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1. How old are you?
   Bro dhigukobba

   1. bala thi vx thihen kiyaa iru kuda kujjekey….bro thihen nukiyabala…hehehehe

2. Aslu huriha kameh ehfaharaa mivanee..slowly koh huriha kameh vegen dhanya varah reethivaane step by step ihnanvaanee..anyways good luck and great job☺☺???

   1. Yeah true…

3. Nuvadhumnneh nukiyaane. Manje liyaairu baivaru gavaaidhu kuthah eba huri. Enme furathama dhivehi bahuge gavaaidhu dhaskohffa dhen vaahaka liyan ulheba

   1. i think she is still a student she is just 14 and trying her best to write stories..u would have commented much better..i mean the word “manje” seems quite rude and im sure she will know dhivehi bahuge gavaudhuthah..so next time i hope ull think abt other people while u are commenting..no hard feelings 🙂

4. Seems like u don’t have enough time to right the story and rushing to finish this.. 1 scene ge vaanuvaa neyngenys aneh scene feshifa. I think u could write better than this with more details. Best of luck dear ?

5. Hehe I’m a kid bro I’m 14 and test on nature I don’t have time and thanks for commeting?☺☺☺☺☺☺

6. Story ehkoh liyelaaf up kuran fashan veenuh..that will be much better

   1. True

7. yes dear..take every thing slowly and step by step..u have the talent masha allah..so vaguthu vee varakun liyefa up kurey and mistakes thah rangakhu kohlaa..good luck dear..u are 14 and atleast u are trying so i appreciate that..all the best and regards
   =hash=

8. Ok dhen anba storu egah insha Allah thanku all supporters for reading and ❤❤❤❤and mistake than ralgalhu kureetho balaanan dhuvahakun dhuvahah so thank u all once again

9. Ibaaraaiy kurumuga varah massala hunna kan faahaga kurevey. Liye ninmaafa kiyaalun buhdhiveri. A secondary student should know how the sentences would be ended. Good effort. Do read before u upload so that u can correct the mistakes. Good effort. ?

   1. ?

10. Thanku hash and a reader vrh ufaavejeh mistake buneladhineethee luv u guys ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

    1. u r so kind

11. 14 years dho 14 viley reyge handhu balaigen varah biruveri vaahaka liyebala brother busy viaus furihama kohlaa vaahaka inge brother ????

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