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ތާތުގެ މޫނަށް ބަލާލެވުނީ ދެލޯ ބޮޑު ކޮށްލަމުން ނެވެ. ދެންމެ ނިކުމެގެން އެ ދިޔައީ ހަމަ އަހަރެންގެ އަސްލު މަންމަ ހެއްޔެވެ. އެކަމަކު އަހަރެންގެ އަސްލު މަންމަ ކައިރިއަށް އަހަރެން ގެނައީ ކާކު ހެއްޔެވެ. މި ފަދަ އެތައް ސުވާލެއް އަހަރެންގެ ހިތު ތެރޭގައި ބުރުޖަހަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. ކިތަންމެ އަނގައިން ބުނާ ހިތް ވިޔަސް އަހަރެންނަކަށް އެންމެ ލަފްޒެއް ވެސް ބޭރުކޮށެއް ނުލެވުނެވެ. އަހަރެންގެ ދުލުގައި މީހަކު ހިފަހައްޓާފައިވާ ފަދަ އެވެ.

އަހަރެންނަށް ވަމުން ދިޔަ ގޮތުން ކައިރީގައި އިން ތާތު އިނީ ހައިރާންވެފަ އެވެ. އޭނާގެ މޫނުމަތިން ހާސްކަން ވެސް ފެނެއެވެ. ވަރަށް ބާރަށް ނިކުމެގެން ގޮސްފައި ދެން އައީ މަންމަ ގޮވައިގެން ނެވެ. އަހަރެންނަށް އެތެރެއަށް ވަތް މަންމަ ފެނުމާ އެކު އެނދުން ތެދުވެ އެ ދިމާލަށް ދުއްވައިގަތީ މެވެ. އަދި ވަރަށް ބާރަށް މަންމަގެ ގައިގައި ބައްދާލީ މެވެ.  އެ ހިސާބުން އަހަރެން މި އޮއް ހާ އިރު ހިފަހައްޓައިގެން ހުރި ކަރުނަތައް އޭގެ މަގާމު ދޫކޮށް ފައިބައިގެން ހިނގައްޖެ އެވެ. ތިއްކަކަށް ފަހު ތިއްކެކެވެ. އަޑުން އަޑުނަގާފައި ރޮވެން ފެށުނީ ހިތަށް ކުރި ފުން އަސަރުން ނެވެ. މަންމަވެސް އަހަރެންގެ ގައިގައި ބައްދާލުމަށްފަހު ރޯން ފެށި އެވެ. މަންޒަރުގެ ހިތްދަތިކަމުން ތޯއްޗެކެވެ. މަންޒަރު ބަލަން ދުރުގައި ހުރި ތާތު ވެސް ހުރީ ފެންކަޅިވެފަ އެވެ.

މަޑު މަޑުން އަހަރެން ދުރުކޮށްލަމުން މަންމަ އެދުނީ އަރާމުކޮށްލަން ދިއުމަށެވެ. އަދި އަހަރެންގެ އަތުގައި ހިފަަހައްޓައިގެން ހުރެ ގެނެސް އެނދުގައި ބާއްވާލި އެވެ. މަންމަ އިށީނީ އަހަރެންގެ މަގަތުގައެވެ. އަދި މަޑު މަޑުން އަހަރެންގެ ބޮލުގައި އޯގާތެރި ކަމާއެކު ފިރުމަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. މަންމަގެ ފުރަތަމަ ބީހިލުމުން ވެސް އަހަރެންގެ ހިތަށް ލިބިދިނީ ހިތްހަމަ ޖެހުމެވެ. އިހްސާސް ކުރެވުނީ ރައްކާތެރި ކަމެވެ. މިއިން ދުވަހަކުވެސް އިހްސާސް ނުކުރެވޭ ވަރަށެވެ. މަންމަ އަހަރެންގެ އިސްތަށިގަނޑުގައި ފިރުމަމުން ދިޔަ ވަރަކަށް އަހަރެންގެ ބޮލަށް ބަރުވެގެން ގޮސް އަހަރެންނަށް ދުވަހަކުވެސް ނުނިދޭހާ އަރާމުކޮށް ނިދިއްޖެ އެވެ.

