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1. Huva miha hadi vaahakaeh adhi esfiya in nukiyan..plz dhen faharakun rythi kurevythoa balaathi.. site thakuga liyanvaany myhunah dhakka rythithoa balafa.. eyrun mihen nuvane

   1. HATERS HATE!!!

      LOVERS LOVE!!!

2. woww

   1. hmmmm

3. hehe.. ur so cute lilly.. chat ah aadheba

   1. thanks shara

4. nice 🙂

   1. thankx

5. Ohhhhh so bowrin haadha hadiey…miwex dhen waahaka ehdhw kudakuhjakuwes miyah thure rangalhuwaane.laara bunye luvi bunyey piss piss dhen ???

6. n wow ryn vx ulhey stryga.. hehehhe n shaby vx.. nyc.. vrh kiyaa hiyy vehjje.. hehehe thnks fr includin me in ur beautiful stry.. stryga lil mistakes ebahuri.. bt vaahaka liyamun dhaa varakah rythi vaane n imprve kureveyne… i think u cn.. gd lck.. 😉 🙂 🙂

   1. he he ryyn
      thankx

7. I’m not saying the story is bad it’s good but if u can correct the mistakes and write in a way which will be easy for readers to read it would be great………. n ply upload the story a Lil long
   It would be good to u read other stories and try to write in a Lil good way….. Once again the story is good

8. Laaaeee lilly.. Hehe chat ga ulhey enmen govaigentha thi aee..??.. Story hama habeys eager to know about me and lyvaan??????.. And hama e name ves luvly girl.. Lilly hope to see next part soon.. Shaby ninny luvy kiyaaba story…Avahah up kohdheh cheyy inge..????

   1. i knw mimmy its nt u kn. dnt wryy 😉 n mimmyge cmmnts ga emos nethi eh nuhunnaane so its obvious tht it is ehn kuhjeh kn 😉 dnt wry

   2. yes thankx
      he he luvlygirl

9. Oh that boring shabee and ryyn is in the story¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤

   1. Alhey please could u use someother name now my friends think that it was this luvna’s comment.. Sorry ninny and shaby luv kuri cmnt eh noon my..

   2. yeah!

      please kudhin kudhin esfiya chat ga ulhey kudhin ge nan nulachey

10. “Luvy evaahaka buny geah dhaa gadeega”
    “Buny” past tense
    “Dhaa gadi” future tense
    Ehen vyma egothah nubuneveyne.
    Luvy evaahaka buny geah dhiya gadeegaey..
    Nuny
    Luvy evaahaka bunan beynunvy noony bunan gasthukury geah dhaa gadeegaey..
    Plx check for grammatical mistakes like this.
    Proof read kuraanama mikahala simple mistakes thah alhaigannaane
    Thanx 🙂

11. kudakoh mistakes huttas varah reethi ingey vaahaka .”ހެލޯ.ލާރާ ކީކޭ؟”.ލާރާ ބުންޏެވެ.”ޝަބީ ޕްލީޒް ހެލްޕް މީ އައިމް ޑައިން ހެލްޕް މީ ޓު ވިން ލިވާން”.ޝަބީ ބުންޏެވެ.”އާރ ޔޫ ސިރިއަސް ޑިއާރ! އޯކޭ! ސިންސް ޔޫ އަރ މައި ފްރެންޑް އަވިލް ޓްރައި.”

    1. thanks faxoo

12. wow vrh habeys mi prt vx…but shaby vx bunaany mistakes ebahuttey 😛 heeheeheee…nd vrh foni vejje shaby vx ulheythy… 😉 nd nxt prt up kuraairu mistakes thakh visnaigen liyahchey… nxt prt avahah up khdhehchey….nd dhigu kh ingey 😀 all da bst lilly 🙂

    1. he he he he shabyyyy
       thankxx

13. Story salhi. ekm Name thah ma ehvathuru veema kiyaa iru undhagoo..

    1. okay

14. Story hama habeys ekam kudhi kuh ebahuri dhn oi bai dhigukoh gensdheychey.

    1. thanxx
       yes then digukoh genesdheynun

15. Varah reethi dhn oi part avahah dhigu koh genesdhehchey waiting for it ekam samll mistakes ebahuri improve kohllyma ok vaane

16. Aathaa thihthi kaan ekm kudhi mistakes ebahuri rangalhu kohllachey

17. Maa bodah ehvahtharu name laifa huree and kiyan varah undhagoo varah kairi koh type koffa hureema but story is nice.. ?

18. varah reethi, <3 keep it up!!

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