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ތީއޭ މިހިތުގެ ވިންދަކީ…

eny Level 1
February 14, 2019 One Min Read
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ހެނދުނުގެ ހިތްގައިމު ވަގުތެވެ. އަރަމުން އައި އިރުން ދޯދިތައް ވަނީ ފަޒާގެ ތެރޭގައި ފަތުރާލާފައެވެ. ކޮވެއްޔާއި ކާޅު ފަދަ ދޫނި ސޫފާސޫފީގެ އަޑު ދޭތެރެ ދޭތެރެއިން ފަޒާގެ ހިމޭން ކަން މުގުރާލައެވެ. އެޔާއިއެކު އިރުއިރުކޮޅުން ހިތަށް ފިނިކަން ގެނުވާ ވައިރޯޅި ތަކުން ގަސްތަކުގެ ފަތްތައް އެއްފަތް އަނެއް ފަތާއި ތޮޅެލާ ހިތްގައިމު އަޑު އިވިއިވި ހުއްޓެވެ.

ޖޫހީ އަށް ހޭލެވުނީ އިރުގެ ދޯދިތައް އައިސް އެރީތި ލޮލަށް އުނދަގޫ ކުރަމުން ދާތީއެވެ. މޯޅިއަކަށް ދަމާލާފައި ގަޑި ބަލާލި އިރު ގަޑިން ހަ ގަޑި ފަނަރަ ވީއެވެ. ކަންނެތް ގޮތަކަށް ތެދުވެ އިށީންދެލާފައި ހޭވިފައިވާ ރަން ކުލައިގެ ދިގު އިސްތަށިގަނޑު ވޫލް ކޮޅަކުން އައްސާލުމަށް ފަހު ފާހަނަ އާއި ދިމާލަށް ހިނގައިގަތެވެ. ޖޫހީގެ ބައްޕައަކީ ކެނެޑާ މީހަކަށް ވުމުން ޖޫހީއަށްވެސް އެ ދޮން ކަމާއި، ނޫ ދެލޯ އަދި ރަން ކުލައިގެ ދިގު އިސްތަށިގަނޑު ލިބިފައިވެއެވެ.

ސްކޫލަށްދާން ތައްޔާރުވެގެން ނިކުތް އިރު ކާމޭޒު ކައިރީގައި މަންމަ އާއި ބައްޕަ ޖޫހީގެ އިންތިޒާރުގައި އިނެވެ. ޖޫހީގެ ބައްޕަ ޔުނީފޯރމް ލައިގެން އިންތަން ފެނުމުން ވަގުތުން ޖޫހީގެ މޫނު ބަނަވެގެން ދިޔައެވެ. “ޑޭޑް……. އަނެއްކާވެސް ދަނީތަ. އަދި އެންމެ ޓޫ ޑޭސް އެންނުވީ މި ރަށަށް އައިއްސަ..” ޖޫހީ ދުވެފަ އައިސް ބައްޕަގެ އުނގަށް އަރަމުން ދެރަވެލާފައި ބުންޏެވެ. “ދަރިފުޅު އަދިވެސް އުޅެނީ ކުޑަ ކުދިން އުޅޭ ވައްތަރަށް ދޯ..!! މިހާރު ގްރޭޑު ދިހައެއް ގަ އުޅޭއިރު ކުޑަކޮށް ހަރުދަނާވާން ވެއްޖެއެންނު.. އެހެން ނޫނަސް ބައްޕަ މީ ޕައިލެޓެއް.. އަބަދަކު ދަރިފުޅު ކައިރީގައެއް ނުހުރެވޭނެ އެންނު” ޒިޔާން ޖޫހީގެ ބޮލުގައި ފިރުމާލަމުން ބުނެލިއެވެ.. “އެހެންވިއްޔާ ބައްޕަ ޖެހޭނެ ސްކޫލަށް ލާދެންދާން..!!” “މައްސަލައެއް ނޯންނާނެ.. ބައްޕަ އާއެކު ކުއީން މިއަދު ދާނީ” ޖޫހީގެ އެދުމުގައި ކޮޅުފައިން ނުޖަހަން ވެގެން ޒިޔާން އެއްބަސްވިއެވެ… “މަންމިގެ މަފިން އަވަސް ކޮށްލާ… އެއޮށް ގަޑި ޖެހެނީ..!!” ދެބަފައިން ސައިނުބޮއެ އިންނާތީ ޒޯހާ ބުނެލިއެވެ..

ކާރުން ފައިބައިގެން ގޭޓާހަމައަށް ގޯސް ޖޫހީ ފަހަތް ބަލާލިއެވެ.. ކާރުގައި އިން ޒިޔާންއަށް ހަނާއަޅާާލުމަށްފަހު ގޭޓުން ވަދެގެން ޖޫހީ ހިނގައިގަތެވެ. އެހެން ދުވަސް ތަކެކޭވެސް އެއްފަދައިން މިއަދުވެސް ސްކޫލުގެ އެތަށްކުދިންގެ ލޯތަށް ގޭޓުން ވަދެގެންއައި ޖޫހީއަށް ހުއްޓެމުން ދިޔައެވެ.. އެއިން އެއްކަމަކަށްވެސް ސަމާލުކަމެއް ނުދީ ކުލާހަށް ހިނގަމުން ދިޔަ ޖޫހީގެ ކުރިމައްޗަށް އެރީ އޭނާގެ އެންމެ ގާތް ރަހުމަތްތެރިޔާ އައިރާއެވެ.. “ހެެ ޖޫ..!! ބިޒްނަސް ކްލާހުގަ އެބައިން ވަރަށް ސަޅި އާ ސްޓޫޑެންޓެއް…..” “ކާކުތަ…؟؟” އެކަމަށް އެހާ ބޮޑު ޝައުގުވެރިކަމެއް ނެތުމާއެކުވެސް ޖޫހީ އަހާލިއެވެ..

