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1. What kihineh vaa story wh mee

   1. Sheen maraaly Sheena eiy John I ehme dharieh dhen eyna ah jehsh bodu chart eh kuruhan dhen eyna Ethan faharaku kuruhymaves nukurhunh dhen thinvana bury kuruhuny dhen lomaraafa lo hulhuvunu iru hury dhuniyeyga

2. So so boring.

   1. It’s ok…

3. Mi Kon kahala vaahaka eh..

   1. Biruveri

4. it is really fake story, ehves kahala gulhumeh neh, so so so boring,
   thankolhen reethi vaaha eh liyunihyaa rangalhuvaane
   and one more thing, mi kahala vaahaka liyaana kudakudinge vaahaka site ga liye bala

   1. Juma thibunee thedheh dhn bodethimeehunge site akah gr 5 ge kudhinneh nuliyaane ehnu dhw

   2. Oh no grade seven

   3. Huvaa as Jim a th i dhen support ah thanks

5. Ahchee alhe… So boring.. Stop writing plx

   1. ALHEY i cant

6. As i said before, write short stories without a much bigger plot or problem. Like flashbacks from the past or mistakes and the lesson the main character learned. These type of stories are better written in first person POV

   1. Thanx

7. I love your stories so much , haters back of keekurantha comment kuranee like nuvanyaa hithuga bahataala beyrunuko!kobaatha kitty!

   1. Mai. ..isha ah heyo edhenya atleast eyna kadakoh liyanyaves kiyaadhyba dhw ranaglhu kuranjehey kanthah.. ehen myhunnah bas nukiya.. varah varah kada vyna aslu e vaahaka bunymaves isha ah faidhaa vaany.. readers ah ehves faidha ehves gehlumeh ves nuvaane..
      Thikahala dhe fuhkeheri thedhu haama nukura myhunma hedhi aslu ekahala kudhin improve nuvany

   2. Love u too mai

   3. Kitty wil no longer comment on this site

   4. Well.. Thats what I think

8. Mai. ..isha ah heyo edhenya atleast eyna kadakoh liyanyaves kiyaadhyba dhw ranaglhu kuranjehey kanthah.. ehen myhunnah bas nukiya.. varah varah kada vyna aslu e vaahaka bunymaves isha ah faidhaa vaany.. readers ah ehves faidha ehves gehlumeh ves nuvaane..
   Thikahala dhe fuhkeheri thedhu haama nukura myhunma hedhi aslu ekahala kudhin improve nuvany

9. Ishaa aky 7 ga ulhey kuhjjeh hehe thiothy ingifaehnun…. mi ishaage frendeh…

   1. THANXX

10. Aslu kuda kujjakaa balaafa ishaa v v molhu

    1. THANXX

11. Vaahakaiga mulhinves huree kuruhaa liyefa.. aslu kurahaa haa liyan jeheynee.. grade 7 ge kujjeh veema ok dhen.. ekam exam ga liyaa vaahakaehga abadhu mihen kuruhaa liyaanama marks kendeynehen heevanee.. best of luck next story..

12. Wow amazing….. Eaky kura kuhjekey…,kaleymen hithuhurihaa ehcheh kiyaaka haaadha goyyyyyy kura eh hayaaiy vihkaa kaafa nu baa jaahilunthah…..… jaahiluhney bunyas faaafa geri nuvaaane..? Thy insaaanun that??????

    1. THANXX umm

13. 7 ge kudinves mi ahvure reethi story liyey

14. Great job girl. Keep it up.

    1. THANXX umm

15. Why does the page say this is a love story… This story would be a unique idea if the target audience was children of young age as the story has a moral at the end.. But the vocabulary n scenes described at the start wasn’t targeted for kids either.. This story can neither be categorized as a love story nor
    a horror story.. Ishaa.. Know ur audience.. If ur audience is teens+…. Try better than a 10 year olds level story as it would seem boring for the readers of teens+ age .. U r apparently in grade 7 so u r a 12 or 13 year old.. Either way read more stories n learn..

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