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1. and this is all i cud do tonyt..hope dat u guys will appriciate my work:) thank u all de lovely readers..v v happ vey support kuraathyve..

   as usual plx leave a comment abt wat u think of it..i ll b looking forward to them..thanks again!:)

   hav a creepy nite..heheh:) ly all to de max:* 🙂

   1. Mi vahaka vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv reethi……i love this story…..eethan ge maama kanney ekanthah ekurany….i guesss……kn irakun aneh part????

   2. thaaaaaank u vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv bodukoh:) keep waiting eii kaakukan balaalumah:) insha allah soon:)

2. Am i first? Anyway… v biru ganejje mi bai kiyaafa… kihineh baa e gaburu alamaari thereah dhiyayee? Mirey gain hee bihi nagaifi… waiting for next part…?❤

   1. yeah u r 1st 🙂 u ll knw more..stay tuned..btw thank u for ur comment:)

   2. n biru nugannahchey ingey..hehheh:)

3. Haadha biru veri ey hama rangalhah biru ganejje

   1. ehentha Thaathi? ehaa biru nugannaathi ingey:) thnk u

4. hey haadha birveri ey.. dhn nukreyne mirey nidhan vx,..ekam vx v reethi vaahaka.. vaahaka up veythw bala bala mi iny.. waiting for another part.. dhn kihineh baa dhw vaany? kaaku ge gabureh baa a e? i think anehkaa vx a nulafaa ziadhan a e baa?? kihinehbaa dhn vaany.. waiting for another part..

   1. dn hurey heylaa ingey..nidhaafa ovva gaburei gaimahchah vettidhaane..hehhe:) juz kiddinge ingey:) btw thank u soo much..stay tuned to knw wat will hapn next..

5. yeyyy me first dhen v salhi keep it up

   1. not 1st dhw..hehhe..thanku dear..keep waiting:)

6. I luv kakuni…. Mi bai v biruveri vx me.. I luv reading scary stories.. Specially at nyt.. Waitin 4 next part XD..

   1. thank u dear:) i guess u r a new reader..happy to c a comment frm u n hope i can c more in de upcoming parts..keep waiting:)

7. mirey neynge huvafenugavex thi gaburu nufennaane kameh..

   1. oww ehenthr dear..sowree..n thank u kiyaalaafa comment ei kohleema:)

8. heyo nuvane mifadha ramalon kahaku mifada vahaka eh liyan ves meehun magufurahddan ehves reeche noo huun

   1. kobaatha magufuredhey thankolhakee? i didnt understand ur point

   2. shiu ah kamu nudhiyaee keevekan buneladhineema i can make it right..dn magufuredhey vaahaka ekey bunefa ineema i dnt understand kobaa kamei ekamakee..if u r talking abt de last paragraph of it dn bunelan othy ethanigaa meehaku magufuredhigendhaa fadha vaahakaei dhekeveifa nethey..dats wat i think n ehen kujjaku nei bunefaves magufuredhijjekey…shiu ah egothah feel kurevuneema m v sorry…n thank u for de comment

9. keehvehey mikahala meehun magu furedey kahala vahaka liyanee mi ramalon mahu

10. Looi ma miee kaisha nama mihaaru ohnaany heynethifa ac full kohfa huryiru vx dhaahilaa. v scary but v nyyc

    1. thank u soooo much sama..:)

11. Alhey! Haadha haalunney mi kiyuny mi part? haadha biruveri ey dw?? ekanin nidhanves nukereyne mirey?.. but mi part ves hama superb as always? kihinehbaa vaany dw dhen?
    Curiously Waiting 4 next part..?

    1. awwn thank u dear:) ufaavejje adha like veema…n birugathyma sowree:( keep waiting:)

12. My mom scolded me for screaming e gaburu kaisha gayah vettun bai kiyaafa birun… ? ur an amazing writer kaya wish you all the very best ?

    1. ehheh:) ehntha dear..thank u soo much Baa baa.heekuran adhi dhimaavaane kamah..keep waiting:)

13. Whattttttt!!!!!!. Mivane kihineh ???kai ah gotheh nahadhahchey ingey pls?. V salhi and interesting ingey. Keep up the good work.?. I do always apriciate ur hard work kaya?. When is next part?

    1. awwn jj 🙂 happy to c ur comment..ufaavejje like veema:) kai save kureveythw mibalanee:) thank u for always been thr for me..me too appriciate all of ur comments…:)

14. Avahah up kohdhehcheyyy…

    1. insha allah:) keep waiting:)

15. Subuhaanallah….mirey v biruganehje mi bai kiyaafa….heevanee hama sifa vaahen…..?

    1. alhey Azu sorry dear birugathyma..ekamves next part kiyaathi ingey..thanku:)

16. Allah akbar ?? dude this is creepy? alhey vrh biruganehjje…. ekam ves reethi but kai ah gotheh nahadhacheyyy….. gdnyt kaya… ly…

    1. mibalanee kai ah gothei nuhadhaaveythw…:) thank u sopoo much chum:) keep waiting:)

17. Just awesome.. ❤❤❤
    Gaburu heevany shaa nidhaa endhu dhoshun nukumedhaanehen.. cupboard hulhuvan ves dhen nukereyne. . ??

