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1. Ummedhukuran rythi vaane kamahh ..gud luck

   1. ThnQs Appy.. 🙂

2. Warah short BT heewnii v.v.v.v NYC waanehen 🙂

   1. ThnQs Shoo.. 🙂

3. Very nice dear……
   Hope the other parts of the story will be interesting…. ❤❤❤❤

   1. ThnQs Saroo.. 😀

4. Guys… here is the first part.. hope u liked the starting.. i kindly request all the reader’s to leave a comment.. Please.. so that i would know if there is a mistake or anything which i have to improve.. 🙂 😀

5. all the best twitty.. keep going ☺☺☺☺

   1. ThnQs aff.. 🙂

6. Ummurun haqqu tha nunee dhoshytha innaanee. Heevany dheaharu nuvaa kuda kujjehge liyumeh hen. Btw its ok fr the frst time

   1. E deychakii twitty abaduves olhuvaa deythu.. so mifaharuves olhunii… hehe… 😛 🙂 Sorry for that.. 😀

7. Kia ge Favorite band akee One direction wee yamun. .. mi wahaka kiyaalan thaa dho mi jehuny. ..?

   1. mine too dhonthi can i call yu dhonthi

   2. Yeah.. please .. 🙂

8. I hope v nice story akah vaanekamah…feshun reethi…kn days thakehgga up kuraa story eh meee..waiting for the nxt part

   1. Eheney neyge dhw.. busy vy nama thankolheh up kuraa goiy las vesdrrne but i will try to up it daily.. maybe.. 🙂

9. “Thithibe v chnge vefa dhw ihnanany”* mi rangalhu gotheh nun kahneynge. Huhnaany is the right way in my opinion

   1. thnQs.. I will try my best to change that next time…. 🙂

10. Hurun inna thanakah iny jahaafa e ajn?????story rythi

    1. Hehe.. ThnQs.. 🙂

11. varah reethi

    1. ThnQs .. 🙂

12. varah hadiii cheeeeeeeeee!!!!!1

13. I think mi story v salhi waane…ekam dhn dhigu kohlahche

    1. YEah.. eyy first part vyyma ehn ve.. 🙂

14. Liyumuge kuh thah rangalhu kohlyma rangalhuvaane.

    1. Yeah.. i will try my best.. 😀

15. ThnQs all of u for ur swyyt feedback’s i will try my best to improve my style pf writing and the mistakes u found out and wrote.. Thankyou once again.. next part will be coming soon.. INSHA ALLAH.. 🙂 😀

16. Dhivehi bahugu gavaaidhu kuh varah gina kan faahaga vey..ehen kamun kiyaa iru varah undhagoo..ummeedhu kuran mikan rangalhu kollaane kamah..

    1. Yeah.. i will try my best.. 🙂 ThnQs a lot kaalee.. 😀

17. Haadha kurey….. V best igey …..

    1. ThnQss rish..:)

18. Kuh gina veema kiyan v undhagoo, v kuda kujjeh liyefa oiy story aka vahtharu

19. Haadha kuh gina ey. Kia ge dhefaaaaaves, ice cone boooaaa nimun thanaahen, son ah vure umurun hagu veytha bappa??
    Dhen ehaa molhu kudhin english in vaahaka dhahkaairu thihen nudhakkaane. Varah broken vahtharu. Kuh gina kamun undhagoo kiyan ves.

20. vvv salhi ingey asslu vx

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