 

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36 Comments!

  1. Someone says:
    February 14, 2019 at 2:56 pm

    Wow…v loabi feshumeh…?????hope u will up kuraane kamah nimendhn without stop…???whn next part????

    1. eny says:
      February 14, 2019 at 6:42 pm

      thank you someone♥️ i will up my stories inshaallah.. next part next week ga ingey

  2. SCARLET❤ says:
    February 14, 2019 at 3:01 pm

    V reethi dear.. hope kuriyah oiyy prt thah vx reethi vaane kamah..luv ur stry.❤❤❤

    1. eny says:
      February 14, 2019 at 6:43 pm

      thank you so much scarlet♥️

  3. Kitty says:
    February 14, 2019 at 3:06 pm

    Masha allah vvvvv varah reethi… Its praiseworthy… May allah grant u with a bright future… ??❤️❤️❤️??

    1. Aishath nasrath says:
      February 14, 2019 at 3:14 pm

      Kitty will you be my friend?

    2. eny says:
      February 16, 2019 at 12:17 am

      thank you soooo much kitty…. this comment means a lot to me<333

  4. Idiot says:
    February 14, 2019 at 3:11 pm

    Seems interesting. Keep yourself motivated and never give up

    1. eny says:
      February 14, 2019 at 6:44 pm

      thanks idiot?

  5. jiji says:
    February 14, 2019 at 3:13 pm

    Wow???????????..masha allah..Starting good ingey..nimendhen genesdhehche Eny..and which island Are u from dear ??????May Allah bless you dear??????????

    1. eny says:
      February 16, 2019 at 12:13 am

      thanks jiji… iraadha kureviyya genesdheynan nimendhen..<3 im from baa atoll;) then island baavvamaa dhw sirrakah…

    2. jiji says:
      February 16, 2019 at 2:40 pm

      Ehnviyyaa I think I know u?????❤❤?????..ekm yageen nuvedhaane thy nubunaan ingey…

  6. Ahu says:
    February 14, 2019 at 4:45 pm

    V interesting .. when nxt part.. ? Regular kn up kndhehchey.. ??

    1. eny says:
      February 14, 2019 at 6:45 pm

      thanks idiot?

    2. eny says:
      February 14, 2019 at 6:46 pm

      sorry ahu?? olhigen idot ey jehuni? btw thank you

  7. Lotus says:
    February 14, 2019 at 4:53 pm

    Nice.. best of luck dear

    1. eny says:
      February 14, 2019 at 6:54 pm

      thanks lotus♥️

  8. eny says:
    February 14, 2019 at 6:59 pm

    salaam lovely readers? this is the first part of my first story♥️ hope you all will love this part?? please point out the mistakes so that i can improve? next part minna week ga inshaallah♥️♥️

  9. Any says:
    February 14, 2019 at 7:10 pm

    Ohh.dhonthi haadha molhey vaahaka liyan.btw it’s beautiful ??????????❤❤

    1. eny says:
      February 14, 2019 at 7:29 pm

      thank you so much Any?

  10. @Ikleel says:
    February 14, 2019 at 7:14 pm

    Nice…Vrh reethi ingey…Week aku 1 part tha gennany…??? Alhe 1 part ah vure ithuru kurevey kah neiy tha…???..Thankolheh kuru hen heevany ingey……Kuriah huri baithah dhigu koh genesdheyne kamah ummeedhu kuran….Wish you all the best….

    1. eny says:
      February 14, 2019 at 7:26 pm

      thanks @IKleel♥️ alhugandu kudakoh busy v ma week aku one part up kohdheyne kamah buni… ekam vaahaka liyevunuhaa ahahakah up kuraanan.. and i will try to make it long??♥️

  11. silent killer 1 says:
    February 14, 2019 at 7:43 pm

    wow!! vrh reethi. I wish kuri ah huri baithah dhigu koh genesdheyne.thanks for the story..

    1. eny says:
      February 14, 2019 at 7:46 pm

      thanks♥️ iraadhakureviyya next part dhigu kohdheynan??

  12. Niha says:
    February 14, 2019 at 7:57 pm

    I am the last one dhw… ???Btw vvv reethi mi stry…. Kiyaa laahithun kiyey n when next…. Kehmadhu vefa Mi hunnany… ??????

    1. eny says:
      February 16, 2019 at 12:15 am

      oooh your not the last one ehnnu… next part liyevunuhaa avahakah up kohdheynan..btw thank you so much niha<3

  13. Curious girl says:
    February 14, 2019 at 11:37 pm

    V…salhi nxt part kn iraku tha

    1. eny says:
      February 16, 2019 at 12:17 am

      thanks curious girl… mianna week ga next part<3

  14. medam says:
    February 15, 2019 at 10:36 pm

    varah salhi.

    1. eny says:
      February 16, 2019 at 12:16 am

      thank you meadam<3

  15. rappu says:
    February 15, 2019 at 10:44 pm

    vvv..salhi….my besty

    1. eny says:
      February 16, 2019 at 12:15 am

      thanks love<33

  16. samm says:
    February 17, 2019 at 4:36 pm

    Guess you are a Fan of a canada celebrity?….. Am i right? btw your story is amazing❤

    1. eny says:
      February 19, 2019 at 9:21 am

      thankyou samm<3 yeah maybe you're right..

  17. samm says:
    February 19, 2019 at 5:45 pm

    okayy are you talking about the muffin boy eny??? in canada..?

  18. Handi says:
    February 20, 2019 at 8:01 am

    vvv…taff….keep it up bro!!…i really like what you are doing…keep up the good work….Laaaavs u…

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