ލޯތްބެއްގެ ފެށުން 29

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1. Yeah me first… ?varah salhi ❣️

   1. Thanks Shahu

2. Hate the cover pic. Are u trying to create a fetish on the readers mind.

   1. Even if the cover pic is not that good the story is awesome for me. And those who hate it then why don’t they try and write even a single sentence. Shame on them. ?and plus nubaikoh eh photo aa dheytherey nubaikoh visnanyaamu reader’s mind nubaivaanee.

   2. Hahahaha, single sentence ey kiyaa challenge kuraa vaahaka dhakka. Story hadi vaahaka eh noon Bunee, cover kamunudhaa vaahaka. Konme eche pic ah laafa balaa myhun dho goas vanee, e pic leemyhaa e hama Saint eh. Disgusting

   3. ?Aaan ehenyyaa eheree e firihenmyhaa e dhe anhenun ge fookolhuga touch kohgen. Dhen balaabala e thin meehun balaigen thibi vatharu. Anhenun laafa huri Hedhunves…
      Adhives visnaagoi nubai vaanee.

   4. Thanks Uh, Cover pic eh hadhaalamun midhany

   5. hehe Lol

   6. Ok Cccv i will change

3. Meega bunefa othee single sentence liyaa vaahakaeh noon. Single sentence eh liyebalaashey kiyaa challenge kuranee tha. Vaahaka hadiey meehaku nuves buneyey meena maa vareh vegen mi thelhi baalanee. Bala e cover photo kamunudhaa vaahaka Bunee. Blue filmeh ge manzareh cover ah laafa ves e leemeehaa goas nuvaane, e balaafa nubai koh maana nagaa myhaa dho mi goas vanee. Gaboolkuriyas nukuriyas Meega in cover photo akee rangalhu photo eh noon. Vaahaka aa evves gulhumeh dheyha nuvaa viyaanudhaa gothakah firihenaku dhe anhenehge unaganduga hiffahattaalaigen e huree. Myhaku rangalhu echekey bunyas thikahala myhun ulheyne kankan mathi jahaa zee nai theri kuran.

   1. Ok ok. We are not gonna fight?. I am sorry if i said Anything bad ok?. But now the cover has changed. So i am happy

4. Kithanme rulhi ayas e cover photo is bad. Agree or disagree it’s disgusting and very unethical.

   1. Ok Anonymous cover change kurumuga miulheny, e gothah mean koffa laafa huri pic eh noon, hama eyru reethi foto eh nufenigen laafa huri pic eh e

   2. Anonymous…
      Have u heard “kandi Reethi thuunuyya ey” so, never judge a book by it’s cover ???
      And so, on Belle ge haters ah bunelan if thi enmen Belle aa dhekolhu viyas I’m with her ey
      ?????

5. Salhi varan mi part ves❤️❤️next part thankolheh avas kohllaathi ingey ????????

   1. Thanks Mary

6. OMG, sifakurunthah varah salhi. ??. Zaik haadha rom ey dhoo ??. Next kiyaalaahithun moyavejje

   1. Thanks Maako

7. Gayah Thai lavaafa eheree dress. Rendhu ebafeney, dhen ma mihen bunyma ma goas v

   1. Ehenya photo zoom kohge balaafa rendhu feneyoa. Alhe belun thirikurumahves vanee angavaafaey

   2. Koachetha zoom kuree, ekachehves zoom nukurey, belun thirikohgentha mi vaahaka kiyanee. Hahaha ha,

   3. hehe Yuyu, cover change kohlaanan, Rendhu bunyma get nuvi, eyga ehury liyumehge. not reydhaa or rendhu

8. Wow ❤❤❤ varahh salhi this part !!! Yh I don’t like the cover pic 2 !!! but i love the story the way it is !!! when next part ??? ????

9. Dirty pillowcase ehge thereyga kethanme rythi clean pillow eh othas image reecheh nuvaane. Varah vaahaka mee.

   1. Dont judge a book by its cover. Thats yur problem. You should read it once. Alhugandah hiyeh nuvey reethi baaliheh gengulhey beyfulhakah reethi uraeh nulibi onnaaneheneh. Hama ehen belle ge niyaives goaheh noon.

   2. Cover vara muhinmu role eh kulhey. Oriyaamunves hinganvee magumathee niyah rangalhuveema okay vaane dho? This story is nice. Only the pic is the problem. Whatever intention the writer has, it isn’t appropriate. Baeh faharu reethi uraeh liben othas nullavvaa annahaa roalhieh araa gothah cover nukoh baalis gengulhey myhunves varah gina.

