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1. Salaam!! and a very good morning. And i guess there r maybe 3 or 4 parts.. Anyway thankx for the good lucks 😉 Take a very good care ??

2. what the **** is this

   1. whats wrong ?

   2. It’s something I would love if u stop reading so that u won’t have to say bad words. ?❤

3. mind ur language f.. ryn ur the best ilove u.. so sad yana moya v ma.. i want yaan… f kahala meehun v gaddaa vaane

   1. Thank you darling. ❤ ilyt. ❤❤?

4. V v v reethi…konirakun next part

   1. Thank you ❤? in sha Allah next part Monday ga. ??

5. Me fst dhw…. Alhe haadha reehchey….. Yaain aa yainaa gulhuvaba plxxxx… Next part konirakun….

   1. Thank you ❤? and let’s see dhw emyhun ah vaagoii.. in sha Allah next part Monday ga. ??

6. V salhi
   Btw dear ge exam kihineh
   When next part
   Hama dhera vany mi part kiyaafa

   1. Thank you ❤? and my exam was average not so awesome. ??.. In sha Allah next part Monday ga. ??

7. Varah reethi mi part ves… Ekamu ehen nahadhaba ryn haadha dhereh vaaneyeh yaain aar yainaa aa emieehun gulhavadhiee ?

   1. Thank you ❤? and let’s see what will happen next dhw. ??❤

8. Mihaaru vaahaka ah ituhur furihama kameh aisfi. . Dhn avahah yaain aa yainaa aa gulhuvabala. ..

   1. Thank you so much.❤?

9. V salhi…U r the best.

10. Yaaan. Thi tha bappa ge dhoshi dhari ulhen vi gothaki. Bappa ge hurinaa unmeedhey veyaa modevijje. ???

11. Rom baa leema mihaar vaahaka v v furihama..finally yana n yaain gulhijje..lakka dhuvahu keiykoffi….v v v reethi

12. nice

13. Tbh miee varah viyaanudhaa kanthah thakeh fathuran liyefa oih vaahaka eh..
    beyru thanthaa vex myhun ulheyne kudhin adapt kohgen… Ekam noolhey ekaku anekakaa hithaa vegenneh
    Mi story ga dhemyhunnah vex kurin ingifa onnanee eiee siblings kamah
    So dhemyhun hithaavegen loabivun eiee varah huthuru kameh
    Writer beynun vedhaane thafaathu story eh gennan
    But this is not right
    (My opinion ?

    1. Bala shinege storygaves hama neyngi thibe loabi veveny. Ekam ryn ah v ma dhw thihen thi commnt kury. Shine aa dhimaalah keehvetha nubunany?

    2. True Hiafa. Just what I wanted to say. And mihaaru dhemyhun maa gaaiy kurany
       Btw ‘My opinion’ shine ge story ga loabiveveny beybe kokko kan neyngi, and fahun they try to control themselves. Ekam mivaahakaiga loabivany hama engihure…. so mii varah huthuru kameh….
       And I don’t even know shine and ryn personally, so kommehen shine rangalhu kuranyky noon. Shine vs liyaa echcheh ga kamunudhaa kameh vaanama bunaanan kamaku nudhe ey

    3. Vaahaka liyaa iruvex thankolheh bodah visnaalun muhimmu
       I believe that cousins aar gulhun eiee dheenuga huhdha kameh kan
       Ekam mi story ga yaain n yaaina ingeynee eiee kokko aar beybe kan
       So siblings dheytherey mifadha mududhaaru gulhun ufedhey vaahaka liyumakee varah hadi kameh
       Shine ge stories ga loabi vevenee eiee siblings kan neyngi
       I do like ryn stories but this is bull shit ?
       No offense btw
       Hope ryn ah visneyne kamah ?

    4. Haifa kairy kaaku buny mi vaahaka kiyaashey.. Haifa viyaanudhaathy ve mikahala viyaanudhaa vaahaka kiyany… Aslu vaagothaky Ryn v ma hajam nukureveny

    5. En hajjam plx ragalhah dhivehi nudhana kujjaku heyvifahuri hadieh miey

14. i’m with the writer .

15. Vrh salhi….avahah nxt prt up khdhy….wtng wtng

16. Ryn seriously thi dheveniy varah kada message eh mujuthamauah!!!
    ???????????
    Mihaaru thidhaa gotheh kamaku nudhe!!
    Kameh vaairakah nujehey dw maruvaaka!!!
    And konmedhuvahaku eh vaahakaeh adu iv iv foohivey ehba
    And udaaa dhimaalah balaigen huregen Rashi enmennah adu ivey varkah nun dua kuraanikiy!
    Dhua kuraaniy hushuai theri kamaai eku!!!
    Shine and ryn have to think about the messages you guys are giving to the society!!!!!

