އަބަދުވެސް ލޯބި ދޭނަން…1

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1. me frst dhww

   1. Yeah u r first
      Eekko ah vx 12yrs tha
      Nxt prt vrh avahah fennaane ngey
      Nd epart dhigu vx kohla dheynan

   2. no 11

   3. Ehen

2. Yeyy me secound dhw

   1. Yeah u r second ,baby girl ❤vrh masahkathun mi prt up kurevuny mi heheh

3. Salaam everyone ??here is the first part of my first story??2nd part liyamun dhanikoh epart fohevuny.Ekam insha allah??Tuesday ga next part fenigen dhaane☺☺Tomorrow ga varah busy vaane so e part up eh nukureveyne ??mi vaahaka kiyaalan libeyne, insha allah,Every Tuesday and friday eh ga. Mihaaru ves varah bura.ekamu kiyuntherin dhera nukuran vegen, mi genesdhenee..
   I’m twelve and I also have to study..
   Ehenveema nuvanee ingey…???Hope you guys will understand..???And point out the mistakes ???so,I can improve it ???your feedbacks are always welcome.
   Kiyuntherin ge support libeyne kamah alhugandah ummeedhu kuran…
   Thiya kiyuntherin ge hiyaal faathuma kuran beynun vaneenama alhugandah comment ge zariyya in ekan angaala dhevvumakee alhugandu ge varah bodu edhumeh ???love you all ❤????

   1. Alhugandu *
      Hiyaal Faalhu kuran *

4. Vaanuvaaga. Aslu maa kuru koh genesdhinyma mihen mi vee. Btw heevey reethi vaanehen den kiyaaleema dhw engeyny. Ur a young writer n its ur first story right.. ehen v ma ves vaane ehen. ?

   1. Shaaa dear…I’m new and young writer so ehenves vaaneyey…Next part varakah dhigu kureveytho masahkaiy kuraanan ingey …insha allah vaahaka emme dhigu noonas
      Alhugandah vee varakun vaahaka genesdheynan…varah ufaa vejje shaaa ge comment kiyaafa…coz kiyuntherin emeehegge hiyaal Faalhu kurumun dho alhugandah engeynee ves …next partun vaane vaahaka olhuny filaane…yeah, this is my first story….

5. Hii Dandelion ???… It’s ur first story dhw… Heevey v reethi vaane henn ???… Keep going dear ❤️❤️❤️???… Next part dhigukoh genesdhehchey dear ???… All the best dear ???… Keep going…. So u can improve ???… Bodah sifakurun genesdhinyma v reethi vaane n try to deliver the feelings ❤️❤️❤️??????…

   1. Ooh what a colourful comment??yeah it’s my first story ☺☺Thanks for your support ??❤❤Next part genesdheveytho masahkaiy kuraanan ingey ??And ginain sifa kurun himanaan..???pinky shifoo dear ah varah bodah thanks
      ingey ?????Hahaha ??I’ll try my best ??????

6. I’m also 12 yrs dandelion kon rasheh

   1. I’m from dhonfanu…Eama kon rasheh tha??????

   2. Hahah ,I’m not from dhonfanu…

7. Hey dear…. heevanee vaahaka reethi vaanehen.. i’ll try to read every episode of it regularly? such a young writer… woah???all the best to your story???

   1. Awa dear ge story eh fennaanee dhen kon irakun??love you too
      buddy. ..

8. Best of luck dear for your first story.. wishing you success?

   1. Thanks lotus dear for your support ???

9. keep it up….sis vrh ufaavejje ehaa avah up koh dhinee ma….story hama owsm….ly sis

   1. Dandelion varah ufaa vejje kokee dear ge comment kiyaafa…Thanks dear….??☺☺☺☺☺

10. From which island are you
    Maalahun mi comment kurevuny dho
    Anyways
    V reethi
    Mi vaahaka v reethi vaanehen heevey
    Waiting for tuesday

    1. ey dhonfanu kujjeh…she said it befor

    2. Innaane kury commenteh ga bunelaafa??kokee dear ves dhemme buneli gothah…Thanks for your support…☺☺☺surprise eh fennaane varah avahah…Insha allah

    3. Sorry I’m not from dhonfanu…hahaha

11. Masha alllah mih story v reethi.?

12. Thanks EHLEE dear…??

13. v happy to see ur dedication, enthusiasm and effort. keep it up. even if u get bad comments dont stop. you will improve in sha Allah 🙂 . ur story seems interesting with lots of characters. but v confusing at the same time.
    vaahaka ehga thibeyne main characters aai, supporting characters. focus mainly on main characters. characters thakuge ehves kahala introduction eh nethi maa avas avahah seen badhaluve characters badhaluveema v confuse vaane. so give konmeves varehge detail eh. eyrun kiyun thering imagination ah character an naani.
    and keep main characters minimum, especially if u r new. main character ginveema v confuse vefa follow kuran v udhagoo vaane.
    vaahaka eh kiyaadhinumaa vaahaka eh liumaa v thafaathuvaane. konme meehakahves vaahaka eh kiyaa dhevidhaane. vaahaka liyaa meehaa masahkai kuraanee kiun therin nah vaahakaige maahaulu sifa kohdheveytho, as if kiutheriyaa is present at the seen. so kiyaa meehaa vaahakaige thereyah vahdhaane kahala sifa kurun thakeh hurunves v muhinmuvaane.
    maa ginain liyevijje dho. hope konmeves kahala idea eh libunu kamah. good luck dear!!! 🙂

    1. Thanks nim..Insha allah..I’ll improve it…??

14. Dhonfan dhw.me too. Salhi stry .ekam kury stry.dear grd 7 dhw ehen viyyma

    1. D2D S2T ,Who are you? Are you from grade 7,nope I am not from
       Grade 7..thanks story kamudhiyaeema. .??

15. Storyga adhi ebahuri rangalhu kohlan huri baivaru than than. Mi story ga vaagoeh neygeythi kada iy. You have to learn lot to write story.

    1. 2 nd kiyaaleema kudakoh get vaane
       Second part is a surprise…Adhi vaagoiy ingey. ISA, second part inee up vefa..e part kiyaalaba ???

16. salhi vaanehen heevanee story.. BTW aslu vaanuvaaga konmes varakah.. but that’s ok.. masakkaiiy kureemennu… Good Luck Dear

    1. Kyleen dear ah thanks..Aslu me ah engey kurukoh genesdheveythee vaa kameh kan miee…Ekam, Dandelion ah liyevunu varakun upload kuraanan?

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