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” ޖާޒިމް… ކޮބާ…؟ ޖަޒްލީ ފެނުނު ތަ..؟ ” ދޮރުން ވަތް ޖާޒިމް ފެނުމާ އެކު ސިޓިންރޫމްގައި އިން ޝަޒިއްޔާ އަށް އަހާލެވުނީ ހާސްކަމާއެކު އެވެ. ޖާޒިމްއަށް ކަރު އެލުވާ ލެވުނީ ޖަޒްލީ އެއް ނުފެނުނޭ ބުނާނެހާ ހިތްވަރު އޭނާގެ ކިބައިގައި ނެތުމުން ނެވެ. ނަމަވެސް ޖާޒިމްގެ މި އަމަލުން ޝަޒިއްޔާއަށް އޭގެ މާނަ ނަގައި ގަނެވުނު ފަދައެވެ. ” ނޫން… ނޫން…” ދެން ފެނުނީ ޝަޒިއްޔާ ހޭނެތިގެން ވެއްޓުނު ތަނެވެ. ޖާޒިމް އަށް ދުއްވައިގަނެވުނީ ޝަޒިއްޔާ އާ ދިމާލަށެވެ. މިއީ ރޭއްސުރެންވެސް އޭނާގެ ހާލަތެވެ.
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– ރޭގައި…

ޖާޒިމް އާއި ޝަޒިއްޔާ ކޮޓަރީގައި ތިބީ ޖަޒްލީގެ ޕާޓީ އޮތުމުން ނުނިކުންނާށެވެ. ދެ މީހުން ވާހަކަ ދައްކަން ތިއްބާ މީހަކު ދޮރުގައި ޓަކި ޖެހުމުން ގޮސް ދޮރުހުޅުވީ ޝަޒިއްޔާއެވެ. ” ދައްތާ… ޖަޒްލީ އެބަ އުޅޭތަ…؟ ” އަރީޝާ ވާހަކަ ދެއްކީ ކޮޓަރިތެރެއަށް ބޯ ދިއްކޮށްލަމުން ނެވެ. މޫނު މަތިން ހާސްކަން ފެންނަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. ” ޖަޒްލީ އޭ… ޖަޒްލީއެއް ނާދޭ މި ކޮޓަރިއަކަށް… ” ޝަޒިއްޔާއަށް ލިބުނު ހައިރާންކަމާއި އެކު ބުނެވުނެވެ. ” އެންމެން ވެގެން ޓެރެސް ބަލައިފިން… އެތާކު ނެތް ޖަޒްލީއެއް… ދެން.. ” ” ކޮޓަރި ބެލިންތަ..؟ ” އަރީޝާގެ ޖުމްލަ މެދު ކަނޑާލުމަށް ފަހު ޝަޒިއްޔާ އަހާލިއެވެ. ” އާނނ… ކޮޓަރި ބަލާފަ ނެތިގެން މިތަނަށް މިއައީ… ” އަރީޝާ ފޯނު ނަގާ ޖަޒްލީގެ ނަމްބަރަށް ގުޅަން ފެށި އެވެ. ތިން ހަތަރު ފަހަރު ގުޅި އިރު ވެސް ލިބުނީ ހަމަ އެއް ޖަވާބެކެވެ. ފޯނު އޮތީ ނިއްވާލައިފައި ނުވަތަ ގުޅޭ ސަރަހައްދުން ބޭރުގައި ކަމެވެ. އެންމެ ހިނދުކޮޅަކުވެސް މަޑު ނުކޮށް އޭނާ ދުއްވައިގަތީ ސިޑި އާ ދިމާލަށެވެ.
ޝަޒިއްޔާ ހުރީ ލިބުނު ޝޮކުގައި ހުރިތަނުން ހިރިލަންވެސް ނޭނގިފަ އެވެ. އެތެރޭގައި އިން ޖާޒިމް ދެ ތިން ފަހަރު ގޮވާލުމުންވެސް ޖަވާބެއް ނައުމުން އޭނާ ނުކުތް އިރު ޝަޒިއްޔާ ހުރި ގޮތް ފެނި ހައިރާންވި އެވެ. ” ޖާޒިމް… ޖަޒްލީ… ” ޝަޒިއްޔާގެ ކޮނޑުގައި ހިފާ ތަޅުވައިގަތުމާއި ރޮއިގަންނަމުން ބުނެލި އެއްޗަކުން ޖާޒިމްވެސް ހުއްޓުން އެރި އެވެ. ” ޖަޒްލީ ކިހިނެއްވީ… ” ޖާޒިމް އެހެން އަހާލި އިރުވެސް ޝަޒިއްޔާ އަޑުން އަޑު ނަގާފައި ރޮނީ އެވެ. ” ޖަޒްލީ… ޖަޒްލީ… ” ޝަޒިއްޔާ މަސައްކަތް ކުރީ ވީ ގޮތް ޖާޒިމްއަށް ކިޔައި ދެވޭތޯ އެވެ. ނަމަވެސް ގިސް ޖެހޭ ވަރުން ރަނގަޅަށް އެއްޗެއް ބުނެވޭ ވަރެއް ނުވެ އެވެ.
ޝަޒިއްޔާ ހުރިތަނަށް ދޫކޮށްލާފައި ޖާޒިމް ދުއްވައިގަތީ ޖަޒްލީއަށް ވީ ގޮތެއް ބަލާށެވެ. އަރީޝާގެ ފަރާތުން ޖަޒްލީ ގެއްލުނު ވާހަކަ އިވުނު އިރުއްސުރެ މިހާރާ ހަމައަށްވެސް ކެނޑި ނޭޅި ދަނީ ޖަޒްލީ ވީ ތަނެއް ހޯދަމުން ނެވެ. ޕޮލިހުންވެސް ދަނީ ޖަޒްލީ ފެނޭތޯ މުޅި ރަށާއި ކައިރި ރަށް ރަށުގައިވެސް އަތް ފުނާ އަޅަމުން ނެވެ.
އެ ވާހަކަ އިވުނު ފަހުން ޝަޒިއްޔާގެ ހޭ ހުންނަނީ މަދު ފަހަރަކު އެވެ. ހޭ ހުންނަ ފަހަރުވެސް ޖަޒްލީއަށް ނޫން މީހަކަށް ނުގޮވަ އެވެ. ދުނިޔެއިން މޮޔަވެފައި ހުރި މީހެކޭ ތަފާތެއް ނެތެވެ.

