ހިތް ދެވިއްޖޭ ކަލާއަށް ޓަކައި 11

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1. Dhivehi vaahaka thakuga ingiraysi bass baynun kuraathee mihaaru kiyaa hitheh nuvay …dhivehi Vaahaka eh liye nimay iru onnan vaanee seedhaa saadhaa dhivehi bahun…

   1. To b sure.
      I agree with that @Anonymous

   2. Dhen dhivehi vaahakaiga ingireysi bass beynun kuraathy kiyaa hih nuvanyaa why are you reading this story?? Not only this story, dhivehi vaahakaiga ingireysi bas beynun kuraa vaahaka thi kiyany keehve? Hama amilla vaguthehnnu thi beykaaru kurany kuraa hih nuvaa kameh kurumuga… This story is varah mi zamaanaa gulhey gothah Shai liyaa story ehh… Plus, most of the readers are gen z… So she’s writing her story in a way that her readers would like it… Dhen thi meehaa like nuve ey kiyaafa story badhalu kuran vee keehve… Just cuz one or two readers doesn’t like it, she’s supposed to change the way, and her style and everything?? Nahh bro… Thi meehaa mi vaahakaiga ingireysi bas hureema kiyaa hih nuvanyaa mi vaahaka nukiyaa, thimaa meehaa kuraa hih vaa kameh kuryma veenu? Ehen noonas, kaaku buny thi myhaa gaathu mi vaahaka kiyaashey… Konme hen authors ge hıh maruvaa kahala, demotivate vaa kahala comments kuran mithanah annaane kameh neii… Kıyan beynun noonihyyaa nukiyaany… Mi vaahaka nukiyas thi myhaa ah vaane dhera eh ves, libeyne gehllumeh ves noannaane for sure.. so just instead of wasting your time here, go do sth productive for yourself…

      Anyways…. Mi episode ves Hama varah superb… Dhen vaany kihineh baaey hithah ara araa huhtta e nimuny varah curious kohllaafa… Varah kiyaa hithun indhaa… Also, don’t mind these negative comments ingey… Even though a few comments ekahala negative comments, most of your readers do appreciate your hard work, and they love your story… So don’t let these comments get to you… Mikahala comments aa hedhi your hih maruviya nudhehchey… Your stories are soo good, and you’ve got potential to write too… Use as much English you could use… Haters gonna hate no Matter what… English words use kuriyas, nukuriyas… They gonna hate… Post beykaaru negative comments… What else they could do?? E meehunnah ves engey at one point, thts all they could do Kan… Ithuru kameh e meehunnah nukureveyne Kan engi hure Hama hus beykaaru comments..
      Welllll… When’s next?? Can’t wait for the next ep… Also, who’s this izikial dude, and what’s his relationship with Aikan???
      Anyways… It’s sooo good…. Patiently waiting for the next epp…
      Lysmm…🫶🏻🫶🏻

2. Dhen thimeeha nukiyabala mi vaahaka. Ehen vaahaka thah ves English beynun koffa huri. Plus, thimeeha thi liyefa ves thihury english in. So no problem in that. Plus shai e liyani vrh mizamaanaa gulheh story eh. So english hunnan jeheyne. Hurihaa ehcheh seedhaa dhivehin liyanyaa vrh cringe vaane. Don’t you know that. Plus, this is not the 20th century, it is 21st century. Meehun mihaaru full dhivehin nuliyaane. Plus the audience or readers are mostly gen z. And the auther herself is gen z. Ehemma gen z meehun liyaa hen english ves use kuraane dhw. Thimeeha mi vaahaka kiyan beynun nooniyya nukiyabala. Kaaku buny kiyaashey eyn. Beynun nuvaa kameh kuran vaguthu beykaaru kuraane kameh nethennu. Ehen noonas thimeeha nukiyas shai ah support kuraa meehun thibeyne. Plus nobody asked for your opinion.
   Anyways shaii, this part is hama sooo reethi. Ehen part thakekey eh gothah. And don’t mind the gate comments ingey. There are tons of ppl who supports you than the one who hates. So don’t mind them. And english use kurey gina ginain 😂😭. Haters gonna hate but ignore them 👍
   When next? Can’t wait for the next ep. And aikan ge maazy ingen vrh beynun vejje. And this izikial akaa oiy gulhun ves.
   Lysm from incognito ❤️🤫

