ލޯ މެރޭ ހިނދު ހީވޭ ގާތުގާ ވާހެން (45)

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1. Heii me first tha.. adhi nukiyan.. kiyaalaafa comment eh kohlaanan…

   1. V v reethi mibai vx.. dhn e dhemyhun avahah gulhuvaa… waiting for next part.. ??

   2. Thanxxx my dearr so so much?????

   3. Thanx dear ????

2. 2…

   1. Ithoo… dhooni keeh thi kuryy??
      E anhen kujjakee kaakubaa?? Ey bodu moya eh kanneyge! Eyna ves jeheytha thanakun reethi meehaku fenna irah eyna aai vaahaka dhakka maa bodah gayaavaan?? Pis pis… mihaaru ge kudhin dho.. keekey bunaany… although i am a girl crossing the teen age … dhuvahaku ves adhi ekahala kameh nukuran… nuves kereyne ehen ulheykah… so hama buneveynee e aanaa akee bodu moya ekey… ithoo… dhen dhim vejje ehnun munaaz aai break up vaan… edhemeehun ehkoh ulheythee haadha undhagoo veyey… and munaaz ulhey gothun ves undhagoo vejje… by the way..
      ITHOOOO…….
      ‘LOA MEREY HINDHU HEEVEY GAATHU GAA VAAHEN’ MIEE MI MULHI ESFIYA VAAHAKA SITE GA VES EMME EMMMMMME REETHI VAAHAKA EYY!!!??
      Ithoo haadha haadha haadha molheyy…. mihaaru mi vaahaka up nikuraa dhuvas dhuvahu vaahaka kiyaalan nulibeythee foohi kamun heevany gain gunavane madhuhen… ehaaves mi vaahaka reethi… and… mi part ga yuaan vareyga roathan dhimra ah fenna thankolhu haadha sweet ey…and especially yuaan eyna ge shakuvaa thah amilla dhulun bunythee… WOWWW!!!! Mi part ves hama bunedheyn dhathi haa reethi… ithoo….goodnight…???

   2. Hehehhe..dww dearr..gud grl dear..thigothuga dhemi hunahchey ingey..thanxx dear..so so much..ithoo speechless vejje rangalhah vx dear..thanxx so so so so much my dear..really thanxx a lot..gud nytt..??????

   3. pis pis… haadha dhigey dho.. btw mee second ey yeyy!!!??

   4. Book Lover aa ehbas.. mee esfiyaige emme emme reethi vaahaka.. ?

   5. ????

   6. Thanks…

3. yey..up vehj edhww..hehe..thnks ithoo..n vaahaka nimen kairivehjetha????or adhi kuriyah othy..n BTW as always
   story salhi ingey..luv ya…

   1. Wc dear..kairi vejje nimen..thanxx my dearr..ly tooo????

4. Hey.. mi second dhw..kiyaafa comment eh kohlaanan

   1. 4th dhw… mi part vx varah reethi. .. ekam mi part ga mi v gothaa medhuga ehaa hiyy hama eh nujehey. . Vedhaane e dhekudhin maa dhurun ulheythyve kamah vx.. kuraane kameh neii.. hama inthizaaru kurevenee dhim n yuan gulheyne dhuvahah. .. I am waiting for the next part ithooo. ..

   2. Fahun rangalhu vaane kamah balamaa dww dearr..thanx dear so so so much????

   3. Thnx dear???

5. Yayyy. Balahattaigen indha up vy. Kiyaalaafa comment kollaanan ingey

   1. Haha. Wow. Nonns ah fifth dhw. Ehenyya abadhu onnaany fuluga. 😀 alhe yuan keehvve tha dhim dheke hate vaa vaahaka buny. Mihaaru dhen vejje ennu sul haveri vaan dhemeehun. Haadha dheraveyey aan and dhim ulhey gothun. Ithoo pls edhemeehun gulhuvaba. I cant bear to see them in pain. Konirakun tha happy eposide eh fennaany. I mean aan and dhim ge? Varah inthizaaru kureevey eba edhuvahakah. Good night ithoo

   2. Fahun rangalhu vaane kamah balamaa dww dear..thanxx my dearr so so so much..gud nytt dear????

   3. Thanxx dearr?????

6. Rau 3rd dhw

   1. Hehehe????

7. ithoo dhooni haadha rangalhey

   1. Thanxx dear ???

8. Vaahaka v foohi dhen mihaaru..nimeykah noolheytha

   1. Nimen kairi vejje dearr

9. Mihaaru inthizaar kohkoh varubali vehjje

   1. Ithoo e 2 kudhinn nurohva bala dhenn??

   2. Awwhh…ehentha dear.??

10. Me 5th

    1. Hehehe??

11. Varah reethi.. and finally dhim came to knw the truth.. now i cant wait to see when yuaan and dhim reunites..
    🙂

    1. Awwh..thanxx dear?????

12. I hate aaanaaaaa….why is she seducing my yuaaaaannn? Aaaargh

    1. Bcx yuh are with munaaz now.. Learn to stick with one person

    2. HAHAHAA!!! Heehee haalaku nuvee kiriyaa… aslu ves dho!!??

    3. I just hate you gurls.. ????

    4. Hehehe???

    5. Don’t worry youan you’ll find your love?
       After all I’m still single

    6. Hehehe..????

    7. He ithoo it’s me yax?
       Mi part was heart racing ?
       But as usual hama varah reethi?
       By the way you should really include ED SHEERAN’S -“Thinking Out Loud”- in aan and dhims wedding!!
       I hope you would check it out?
       By the way I hope you like “HEART ATTACK” ?

    8. Hehehe..thanxx dearr…check kohlaanan ingey..thanx a lot dearr..happy to meet u dear yax?????

13. Hey ithoo vaahaka nimen kairi veetha?

    1. Yaa..dhn nimen kairi vejje ingey..??

14. aanaa eh knkahala anhenetha …. ulhey gothe dhw …….. vvvv reethi

    1. Hehe..dww..thanxx dear????

15. Reethi.
    Beykaaru vaahakathah haadha gina ey

    1. Awwh..ehentha..n thanxx dear???

16. Nice mi part.

    1. Thanxx dearr????

17. V salhi mi bai ithoo… V dhuvas kollaafa dhw mi comment eh kollevenee… V busy Koh ulheythee story ves kiyailevenee gadi gadiyah bahaigen??
    BTW this story was awesome.. n wish you all the best ngey ithoo… Witting for the next part???
    Ly????