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” ހޭ… ތޫ… މި ކޮން ތަނެއް… ” އަހަރެންނާ ތާތު ނިކުތީ ރަށުތެރެ ބަލާ ލާށެވެ. އެއީ އަހަރެމެން އުޅޭ ރަށަށް ވުރެ މާ ފުރިހަމަ ރަށެކެވެ. ދުވަސް ވަރަކީ ޚަރީފް މޫސުމުގެ ދުވަސްވަރު ކަމަށް ވުމުން އޮރެންޖް ކުލައާއި ރަތް ކުލައިގެ ފަތްތަކުން މުޅި ބިންމަތި ވަނީ ފޮރުވިފަ އެވެ. މޫސުން ރީތި ދުވަހަކަށް ވުމުން އުޑުމަތިން ވިލާ ރޮއްޖެއް ހާ ހިސާބުވެސް ނުފެނެ އެވެ. ފަތްތަކު މަތިން ހިނގާލާފައި ދާ އިރު އެ ގޮވާ މުރު މުރު އަޑުން މާހައުލުގެ ހަމަހިމޭންކަން ނަގާލާފައި ވެއެވެ. އަހަރެން އިނގިލި ދިއްކޮށްފައި ތާތުއަށް ދައްކާލީ ހިރިގަލުން ހަދާފައި ހުރި ބޮޑު ގަނޑުވަރެއް ކަހަލަ ތަނެކެވެ. ގިނަ ދުވަސްވުމުން ހުރީ ފެހި ޖަހާ ބާވެފަ އެވެ. ” މީ ދޯ… އަހަންނަކަށްވެސް ނޭނގޭނެ މިތާ ހުންނަ ހުރިހާ ތަން ތަނެއް… ” ހިނިގަނޑެއް ޖަހާލަމުން ތާތު ބުންޏެވެ.