   1. Thanks 🩷
      Will upload soon

3. އާން ރަނގަޅަށް މީހަކު އެއްޗެކޭ ބުނެފިއްޔާ އަވަހަށް އެމީހާ ރޮލާ ކާލާ……އެއީ ތިޔަ ކުދިންގެ މައްސަލައަކީ…މީހުން އިނގިރޭސި ބަސް ބޭނުން ނުކުރަން ބުނަނީ މީ ދިވެހި ވާހަކައަކަށް ވާތީ….ވަޓް ޕެޑު ފަދަ ސައިޓު ތަކުގައި އިނގިރޭސި ވާހަކަ ލިޔުމުގެ ފުރުސަތު އޮވޭ ދެއްތޯ؟؟؟ އެސްފިޔަ ސައިޓު މިއީ ދިވެހި ވާހަކަ ލިޔަން ޚާއްސަ ސައިޓެއް…. މިހާރު މި ސައިޓުގައި ޖެންޒީ ކުދިން އެކަނި ވާހަކަ ކިޔަނީ ކީއްވެ؟؟؟ އެއީ ގިނަ ލިޔުންތެރިން މި ބީދައަށް ވާހަކަ ލިޔާތީ…..އިނގިރޭސި ބަސްބަސް މަދުމަދުން އެހެން ބޭނުންކުރުމަކުން ގޯހެއް ނެެތް އެކަމަކު ޑައިލޮގު ހުރިގޮތަށް އިނގިރޭސިން ލިޔެލާފައި މިއީ ދެން ދިވެހި ވާހަކަ އެކޭ ބުނެވޭނެތޯ؟؟ މަދަރުސާތަކުގައި ހަމަ ޔަގީނުންވެސް މާކުސް ކަނޑާނެ މިހާ ވަރަށް އިނގިރޭސި ބޭނުން ކޮށްގެން ލިޔާ ނަމަ….ކަން މިގޮތަށް ވާނަމަ ސައިޓުގައި މިހާ ގިނައިން އިނގިރޭސި ބަސް ބޭނުން ކޮށްގެން ލިޔުމުގެ ބޭނުމަކި ކޮބާތޯ؟؟؟ މި ގޮތަށް ލިޔުމުގެ ސަބަބުން ޖެންޒީ އަށް ނިސްބަތް ވާ ބައެއް ކުދީންނާއި ފުރާވަރު އުމުރުގެ ކުދިން ދިވެހި ބަހަށް ސަމާލުކަން ނުދެނީ….ރީތި ދިވެހި ވާހަކައެއް ކިޔަން ބޭނުން ވިޔަސް މި އޮންނަނީ އިނގިރޭސި ބަހާ ދިވެހި ބަސް ބޭނުންކޮށްގެން މަސްހުނި ގަނޑެއް ހެން މޮޑެލާފަ… ދެން ކީކޭ ބުނާނީ؟

   1. I’m gonna be honest here I’m NOT a professional writer. I write as a hobby. I write for the GenZ kudhin, in their style of talking these days.. it’s our reality. Whether anyone wants to except or not.

      No hate to anyone,
      But this is my writing style. Whether anyone read or not is up to them.

4. ޑައިލޮގު ކިޔަން އެހާ އުނދަގޫ… ކިޔާހިތުން ކިޔަން ބޭނުންވިޔަސް ކިހިނެއް ކިޔާނީ؟؟ އިނގިރޭސި ޑުރާމާތަކުގައި ވާހަކަދައްކާ އުޅޭ ވައްތަރަށް މި ލިޔަނީ… ދިވެހި ބަހުން ވެސް ޑައިލޮގު ކުރިންޖު ނޫން ގޮތަކަށް ލިޔެވޭނެ ދެއްތޯ… މި ސައިޓުގައި އުޅޭ އެހެން ލިޔުންތެރިން ވެސް އެބަ ލިޔޭ ވަރަށް ރީއްޗަށް ދިވެހިން ޑައިލޮގު….. އެއްވެސް މީހަކު ކުރިންޖޭ ހަޑިޔޭ ކިޔައިގެން ފާހަގަކޮށްފަ ނެތް އަދި….މީހުން މި ފާހަގަ ކުރަނީ މި ފަދައިން އިނގިރޭސި ބަހުން ލިޔެފައި ހުންނަ ވާހަކަ ކިޔަން އުނދަގޫވާކަން…އެހެންވީމަ މައްސަލައަކީ މިގޮތަށް ވާހަކަ ލިޔުމެއްނު؟؟؟ ކުރިންޖު ކޮށް ދިވެހިން ލިޔުމެއް ނޫނެއްނު؟؟

