އަބަދުވެސް ލޯބި ދޭނަން….2

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1. It’s a surprise for you all
   Kury part ga innaane ehen bunelaafa
   This part is dedicated for my lovely readers
   Point out the mistakes, so I can improve it
   Luv u all ????❤

2. Varah reethi vaahka eh mee ???
   mihaaru eba kudakoh getu vey kiyamun dhaavaraka mi vaahaka ge vaanuva???
   And suprised to know that u are 12 and best of luck girl???

   1. Thanks Jenna dear…varah happy vejje story kamudhiyaeema… ???

3. Haadha kurey

   1. Sorry zoo dear??Aslu liyumuge therein kylli akah submit ah obbaaleveny..Ehenve vaagotheh aee?

4. Stry ge mi part salhi.kury part ukiyaa mi part mi kiyaaly.jumula thah ibaarah kurumu ga eba ulhey mahshala .n jumula athah maa avas aruvaafa inn maalaafa hunnany.dear 12 yrs ey but stry heevany grd 8&9 ge kujjeh liyaa stry eh hen.keep it up.
   waiting……..

   1. Thanks fb jinni ??kury part ves kiyaalacchey..mi 6 ge kujjeh..Thanks
      Varah bodah mistakes point out kohdhineenaal…k

   2. Assalaamu alaikum, hello my lovely readers
      This is the second part of my first story
      “Abadhuves Loabi Dheynan “…kuree part ga
      Alhugandu bunelaafa innany konme Tuesday and friday eh ga ey..but readers
      Mathin hadhaan vaavarun mi part thah up kurany..ehenveema Dandelion ah free time eh libijjiyya story up kuraanan…I mean everyday ga insha allah ??❤???????????

5. Thanks fb jinni ??kury part ves kiyaalacchey..mi 6 ge kujjeh..Thanks
   Varah bodah mistakes point out kohdhineema….

6. story is vvvv nyc.. keep it up dear

   1. Thanks kitty dear ah story kamudhiyaeema ??

7. owh dear m sooooo surprised to knw u r 12 yrs.. but vaahaka kiyaafa hiyeh nuvey 12 yrs hen.. hehehe.. ur ideas r awsm.. good luck dear

   1. Thanks kitty dear ?luv u ❤

8. Mihaaru kudakoh vaagoi eba engeyhen heevanee.. 12 years aah balaafa hama varah best. Hiyehnuves vey 12 years geh kujjeh liyaa story eh heneh.

   1. Ehentha shaaa, Thank a lot ingey
      Luv u ????❤

9. Stry salhi ekam maa kury dear.miyy haadha undhagu namekey dhw .hah ok thr lion kiyass o kuru koh kiyaa nama bune bala.

   1. 2t dear,next part dhigu kohlaanan mi ah vure. Ok delion kiyas. Ekamu lion nukiyaathi ingey….heheh ??????

10. Garden school? Like really?

    1. Alhey Hassan, aee real eh nooney,mi Dandelion ge hiyaalee vaahaka ekey.
       Saabas hassanah?????☺☺

    2. Hiyaalee vaahaka eh viyas vx should make sense dhw dear… logic!

    3. Sorry hassan☺I’m not so perfect in writing storiexx…

11. Stry vvvv salhi.dear dhonfan ey thi buny heevany thiyy dhogeh hen.bcox mi adhu 6 ge kudhin ulhuny v busy school harakaa then ga .dhogu hedhiyass bodu varu.stry v molhu ekam dhogu nahadhaa kuriyah dhey.

    1. Dhonfanu soru,6 ge kudhin kithanme busy koh ulhunas ok ey…Alhugandu mi hadhan dhogeh nahadhan…Break time ga vaahaka up kureeves…please
       Don’t tell lies ???And also I don’t know who are you ???

    2. Dhen comm thakah reply kury vex break gadiy ey thr thi binany dear.nikan reply kohfa huri gadi thakah balaa bala. dhen igedhaane.
       4 anhen kudhin thibeny vex grd 6 ga..

    3. Hey dhonfanu soru, I am in grade 6
       ..reply komme gadi aku
       Kuriyas ok vaaneyey ??thedhu mauloomaath himenehvun edhen..