މި ތަނުގައި ހަފްތާއެއް ހާ ދުވަސް ހޭދަވެފައި ވީ އިރު އަހަރެންނާ ތާތު އާ ދެ މެދު ވަނީ ވަރަށް ގާތް ގުޅުމެއް އުފެދިފަ އެވެ. އަރީޝާ ކައިރީގައި ފަސް ނުޖެހި ކޮންމެ އެއްޗެއް ބުނަން ކެރޭ ފަދައިން ތާތު ގާތުގައިވެސް ބުނެލެވެނީ ދެ މީހުންގެ މިޒާޖު އެއް ގޮތް ކަމުން ކަންނޭނގެ އެވެ. ތާތު އާ އެކު ހޭދަ ކުރާ ކޮންމެ ސިކުންތަކު އަހަރެން އަރީޝާ މަތިން ހަނދާން ވެއެވެ. އަރީޝާގެ މަތިން ހަނދާންވާ ކޮންމެ ވަގުތަކު ލޮލުން ކަރުނަ ފާއްދާލަނީ ބޭ އިޚްތިޔާރުގަ އެވެ. އަހަރެންގެ މަންމަ އާއި ބައްޕަ މަތިން ހަނދާންކޮށް ރޯ އިރެއްވެސް މަދެއް ނުވާނެ އެވެ. ކޮންމެ ރެއަކު ނިދޭނީ އެ މީހުންގެ މަތިން ހަނދުމަކޮށް ކަރުނަ އަޅަން އޮއްވަ އެވެ. ބައެއް ފަހަރު އަހަރެންގެ އަސްލު މަންމަ ކައިރީގައި އެ މީހުންގެ ކައިރިއަށް ފޮނުވަން ބުނާ ހިތްވެ އެވެ. ނަމަވެސް އަސްލު މަންމަ އަދި ތާތު ފަދަ ހިތް ހެޔޮ އެކުވެރިއަކު ދޫކޮށްލާފައި ދާކަށްވެސް އަހަރެން ބޭނުމެއް ނުވެއެވެ. މި ދެމެދުގައި އަހަރެން ހުންނަނީ ތާށިވެފަ އެވެ. ދާންވީ މަގެއް ނޭނގި ހިނގަމުން ދާ މުސާފިރެއް ފަދައިން ނެވެ.

” ހަހަހަ… ތާތު އަށް މި ތަނުގައި ހުންނަ ތަން ތަން ނޭނގެންޏާ ދެން އިނގޭނީ ކާކަށް… ” އަހަރެންނަށް އޭތި ނެގުނީ ސަމާސާ އެއް ގޮތަށެވެ. ” އަސްލަށޭ… އަހަރެން މި ކޮޅަށް އައީ ޖޭޒް އައިތާ އެއް ހަފްތާ ކުރިން… އެހެންމަ މާ ބޮޑަކަށް ނޭނގެ މި ތަނާ ބެހޭ ގޮތުންނެއް… ” ސީރިއަސް ރާގެއްގައި ތާތު ބުންޏެވެ.  ‘ ޖޭޒް ‘ އެއީ ތާތު އަހަރެންނަށް ލޯބިން ކިޔާ ނަމެވެ. ” އޯހް… އައި ސީ… ” ދެން އަހަރެން ތާތުއަށް ކިޔައިދޭން ފެށީ އަހަރެންނާއި އަރީޝާ އާ ދެ މީހުން ކޮށްފައި ހުރި މަޖާ ކަންކަމުގެ ވާހަކަ އެވެ. ދެ މީހުން އެކަކު އަނެކަކަށް ލަނޑު ދޭ ވާހަކަ އެވެ. ހިނއައިސްފައި އިނދެ އަހަރެންނާއި އަރީޝާގެ އެކުވެރި ކަމުގެ ފަލްސަފާ ތާތު އާ ހިއްސާކޮށްލީމެވެ. އެ ވާހަކަތައް ކިޔައިދީ ނިމުނު އިރު ތާތު އިނީ ހީހީ ލޮލުން ފެންއައިއްސަ އެވެ. އެ ހާ ވެސް މަޖާ ކަންކަން އަހަރެމެން ދެ މީހުން ކޮށްފައި ހުންނާނެ އެވެ.

