ކައިވެންޏަށް ފަހުވެސް ލާޝީންގެ ފަރާތުން މާބޮޑު އަޅާލުމެއް ނުލިބޭތީ ކައިލީ ހުންނަނީ ދެރަވެފައެވެ.ވާނީވެސް
އެހެން ތާއެވެ.ދެމީހުންވެސް ކައިވެނި ކުރީ އެމީހުންގެ މައިންބަފައިން ދެރަ ނުކުރަން ވިއްޔާއެވެ.އެމީހުންނަށް ނޭނގުނު
ކަމަކީ އެހެން ހެދިވަރަކަށް އެހެން ބަޔަކަށް އެމީހުން ކުރަމުންދާ މަސައްކަތުން އިތުރު ލުޔެއް ލިބިދާނެ ކަމެވެ.
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“ޑެޑީ…ހިނގާބަ ކޮއްކި ގޮވައިގެން ބީޗަށް.މަންމި ބުނީ ނުދެވޭނެޔޯ…”ކުޑަކުޑަ ހާވީ އެހެން ބުނުމާއެކު
ުޔުޝާއު ހިނިތުންވެލީ ހިނގާށޭ ދާން ބުނާ ފަދަ ގޮތަކަށެވެ.ނަމަވެސް އަނބިމީހާ ދެކެ ރުޅިއަންނަ ޙާލުގައެވެ.
ކަލީޝާގެ ކަމަކީ އަބަދު ނިދުމޭ ބުންޏަސް ދޮގަކަށް ނުވާނެކަން ގައިމެވެ.
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ުދުވާލުގެ އަލިކަން ރޭގަނޑުގެ އަނދިރިކަމަށް ބަދަލުވަނީއެވެ.ދޮންވެރަތްވެފައިވާ އުދަރެހުގެ އެކިދިހައިގައި
ފާޅުވޭވޭހުރި ވިލާތަކުގެ ކުލަ މަޑު އަޅިކުލައަކަށް ބަދަލުވަމުން ދަނީއެވެ.މ.ރޯޒްނޭޒްގެ ގޭތެރޭގައި
ނޯކަރުން ތެދުވެ މަސައްކަތް ކުރަން އުޅޭތަން ފެނެއެވެ.ސުކޫލަށް ދާން ތައްޔާރުވެގެން ހުރި ނީޝާ ކާތަކެއްޗާ
ދިމާލަށް މިސްރާބު ޖެހިއެވެ.
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“ޝިމް..އަޅެ ކީއްވެ މަގޭ މިކެހިވެރި ދުނިޔެއަށް ދޫކޮށްފަ ތި ދިޔައީ.ޝިމް ނޭނގެނީތަ ކަލާދެކެ މަގޭ ލޯބިވާވަރު..
އަހަރެމެން ދެމީހުން އެކުގައި އުޅުން ދުވަސްތައް ލޯ ކުރިމަތީ ސިފަވޭ އެބަ…”ލަޔާފް މޮޔައެއްހެން ވާހަކަ
ދައްކަމުން ދިޔައެވެ.ކައިރީގައި މީހަކު ހުރިކަން ހަނދާން ނައްތާލާފައެވެ.
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ކައިލީ އެއޮތް ވަރުން ހެދި ކާއެއްޗެހި،ލާޝިން އެއެއްޗެހި ކެއުމުގެ ބަދަލުގައި ކައިލީގެ ދޮން ހަނދެއް ފަދަ
މޫނަށް ޖެހިއެވެ.އެވަގުތު ކޮޓަރިން ނުކުތް މީހާ ފެނި ލާޝީން ދިޔައީ ޙައިރާން ވެގެންނެވެ.
ހިތާހިތުން އޭނާއަށް، މާތްﷲ ގެ ހަޟްރަތުގައި ދުޢާ ކޮށްލެވުނީ ދެރަގޮތެއް މިންވަރު ނުކުރެއްވުމަށް އެދިއެވެ.