    1. Awwhh..happy to meet u dear..thihaa bxy koh ulhemun vx kiyaalaathy v happy ingey..thanxx my dearr so so so much..ly tooo?????

18. Adhives beykaaru vaahaka maa gina…abadhu eh vaahakathakeh eki goigothah genasdhyfa thi hunani…vaahaka liyefa ehfaharu nama vx kiyaalyma ekan faahaga kureveyne…hykuran dhen liyaa vaahaka ehga namaves ekan ragalhukohlaane kamah…ekan ragalhukohfiya mivaahaka ulheyni ehvanaiga

    1. Awwhh..thanx dear view bunela dhineema …??

    2. Asulves…. vaahaka vara reethi…. Ekam mihaarakah aaas abadhuves eh vaahaka thakei hunaneee….. Ithuru kamei nuve maaa Gina beykaaru vaahaka than ginavefa hunakan faahaga kurevey

    3. Sry dear dissapoint kohleveythee..

19. Dhn alhe e dhemeehun gulhuvabr.. Huwr. Emeehun ulhey gothu heart break vaa varuveyy ??

    1. Alhe ehentha dear ??..maa varah nuvisnahchey..mee hama stry ehnu dww??

20. Aki ah mi vaahaka hadi vanya nukiyaba mi vaahaka

    1. Alhe dear thihen nubunaane eyy..ingey??

    2. aki nubunan vaahaka hadi ekey…aki ah varah reethi mi vaahaka

    3. Thanxx AKI???

21. dhen mihaar haadha haasaru dhigey dho. mihar yuaan nd dhim gulhen vehje ahnu. mihar vahaka dhany varah foohi koh

    1. Sry dear dissapoint kohleveythy.. So fahun rangalhu vaane kamah balamaa dww..

22. Ohh…haadha reethi vaahaka e k dhw….?v v v reethi mi part ves….nice…waiting next part……thanx ithoo…????

    1. Awwhh..thanxx dearr..n wc ingey????

23. Konirakun eygeynee mipart gai ves ekameh nuvi haadha dheraey but I love ithoo you are the best writer in the world????????

    1. Awwhh..thanxx my dear so so so much..adhi ingeyne ingey kan kan??????

24. Mihaaru anehkaa ehen meeheh iee dhw.. Huhh…….????

    1. Heenukuraa gothah vx vedhaane dww dear

25. Nice vara riythi keep it up tc by

    1. Awwh..thanx my dear so so so much..n tc..by?????

26. Heyo nuvaane ithoo mi noon gotheh mi vaahaka ah hadhaabala…vaahaka kiyamun dhaairu haadha rulhi gadhavey…dhn kon zamaanakun tha mi dhemeehun gulhaavaafa mi vaahaka ninmaalaanee…kuri erumeh aadheythw kiyanyvx…bt hahthaahaa haasaru gandu vany dhigu…nuvithaakah anekkaa faadeh ge manje eh genessa ithurah vaahaka hadi thikohlee…plss dhn mivaahaka ninman ulhey…hama huvaa mibuny v v foohi mihaaru..

    1. Nimeny dhn..so rulhi gadha vaakah dhn nujeheyne dear??

27. alhey dhim and yuaaan gulhuvabala..ana ves fonuvaalabala..v nice

    1. Hehehe..thanx dearr????

28. Hey mihaaru feel vany story dhigu kuran ulhey hen. Hama same thing happening dhw. No new twist. Abadhuves ekahcheh mi ahnnany. Nothing new dhw. Plz writer story ge miharu hus ehkanthah thakeh ahnnaathy v beykaaru bai bodu. Plz think of this. Now im getting bored of this. Plz. Do something and change a bit plz

    1. Sry dear…n thanx view bunela dhineema..

29. Vaahaka v reethi,, ekn mihaaru maa haasaru Gina kn neyge,,

    1. Ehentha..sry for that dear..n thanxx ingey dear????

30. Varah reethi mibaivx
    MaShaAllah
    Waiting for the next part, ithuu ?

    1. Awwhh..thanxx dear so much?????

31. Mi dhen dhigu kuran hadhaigen hamaeh nujehe ehnu. Ehaa loabi vaanama single koh huri iru nugulhunee keehve. Hama vaahaka dhigu kuran vegen. Vai vejje vaahaka.

    1. Noon aslu vx hama liyefa oih gothah mi gennanee..yuaan faalhuga bunaa adu a ivuny dhim ah alah dww adhi dear..aee eynun dhim vx faahaga kuri thankolhakee..

    2. Aan dhen ehaa kiyaa hithun kiyamun dhiya vaahakaeh beynun nuvaa gothah dhanyaa kamaku nudhaane dhw. Kureega edhemeehunge koalhungandu v majaa. Mihaaru dhen yuan ulheny foohi vahtharakah viyya.

    3. Fahun vaa gotheh vx balamaa dww dearr

32. pispis… e aanaa ulhey vatharun bolaa nukulhadhaana…. dhen yuan naasiru ge edhumah ehanhenaa aa marry kuraany kaneynge… btw twist dhen fudheyvara kah salhi… but munaz dhim aa maa close vaathee kada… dhim aa close vaan jeheynee yuan… dhim is aal yuan’s and yuan is all dhim’s… story dhen reethi… ekam adhi perfect vaane yuan aa dhim aa gulhu veema… ( this is not a negative comment)…. gdnyt… ly…

    1. Awwhh..ehentha dear..alhe thibunaa gothah veytho dear..thanxx dear so much..ly too..gd nytt?????

33. Alhey dhen mi anhenaa e dhemedhahvaneemayo. Munaaazuvex too much varah foohi dhimvex yaan aa eku vaareya kulhen dhiyanama ??? ithoooo plz happy kohlaba.