” އެއްވެސް މީހެއް ކައިރީ ނުބުނާ މަތިން އެއްޗެއް ދައްކާލަފާނަން…. ” ދެ މީހުން އެއް ވަރަކަށް ހިނގަމުން ވާހަކަ ދައްކަމުން އައިސް ކުއްލިއަކަށް ތާތު އަހަރެންގެ ކުރިމައްޗަށް ފުންމާލުމުން އަހަރެން ދިޔައީ ސިއްސައިގެން ނެވެ. ” ޔާ… ޓްރަސްޓް މީ… ” އަހަރެންގެ ފަރާތުން އިތުރު މީހަކަށް އެއްވެސް އެއްޗެއް ނޭނގޭނެ ކަމުގެ ޔަގީންކަން އަހަރެން ދިނީ މެވެ. ” އަހަރެންނަށް އިނގޭ ޖޭޒް ނުބުނާނެކަން… ” ތާތު މުޅި ހިސާބަށް ލޯ ހިނގާލަމުން ބުނެލި އެވެ.

ކުރިމަތިން ފެނުނު މަންޒަރުން އަހަރެންނަށް ލިބުނު ހައިރާންކަމުގައި ދެލޯ ބޮޑުވެ އަނގަ މަތީގައި އަތް އަޅާލެވުނެވެ.

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103 Comments!

  1. jiji says:
    March 16, 2019 at 2:39 pm

    Me first dhw..kiyaalaafa comment eh kohlaanan ingey!!!❤❤❤??

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 20, 2019 at 4:10 pm

      alhey… jiji loabiii…. hws u…. missed u a lot… yes congrats u r the first… n if u doesn’t get first, that doesn’t matter cox the whole story is dedicated for you… luv you lots n misses much….

  2. Cute Lips says:
    March 16, 2019 at 3:27 pm

    waaaoooow… v obi.. jazlee beli mom ai dad konms gothakun angaa jeyz ge haal ehn noony e dhemafirin halaak vedhaane…..jeyz mihiry eyy ryshh….dhn nuroe huhtaa oonn onn oonn onn.. avahah huhtaa…

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 16, 2019 at 3:56 pm

      haha… thanx drama queen…

  3. Kitty says:
    March 16, 2019 at 3:28 pm

    Wowww. Masha allah varah reethi mi part ves..??❤️?? Ey thaath jinni akah nahadhahhche… Yageen eyna soora badhal v kan.❤️????.. Anyways.. Varah reethi ingey… Its commendable ????❤️???alhey when next part

    1. livy says:
      March 16, 2019 at 3:48 pm

      hey kitty mee zaa ingey…v miss vi thikudhin mathin..ehnve story ehves up kohlii….plx reply…

    2. Eiimerr says:
      March 16, 2019 at 3:58 pm

      haha… maybe…. sorry but i couldn’t upload it before friday

  4. Cute Lips says:
    March 16, 2019 at 3:30 pm

    eyy kitty gmail in on veba

    1. Kitty says:
      March 16, 2019 at 3:51 pm

      I did try many times.. But dhenme msg eh kurin.. U both ah vx

  5. someone says:
    March 16, 2019 at 3:58 pm

    hey kitty me zaa ingey…aslu eyny nu author eh livy jahaafa thats mee…kurin ves comment eh kurin..but innany awaiting moderation ga ehn ve kitty mennah nufennany…..thikudhin miss vaathy vaahaka eh mi up kurany ves….and mee my sister eh phn in kuri msg eh ingey….plx reply…..