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35 Comments

  1. eekko

    July 13, 2018 at 3:20 pm

    me frst dhww

    • Dandelion

      July 13, 2018 at 3:50 pm

      Yeah u r first
      Eekko ah vx 12yrs tha
      Nxt prt vrh avahah fennaane ngey
      Nd epart dhigu vx kohla dheynan

    • eekko

      July 13, 2018 at 6:39 pm

      no 11

    • Dandelion

      July 13, 2018 at 6:56 pm

      Ehen

  2. Baby girl ❤

    July 13, 2018 at 3:28 pm

    Yeyy me secound dhw

    • Dandelion

      July 13, 2018 at 3:52 pm

      Yeah u r second ,baby girl ❤vrh masahkathun mi prt up kurevuny mi heheh

  3. Dandelion

    July 13, 2018 at 4:45 pm

    Salaam everyone ??here is the first part of my first story??2nd part liyamun dhanikoh epart fohevuny.Ekam insha allah??Tuesday ga next part fenigen dhaane☺☺Tomorrow ga varah busy vaane so e part up eh nukureveyne ??mi vaahaka kiyaalan libeyne, insha allah,Every Tuesday and friday eh ga. Mihaaru ves varah bura.ekamu kiyuntherin dhera nukuran vegen, mi genesdhenee..
    I’m twelve and I also have to study..
    Ehenveema nuvanee ingey…???Hope you guys will understand..???And point out the mistakes ???so,I can improve it ???your feedbacks are always welcome.
    Kiyuntherin ge support libeyne kamah alhugandah ummeedhu kuran…
    Thiya kiyuntherin ge hiyaal faathuma kuran beynun vaneenama alhugandah comment ge zariyya in ekan angaala dhevvumakee alhugandu ge varah bodu edhumeh ???love you all ❤????

    • Dandelion

      July 13, 2018 at 4:47 pm

      Alhugandu *
      Hiyaal Faalhu kuran *

  4. shaaa

    July 13, 2018 at 5:27 pm

    Vaanuvaaga. Aslu maa kuru koh genesdhinyma mihen mi vee. Btw heevey reethi vaanehen den kiyaaleema dhw engeyny. Ur a young writer n its ur first story right.. ehen v ma ves vaane ehen. ?

    • Dandelion

      July 13, 2018 at 6:54 pm

      Shaaa dear…I’m new and young writer so ehenves vaaneyey…Next part varakah dhigu kureveytho masahkaiy kuraanan ingey …insha allah vaahaka emme dhigu noonas
      Alhugandah vee varakun vaahaka genesdheynan…varah ufaa vejje shaaa ge comment kiyaafa…coz kiyuntherin emeehegge hiyaal Faalhu kurumun dho alhugandah engeynee ves …next partun vaane vaahaka olhuny filaane…yeah, this is my first story….

  5. Pinky shifoo

    July 13, 2018 at 7:15 pm

    Hii Dandelion ???… It’s ur first story dhw… Heevey v reethi vaane henn ???… Keep going dear ❤️❤️❤️???… Next part dhigukoh genesdhehchey dear ???… All the best dear ???… Keep going…. So u can improve ???… Bodah sifakurun genesdhinyma v reethi vaane n try to deliver the feelings ❤️❤️❤️??????…

    • Dandelion

      July 16, 2018 at 9:07 pm

      Ooh what a colourful comment??yeah it’s my first story ☺☺Thanks for your support ??❤❤Next part genesdheveytho masahkaiy kuraanan ingey ??And ginain sifa kurun himanaan..???pinky shifoo dear ah varah bodah thanks
      ingey ?????Hahaha ??I’ll try my best ??????

  6. Eama

    July 13, 2018 at 7:25 pm

    I’m also 12 yrs dandelion kon rasheh

    • Dandelion

      July 13, 2018 at 7:40 pm

      I’m from dhonfanu…Eama kon rasheh tha??????

    • Dandelion ?

      July 25, 2018 at 3:36 pm

      Hahah ,I’m not from dhonfanu…

  7. Awa

    July 13, 2018 at 7:44 pm

    Hey dear…. heevanee vaahaka reethi vaanehen.. i’ll try to read every episode of it regularly? such a young writer… woah???all the best to your story???

    • Dandelion

      July 16, 2018 at 7:34 pm

      Awa dear ge story eh fennaanee dhen kon irakun??love you too
      buddy. ..

  8. Lotus

    July 13, 2018 at 8:20 pm

    Best of luck dear for your first story.. wishing you success?

