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1. Wow. .nice start dear maasha allah ? it’s really interesting..?ekamu scene thah thankolheh bodah sifa kohdheefiyya adhi maa furihama vaane ? good luck curiously waitin for the next part ❤❤❤

2. ibaaraai kurun ehaa rangalhenooon. kiyaahiy vaa gotheh nuhurey. ibaaraai kurun rangalhu kureema salhi vaane… vaahaka reethivaanehen heevey. komme dhuvahaku up kohdheythi ingey dear

3. Writing skills v improve kuranhey hey i thinks…&sentences nihmaa ley maa avahy…story vaahaka dhahkaa style ah liyuni ma maa salhi vaaney evey sheyvey nulaa…hope u improve kuraaney kamah…

4. Dear jumula thah ninmun ehaa ehaa eh noon .maa avahah ninmaafa nun nany vex. N paragraph thah vex maa kuru.ehen e viyy jumula thaku ge shababun kannyge i mean jumula thah ehen hury ma.stry ga e bahuri kiyaa hihvaa gotheh .eythi beyyru kohlaa eyrun salhi vaane.
   Salaam ????

5. Thankyou all for support balaanan ragalhu kureveetho aslu new veema

6. Maasha Allah………..vv reethi

7. Story reethi vaane kamah ummeedhu kurgan.regular koh up koh dhehchey

8. Vv reethi feshun
   Story nimendhen up kolladhechey
   OK Comme duvahaku up nukuriyas
   When next part

9. its ok sis…fashaiganna iru hunnane kuvves…….dhen fahun rangahu vaane…
   frst prt ah vure scnd prt perfact vaane….insha allah…
   keep it up sis……vrh reethi mi part

10. Varah sort stry and jumla tha vx varah kuru kamah faahaga kohlevey dhen faharakun ekan rangalhu kohlaane kamah heekuran

11. ??????☹️??

12. Ehn vs vaane… alhaalaa ehcheh nun… hyvey vrh rythi stry eh hn… scnd part miah vure furihama vaane kamah hykuran… ???stry hama salhi…???

13. Stry nd idea vr reethi.. btw stry ga scene thh thnkolhh bodah describe khlrf sntnce thh dhigu khlym furiham vrne… whn nxt? Waitinn.. ❤❤❤

14. vrh bodah thankyou thi dhevva support ah .and school ga mihaaru thankolheh busy veema up nukerevidhaane insha allah maadhan up kohladheenan and aslu othee trailer ga bunelaafa 20 june ga ee up kuraanee but rashuga hureema up nuvee and ehenve varah bodah sorry

    1. Ooh. Aharun dhemeehun same age dhw.Jazlee ah vx 12 yrs vejje. Heheh. Vrh ufaa vejje Jazlee aa ehaharuge kujja kaa dhimaa veema. Maul thy Konrashu kujjeh thrrrr.

15. oh.maul ah 12 thr……hehehe adhi alhugandah vure bodukujjeh kamah
    sis ey kiyaafa vaahaka midhekkenii….:)heheeheeee……aniiway thats not a pro dhoa dud:)

16. Ehnvs vaane alah v ma… ekamaa haas vaane kameh neii… adhi rngalhu vaane… scnd part miah vure furihama vaane kamah ummeedhu kuran… hmm twinkle vs hykury maul bodu vaane kamah twinkle ah vure… ekm ae massala eh nun… kudairu migothah stry ehchihi liyan feshyma ey bodu vaairu famous liyuntheri akah vaany… ??????

17. u r right twinkle dud:)

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