    1. Kitty says:
      March 16, 2019 at 6:21 pm

      Zaa.. Really you wrote a story OMG.. so proud of you girl… And me and ina missed u so much girl.. Alhey kyhve tha ehaa dhurun ulhuny.. Varah dheravi ehn hedhyma… Anyways varah happy vejje darla aiima.. Lysm… And Em of course we can understand love.. So no worries

  6. Eiimerr says:
    March 16, 2019 at 4:03 pm

    hellow guys… the next part will be uploaded on next friday… sorry but i couldn’t upload it before friday… i’ll be really busy on week days… hope u guys will understand…

  7. SCARLET❤ says:
    March 16, 2019 at 6:40 pm

    Inaa nehh gadi ehga annany enmenn… Dhw.. Btw I miss u zaa… N stry v salhi ingey.. maybe I’m last kanneyge dhw..???.. ekmu vec v salhi stry ingey..??

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 16, 2019 at 7:10 pm

      Hehe… U got fulun eh vana??? so b proud n thanx sis❤️

    2. Kitty says:
      March 16, 2019 at 7:13 pm

      Hey darla… U there??

  8. Zum says:
    March 16, 2019 at 7:06 pm

    Vrh salhi stry eh mii… ??? N WE CAN UNDERSTAND THAT YOU ARE A STUDENT SO TAKE UR TIME… ❤️

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 16, 2019 at 7:11 pm

      Oh…. Thanx zum…. U r such an understanding person???

  9. Ainth says:
    March 16, 2019 at 7:06 pm

    Habbu stry eh mii…

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 16, 2019 at 7:35 pm

      thanx dear…

  10. Sweetheart says:
    March 16, 2019 at 7:08 pm

    ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Awesome story

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 16, 2019 at 7:36 pm

      wow… such a gorgeous comment… owwwnnn

  11. Eiimerr says:
    March 16, 2019 at 7:37 pm

    hey…. anyone…. where is jiji… long time no c… i want to know how she’s doing…

    1. Kitty says:
      March 16, 2019 at 8:14 pm

      Shes been. Missing

  12. Eiimerr says:
    March 16, 2019 at 8:35 pm

    yeah…

    1. Kitty says:
      March 16, 2019 at 8:50 pm

      Jiji bunyehnu dhn talk kureveykah netho.. Dhn neynge dhw.. Varah miss vey jiji mathin

    2. jiji says:
      March 16, 2019 at 9:00 pm

      Eiimerr plx I fonuvi cvr pic nxt prt ga stry ah lahchey..❤❤????

  13. Eiimerr says:
    March 16, 2019 at 9:06 pm

    Me too???

    1. jiji says:
      March 16, 2019 at 9:09 pm

      Dhn alhe thihaa dhera nuvey..admin bungney admin team in approve kuryma comment thah fennaaney?

  14. Miu says:
    March 17, 2019 at 3:15 pm

    Wowww! I have never read like this story before!

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 17, 2019 at 6:27 pm

      oh… that’s so much for me… thanx gurl… luv ya

  15. its me says:
    March 17, 2019 at 5:23 pm

    woow wht a nyc stry… Eiimerr you totally nailed it… maasha allah.. this is my 1st comment for your stryy 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 17, 2019 at 6:26 pm

      oh… thanx…

  16. Miu says:
    March 18, 2019 at 2:44 pm

    Oh! How nice girl are you!!!!!!

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 18, 2019 at 3:50 pm

      haha…. u 2… such a sweet one!!!

  17. Miu says:
    March 18, 2019 at 3:59 pm

    Oh, thanks…. No one has been said a such a kind word before to me thanx a lot

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 18, 2019 at 6:09 pm

      oh!!! i would b pleased to b a friend of u… will u accept it…

  18. Miu says:
    March 18, 2019 at 4:34 pm

    Um.. Kon irakunthoa next part up ko leveny?

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 18, 2019 at 6:10 pm

      ISA… i’ll try to upload it on friday..

  19. Looloo says:
    March 18, 2019 at 6:07 pm

    Nice …varah reethi masha allah..???????

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 18, 2019 at 6:11 pm

      oh thanx… looloo

  20. Kanoo says:
    March 18, 2019 at 6:13 pm

    Nice… Keep it up …??