    1. Ehentha dear..alhe balamaaa dww vaagotheh????

34. Beykaaru baa baa v Gina stry ga,, mihaaru v foohi kiyan

    1. Sry dear dissappoint kohlevuneema

35. Ithoo denn anehkaa yuaan aai thikuhjakaa noon igey ..mihaaru dhim ah igihjje ehnunn yuaan vess dhim dheke lobi vaa kan dhenn avahah e 2kudhinn gulhuvann ulhey☺

    1. Hehe..dww dear..????

36. Vrh foohi kon mihaaru mi dhany.. aamil ge kanthah vx ingey kah noolhe.. n dhimra n munaax dww..foodu.. uaan ah dhimra liben jeheyny.. nimen kairi vefa oiy iru dhen kanthah thah falhaa aran vejjeyehnu.. ehn noony fahu part ga ehfaharaa thwche hurihaa kamei falhaa araany.. eirun hadi vaane.. faharaku kamei genessa nimmaalyma rythi vaany… gud luck dear

    1. Thanxx dearr..thidhin idea ah ingey dearr?????

37. Nothing new. Hama dhemeehun dhuruga dhigu muhdhathakah bahattany vaahaka dhigu kuran.
    Mihaaru mi story mathin foohi vaan fashaifi.

    1. Noon hama liyefa oih gothah mi gennanee..dhigu kuraakah noon..

38. Awwh adhives yuan ah dhim ge truth eh neyngey dhww.. ithoo avahah gulhuvaalaba aan and dhim ? Aan egothah rueema varah dhera veyeyy.. ? Love this story ekamu ves.. god bless you dear.. ?❤️?

    1. thanxxx my dear so so much????

39. V salhi

    1. Thanxx dear????

40. arzoo ge baeh annaane kamah unmeedhu kohgen hutta vaahaka eh nimuny. arzoo and yuaaan v avahah dhimaa vaane kamah unmeedhu kuran. alhugadu unmeedhu kurin aarzoo mi party ah annaane kamah. arzoo party ah dhaane dhw ithoo

    1. but still mi part ves vv reethi

    2. Thanx dear????

    3. Hehehe..arjoo mathin ithoo hama handhaan eba huri ingey dear????

41. Vaahaka mihaaru aslu ves foohi vaan fashaifi.. Maa beykaaru vaahaka Gina..so unmeedhu kuran rangalha kohlaane kama.. Best of luck 😉

    1. Thanxx dear???

42. Alhe noon. Dhen aan e kujja aa rattehi nukuruvaathi. Pls

    1. Alhe balamaa dww vaa gotheh dearr?????

43. Haasaru dhigu kamunves foohi. Dhen vaahaka ninmaakah nuvey tha ??

    1. Nimen kairi vejje dearr

44. Can’t wait for the next part..bt plz ithoo give them little happiness when they both really love each other..the story is so touching..ooh so nice!!

    1. Ok dear..thanxx so so much dearr..????

45. Vahaka kurukohlaafa avahah e 2 kudhin gulhuvan ulhey..oh waiting waiting..

    1. Awwhh..ehentha dear

46. dhim n yuaan gulhuvaba pls,pls n mi parts ves v reethi

    1. Thanxx my dearr so so much????

47. Dhen maa haahsa kamei vx nuhingaehnu mi part ga vxx.. dhn vaahaka nimen ulhey iru kanthah thah ingen vejjeyehnu.. baivaru kan kan ebahuhtehnu dw ithooo.. last part ga hurihaa kamei ehfaharaa genaima ryhchei nuvaane.. mihaarun feshigen ekan ekamah clue liben jeheyne uaan n ehn myhunnah vxx.. eirunnehnu rythi vaany.. mihaaru gens dhei gina part thakuga ehvx kamei nuvei.. haasaru huss.. mirey vx oiy bdu paragraph ehga huss eh vaahaka eh liyefa firihenunnaky vx rwbaeh kan angan.. ehr dhigu kon ekahala kanthah thah genes nudhinas ok vaane.. intrst gehle ehn vaathi.. n e vaahaka ah vure imprtnt ethah vaahakaeh ebahuri ingen vefa..
    U can do better ithoo..
    Gud luck..

    1. Ebaithah gennaanan dear..kuriah oihthaa ekan engemun dhaanee..n thanxx dear view bunela dhineema..n sry hama dissapoint kohlevuneema dearr..thanxx

48. Aslu ves mihaaru varan gina beykaaru bain,maa bodan bunan beynunvaa bas than buneadhey hen heeevaathy kan neygea dhw.beykaaru bain ginavany.anyway story nice ,keep it up ithoo,????❤️

    1. Awwhh..ehentha dear..thanxx dear so so much..?????

49. Kurin mivaahaka kiyaaha baeh faharu rovei.. bt mihaaru haasaru dhigu kohfa kiyan foohi vaagothah hunnani..ehr kiyaa hithei vx nuvei..beykaaru vaahaka gina kamun.. u can do better grl.. good luck?

    1. Awwhh..ehentha dear..thanx ingey hama bunela dhineema ????

50. Beykaaru vaahaka haadha gina ey…. Detail vegen gods beykaaru vaahaka Gina vefa….

    1. thy olhumeh! aee beykaaru vaahakaeh nuun, readers ah understand kh dheyn genna baithah! ekahala baithah genaimaey vaahaka reethi vaany vx! kihaa salhi tha!

    2. Sry dear dissapoint kohlevuneema

51. alhey vvvv reethi ngey ithoo dhooni ?❤ mi part ge furathamakolhu kiyaalaafa hama rovunu! ehaa reethi yey hama! amazing amazing! love this story! ithoo liyaa hurihaa baehvx vvvvvvvvvvvv salhi! ☺ abadhuvx dhn anna part up nukohgen hureveny! keep it uP! god bless u dear! kn iraku nxt part? waiting 4 the nxt part! ly???