   3. ok Anonymous

   4. hehe Someone, i will change cover don’t worry

10. Varah varah reethi…
    Maa sha Allah…
    When is next part…?????????

    1. Thanks Yersh, next miadhu up kohlaanan

11. Vahaka reethi. Ekam Cover photo beyadhabee vara boda ves. Liyuntheriyaa ekan rangalhu kollun edhen.

    1. Thanks Fasy,

12. ?% nubai photo eh

    1. heheh, story kiyaalythy thanks

13. Part 1 kiyaali iru hitha eree cover pic kamakunudhaa vaahaka mention kuraanamey….
    Part 2 i thought someone dhen mention koffaaneyey noonhey evaahaka.
    Part 3…..still waited……
    Part 4….
    Part 5
    Part 6
    Part 7
    Part 8 and up to part 15,16,17,i had enough. Dhen comment kollan ulhenikoh konmes kudhin kolheh evaahaka comment kolli.
    Dhen ekamakuves veekameh haraan. Eche key bunghas rangalhu kohnulaatee massala akee.

    1. Dhenves inguny ehen bayaku comment kureema kuraakannu. Hama bahanaaeh dhahkaafa ehen kiyanvegen

    2. Someone ah evaruves nuviehnun. ?

    3. ooh Ramz so sorry, i will chanege cove so soon

    4. OOOhhh someone, thanks story kiyaalaathy, i will change cover

14. Fothehge bandeyri gadun eyge ethereyga oih ehcheh neyngeyne. Dont judge a book by its cover. So yeah.. Alhugandumen mi page ah vannanee cover photo balaakah noon. Vaahaka kiyan. Egothun Bellege zinmaa eyge emme furihama gothugai vanee adhaa kohfa. Eii alhugandumenna hamayah kiyaa hivvaakahala reethi vaahakaeh foarukohdhinun. Ehennoonas amalthah binaavanee emeehehge niyathuge mahchah. Alhugandakah nufeney eynage niyathakee efadha photo thah alhugandumenge thereygai fethurun kameh. So think before you say anything to the writer. Visneyne kamah ummeedhu kuran.

    1. Thanks wellwiaher, aslu egothah mean kofa ly foto eh noon e, reethi foto eh search kohlaafa lyhama, ??

15. Vaahaka???????
    Cover photo ?????
    ?????????????????????

    1. hehe Thanks

16. There are no rules, for your cover picture, so there are no “mistakes” in the strict sense of the word. If your cover picture is already conveying an intentional message, it’s okay, but if your picture is transmitting an unintended negative message, we can call that a mistake. So writers must be aware of this. The cover photo used in this story is not suitable, surely there will be hassale

    1. Thanks Qwerty

17. Alhey??? nice ingey
    But Kobaa Hamahamakan? Gender inequality dho? One boy, two gals, nonononooo. Howbout onegal twomen. ?!!!!!

    1. Hahahaha hahaha haha haha haha

    2. heheh, thanks

18. Seriously guys??
    Story fashain 29 vana part ah dhiyaema tha ingeny cover pic ge vaahaka mention kuran??
    I feel like yuh guys are just making this an issue.. ekaku coverge vaahaka dhehkyma dhen thibi myhun cover pic kamunudheye kiyaafa comment thi kurany. And kiyaa myhun reethi koh ves buneveyne cover change kuran dont be rude..
    And yeah mi site ga mi story ga ein cover pic ah vure balan huthuru pics laafa hurey .

    1. Mi site ga dhen thibi stories ga filinujahaa hureema dhen mamenves liyanvee filinujahaatha?

    2. Thanks Roo

    3. Noreply i will change cover, anyways Thanks

19. Age 30 veema ingunee mi sanitary napkin mijahanee nubai konkan, ehenvegenney evarah leak vanee, Dhen rangalhugothah jehun dho onnaanee, kurin bayaku nubunaathee amilla ah ehen hedhuneema fahun rangalhu kuraanee dho??????

    1. ??????

    2. Eyyy huvaa mibunee, mashaves vi thihen, thai kuraa part kamah meves hykuree top ga hunnaanee, maafahun mi ingunee, ???

    3. U guys r indirectly mocking dho, reechah buneemaves nuvidho?

    4. hehe Boo,

20. Varah reethi ??????? whn is next part ????? luv this story so much ????

    1. Thanks Meekkomee

21. Candles dhillaafa petals alhaafa normally men do that for women. Ekamaku meega anhen kujjaa firimyhaa ahtakaa egothah decorations hadhaafa mi othee. Anyway, it’s okay though. Very nice story eh mee. Dhivehi touch nethas reethi. And I also hope belle will change the cover pic.

    1. Belle… Eiy dhonthi ge comment eiy noon.. ???? E vaanee ehen dhonthi akau kanneynge ??????Anyways story is really nice❤️❤️❤️???? Love you Belle??❤️❤️????

    2. IT’S Ok DHONTHY ???. luve you

22. Plz change the cover pic, Belle, story is nice. ?

    1. Thanks Shau

23. Belle dary cover pic change kollaathi varah reethi mi stori waitin 4next part digukogenesdhechey???

    1. Thanks Yaas

24. Yes, cover pic needs to be changed ASAP.

    1. Thanks i will

25. Thanks every one, who read this story. never mind i will change a beautiful cover pic in next part.

26. I can’t wait for the next part….
    truly one of the best romantic stories I’ve red so far….

    1. Thanks iimrn

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