   1. Hehe hama Bodum thedheh thi bunee.
      Ma vx ebbai van thikamaa.

   2. Dhen vaahaka nukiyaba kıyan undhagulihyyaa… Esfiya site ga nulaahiku Gina liyuntherin vaahaka liyey… Ehen v ma, mi vaahakaiga ingireysi bas beynun kuraathy kıyan undhagulihyyaa, ingireysi bas beynun nukuraa vaahakathah kiyaabala… Gen z kudhin mihaaru vaahaka ginain kiyany… Dhen eheney kiyaafa you can’t say, all this shit… Just do sth you wanna do instead of all this.. Gen z kudhin ginain mihaaru mihen liyaa vaahaka kiyany ves… Mihaaru ginain vaahaka litany ves gen z kudhin… Ehn v ma kobaa myga massala eh? Vaahaka liyany ves, kiyany ves Hama eh baeh… So pls, stop this nonsense… Us, Readers love this story a lot anywayz…

   3. I’m gonna be honest here I’m NOT a professional writer. I write as a hobbu. I write for the Gen2 kudhin, in their style of-talking these days.. it’s our realitu. Whether anuone wants to excent or not, No hate to anyone,
      But this is my writing style. Whether anyone read or not is up to them.

5. Kobayashi
   Adhives mi vaahakaige author eh emme comment akah vx reply eh nude eh nuhh.
   Eyrun ehnu engeny author ge mistake rangalhu kuran beynun vaakameh Noone nuvaa Kamehameha.
   Hama rangalhah vx boa halaaku.
   English n Dhivehi mix kureema kiyan undhagoo.
   Evan rangalhu kohleema vrh rangalhu vaane kanneynge.

   1. Really sorry about not replying to comments. I replied to comments I see check kollaairu. But on esfiya us readers don’t get notifications whenever someone comments, so going to each n every episode to see if someone commented later will be difficult for us.

      2ndly.. I’m gonna be honest here. I’m NOT a professional writer. I write as a hobby. I write for the GenZ kudhin.. in their style of talking these days.. it’s our reality. Whether anyone wants to except or not. No hate to anyone.

      But this is my writing style. Whether anyone read or not is up to them.

6. V salhi this part also. MA❤️
   Enjoyed reading a lot.
   Sis pls ignore the haters.
   I absolutely love your story😻
   Can’t wait for next part♥️

   1. Thanks 🩷

7. Oh my god Shai.
   Don’t do this to me heyonuvaane😭
   I’m so anxious about what happens next.
   What happened between Aikan and Izikial.
   And now that there is Izikial, oh lord. Who am I supposed to choose? 😭
   Izikial or Aikan?
   😭😭
   Please give us a hint who is going to win? 😭
   I love this episode. Like seriously so good❤️
   And also meehun kiyaa ehchessah alhaa nulaa. It doesn’t matter what they say. There are still lots of people who enjoy your writing.
   Waiting for next chapter 😊❤️
   Ilysm
   Be safe

8. Ma story varah reethi.
   Honestly bunaanama I don’t hate the fact that there are English used it this. Truly. Like you said yes it is our reality now. This is exactly how we speak these days.
   You have a specific audience selected for your stories. So it reaching those who are not within your audience is not your problem.

   Some of us appreciate that there are both languages used in this story. ❤️

   1. Thank u for the support 🩷

9. Whoaaa. Bunaane ehcheh ves neiy. Haadha reehchey mi bai❤️
   Aikan ge anehkaa bodu sirreh othy baa??? Varah shahku. I hope it doesn’t become an issue for Zivy and Aikan😭

   As for Izikil I’m not sure yet. I have mixed feelings about him. But damn. He really is trying to get on Aikan’s nerves😭

   Please don’t make us crying again in this story. I beg you Shyyyms❤️❤️❤️❤️

   1. Haha let’s see dhw vagotheh dhen👀🩷

10. Ohhhh myyy godddd. Yesterday I saw your account insta innn.. like ohhh my god. Who’d have thought I’d see your account and I get to READ YOUR STORIES AGAINNNNN😭😭😭😭😭

    I had to double check that it really really really is your account and this really really really is youuu♥️

    I’m so happy. Like seriously 😭❤️

    It’s been so long since annandhen hunnaanan lawbin. I miss Thaara and Kiyaan so much❤️‍🩹

    It’s so nice to get to read your stories again Shaima sissuuu.

    Please don’t stop writing again 🥺❤️‍🩹
    Ilysm♥️

    1. Thank u so much 🩷😊

11. Haters ????

    1. ??

