkon

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