17. V huthuru loeh beh mee dhen yaain ves dad ah vaudhuvefa kokko ah loabi dhenytha v bad edhemeehun dhurukohba

18. Maikamoo..vaahaka reethi :p

19. V v vvvvvv salhi

20. Mashaa Allah v reethi mi part ves,keep it up,next part kiyaa hithun kehnuvey,heart is beating too fast,

21. kithamme defend kurias huthuru kameh reeccheh nuvaane. shaithoana vanee reethi huthuru olhuvaalafa. ehen v ma aharemenna huthuru kan kan reethi vanee. mihen bunaa meehaa v goas vaane ingey ekam hithuga oh ehcheh bunumakun goaheh neh dhw. wen I read these parts I think of d scene wen yaina vihaigen yaain ulhunu goiy. suddenly ekkoh dhiri ulhemun gos ishgy lowbi e dhemedhu ufedhen v keevve kameh nuves ingey. beybey aa kokko aee leyge gulhumeh nethives. e kahala nazarakun dhekeven v ves keevve? amilla beybey reethi vegen gos e gothah visnieema ekan reethi kamakah vanee kihineh tho? aee saafu thoahiru loaibbah v keevvee??
    alhungadu mi visnenee goas koh tho??? 🙁

22. goas kameh goas vaane emme eaa ekkolhah thibias. mihen buneema eba beney kudhin shine aa dhimaalah nubune ey ehchekey. mee akee kommehen vaki meeheh v ma bunaa ehcheh noon. story kiyaafa ufedhey hiyaal eyge edhemeehun meet vaairu nuves ingey kaaku kan. fahun inguneem dhuruvey. ekam meega hama ekee kuda irussure ulhemun ais fahun ishqy loabi v ma character aa medhu suvaalu ufedhey. mee kee rangalhu idea eh noon. my request to all writers please even if u want to write a different story pls dnt include something that’s so unacceptable in our society as well as islam. we should always write something remembering that we r muslims not keeping in mind hindi dramas english ets

    1. Agree

    2. Totally agree

    3. Agree…Ryn pls think about it

    4. Totally agree n plus gina vaahaka thakuga ziney ah magufahivaagothah liyaakamy v dhra kameh. Mihaar gina vaahaka thakuga ziney koffa fahun thaubaa vy kamah liyaa kamy e kamah magufahivaa kameh…?

    5. Agreed!!!
       Plus this love story of yaain and yaina doesnt make any sense to me ;/ if they grew up together falling in love with each other seems odd!!
       As their parents loved both of them equally without letting them know they both werent related!!!
       So writers, if you guys are writing any thing just write something we’ll all agree with!!
       Just a request!!!!

23. Cmn guy’s. Mee storyeh real life eh noon. MashaAllah varah reethi mi part ves

    1. varah huthuru vahaka akas.

    2. huthuriyyaa nukiyaaba aimi.

    3. ryn pls mi story liyun huttaa nulaathi.

    4. huthuru vegen kiyun huttaly, miadhu vahaka up koffa inyma balaly irah kamaku dhaakah nei midhen bodu varu dho. beybe aka eku gulhun hinga iru ladhun boa halaku

    5. They don’t even know they are cousins yet they are continuing to go against their religion. This is incest please make this stop you are conveying a very wrong message.

    6. VVV REETHI KEEP IT UP

    7. Shau storys deliver us massages and we follow it.
       Maybe we might think “its just a story! What does it do in my life I dont care about it” but ideas are meant to change!! In real life we all want to have a life described in the story with is not suppose to come true!!
       So think about all these stuffs!!!

24. kon irakun next parrt?

25. Mi vaahaka vrh reethi. ? waiting for the next part. ??

26. guys pls they are not siblings dhw. pls. ryn we love u . keep it up

27. Vaahaka huthurunama nukiyaane.

28. Mi story yan comment kuraa meehunakan novey rangalhu engonves..bayen faharu bunaanea yaain and yaina maadhurey .mihaaru thi bunany maa kairiyea..haha..vreethi story wait next part?