    • Dandelion

      July 14, 2018 at 7:15 am

      Thanks lotus dear for your support ???

  9. Kokee

    July 13, 2018 at 10:38 pm

    keep it up….sis vrh ufaavejje ehaa avah up koh dhinee ma….story hama owsm….ly sis

    • Dandelion

      July 14, 2018 at 7:20 am

      Dandelion varah ufaa vejje kokee dear ge comment kiyaafa…Thanks dear….??☺☺☺☺☺

  10. Nunnu

    July 13, 2018 at 10:44 pm

    From which island are you
    Maalahun mi comment kurevuny dho
    Anyways
    V reethi
    Mi vaahaka v reethi vaanehen heevey
    Waiting for tuesday

    • Kokee

      July 13, 2018 at 11:50 pm

      ey dhonfanu kujjeh…she said it befor

    • Dandelion

      July 14, 2018 at 7:23 am

      Innaane kury commenteh ga bunelaafa??kokee dear ves dhemme buneli gothah…Thanks for your support…☺☺☺surprise eh fennaane varah avahah…Insha allah

    • Dandelion ?

      July 25, 2018 at 3:39 pm

      Sorry I’m not from dhonfanu…hahaha

  11. EHLEE

    July 14, 2018 at 9:12 am

    Masha alllah mih story v reethi.?

  12. Dandelion

    July 14, 2018 at 9:48 am

    Thanks EHLEE dear…??

  13. nim

    July 14, 2018 at 11:07 am

    v happy to see ur dedication, enthusiasm and effort. keep it up. even if u get bad comments dont stop. you will improve in sha Allah 🙂 . ur story seems interesting with lots of characters. but v confusing at the same time.
    vaahaka ehga thibeyne main characters aai, supporting characters. focus mainly on main characters. characters thakuge ehves kahala introduction eh nethi maa avas avahah seen badhaluve characters badhaluveema v confuse vaane. so give konmeves varehge detail eh. eyrun kiyun thering imagination ah character an naani.
    and keep main characters minimum, especially if u r new. main character ginveema v confuse vefa follow kuran v udhagoo vaane.
    vaahaka eh kiyaadhinumaa vaahaka eh liumaa v thafaathuvaane. konme meehakahves vaahaka eh kiyaa dhevidhaane. vaahaka liyaa meehaa masahkai kuraanee kiun therin nah vaahakaige maahaulu sifa kohdheveytho, as if kiutheriyaa is present at the seen. so kiyaa meehaa vaahakaige thereyah vahdhaane kahala sifa kurun thakeh hurunves v muhinmuvaane.
    maa ginain liyevijje dho. hope konmeves kahala idea eh libunu kamah. good luck dear!!! 🙂

    • Dandelion

      July 16, 2018 at 7:32 pm

      Thanks nim..Insha allah..I’ll improve it…??

  14. D2D S2T

    July 14, 2018 at 1:30 pm

    Dhonfan dhw.me too. Salhi stry .ekam kury stry.dear grd 7 dhw ehen viyyma

    • Dandelion

      July 14, 2018 at 2:16 pm

      D2D S2T ,Who are you? Are you from grade 7,nope I am not from
      Grade 7..thanks story kamudhiyaeema. .??

  15. Anonymous

    July 14, 2018 at 1:38 pm

    Storyga adhi ebahuri rangalhu kohlan huri baivaru than than. Mi story ga vaagoeh neygeythi kada iy. You have to learn lot to write story.

    • Dandelion

      July 14, 2018 at 2:20 pm

      2 nd kiyaaleema kudakoh get vaane
      Second part is a surprise…Adhi vaagoiy ingey. ISA, second part inee up vefa..e part kiyaalaba ???

  16. Kyleen

    July 19, 2018 at 2:17 pm

    salhi vaanehen heevanee story.. BTW aslu vaanuvaaga konmes varakah.. but that’s ok.. masakkaiiy kureemennu… Good Luck Dear

    • Dandelion

      July 21, 2018 at 2:23 pm

      Kyleen dear ah thanks..Aslu me ah engey kurukoh genesdheveythee vaa kameh kan miee…Ekam, Dandelion ah liyevunu varakun upload kuraanan?

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