މީލޯތްބަކީ……. 2

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1. ??… Adhi maakury dhn faharakun dhigu kohlahchey ingey ??

2. Varah reethi Mi part ves…. Thikuraa hiyy Varah saabas… I’m very proud of you dear….

3. V varah salhi mi part ves❤️ Keep going?

4. I feel surprised after reading this story and all tge comments.. girl u told u re 11 and writing love stories?? I’m really confused how could you have such thoughts in ur mind.. frm whom u get all these ideas? How u make time to think all these?

   1. From stories. Mr or miss…. And plx be surprised cox i bet that u never were able to write stories as perfect as these are???

   2. I mean at such a young age

5. Varah salhi egey ??

6. U have improved a lot compared to ur last stories. Keep going and one day u’ll become an amazing author. One thing: when writing, try using punctuations properly. In this way, it will be easier for the reader to read and understand. Also try detailing the scenes a bit and not hurry. Take ur time. Anyway, best of luck:)

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