    1. mi story kia emmenge visnun ehgoi vakah nujehey dho

29. Asluves hairaan vany emyhunge medhuga lobi ufedhunyma.. my vvv nuvaane kameh.. and v thafsylkoh ehen rombaithah nugenesbala.. myhunge hiythakuga faahish kan kamah lobi ufedhun noon kameh nuvaane.. v hithaamaverikameh my aslu.. misaalakah demyhun lobikohliey liyunas ehaa thafsyl nikuraa nama dhw.. admin vx dhw mikan kan balaa nama kihaa rangalhu.. dhn bunaane hadiyya nukiyaashey..

    1. Asluves.good point☺

30. Okay so mi vahaka kiya kiyuntherinnah ingey they are cousins kan. but the characters in this story doesnt know that dho. so mi kahala gulhumeh ufedhumuge kurin ekan characters ah ves engi nama kiyuntherin eha hiy hama nujehigen noolheyne kamah gabool kurevey. afterall cousins aa marriage hudha dho. but mi story ga they think they are siblings born to suma and maazin :/

    1. Mi story yen ..not real life ..

    2. zahu they do know they are cousins kan mihaaru. yaina australia aah furumuge kurin they knew it. suma revealed the truth. so emeehun ekuraa kan kamakee e ee siblings noon kan engi thibe kuraa kameh. but not saying they are doing a good thing. 🙂

31. Varah controversial story eh dho.

32. Vvvv reethi ?? waiting for next part ????

33. Ey hellow
    Kon kameh goasvegen tha miulheny
    Edhemyhun loabivi episode ah thi comment thah kuri nama fudhey
    Ekam mihaaru uthuri araigen eulheny edhemyhunge dhemedhuga othy kaiveni heyo gulhumehkan egunyma
    Loabivegen ulhunu iru dhw thihen buneveyby ves
    Dhen mihaaru hurihaa kameh egi saaf vegen edhemyhundheytherey gulhun ufedhigen mivaahaka rythive kiyaaane eccheh neygunyma adhives eccheh kiyaalany thi
    Hagygathaky mivaahaka kithamme ragalhah genayas thimyhun mivaahaka ah kada comment kuraa kan
    Thy mithaa ulhey baeh writer in thakakah hajam nuvegen eki nan namuga kiyaa ecchehi thakeh
    Bunelan othy thikan issue akah nagan vy dhuvahu nunaga sana kiyaafa mivaguthu thikan negyma v joke eh

    1. Negative comment koffa huri myhun buNY the Dhu vaahakaeh…..

    2. Gud point ☺

34. story eh ga viyas mikahala badhuahlaagee vaahaka liyumakee baliganevey kameh noon
    kameh goas kkoh kuranyaa rangalhu koh dhinumakee kusheh kameh kamuga nudheken

35. Story superb
    Furathama feshigen ves yanaa vy yaain ge princess ah
    Ryn youbare an amazing writer
    Kyp it up

36. Vv hadi ibaarah kurun hadi sifakurume neh vaahaka luya writer mee mi nukiyan vee foosakun ekam comment kiyathee comment e know kohllee

37. Vv hadi ibaarah kurun hadi sifakurume neh vaahaka liya writer mee mi nukiyan vee foosakun ekam comment kiyathee comment e know kohllee

38. well, this story is nice and i do always read ryns stories. Ryn ah kaamiyaabee ah edhen. Just wanted to give some advice, we are muslims and should in no way write anything which differs with our religion. vaahaka liyaairu visnaalun muhimmu dheena fushu araa ehchihi nuliyun for eg having any kind of intimacy like kissing is haram before marriage, therefore please think about this point. and please dont write stories on concepts which disregards the values of our religion. visnaalias ingey v hadi kameh dw lobe between two siblings..mikahala stories liyumun fithuna fasaadha ah magu fahivegen hingaidhaane,,meehunnah eiy maa bodu kameh gothuga hynuvaan fashaane. mujuthamauga mikahala kanthah aamuvegen hingaidhaane. media is a great power can bring about big changes in the world as we are witnessing the current world events now..Ryn visnaane kamah ummeedhu kuran.

39. Truth?

40. Mashah heevani maazin fenigen dhemeehun ufuraalaani kanneyge hahaha..

41. Dheeenee Gothun beliyas loaibakee Allah insaanunge hithugai lahvaa ihusaaseh….edhemeehunge leyge ehves gulhumeii neh iru ehves mahsalaeh noon dw aey….

    1. Hohoho leyge gulhun ovey dho rangalhah story kiyanveenu cousins veema onanne dho leyge gulhun lololol

    2. Subhaanallah.. mifadha thanakah aharumenge maai ilaah ge ismufulhu nuves gehnaathi ingey.. ekalaange lobi lehvi iru kaivenyge kurin hinga gulhunthakah v bodah ruhivodi nugahnavaa..