    4. Dhogu hedihyaa eh hedhi dhogeh eh meehakah dhw dhen ekamaa ehvarakah ti keehkuran. I think comment box ihnany vaahakayah faadu kiyan. Writer hadhany dhogu or thedhu thoa balaakah nun kahneyge.. ?

    5. Thanks someone dear…??

12. v reethi mi part ves
    ekam mistakes ebahuri
    fas buriyah nagaafa hunna e geyakee 8 kotereege epartment ekey buneema vv odd
    dhen neeshaa ge mamma ah kiyanee sama tha seema tha
    kuhjehge mamma ah vema gulheny seema dho
    ekam neyngunu dhe nan jahaafa ineema kon nameh kameh kiyaneekee
    mikanthah rangalhu kollahchey
    when next part

    1. Next part miadhu insha allah, neeshaa ge mom ah kiyanee samaa…It’s a mistake..Thanks nunnu ???

    2. Ti bunaahen seemaa keema gulhey ekam hama sama kiyaakudhin ves manmayakh vaanethaa so namah balaa ehceh nun kahneyge. Just my point of view ingey.

    3. Dhen ekamu name eh badhalu kureveykah neiy☺☺sorry

    4. Dhen ekamu name eh badhalu kureveykah neiy☺☺sorry kamana dear

13. Vrh vrh reethi ingey sis…maasha allah….when nxt
    n mihaaru kokee school ga v busy ehenve i cant comment nge dear…sry

    1. It’s ok dear ??Happy vejje kokee dear ah mi part kamudhiyaeema..

14. Ahleyy mih vaahaka kiyaa meehun kantha hureyy dhw. Grade 6 gah ulenyy eyy buneemah gaboolu kohbahlah. Ehn noonax knmeh grade ehgah ulunax reader ah kn kameii. Vaahaka reethi vahnikoh nimuneeh eh nuh. Vahreiigeh bayeii??

    1. Thanks EHLEE dear…It ok ??Egothah bunaa kudhinnah adhi nuvis neny e…varah happy vejje dear ah mi part kamudhaa..luvs????

15. Hey dandelion I’m also from Dhonfan?v Salhi Mi part vx?? waiting for next part❤

    1. Who are you,Eny dear?Can you please tell the name..thanks for your support…July 15 ge part kuda massala akaa hedhi nuvy..ekamu today ge insha allah varah avahah up kuraanan. .love you more ❤❤??

16. Meehun kiyaa ehcakah dandelion maahku ahlaahnuhlaah vaahaka continue kuhreyy ingeyg. Bst of luck…

    1. Thanks EHLEE dear??Will upload soon…

17. Is this a story? Oh my god. And a 12 years girl writing a story. Seriously? Girl go and study. loabii ge vaahaka liyaa vareh nuvey kanneyge adhi.. and this is not what we call a story. Mi site ga hunna emme reethi vhk thakah vs mi varakah comment eh nulibey kanneyge. Are you the one who is commenting too in different names?

    1. Kiyavamey..Talent huri kujjakah liyeveyne…mibuny Dandelion talent huree ekey noon…No name dear it’s ok..Alhuganduring register kurumuge kurin eki name ga comment kuree.but now,I don’t??

18. Mm dear this is not a negative comment dear. The names in this story is a bit difficult. Also its difficult to understand. So try to correct ur mistakes cox ure a talented writer. U can improve ur writing id u correct the mistakes

    1. Sorry crazy dear??I can’t change the names..Thanks for your support..

19. hey dear kba aneh part .avahah next part up koh dhy bala.v salhi stry eh miyy.

    1. Sorry jazlee dear..miadhu ge part up eh nukureveyne..cox kuda massala eh jehigen ??Insha allah, Thursday ga I will upload two parts..wait for tomorrow☺☺

20. Avah next part up koh dhy bala.can’t waiting.

    1. Will be uploaded soon as possible ????

21. still reading.. konmes varakah vaa goiiy engemun dhanee

    1. Ehen ??Happy vejje dear ah konmes varakah vaahaka olhun filamun annaathee

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