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 18, 2019 at 7:57 pm

      thanx dear… thank u for the support

  21. Maain says:
    March 18, 2019 at 6:19 pm

    ??????Dhivehi vaahaka liyumakee vrah rangalhu kameh ..so ?????

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 18, 2019 at 7:58 pm

      yeah… it’s really great… wat a luvlii comment… thankx maain

  22. Miu says:
    March 18, 2019 at 9:46 pm

    Oh, yes of course actually, I don,t have a friend before and after too only they can do is bullying to me and I dont know why?

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 18, 2019 at 10:01 pm

      oh really… that’s so sad… um happy to have a friend like u… don’t be sad… i’ll always b there for u… ISA

  23. Miu says:
    March 18, 2019 at 10:19 pm

    Oh,really finally ihave got a friend like u I,m so happy today

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 19, 2019 at 1:26 pm

      hellow… gurl how r u? whassup?

  24. Reen says:
    March 18, 2019 at 10:26 pm

    Maasha allah..mi kahala reethi part eh dhen ves neren vaanee….ISA…adhi miyvureh
    Rangalhu kamiyaabeh libeyne…good luck…eiimer…mi vaahaka maafahun kiyunee????………. Ekamaku varahr reethi maasha allah??????

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 19, 2019 at 1:27 pm

      thanx reen… oh it’s ok… ISA i’ll try my best… thank u for wishing me a luck…

  25. Shi says:
    March 19, 2019 at 2:43 pm

    Salhi ❤????❤??❤

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 19, 2019 at 5:56 pm

      thanx… shi

  26. Miu says:
    March 19, 2019 at 2:45 pm

    I am good how are you

  27. Miu says:
    March 19, 2019 at 2:55 pm

    Um.. ihave a question! Whars your age?

    1. Cute Lips says:
      March 19, 2019 at 4:04 pm

      Eeiimerr is 12.. what’s your age my dear Miu.. regret the bullies… it will only lose your sweet dreams and motivation.. but we are here with you.. don’t be sad dear… be your self … be the one who you are.. don’t let anyone hurt your feelings..:)

  28. Cute Lips says:
    March 19, 2019 at 4:09 pm

    i am also a girl who have been a prey of bullies.. But the friends i got from here make much more better.. come on girl don’t be shy… everyone is different … but everyone must be treated same…everyone have their rights…. I am Areesha…i am 14 years..

  29. Cute Lips says:
    March 19, 2019 at 4:15 pm

    i am also a girl who have been a prey of bullies.. But the friends i got from here make much more better.. come on girl don’t be shy… everyone is different … but everyone must be treated same…everyone have their rights…. I am Areesha…i am 14 years.. i will we happy if you take me as your friend…

  30. Miu says:
    March 19, 2019 at 5:13 pm

    Ok! So my name is mausoora for joke people say to me miu and im 14 too!

  31. Cute Lips says:
    March 19, 2019 at 5:48 pm

    i think it’s a cute name…

  32. Eiimerr says:
    March 19, 2019 at 5:59 pm

    hellow guys… oh reesh long time no c…. miu you’ve got a unique n cute name… reesh is right… just ignore them… we’re here… you’re not alone… don’t b shy… tell us anything u want… we’ll never bully u… trust me…

  33. Miu says:
    March 19, 2019 at 6:13 pm

    Thank you! Thikahala friends hoadhumaky udhagoo kame!

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 19, 2019 at 8:11 pm

      haha… don’t mind it gurl…

  34. Miu says:
    March 19, 2019 at 6:35 pm

    And thank u for commeting my name

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 19, 2019 at 8:12 pm

      of course….

  35. Miu says:
    March 19, 2019 at 9:26 pm

    So lovely :-)!

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 20, 2019 at 12:45 pm

      🙂

  36. Miu says:
    March 20, 2019 at 1:37 pm

    ! Hi

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 20, 2019 at 2:52 pm

      hellow… 🙂

  37. Miu says:
    March 20, 2019 at 1:53 pm

    ! Hi cute lips?