    3. Hageegee loabakee kaivenyge fahun vevey loabi..e ah vure kurin vany loabeh noon..this is the reality

42. Khonme gothaka story liyunas kamudhaane meehunaa kamu nudhaane meehun thibeyne. So ekamaa maa boda alhaanulaa story kuriya gengos nimaalaa. All the best ryn ??. Keep going girl.

    1. Aslu bunan tha enmen ves ebunany rangalhu vashaka eh. Egothah siblings medhu efadha gulhun thakaki haraam kanthah.. amudhun ekudhinnah neyge siblings noon kameh. Dhen ehn veeru efadha gulhun ufedhumakives vrh naadhiru kameh. So in point of view writer should be more careful about these things. We are muslims. And ethan kolhu rangalhu kohlani koh story vrh furihama vaane

    2. Those who are saying mee story ekey shame on all of you.. even if this is a story aee vrh hadi kameh.. hithuga eemaam theri kameh nethima ekahala ehchehi bunnaany.

43. Mahsala aky kohko aa beybekan egi hure loabivun

44. wow v nice. ???
    Good work!
    keep it up ryn

45. Dhen ajaibennu. Vaahaka ehgga ziney kuryma jeheytha gos kuran? Vaahakaiga vaahaa kameh kuraakah nujehey bundhk dhevvaafavany heyo nubai visnan dho. E meehun siblings ah nuveema ennu e feeings ufedhuny? Dhen beynun haa gothakah change kurevey echcheh noon feelings aky. Depression is real. Imagine someone going through this for 6-10 years. Madhu dhuvaheh nooney. Baeh faharu vaa gothun ekahala moya khiyaalu ves annaane. Dhen ehen noonas vaahakaiga haadhisaa onnan jehey. Kommehen real life ga vaahen komme dhuvahaku kuraa kanthakuge journal eh noon meekee. Evaru neyngenyya nukiyaa heyo nuvaane. Dont demotivate the writer!

46. Siblings kamah heekurevunu iru they DID feel guilty. And hadi kameh ves nukurey!

47. Yaina kujjakah vegen endhuga othey…seriously ryn!! Why dont she be a cat ? Loooolllllllllllllll

    1. More like she could be a annoying ?

48. Haw akah nengunu edhe meehun liabi vun ehaa huthuru kamakah v keeve kameh,dheenugai ves cousin marry kurun hudha,,

    1. Kaaku tha buniy cousins akah marry eh nukureveyey.
       We are talking about there unacceptable behavior and the confusing love story of a brother and a sister which seems odd!!!

49. Saabas ehen noonas hiyaalee vaahaka ekey,hageegahtah dhiriukhumuga ebahuri own brother and sister ves rahtehivegen ulhefa,so

    1. So you mean we should support those relations!!!
       Brother and sister rahtehivegen my foot!!!

    2. Great!!
       Welcome to the society corrupted by the ugly culture of the Europeans!!!

    3. bala mamma aa dhariaa ehn lowbi wey tha??

50. Gageegathuga mihaaru mi site ga in ehme reethi vaahaka mee,waiting for next part

51. Adhi bayaku mithaa mi varu dhakaa varu kameh hiye nuvey mi vaahakaa ga vehje hen. Kurin e 2 meehun loabi ve vunu iru e 2 meehunah neynge e meehun eii eh bandu ehbafaa 2 meehun noon kame. Ehenve e 2 meehun ves thibee e meehun ge ihusaas tha eii faafa eh kama hitha aruvaan dhuru ga. Ekamku mihaaru e meehunah ves eba ingey e 2 meehun eii eh bandu ehbafaa 2 meehun noon kan. Dhn kobaa tha meega mahsala akee. Dhen ehbayaku eba oi bunefa adopte kohgen ves meehun kudhin gen gulhey vaahaka, Ekamku mi khala kameh medhuveri eh nuve ey. Ekamku adopt kohgen gen gulhey kudhin mi khala gothaka hithuga loabi ufedhey than dhakaa film thakun ves. Dhen buney eii beyru meehun ufadhaa kaafarun ge film thakuga ey ehen vanee ves. Ekamaku aharemen Muslimun anga mahcha jahaan thibenee e balan ves. Mi vaahakaa ga naadhey beybe kokko eh medhuga noan nan jeheyne kahala gulhumeh hingaa vaahaka eh