12. Nice.
    Next ????

    1. Thanks. Will upload soon insha’Allah 🩷

13. އަޅުގަނޑު ދެކޭގޮތުގައި ދިވެހި ވާހަކަތަކުގައި އިނގިރޭސި ބަސް އެހާ ގިނައިން ބޭނުންކުރުމަކީ ހުތުރު ކަމެއް. އެއްބަސް މއީ މިހާރު މިޒަމާނުގެ ކުދިން ވާހަކަ ދައްކާ އުޅޭ ގޮތް. އެކަމަކު އެއީ ރަނގަޅުކަމެއް ނޫނޭ. އެކަމަށް އެއްބާރުލުން ދޭން ޖެހޭނެ ކަމެއް ވެސް ނޫން.ފަޚުރުވެރި ވާން ޖެހޭނެ ކަމެއް ވެސް ނޫން. ދިވެހި ލިޔުންތެރިކަމަކިީ އަދަބިއްޔާތުގެ ވަރަށް ފުރިހަަމަ ބައެއް. އެހެންވީމަ އަސްލު ވާހަކަ ލިޔަންޏާ އެކަމަށް އިހުތިރާމް ކުރަންވާނެ ކަމަށް އަޅުގަނޑަށް ގަބޫލު ކުރެވެނީ. މިއީ “ހޭޓް” ކުރުމެއް ނޫން. ރީތިކޮށް އިހުތިރާމާއެކު އަޅުގަނޑުގެ ހިޔާލު މި ފާޅުކޮށްލީ. އަޅާނުލާާ ދޫކޮށްލުމަކީ ބަސް މަސްހުނި ކުރުން ފަދަ ކަންކަމަށް ދެވޭ އެއްބާރުލުމެއް ކަންނޭނގެ އަސްލު. ތިޔަ ލިޔުންތެރިޔާގެ ލިޔުންތެރިކަމުގެ ހުނަރު އެބަހުރި. “ޕަބްލިކް” ކޮށްފައިވާ ލިޔުމަކަށް ވާތީ ހިޔާލު ފާޅުކުރުމުގައި މައްސަލައެއް އޮވެގެން ނުވާނެ ދޯ.

14. Hello I’ve been reading your stories since thaara and kiyaan. But what some readers are saying isn’t all false. Yes mhr enmn hen whk dhahkanii bas mas’huni kohgen ekamu eythi mihaa bodah normalize kurevigen nuvaane.recently almost all of your dialogues are in English and this is a dhivehi story. Hama ekani shai eh noon ehn writers ge vx ei ehaa kamunudhaa sifaeh. Ekamaku mi vaahakaiga hama gina kan faahaga vey. This is not hating. Ekamaku “reality” ey kiyaafa meethi balaigathumakee warah huthuru kameh. I am a genZ myself. This is just my opinion. Dhen bunaane mihn bunaa meehaa vx mas’hunyey i agree ekamaku meethi mihaa normalize kurun goas kithanme varakah kudhin bas mas’huni kohgen vaahaka dhehkiyas. Vaahaka akee dhivehi bahuge thereyn anna reethi liyumeh. I think we should all respect this. Ps; with love and respect. No hate.

    1. i agree with you this is too much

15. From what I see the writer is doing her best to write dhivehin. But using English like this isn’t a big issue for everyone to be taking like this and making a big deal out of.

    Almost all the other parts ga fudhey varakah dhivehin hury dialogues. But ni part ga vedhaane eyy bodah suitable gothah fennany kamah ves to her.

    And another thing. So far to almost all mikahala comments the writer replied with respect and saying she will improve.

    But to this specific episode emme furathama ves hury varah rulhi ais hadikoh vaahaka dhakkaafa. ehisaabun she will also be hurt. Understand viyas nuviyas. Read your comments yourself. Thiah vure reethikoh buneveyne goiy hunnaane hama.

    Y’all went straight to hating. If it was another author also they will be hurt by all that. Kiyaanehaa ehcheh kiyaafa no hate ey bunyma ehisaabun no hate vee kee noon ehves varakah.

