ވިއްސާރަ ދުވަހެކެވެ. އެއްއަތުން ކުޑައެއް ނަގައިގެން އަނެއް އަތުން ފޯނާ ކުޅެމުން އޭ.ޑީ.ކޭ ހޮސްޕިޓަލު ތެރެއިން ނިކުތް ނައުރީންއަކަށް އޭނާ ކުރިމަތިން އައި ޒާއިންއެއް ނުފެނުނެވެ. ޒާއިންގެ ނަޒަރުވެސް ހުރީ އޭނާގެ ފޯނަށް ހުއްޓިފައި ކަމުން އޭނާއަށް ނައުރީން ފެނުންވީ ނާދިރުކަމަކަށެވެ. ކުޑައެއްގެ ހިޔާ ނުވަތަ ކޯޓެއްގެ އެހީތަރިކަން ލިބިފައި ނެތުމުގެ ސަބަބުން އޭނާ ދިޔައީ ބޮޑު ތިކިވާރޭގެ މުތީތަކެއް ފަދަ ތިކިތަކުން ތެމި ފޯވަމުންނެވެ. ލައިގެން ހުރި ނޫކުލައިގެ ޓީޝާރޓު ވަނީ ގައިގައި ތަތްލަވާފައެވެ. ކަނދުރާއާ ހަމައަށް އަރާ ފަންއިސްތަށިގަނޑު ތެމިފައި އޮތުމުން ވަނީ ހޭވިފައެވެ. އިސްޓަށިގަނޑުގެ އެއްބައި މޫނުމައްޗައް ވެއްޓިިފައި އޮތުމުން ބަލާލަން ރީއްޗެވެ. ދެމީހުންގެ ފިޔަވަޅުތަށްވެސް ދިޔައީ ކުރިއަށެވެ. ނަގާލާ ކޮންމެ ފިޔަވަޅަކުންވެސް ނައުރީންއާ ޒާއިންގެ ދެމެދުގައިވި ދުރުކަން ދިޔައީ ކުޑަވަމުންނެވެ. އެކަކު އަނެކަކު ގައިގައި ޖެހުމުން އިތުރު ފިޔަވަޅެއް ކުރިއަށް އަޅާނޭ ފުރުސަތެއް ނުލިބުނެވެ. ނައުރީން އިސްއުފުލާލާ ބަލާލިއެވެ. ޒާއިންވެސް ފޯނުން އޭނާގެ ނަޒަރު ވަކިކޮށްލިއެވެ. ދެމީހުންގެ ހަތަރު ކަޅި ބައްދަލުވި ހިނދު ލިބިގެން ދިޔައީ ކުއްލި ސިހުމެކެވެ. ނައުރީންގެ އަތުގައި އޮތް ކުޑަވެސް އޭނާގެ އަތުން ވީއްލިގެން ބިންމައްޗައް ވެއްޓުނެވެ. އެވަގުތު ޖަހާލި ހޮނު ގުގުރީގެ އަޑު ، މުޅި މާހައުލުގައި އިވެމުން ދިޔަ ވާރޭ ތިކިތަކުގެ ހިތްގައިމު މިއުޒިކީ އަޑަށްވުރެ ގަދަކޮށްލައިފިއެވެ. 

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32 Comments

  1. naf nanni

    May 7, 2018 at 10:48 pm

    Aprilmas nimijje eh noonthr writer?

  2. Mu

    May 7, 2018 at 10:55 pm

    1years fahuntha vaahakadhakanee up kuranee

  3. naf nanni

    May 7, 2018 at 10:56 pm

    april nimjje dhw

  4. ...

    May 8, 2018 at 12:07 am

    varethereyga phna kulhemun..?????

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 6:09 pm

      It’s a waterproof phone. ☺

  5. allie

    May 8, 2018 at 5:41 am

    Salaam everyone ✋
    This is my first story on this site. There will be a lots of mistakes cuz I am very young and just a starter. So please let me know my mistakes.❤ I will be starting this story on 16th April.