    1. Awwhh..thanxx my dear so so so much..really so so happy to know that my dear..thanxx a lott?????

52. Ithoo next part konn irakunn tha up kohdheynee mihaaru anei part kiyaa hithunn kei madhu vefa mihuree, vaahaka varah reethi

    1. Thanxx my dear.. In sha Allah friday ga ingey dear..?????

53. Alhey dhen mihaaru kihinehtha mivany.. ..kiyaafa rulhiaadheveny..edhemeehun alhe gulhuvaba … ? I agree with others…maa haasaruves dhiguvany mihaaru ?

    1. Sry dear for that..rulhi gadha nuvahchey..fahun vaa gotheh vx ihah balamaa dww dearr

54. Reethi….adhi kithah prt ebaoitha

    1. Thanxxx dear.. 5 varakah parts dear????

55. maa dhigu kuranyaa hadi vaane…mi vaahaka varah reethi…but mihaaru maa dhigu vaahen heevey…..abadhu ekkameh onnany vefa…evves aa kameh noavey…dhemyhun rulhi ais gen dhuruvefa thibbaa…ithubaareh nethiyyaa kihiney gulhun kuria ah gendhaany…and aamil kanthah kuri goi ves falhaa aruvaakah noolhun….try to keep these in mind….

    1. Ithoo ekanthah handhaan eba huri hama ingey dear..n thanxxx ingey hama bunela dhineema..thanxx dear????

56. V reethi mi partves

    1. Thanxx my dearr?????

57. Haadha haasaru dhigey miharu.. Vaahaka dhigukuran ulheyhen heevany…

    1. Hama liyefa in gothah mi genanee dearr..

58. Alhe miharu dhigu kuramun goss huss haasaru ginae.. kolhehgga jahssan vehje ehnnu now.. kurin this,was my fav story.. alhe avahah dhim aa yuan gulhuvabala

    1. Thanx dear view bunela dhineema…ihah frst vaa goih balamaa dww dearr..

59. Mi dhen vrh foohi now huss beykaaru vaahaka gina ee ithoo noolheh improve kuraakah mihaaru kommes aanaa eh dhen pispis

    1. Heenukuraa gothah vx kanthah hama vedhaane dww dear..

60. beykaaru bai maa bodu.. foohi mihaaru vahaka dhaa goi

    1. Sry dear dissapoint kohlevuneema

61. Mi part vex v salhi

    1. Thanxx my dearr?????

62. ithoo hama happy part eh naaanaanethaaa … rovihje asluvess …. ithooo dhen aaan n dhim gulhuvabaaa plx plx plz … story v reethii igey… ♥♥♥… keep it up ithooo ….

    1. Thanxx dear..vaa goih balamaa dww dearr..once again thanx dearr?????

63. Wowwwww ????ithoo alhe dhim nd yuaan ehen ulheythy haadha hiythuga jehyea? ithoo mi dhekudhin gulhuvan ulhey avaha aanaa aies yuaan jahae nugahnanees.. vvvvv reethi mi story esfiya site ga ehme reethi story miee i love this story really a lot ???

    1. Awwhh .happy to know that..thanxx my dearr so so so much..thanx a lot???????

64. Vaahaka varah reethi.. abadhu ves vaahaka kiyan ekam adhi alah mi comment kury

    1. Awwh..happy to meet u my dearr..thanxxa dear..thanxx a lot??????

65. Mi prt vx v nice….how many prts left …..ly ithoo…. nights…

    1. Thanxx my dear.. 5 varakah partx kamah mi balany ..ly too dear..nightxx?????

66. Dheerey dheereysey Mere Zindhagi Mein AANAa… Kon aanaa eh tha alhe fahe miyoh ayii… Tum Yayaasey abhi ke abhi Jaaanaa.. Hadhanvee gothakee mi AAnAa eh Munaz bolah jahaa.. eyrun e 2 nuhuruppaanun salaamaiy vee.. Yooaan aa dhimraa aa gulhuvan vee… dhn Mi Ayaz mee arjoo ge bitu hen v heevey…. Aagey aagey dheykoa hoatha hai kiyaa…

    1. Hehe dww dear..alhe balamaa dww vaa gotheh..??????

67. mihaar dhen haadha foohsey mi vaahaka! nimeny konirakunthrrrr?

    1. Nimen kairi vejje dear

68. Ithoo.. This part is so nice.. Dhen Yuan and Dhim gulhuvaaba.. Kon irakuntha e dheneehun gulheny?.. But still story vvvvvv nice and awesome.. I’m waiting for the next part..! .

    1. Awwhh..thanxxx my dearr so so so much??????

69. Wow.wow.alhey.we nyd arjoo here.yuan hurihaa hagygatheh kiyaadheyn.soon.

    1. Thanxx dearr so so so much?????

70. Anaa and Munaz
    Dhimra and Yooan
    Ayaz and Arjoo
    Aamil and Santhi Mariyanbu

    Mi gothah couple thah athuraala.

    1. “Aamil & santhi Mariyanbu” LOL?
       isn’t​ hudhaa aamils GF

    2. Hahaha..okaeii????

71. Vaahaka dhen maa dhiguvehje. Suspense create nukurevey mihaaru. Abadhu eh kameh thakuraar vaahen feel vany.
    I liked this story alot. But now it dosnt bring the enjoyment i feel after reading the story.

    1. Sry dear for that..bt liyefa oih gothah mi gennanee…n hope kuran fahun kamudhaane kamah..

72. Hey ithoo mi part Varah reethi?
    By the way I wrote one comment but it was unfortunately showed in a reply hope you would read it?

    1. Thanxx dear so so much..yaa dhekunin ingey dearr?????

73. V foohi mihaaru maa haasaru dhigi.kohme baehgaves hama ehvaahakathakeh gaaigadakah thafaathu kohdhibaa

    1. Thanx dear view bunela dhineema ingeyy

74. Mihaaru vaahakaige maa beykaaru baithah ginave kiyan foohi vaagoi ebavey.thankolheh avahah yuaan& dhim gulhuvan v nu.