    You could have simply said ‘english ehaa bodah use nukuran feney or something like that’

    1. PLSS STOP IT… SHE ALMOST SAID THIS STORY IS MAINLY FOR GenZ this generation… SHE DID NOT FORCED ALL OF U TO READ IT… READ IT IF YOU LIKE OR LEAVE IT…

16. ޖެންޒީ ކުދިންނަށޭ ކިޔާފައި ވީ ހުސް އިގިރޭސި ބަހުން ވާހަކަ ލިޔަން؟ ޖެންޒީ ކުދިންނަށް ބޮޑަށް ދިވެހި ބަސް ކިޔަވާދީ އެ ބަަހާ ގާތްކުރަން ވެފައި އޮއްވާ މިގޮތަށް ހުސް އިގިރޭސި ބަސް ބޭނުންކޮށްގެން ޑަޔަލޮގު ލިޔުނީމާ އެކުދިން ދާނީ ދިވެހި ބަހާ ވީހާ ވެސް ދުރަށް. މީ އަޅުގަނޑު މެންގެ މާދަރީ ބަސް.. އެހެންވީމައި އިގިރޭސިން ގިނަ ބައިތަކެއް ލިޔެފައި ޖެންޒީ ކުދިންނަށް އަމާޒު ކޮށްގެން ލިޔުނީއޭ ބުނުމަކީ އެއްވެސް އުޒުރެއް ނޫން. މިހާރު ޖެންޒީ ކުދިން ދިވެއްސާ ދުރުވެ އިގިރޭސި ބަހުން ވާހަކަ ދައްކައި ހަދަނީ ވެސް މި ފަދަ ސަބަބުތަކާ ހުރެ. އެކުދިންނަށް ދިވެހި ބަހުން ކިޔަން ލިބޭ ވާހަކަތައް ވެސް މި އޮންނަނީ އިގިރޭސި ބަހުން ތޮއްޖެހިފައި/ދެ ބަސް އެއްކޮށްފައި.. އެކުދިން އިގިރޭސިއާ ދޯޅުވުމީ މިއަދުގެ ހަގީގަތޭ ބުނާއިރު ތިފަދަ ލިޔުންތެރިކަމަކީ ކަން އެހެން ދިމާވާން މެދުވެރިވާ އެއް މޭސްތިރި. ތިޔަ ލިޔުންތެރިޔާ ލިޔަނީ ރަސްމީކޮށް ނޫން ކަމުގައި ވިޔަސް އުޒުރުތަކުގެ ބިތްދޮށުގައި ހުރެ ތިޔަ ކުރެވެނީ އެދެވޭ ފަދަ އަމަލެއް ނޫން. ލިޔުންތެރިކަން މުޅީން ހުއްޓާލާށޭ ނޫން މި ބުނަނީ. މި ބުނަނީ އިގިރޭސި ބޭނުން ކުރުން ފުދޭ މިންވަރަކަށް މަދު ކުރަން. އަދި ހުރިހާ ޑަޔަލޮގު ތަކެއް އިގިރޭސި ބަހުން ނުލިޔަން. ޖެންޒީ ކުދީން ވެސް ވާހަކައިގައި ނޭގޭ ބަހެއް އޮވެއްޖެ ނަމަ ކޮމެންޓު ސެކްޝަން މެދުވެރިކޮށް ނޫނީ އެހެނިހެން ގޮތަކުން ލިޔުންތެރިޔާއާ މުއާމަލާތްކޮށް ސުވާލު ކުރެވޭނެ. އޭރުން މައުލޫމާތު މުއްސަނދި ވެސް ވާނެ. އޭރުން އެކުދީންނަށް ވެސް އެ ލިބެނީ ވަރަށް ބޮޑު މަންފާއެއް. ކިޔަވާ ކުދިންނަށް ވެއްޖެނަމަ އިތުރަށް ފައިދާ ކުރާނެ. މީ ދިވެހި ވާހަކަ ކިޔަން ހަދާފައިވާ ތަނެއް. އެހެންވީމައި ބޮޑަށް އެދެވިގެން ވަނީ ވެސް ދިވެހި ބަހުން ވާހަކަ ލިޔަން. ނުވަތަ އިގިރޭސި ބޭނުން ކުރަންޏާ ވެސް ފުދޭ ވަރަކަށް ބޭނުން ކުރަން. އަދި ލިޔުންތެރިޔާއަށް ގިނަ ގިނައިން އިގިރޭސި ބަސް ބޭނުންކުރަން ހިތްވަރު ދިން ކުދިންނަށް ވެސް ބުނަން ތިޔަ ހިތްވަރު ދެވެނީ ރަގަޅު ކަމަކަށް ނޫންކަން. މިއީ އަޅުގަނޑުގެ ޚިޔާލު.

17. positive comments heevani fake commnet thake hen. emmen hus eggothakkah liyefai. kurin nudheken egotha hunna thane 😂😂

18. Haters jealous waanee e… Jealously is a disease

    1. What?
       Not really

19. What?
    Not really

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