    1. oww ehenthr dear…sorry ehaaves birugahthyma..heekuran next part ah tune vegen innaanekamah..hhhee:) thank u bodukoh:)

18. Haadha biruveriey.. ekm v reethi❤❤

    1. thank u sooo much sama:)

19. Maaikalaako… konfadha kanthahgandehbaa.. mihaaruvess meynubai kuranfashaifi… modhuvasskolhu mikahala vaahaka kiyanveema layaa menahvaaneemivaru? btw kaya mistory varah interesting.. adhihama enmepartehvess vahtaanulan.. unmeedhukuran hamathigothah thihaareethikoh vaahaka liye ninmaalaane kamah .. ? keep it up..??

    1. thank u soo much for ur lovely comment:) n sorry to make u scared..hehhe..insha allah i also hope dat i can end it nicely..layaamenkahala rangalhumkudhinge support libenyaa i think i can:) insha allah:) keep waiting 🙂

20. Hi kaya. Mi part ves hama varah obi ingey. And varah fakuru. Yuck. I can imagine that gaburu onnaane goiy . Ew ew. Disgusting. Biruves ganejje. Alhe kaisha ge heyah gothehves nuveytha eythi gaimachah vettunu iru. Nonns nama heybudhdhi filaane yageenunves. Keep it up dear. Konirakun next part up kohdheyny. Alhe eethan ais kaisha save kuraane irakah varah inthizaaru kurevey eba

    1. hehhe nonns:)sorry birugethyma:( btw kai baei faharu v strong vaaney..hehe..next part ah wait kuraane kamah heekuran:) thank u so much for always supporting:)

21. Writer ah dhn nukereyne faahana ah ves dhaakah…. haadha biruveriye?? v furihama vaahaka

    1. sorry dear writer:( n thank u for ur support:) happy to knw dat u liked it:)

22. Varah nice❤ ebunaahen dhen nukereyne ekani thaakah dhaanvex ?

    1. oww Aisha..hehehe…thank u sooo much..:)

23. dhen mee bodu varutha. vaahaka liyan nukerengna keehkurantha fashanee. thihen vaahaka liyaane kanneynge miulhey kuda kudhinves… aharaku part eh adhi eves paragraph ehge min varu. ?? ehves reehcheh noon…

    1. sorry to disappoint u yaanaa:( ekam ves kiyaalaafa comment ei kureema v bodah thanks..:) insha allah fahun rangalhuvaane

24. Wow masha allah v rythi v biruveri mi prt ?? stry v rythi kon irakun nxt prt v kiyaalaahiy vejje n aee kaakuge gaburebbaa ekanthah ekurany ziadhan ge badhaluga ibizaa dhw alhe kyvvetha eynaves kai ah ehen e hadhadhany eethan dheke ehaa loabivaa iru hama insaanakah vymatha??? waiting nxt prt avahah up kolladheh chehy plx ???❤❤?

    1. hehhe khajja:) u ll knw soon eii kaakukan..keep waiting:) khajja thi heekuraa gothahves vedhaane hama dhw:) thaaank u sooooo much:)

25. Eee nice hama biruveri v ma awsm n as always mi part vx vrh kamudhey zail ah
    Yageen mihaaru nulafaa bai ekulhene eethan ge maama dho hehe…
    Thanks kaya mipart genesdhineema …kurin kiyaalin ekm maa bcy v ma comment eh khnulevunyh bt comment khnulaa dhookhlevey varah vure story reethi?nyts

    1. eeee zail:) hehhe…v v ufaavejje comment ei kohleema…n m glad to knw dat u liked this part too…n thank u sooo much dear:) keep waiting:)

26. wow varah furihama mi part vess..
    n v suprise vi mirey up vefa inyma thanks dear ❣❣ btw ei ziadhan dhw aisgen e ulheny? kai ah dhera gotheh nahadhahchey plx

    1. thank u sooo much dear:) v v ufaavejje like veema:) stay tuned eii kaakuthw balan..hehhe:)

27. WOW… Mibaives v reethi… Gain heebihi nagaifi mibai kiyaafa… E vaany e Ibzaage kamakah… Noony ebunaa maaridhu jinnithakuge kamakah… In’gey v bixy vaanekan… Ekam adhi dhigukolladheebala pls… Waiting for the next part… Keep it up Kaya 🙂

    1. hey saandy:) thank u sooo much:) hingaa dhw balamaa saandyge visnumaa eigothah kanthah veythw…hehhe 🙂 keep waiting to knw more:) insha allah dhigikureveythw v balan eba:)

28. mi bai v biru veri v reeethi….remoo ah vx heevany eakee ibza ge kameh hen…..mi part ekam maa kuru next part thankolheh dhigu kollaachey

    1. thank u remoo:) heheh ehentha? dn hingaa dhw balama ei kaakuthw..hama vedhaane ibza ahves:) i knw kurikan ekam dn hama up kohlee..:) insha allah will try to 🙂