    1. Frst stry vaa gotheh balamaa dww dearr ..n sry ingey dear

75. Masha allah v rythi ekamakuvaa kaaku thqrubiyyathukoffa huri dhari eh tha aee gothevves neiy kujjeh dhw ekahala bodu haflaa egga ulheyne rangalhu rythi goiythah kiyaanudhy gengossa huri myheththa aee kykkuraany mizamaanuge kudhin ulhey goiy dhw?? dhim kyvvetha madu thi iny aharen my dhim nama eyna fahathun gos eynayaa dhima ah ehchennubune nuhurevunys ehaaves eyne d grade dhw ithoo alhe dhen e 2 kudhinnah thihennahadhabala yuaan n dhim gulhuvan ulhebala dhim bunebala munaaz kairy mi relashion ga kuriyah dhevennethey ?? mihaaru yuaan loabivykanves engijje ennu ushaamen reyvumakun viyas dhim aa yaan ah privacy eh libeyne goiy hadhaidhy mi haflaa nimumuge kurin e 2 myhunge husha helhumevves baavvabala eyruthaa dhw aamil fori hunnaany aamil bunebala munaaz kairy dhim aa yuaan relation eh feshi ey thy yuaan falyhaiy kuraahithun nunidhigen ulhey myhennu ithoo stry v rythi❤❤ dhen ekam dhim men gulhuvan ulhey aamilge kanthah ves angaalaafa n hykury mirey arjoo aaves mytvaanekamah dhim avves neyngi mi party therein but so sad?? dhen arjoo aa yuaanves dhimaakuruvan vejje mihaaru eyrun mikanthah komme ekkolhegga jeheyny dhen dhw shaarim menves mi 2 myhungulhuvan ulhebala mimyhunnah neygi meet vaane goitythan hadhaigenviyas so gud nyt ly ithoo???????

76. Heyonuvaane ithoo yuaan ah thihen nahadhaa dhim aa gulhuvabala n aamige kanthavves falhaa aruvaalabala mi jalsaa nimmavaany yuaan aa dhim ge husha helhumakun ushamen shaarim menves mi dhemyhunna privacy libey kahala gameh jassaagen viyas mi myhun mihaaru gulhuvanvejje ithoo konthaaku manje eththa ais e ulheny adhab akhulaaguge evves echchen engey kujjen hen hynuvey eynage mainbafain eynayah hevaanubai dhas konnudhenytha noony mives aamilkulhuvaa dramaa ehththa v hyvey ekahala eh chenhen anyway stry v rythi arujoo ves mi partyga innaane kamah ummydhu kuran adhi dhim ge kanthaththa yuaan ah engi relation akah dhaan dhimkairy yuaan mihaflaa therein edheyne kamah ummydhu kuran ly gud nyt ithoo?????❤❤❤❤

    1. Awwhh thanxxx my dear so so so so much..really thanx a lot..dear..vaa goih alhe balamaa dww..hehe..gud nytt dear??????

77. Keekuran up kuri part eh mee.. abadhu ehkameh..
    Abadhu yuaan aa dhim aa dhuruga bahatan tha thiulheni..
    Anehkaa aneh haasaru bodi dhaman aanaa ekey kiaa meehaku vahdhaafiye..
    Hahthahaa vs foohi goi goi vani..
    Plz writer..
    Kiyuntherin mi vaahaka aa bored nukurey..
    Mi site ga vs in reethi vaahaka thaku thereyga himeney vaahakaeh mee..
    Yuaan N dhim gulhuvabaa avahah.. plx plx plx..
    Im begging u writer

    1. Alhe dear..mi hama stry ekey nun..so heenukuraa gothah vx nimidhaane dww..so beg nukurey a dhekudhin gulhuvumah dear???

78. mi vaahaka mihaaru varah hadi

    1. Sry dear dissapoint kohlevuneema..

79. vaahakaige ottaru huri ehchakahvure ginaee haasaru. hindhi drama thakuga vaahen nimumehneh hithaama which is so boring. ehaa dhigukoh konmmeh part eh gennairu haasaru gina kan v faahagavey. misaalakah dhen hithah kuraa asaru kiyaairu thafaathu ethah sentences akun ekahcheh liyefa onnany.. once you say he was heart broken or hiy kudhi kudhi v ey buneema readers can understand the depth.. no jeed of 10 sentences saying the same.. v gina story kiyaa meehegge gothun liyuntheriyaa ge feel kiyaa meeha ah ihusaasvun v muhimmu. ekm dsnt mean so much haasaru. i like the flow of your story but too waste parts ginaee.. unmeedhukuran ekan rangalhu kohllaane kamah.hope this comment doesn’t disappoint you rather give a clear shot. thanks for the story btw.

    1. Wc dear…n thanxx ingey hama view bunela dhineema..thanx a lot dearr????

80. Mivaahaka rerthi gothakah nimeyne hen hiyeh nuvey… Anehkaa faadehge aana eh e aeee. Vaahaka dhigukuran ulheyhen heevanee… Mi part ga vs maagina kanthah thakeh nuhingaa… Haasaruthah Gina kan faahaga kurevey..

    1. Alhe frst nimey gotheh balaanee dww ihah dear..seriouskon dhigu kuraakan noolhen..n sry kamu nudhaa gothakah mi part thah geneveythee

81. Vaahakaige concept varah reethi. Ekam vaahaka kiyamun dhaairu varah bolah undhagoove haasaru dhigu kamun. Bunan beynunvaa ethi kurukoh saadhaa koh nugenes dheve. Ehenve sifa kurun varah dhah. Mibuni kanthah fahum vehje kamah unmerdhu kuran

    1. Fahum vey dear..vedhaane ithoo ge talent nethy kamah..aslu vx nw ithoo gaboolu kuran ithoo ge talent eh neih kamah..thanx dear view bunela dhineema

82. woooow ithoooo.???????.v nice ingey mi part vx❤❤❤❤❤… bt thankolher beykaary vaahaker giner hern pritty ah vx heevany????.. good luck ingey✌✌✌.. rangalhu koh lema v nice vaane.????….
    bt buner verny v furihamer ey mi bai vx..??? v nice n loves it sososo sooooooo much… ♥♥♥???????