    1. Point it they think they are siblings. People you should never understand this. Shame on you

    2. Point it they think they are siblings. People like you should never understand this. Shame on you

    3. No. Mihaaru e meehunah ingey e meehun eii siblings noon kan. Ok.

    4. Kuda how can u judge me? How can you say people like me don’t know never understand it? Do you know me personally? I don’t think so.. btw u better read the whole story once more. Eyrun ingeyne e 2 meehunah mihaaru othee engifa kan eii siblings noon kan. Ekan neyngeynee e familyn beyru meehunah. Ok got it

52. kudhin kudhinah haadha varekey mi vany…?? e 2myhunnah kurin loabi vevunas sirru kohgenneh nun ulhuny??adhi e loabi hithun nofohevigen nun tha ulhuny?? ei dhn massala ehtha??

    1. kobar tha handi thah?? aslu mi vaahakaage hurihaa prt ah ves comment kuran bt ehn names ga ☺

    2. Bala kurin ves adhi fahunves koko akaa bebeyakaa lobivumak y naadhirukameh !!

    3. bala kurin ves fahun ves e2 myhun leyge gulhumeh noannaane. and kurin ves adhi fahun ves miee vaahakaeh. adhi kurin ves adhi fahun ves vaahaka thakuga ginain vany naadiru kanthah!! ?????????????????????????????????

    4. bala kurin ves adhi fahun ves e2 myhun nuvaane layge gulhume huri bayakah!! and kurin ves adhi fahun ves vaahaka thakuga ginain vany naadhiru kan kan…! ????

    5. Bala thimaage myhun vex eiee leyge gulhun hunna baekey ?
       Vaahaka thakuga mikahala naadhiru kanthahah thakun hiyaalu hoadhaigen thimaage amilla dharinge dhemedhu mikahka gulhu meh othihyyaa keekey baa bunaanee
       Dhn buney dhiriulhumuga vex hingaanee naadhiri kanthah thakey ??

    6. Are you guys making fun??
       Cuz what your talking about is seriouse!!
       Story sites are the most popular among people, and if you guys are writing stuffs like”THIS” its bad news !!
       HANDIANS you are a writer so think about the effects that your story can do to the society!!!
       Be for its too late:/

53. V reethi ?

54. Ryn you could still change the story. However i think your giving a bad advice to people

    1. I dont think its giving bad advice.
       Eii vaahaka kiyaa iru ves ingen jehey this is not real but only imagination.

    2. Miss kiara that is a bad advice weather its an imagination or reality.
       Clean your mind!!!

    3. Miss ryn for god sake marry them ASAP.
       Cuz the way you are getting both closer are highly annoying and unacceptable in this society !!!!

55. Saabahey. . Miothy vaa kameh.

56. Dhen huntaalaba…ryn kuriyan gendhey story..waiting

    1. Wait and watch what this story can lead!
       Just dont say we didnt warn ya

57. I have a adopted brother when i saw about 3. And i grew up not knowing that he wasnt my own blood. Me and both my brother knew it when i was like 15 and he was 13. Kokko and mashakah neynge aharun mi aslu blood related noon kameh. But i never not even m drean thought of something so filthy about my baby brother. And he never did. And after reading this honestly hodu lavany. Ryn please think about it. ?

58. I have a adopted brother when i saw about 3. And i grew up not knowing that he wasnt my own blood. Me and both my brother knew it when i was like 15 and he was 13. Kokko and mashakah neynge aharun mi aslu blood related noon kameh. But i never not even once thought of something so filthy about my baby brother. And he never did. And after reading this honestly hodu lavany. Ryn please think about it. ?

59. Dear kon irakuntha vaaahaka up kohdheyny.. irukolhukolhaa balaalevey up vefa intho.. plxx avahah up kohdhyba.. I luv ur story.. keep it up☺☺?

60. Ryn !! Ryn !! Ryn!! Speechless?,mind low in?,outstanding❤,love it?,awesome?..your the best writer in this site and my favorite????..I love you and ur stories ..waiting for the next part.❤

61. ??inthixaaruga hurin ge inthixaar ga mi inee❤..avahah up koh dheeba rynn puhlease

62. Kobaa. Vaahaka update kollaba.kiyaahithun mihaaru hureveniki nun. Vr vr reethi vaaahaka

63. Nice!

64. Ryyyynn. .
    Kobaa, today is Monday ehnu..
    Avas kohlabala. .

65. kobaatha story

66. Ryn Kobaatha story. mihaaru kiyaa hithun keh vany kee noon. ?

67. Haadha inthizaareh kure vijjey Monday ah. Haadha reechey vaahaka. ??

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