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1. heevey igey reethi vaanehen. ??

2. malaika arora men dhw .. dhen arbaz khan vex geney ???? .. by the way story reethi waane hen ☺heeway

3. V reethi… Ekam thankoleh kury…

4. maa ginain malaika ge name beynun kohfahureema kiyan undhagoo gothei hurey…

   malaikaa faahaanaha vaneve..malaikaa faahaanain nikume malaikaa reethivegen malaikaa dn dhiyaee offeehah…dn malaikaa lift ah araafa malaikaa ge jahaafa nikuunan ulhenikoh malaikaa aa dhimaa vee sobaah aa..dn malaikaa heelaafa malaikaa ge meyzukairiah dhiya eve..dn malaikaa type kuran feshi eve..
   undagu dhw mihen ineema kiyan..I felt de same way…no hard feelings for u but hope next time u ll think abt it n make it a nice one..good luck ☺

5. lift ah araigen gos finger jehi vaahaka thankolhei reethikoh ves ebai genevidhaane…i guess ofeehah vadhefa sign in vee vaahaka hen einee..mikahalage kudhi kudhi kanthah thah ves rangalhu kohlaathi…ppl always learn frm mistakes so take my comment as a positive one ok…☺✌?

6. ●”Malaikaa bappa malaikaa ashaai malikage mamma dheke loabi nuvany heyyeve?” (I think it should be *malaikaage* bappa malaika *aai* ….)
   ●”reygandu 8 jahaa haairu masaikai ninmaalaafai ofeehun …………….. geaa kolhah misraabasheve”. (Eyge badhalugai *geaai dhimaalasheve*.. mifadha gothakah genaun..)
   ●”malaikaage officeaa……………..” (mithanugai malaikaage *ofeehaai*)
   ●”malaikaa dhiya magun dhanikoh malaika ah sihunee ……….”(*malikaa hingaafai dhanikoh malaikaa sihuny/malaikaa magumathin hingaafai dhanikoh malaika sihuy* fadha gothakah genaun)
   ●”malaikaa magumathin dhimaa veema govaaly.”(malaika *aai* …..)
   ● “ummedhu kuraanan malaikaa aharenge mamma ah govaalan annane kamah.”( ummedhu *kuran*…..)
   ●”aan ehennehnu vaany midhu maalahun heylevunea vaane goi”( mi jumla hama eh nujehey)

   1. Those are some mistakes i noticed. But the idea of the story seems to be unique.. keep on trying harder and do read the story again and again before uploading. Good luck.
      ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

7. Malaika ge name ehaa ginain beynun kohfa huryma ehaa eh noon….. name beynun kurun thankolheh madhu kohlyma story v rythi vaane…. um nt saying that nw its bad…. even nw also story is gud bt if yuh use that name less then it wuld be much better story…. n yes there r few mistakes…. hope u’ll wrk on them n make it better nxt time….

8. Asluves malaika ge name dhen maa ginain beynun kohffa hureema kiyan hama undhagoo gotheh hureyey.. dhen ehen part eh liyaa iru varah bodah ebai rangalhu kohllaane kamah heekuran

9. Ibaaraaiy kurumuga varah gina massala hurikan faahaga kurevey….. name beynun kurun madhukoh ibaaraaiy furihama kolla… dhen varah avas aruvaalaigen vaahaka liyaa hen heevey…. hope u will take a comments positively. Wish u all the best

10. salhi but malaika geh name maa ginaan hurema v udhaqu kiyan. hope next time do better then this.

11. Reethi salhi ey

    1. Meethi salhi ey

12. 1st part liyunyma e nimunytha thi ulheny kiyuntherin ge Shaugu gehluvaa lanthanum hmm story then reethi make it better with new ideas good luck maako

13. v reethi

14. thanks for the comment. alah vaahakaeh mi liyunee.. dhn faharu rangalhu kuraanan.. mi vaahakaige dhevana bai neren eba visnan adhi madhun malaikaage nan beynun kuraanan kiyun therinah faseyha vaagothah

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