    1. Awwwhh..thanxxx my dear so so so much.. Really thanxx a lot my dear..v happy vejje ingey??????

83. Then haadha haasaru bodey?. Foohivehj kiyan

    1. Sry dearr

84. Dhim a yuan gulhuvaba dhen

    1. ???

85. Ithoo kairi rangalhu kuran bunaa kanthah rangalhu nukuraathy massala aky.. disappoint kohlevuneethy sorry bunyas nuvaane dho.. negative comments thah gina kan faahaga vey mihaaru.. liyefa oiyy story akas hama haasaru bai madhu kohlevidhaane… eh faharu buna ehcheh repeat vefa ebahuri ethah faharaku eki goiy gothah… sorry to say this.. but this how i feel about the story now.. i don’t like the story at all.. I’m very sure that you can do much better than this..

    1. Nw ithoo ah ingey aslu hama ithoo ge talenteh sifa kurumuge bayakah neihkan..aslu vx ingey dearr..thanxx ingey hama view bunela dhineema..thanxx a lot iz..

86. Mashaa Allah v reethi mi part ves,keep it up dear,next part soon plx,dhim n yuaan haadha muvisney dhemeehun ney,loabivaan ves nengey,mihaaru haw nama yuaan set kohfeemus,ithoo dhim akah thikameh nuvi eh nun,dhen haw gendhan ulhey,a run ehmen nuvegen e ulhey kan thah vaane,hehehe nice story ,I like it

    1. Hehehe..dww dear..thanxx my dearr so so much..thanxxx a lot??????

87. varah nice mi part ves.. waiting for next part..
    ithooo..total how many parts tha innanee?? and plx dhim & aaan gulhuvahchey nimeyiru ?

88. Seriously guys mi fadha zamaaneh ga criticize kurany thi zuwaaneh ge hard work ey aee.. Atleast give her some credit.. story hadi vegen ulhey kudhinnah bunelan othy miah vuren reethikoh story leveythy dhw ey thi mean commnts thi post kurany.. Aslu beynun vany mi vaahaka kuri araa dhiya nudheyn.. ehvex myhaku majubooreh nukure eh nun mi vaahaka hadi kudhinnah mi vaahaka kiyaakah.. Alhugadu mi vaahaka mi kiyany amiliah fenigen ehn v ma hadi nama alhugadu mi story nuwes kiyaanan.. liyuntheriya ah kuh bunedheyne reethi goih onaane.. Mean commnts kurumuge beynumaky kobaa kuryge chapter thakuga ehvex mean commnts eh neh hama emme myhaku liyuntheriya ragalhu kuran v mi kamey bunaa irah emmen commnt kuran feshy abadhu ekahcheh kiyaafa.. liyuntheriyaa mi chapter liyefa ey othy kurin genesdhyfa oih vaahaka eh noon dhim ah neyge ehchehi thakeh dhw ey inguny ehn v ma eh gothakah noon dhw ey v.. story ragalhah vex kiyaahen hyvany baeh myhun commnt kurany ..
    Mi chapter sifa koh dhinun v habys.. yuaan ge feelings express koh dhyfa inn goih v reethi
    Keep it up
    Luv yuh
    Miss yuh ???

    1. Thanxx so so much for appreciatin mu work..thanx a lot..thanx a lot.. Ly n miss u too?????????????

89. mi part ves vara reythi…ekamun maa beykaaru vaahaka geinahenheyve….dhen avaha Aaan n Dhim gulhuvaba…waiting for the next part…gud nyt…

    1. Thanxx dearr..thanx a lot????????

90. I hate that bloody Alim gandu. Ena huriha kame ga nubayaki. Dn anekka mihira ais ulhey thallavaiganna bova eh vathara ulhe aanaa ulheni Yuan fahathun nattan neygigen. Aslu dhimra rangalhaka nun ekantha kurani. Ena munaz deke loibeh nuve. Ehenvima egotha munaz olhume ge therega bahhatta, dera vedhane thi ey kiyafa hageegai nukiya dinumaki dhimra ah hedhe v bodu goheh. Bcx fahun munaz ah ves dhera libeni. Ahanna hama yageen munaz ah hageegai enge nama munaz undstand vane kan. Aslu dhiyan mena huriha eche enge iru rangalhu dw vakin munaz aa badhalu kofa hageegai kiya den ves. But they r also not much concernd abt this now. Mi kama hadha v boagova miharu. Dn enme benun vani dhimra ge kushe neh kan efaharu n huriha kame huri Amil kan engen. Ehen nuni yuan dhimra balaeh nuganane. Ena hithuga adhi ves ekamuga veyn hurima ehen e ulheni.

    Ithoo alhe next part konirakun? ?

    1. Alhe vaa goih balamaa dww dear..thanx so much dear..thanx a lot.. In sha Allah maadhen ingey?????

91. Aarrrrrrgggggg..

    Aan kee hurihaa ehcheh vs dhim adu ahan huree..
    Ekm hate you ey buni thankolhu ekani adu mi ivuny..
    Ethankolhuga hifaa dhamaa eba hama..
    V foohi vey..
    Kurin buni ehvs ehchehge maana eh nethytha?

    Aan reethikoh buni ehen meehehge hahgakah dhim vma dhera vaa vaahaka..n bla bla bla..
    Evarun dhn egen vejje ennu..nuvisney kuda kudhinneh nunennu mee..
    Ehaa gothuga hunanya lwbi veyey hithah thadhuveyey nukiyaa nee..

    Rulhi gadha vey mihaaru mi vaahaka kiyaa iru dhemeehun ulhey gothun..

    1. Fahun rangalhu vaane kamah balamaa dww dearr

92. Vaahaka nuvex kiyaa kudhin commnt kurany hadi ey kiyaafa.. vaahaka maguboolukan gehluvaalan kanneyge ulheny.. Hadi vaahaka nukiyaa dhookohlaani liyuntheriya ge roohu gehley gothah commnt kurumuge beynumeh neh
    I appreciate ur hardwork..
    proud of u
    Try to improve
    Miss yuh big koh ??