    1. Cute Lips says:
      March 22, 2019 at 3:02 pm

      hey

  38. Miu says:
    March 20, 2019 at 3:27 pm

    Hello?

  39. Miu says:
    March 20, 2019 at 3:33 pm

    Hey whats up

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 20, 2019 at 4:07 pm

      nothing new… what about u???

  40. Miu says:
    March 20, 2019 at 7:40 pm

    Keep it up

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 20, 2019 at 8:28 pm

      What???

  41. Eiimerr says:
    March 20, 2019 at 8:29 pm

    🙂

  42. Miu says:
    March 20, 2019 at 9:33 pm

    Hey, ididnt reply that comment

  43. Miu says:
    March 20, 2019 at 10:21 pm

    Im getting afraid now so, thene vaahakae nudhekey ne im sorry bye bye

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 21, 2019 at 1:33 pm

      anything wrong? don’t b sorry… it’s k

  44. Miu says:
    March 21, 2019 at 5:51 pm

    Because someone is taking my place!

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 21, 2019 at 8:26 pm

      oh… don’t worry it’s not a big deal… that comment is not yours so i do knew about it… any one can take your place here but no one could ever take that place of yours in my heart… don’t worry! i thought your mom is disappointed about this… n here maybe there is someone call miu we’ll never know… so don’t worry!

  45. Miu says:
    March 21, 2019 at 5:54 pm

    And I didnt say keep it up!

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 21, 2019 at 9:43 pm

      yeah i know my friend, i know!

  46. Miu says:
    March 21, 2019 at 6:00 pm

    And I didnt say keep it up! Oh,no im getting really scared now .

  47. Miu says:
    March 21, 2019 at 6:02 pm

    Because I didnt say keep it up thats y

  48. Miu says:
    March 21, 2019 at 9:04 pm

    It also can be happen. Imean, someone named miu can be happen and thank you for saying im is in yor heart 🙂

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 21, 2019 at 9:44 pm

      anytime… 🙂

  49. Eiimerr says:
    March 22, 2019 at 10:10 am

    the story is uploaded… but it will take time to b publish… 🙂

  50. Miu says:
    March 22, 2019 at 1:32 pm

    🙂 seriously

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 22, 2019 at 1:50 pm

      yeah

  51. Cute Lips says:
    March 22, 2019 at 3:04 pm

    mithaa vs ehn meehun name stole kuran feshytha… bodu kameh dhn…

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 22, 2019 at 3:25 pm

      yeah… it’s really annoying… actually they want make us seperate…

  52. Cute Lips says:
    March 22, 2019 at 3:06 pm

    alhe kobaatha emmen… ban’du dhamany dw…

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 22, 2019 at 3:26 pm

      here i am… maybe others r taking a rest after eating… haha 🙂

    2. jiji says:
      March 22, 2019 at 4:31 pm

      Mihury jiji..maa lahun comment fennaathy log out vefa mi comment kury. …dhn eem vec dhw..

  53. Cute Lips says:
    March 22, 2019 at 3:40 pm

    totally..

  54. Cute Lips says:
    March 22, 2019 at 3:41 pm

    Are yo there

  55. Cute Lips says:
    March 22, 2019 at 3:52 pm

    rysh ah dhenme kiriyaa hodu nulevuny… i am sick.. i eated too much hehe… koshi araagathy faadakah..

    1. Eiimerr says:
      March 22, 2019 at 5:04 pm

      oh… get well soon dear… my blessings r always with u… ISA

  56. Eiimerr says:
    March 22, 2019 at 5:08 pm

    haha… i was just kidding… jiji dear… i changed that cover pic n put yours there…

  57. ishaan says:
    March 22, 2019 at 7:52 pm

    eiimerr miadhu hukureyy kobeyy 5 vana partu…. vrh kiyaa hithunnney mihiryy avahah up kohbaleyyy

    1. jiji says:
      March 22, 2019 at 9:17 pm

      Eyna bungnehnu adhivec pending ga in vhk?

    2. Eiimerr says:
      March 22, 2019 at 9:45 pm

      yeah… jiji is right! it’s still pending… i can do nothing about it… 🙁

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