    • lotus

      May 8, 2018 at 5:52 am

      Trailr seems nice.. best of luck for yo frst story.. wen is the story startn n which days ga up vaanee…

  6. lotus

    May 8, 2018 at 5:54 am

    Start kuraa dhuvas mi ahaalee cox april is alredy ovr n this is may month dhw…

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 6:08 pm

      Yeah it is actually may not April. ☺ l’ll try to publish a part everyday if I am not busy insha allah. But still it’s not confirmed . Thank you❤

  7. suty???

    May 8, 2018 at 6:19 am

    Varah salhi ingey trailer…Ramadan ga kiyaalan libeyne dhw ehen v ma…vhk dhn up kuraa iru dhogu koh up koh dheythi..kuru v ma kiyaa hitheh nuvaaane..varah reethi vaanehen heevey????waiting hama???first story v ma best of luck ingey..?? thi gothuga kuriyah dhaashey suty bunaanee.???

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 6:47 am

      Thank you for the support suty and lotus. ❤And yes I am starting this story in Ramadan. Insha allah.I will have to go to school for a short time so than I will have more time to write this story and publish the parts longer

  8. Yaam

    May 8, 2018 at 8:50 am

    Haadha rythi vaanehen hyvey mi story

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 5:35 pm

      Thank you very much. ❤ Hope there upcoming parts will be the same as your expectation.

  9. pinkish pinker

    May 8, 2018 at 11:16 am

    Waterproof phone eh dhw…trailer v nice….

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 5:39 pm

      Thank you. ❤
      And yes, it is a waterproof phone . It maybe I phone x?

  10. Lov

    May 8, 2018 at 11:22 am

    16 April ?????

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 5:40 pm

      It is actually may 16☺

  11. allie

    May 8, 2018 at 12:07 pm

    Sorry 16th april that was a mistake. It is actually 16th may . And also zaain’s phone is waterproof

  12. Sai

    May 8, 2018 at 12:17 pm

    May 16 dhw writer… hehehe eynii olhifaey dhw… v reethi vaanehn heevanii❤❤

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 5:46 pm

      Yes that was a mistake ☺
      Thank you very much ❤

  13. Aishy

    May 8, 2018 at 1:19 pm

    Trailer is nice……..Best of luck writer??
    Which grade are you??

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 1:52 pm

      Thank you ❤I am a 14 year old girl

  14. nonni

    May 8, 2018 at 3:31 pm

    14 years
    nuves heevey
    haadha molhey vaahaka liyan
    best of luck
    kon rasheh

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 5:43 pm

      Awww.. thats so sweet Thank you ❤ I am from k. male’

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 5:59 pm

      Im actually living in male this whole time but I’m from laamu atoll ☺

  15. YUHUii

    May 8, 2018 at 4:53 pm

    Ghhh

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 6:15 pm

      ?? ? ?sorry I don’t understand what you are telling ☺. But Hope you liked the trailer YUHii.

  16. :-) sweety

    May 8, 2018 at 5:09 pm

    heyy I’m also 14 years…btw,I also love writing stories…so where are u from? which school? by the way, trailer is intresting

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 5:55 pm

      Cool.. we are the same age. ✋
      I am from laamu atoll. But I live in male ☺ Thank you. Hope the other parts will be as interesting as the trailer. ❤

  17. maya

    May 8, 2018 at 5:32 pm

    vv reethi trailer bt i’m 15 hehe..from which school??i love to read and write stories too..same pinch..

    • allie

      May 8, 2018 at 6:04 pm

      Yeah same pinch ✋I’ll really love to read a story of yours too. And .. I would like to keep my school’s name private if you don’t mind ☺ Thank you for the lovely comment❤

    • Maya

      May 10, 2018 at 10:43 pm

      It’s all right.. As u wish ???

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