    1. Thanxxx so so so much..really thanx a lottt..miss u too..???????

93. Ithooooo. varah touching ingey. Haadha dhigu inthizaarekey adhives. Migothah gengos anehkaaves rovvaa nulahchey. Mihaaru dhen konmeves kolhehgai jassan vejje dhw. Ehaavarah dhen nuvaane inthizaaru kuruvaakah. Dhen next maadhamaarey genesdehchey. Can’t wait ingey. So pls pls pls pls pls …….

    1. Hehehe…thanxx dear so much..v happy vejje thihaa interest aa eku mi stry kiyaalaathy.. In sha Allah maadhen rey genesdheynan ingey dear.thanx a lot??????

    2. Aslu ithoo ah dhw thanks bunan jeheynee. Hama salhi kamun. Varah kiyaa hiyvaa kahala story eh genesdheythee aslu v.v.v. Happy ingey.

94. whohohohohoh vareee bootifullllllllllll :3 :3

    1. Awwhhhh thanxxxx my dearr??????

95. Nothing new…eyhenve dheravefa mihiree. Dhemeehun gulhuvan vehje. N maaiykan dhigu vany falhaa naara but still salhi

    1. Thanxxx dear..dhn dhaanee kankan ingemun hama ingey dearr?????

96. Varah reethi kiyan beynun nuvaa kudhin nukiyabala varah foohivey mi vaahaka hama best ithoo thigothuga kuriyagendhey

    1. Thanxxx my dear..thanx a lot?????

97. Ithoo dear u r the Best. Mi part ves varah reethi Hama best. Mi site ga in enmeh best story mi. Varah reethi. Thi kuraa hihvarakah hama saabas. U r great. Waiting for the next part…?????????????

    1. Wow..thanxx my dear so so so much..v v happy vejje ingey..aslu vx thanx my dear…alot?????

98. Ithoo kairy rangalhu kuran v kameige vaahaka bunyas baeh readers hyvani moya vegn ulhei hn.. n mst of all ithoo gaathu bunaa vaahaka ei.. sooo she will reply.. its better othrs ekahala kankamaa nubehuniyya..
    Btw stwry hama vrh rythi ingei.. bt kurin vx baeh myhun bunefa huri gothah eh vaahakaeh eki eki ibaaraathakun repeat kohfa hurey mihaaru vrh ginain..
    Vaahakaige kury kolhu mi kahala mahsala thakei nufene.. vrh nice.. bt mihaaru kuda kn kiyan foohi ehn vaathi.. hope ranglhu kuraane kamah.. u hve talent.. jxt need to cum out.. n dhuniyeah vx ithoo ge talent hurikan dhahkaalan v.. gud luck dear..

    1. Awwhh..thanxx dear..view bunela dhineema..n support dheythee..thanxxx my dear so so much???????

99. v salhi mi partves…. dhen avahah dhemyhun gulhuvaabala….. konirakun next part cnt wait

    1. Thanxxx my dear so much.. In sha Allah maadhen rey ingey..????

100. Enme fahubaiga anekka airport GA tha thibeyni enmen

     1. ????

101. Alhey haadha inthixaarakah fahu ey mi libunee kiyaalan….mi story kiyaa hithun heevanee dhuvas ves dhigu Vefa onna hen….

     1. Awwhh..aslu tha..hehe..thanx dear thihaa interest aa eku stry kiyaathy..thanxx a lot?????

102. Mifaharu fahathunn 1 vana. Hehheh. C thooo luv mi parts vex v loabi. Huvaamibunee mi anaa akay mee adhi furihamavaane anheneh hen haadha heeveyay. Keehve tha abdhu aan n dhim ah kairi veven ulhay irah ves dhuruvaane goii medhuveri vanee. Yageen dhen then a ulhay ayaan gandu kahn anehkaa dhim r alhai gahnnaanee. V foohivay. Thanx cthoo for the luvly stry. Luv u lotx????

     1. Hehhee..n wc sanu..n thanxxx to u also dear so so much..really thanxx a lot..ly too????

103. Negative kohvs comment kureven jeheyne..
     Ehn nunas mi vaahaka kiyaa mi vaahaka emme best kamah buni kudhin mihaaru hadi vaathyve ehn e bunanee..
     Hama hurefa bunanee eh noon kanne..
     ?

     1. Yaa dww dear..??

104. Nice ingey mi baives… plz send tht Aana away… keekey hithah araigen ulhey meehetha ei… plz Dhim n Yuan avahah gulhuvaba… waiting 4 the next part ?❤

     1. Hehehe..ok..thanx my dear..thanx a lot????

105. Vv fooohi egothakahvves dhemeehun gulheygothakah nuvey dhen lobinuvaa dhemeehun gulhuvan ulheyhen heevanee vaahaka nimey iruves ithurah dhelobiverin nugulheygothah mivanee fooohi mibai kiyanves fooohi ithoo dhen thekulhigadu huttaalaa mihaaru mivaahakain vaagothun kiyan foohi???

     1. Alhe sry dear..akamu stry ah ga viyya ehme heenukuraa gothah vx nimun aisdhaane dww dearr…

106. Ithoo ithoo hama molhee ey dho haadha salhi ey mi part just keep going like thiss….. its like the best story ever, by the way v dhuvas vejje dho comment nukurevey thaa busy kamun hama nukureveny kiyaalevenyvunyves haama dhenme….. haasaru v gina ekam v salhi haasaru thah vss v interesting egothaah dhemyhun ge rulhigandu baalaathy,… mihaarakah ais mi kahala majaa story v kiyaalan nulibey….. v habeys mi story,….. lov u so much……???????

     1. Yaa dww..v dhuvas vejje dhimaa nuvaatha..so v v happy vejje dhimaa v ma..n thanxx my dear so so so much..really thanxxx a lot..v v happy vejje ingey..????????