29. Alhy laailaa.salhi kan DW mivaahaka.buneveynee hama mivareg nethey.keep it up kaya.

    1. thank u dear:) v v ufaavejje ASH like vaagothah genevuneema..keep waiting:)

30. yaarahbee haadha biruvri eyy …..ekam varah reethi mi vaahaka

    1. thank u sooo much AIRAA:) happy to knw dat u liked it:)

31. vvv reethi kudhakoh balikoh ulhey thee dhuruga miulhevenee kaya mi vaahaka mathin v hadhanvey ekamaku keehkuraanee athu ge kudha oparetion neh kohgen ulhey thee athun ehves kameh nukurevey mives gadhakamun mi balaalee

    1. sad to hear dat maree:( i hv missed u too..v belin mareege commennt ei feneythw..hhehe:) i wish u for speedy recovery may allah bless u n bless every musilm:) thank u soo much dear…vvv ufaavejje thihaalugeves kiyaalaaf comment ei kureema..really appriciate e kindness of u:)

32. Asulaga ves v biruganeje.adhi reygadu kynama nuves nidhene.haadha molhe biruveri vaahaka liyan

    1. hhehe..saadhu 🙂 happy to knw dat u liked it:) n thank u v bodukoh:)

33. Aaaiyyy….yuck…..mey bodu koffi….haadha molhey sifakurun….anekkaa kaakubaa aee????…gaimuvx Mal eh nuun…hehehe..waiting waiting….dhn oiyy part vx avahah genesdhehchey ingey

    1. arrn dhw aslu kai jeheyne ethanuga hodulan..ehhhehe..i dnt hw she controlled dat..:) insha allah will try to up ASAP:) keep waiting dear:)

34. jinni eh gaburakah vegen dhw e othy. Vaahaka vvv reethi. Ekam ves dhen mihaa biruveri v ma nukereyne kiyaakah. ??

    1. alhey naby sowree dear:( heekuran kuriah huri partstahavesa kiyAne kamah:) thank u soooo much:)

35. Mmmmm….Kayaaaaaa!!!! How are uuu?????? Mihaaru dhimaa ves nuvey dho..busykamun 23 vana part ves kiyuny iyye.. but kaya mathin v miss vi mi kuda dhuvas kolhu therey ves…
    E gaburu…argh!!???V fakuru…Kaisha hodu nulavaa tha eythi fenunyma?? Hmmm…Ehkala Ibza gandu masakkai feshy dho!! Huh!! V foohivey!! Dhen eheney kiyaafa Ethan ge ufaa thah tha feyrigannan vee?? Hurihaa kamehves vaan vee Ibza beynun vaa gothahtha?? Haadha amilla edhun bodey dhoo!!
    And mihaaru dhuvas thakakah fahu Zunnoor aai Husna meet vee dho…Husna haadha hiy thiri ey dho!! Kaisha akee ves mihaaru hama amilla dhari eh kamah dheki gen e ulheny ehaa haalun ves…asluves vv dheravey Husna ah vefai e huri gothun…Mee hus e Ziadhan ge nubai kamey!! Evarunves mi Ibza Ziadhan dheke loabivey… maama dhari ekey kiyaafa ehen goas koh ulhey iruves echekey nubune athugai huri laari kolhu gunaala gunaalaa tha hunnanvee??!?!?! Pis pis pis!!! Mi meehun rangalhe nuvaane!?
    Kayaa…ekam mi part ves HAADHA LOABI EYY!!! V ufaavey kayaa huttumeh nethi vaahaka up kohdheythee…
    And kayaa kairi bunelan beynun vanee…negative comments ves libeyne ey but thats not a problem…every success full person will learn from mistakes… so keep going with this work..do your best and you will indeed become a very successful writer… Love you Kayaa!!!!???

    1. comment fenifa i was like wooooooooooooow:)heheh wat a lovely comment:) i truly appriciate ur love:) dn dhimaaveema asluvesa v happy vejje..book lover ah v v v bodah shukuriyyaa…i ll always remember u dear reader:) btw i ll never take negative coments negatively..eii aslu dhaskuran kibey furusathei kamuga dhekenee..insaanun veeaama hurihaa kamei furihama nuvaane so ekan visanaigen hurihaa comment ei ves ufalAeku balaigannan:) next part ge inthizaaruga hunnaane kamah heekuran..:)

36. ey varah habeys vaahaka eh…kon irakUn 25 nukunnany?

37. haaahhh!! biruves ganehje’… dhn othy hus nightmares kanneyge’…alhey haadha creepy ey… nd haaaaadha salhi eyyyy…story akun ves adhi mivaruge’ kameh nudheken..i mean mivaruge’ unique story eh adhi nukiyamey.. keep it up!! 🙂

38. Adhi mi kiyaalevuny busy kamun. Mi part ves varah reethi. Adhives bodah scary kohaathi. I love scary stories. All the best thi kuraa hiyhvarah.

39. Mahmaaii ..vrah reethi mibai

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41. Kayashand ?????

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