107. Talent nethekey nubunamehnu. Ekanthah rangalhu kohleema nimunee. mikahala dhigu vaahaka eh ma kiyaanee varah reethi veema ?

     1. Awwh..thanxx my dearr so so so much???????

108. Kurin bayaa mi bai ehaa ryccheh noon
     Kuriyah huri bai thakah thankolheh high expectation eh kuran

     1. Awwhh..ehentha dear.. In sha Allah dhn ahna baai rangalhu vaane..dww dear?????

109. Nw kiyaa hitheh nuvey…. Dhuvahaku nugulhunu baeh… N abadhu misunderstandings emeehun medhuga… I dont thnk evaru vaairu nububaane meeheh hun’naane hen, i mean ehaa ekeh anekakah zuvaabu kuraa baeh v iru… N lives in same apartmen

     1. Adhi kuriah oihthaa hama heenukuraa gothah vx vedhaane dww dear..????

110. Vrh loabi mi prt vx dhen avahah dhim and yuaan gulhuaba ……….

     1. Awwhh..thanxxx my dear..thanx a lot?????

111. Now vaahakaiga baivaru eba huri kanthah falhaa naaraa e hurihaa baeh falhaa araafa dhen alhe yuaan and dhimm gulhuan ulheyla …. i love this story

     1. Adhi ingeyne dear…thanx dear.thanx a lot?????

112. Ithoo dhn ehnuhadhaa yuaan n dhim dhimaava goeh hadhaadhy…story vvvvvvv nice….im ur biggest fan ithoo. .

     1. Awwhh..happy to know that my dear..thanxx so so much..really thanxxx a lott dearrr????????

113. Aan dw kitty

     1. ??????

114. Alhe ithoo…kihineh tha mihaaru thi hadhany…maa beykaaru bai ginavaahen hyvany..nd ehvc haassa kameh vc mihaaru nuvey…mikanthah rangalhu kohlabala plx…kn irakun tha dhn yuaan n dhim gulhuvaany…still waiting for that day?

     1. Ihah alhe vaa goih balamaa dww dearr..n sry ingey dear

115. Ithoo mirey vaahaka nereba v kiyaahithunn mihuriiii

     1. Alhe dear..adhi write kuran vx nufashan dear..sry ingeyy????

116. Hey ithoo! Sorry ingey lahun comment kohlevuny ma! Aslu veegothaky reyga thankolheh lahun kiyuny story! Dhen avahah nidhy! And miadhu dhiyaee report book balaa school ah! And guess what! I got an ‘A’ from all the subjects! ?? Ehenve lahun mi comment kohlevuny! Anyways mi part varah touching! Ehera aana eh dhw! I thought to go and slap her! And I am also a girl crossing teenage. But dhuvahaku ves ekahala kameh nukuran, nuves kereyne kuraakah ves! And boys aa vaahaka ves nudhahkan me eh only classmates! By the way yuan vaarey aa themen inthan varah salhi describe kohfa in goi! Especially hurihaa shakuvaa eh beyru kohli thankolhu! Dhim ah varah hurt vaane dhw! And even if I was in dhim’s place I would have had felt the same! Really sad ? Kudakoh rovunu and fahun huttaaly! Hehe ? I want to tell u something. This story ‘Loa merey hindhu heevey gaathuga vaahen’ is the best story that I have ever read! I love each and every thing about this story! I wish u gud luk for your future and happiness around you always ithoo dear! Thank you mikahala reethi vaahaka eh genesdhey thy! Love it! Once again, story varah reethi ehen part thakah vure mi part varah touching N sweet! Excitedly waiting for the next part! Love you a lot ithoo dear ?❤❤❤

     1. Wowwww…really..alhe congraa my dear..abdhuvx thigothuga kuriah dhahchey ingey..ithoo ge heyo dhuaa dear aa eku vaane ingey…n thanxx dearr so so much..aslu vx happy vejje ingey dear ah ehme reethi stry ah mi stry veema..thanxx a lott dearr..n ly too my dearr??????????

     2. Awwnn ? Thankx ithoo! And me ge heyo dua ves ithoo aa eku ? It’s my pleasure to support you ithoo dear! And I saw varah fahun ebain negative comment eh libifa dhw, ithoo amilla ashey comments gina kurany kiyaafa! Let it be dear! If anyone tells anything like that don’t step back! Just live your dreams and if writing is your dream or anything else is, then go forward and fulfil it! I will always wish u gud luk! Insha Allah you will succeed ? N gud luk for the stories leftover! Once again thankx ithoo for the swyt words! Love you more ❤❤❤ Hehe ?????

     3. Someone booklover ge comment copy kury dhoo!!!

     4. ??

117. Ithoooo plx plx dhen edhemeehun rahtehi kohber v sad vey vaahaka kiyaaleema

     1. Alhe..dnt be sad dear…alhe fahun vaa goih balamaa dww dear??

118. Varah reethi……rovunu hama mi part kiyaafa…..next part ah waiting waiting????

     1. Awwh..nurohchey akamu..thanxx my dear..thanxx a lot??????

     2. Anytime…..btw…dhim n yuan gulhuvaba dhen……next part up kuraany knirakun??kiyaa hiyvaathi nidhivess naadhe……

119. Ahanna heevaa gothuga munaaz eii arjoo ge bf. Munaaz n arjoo raavaagen kuraa kameh eii aan n dhim gulhuvan.

     1. Awwhh…alhe hingaaba dhimaa veytho balamaa dww dear?????

120. kikey dhw bunaani mi ramalan mahu heyo nuvaane thihen olhuvaalaigen comment gina kuran.. hama amilla ah eh gadi ehgaves comment kohfa ebahuri.. Ithoo islaahu veba. dhen buney thimanna ah neyngeye keehve kameh commnt ginavany.. hama huvaey amilla ah commnt nukuramey.. mi sitege enme molhethi writersge story ahves nulibeyhaa commnt mi story ah libey.. ekamun ingey fake kan.. Molhethi vaahaka dhahkaane kamehnei.. hama commnt gina kuraa hithun thiulheny.. mi faharu dhen 300 and above kuran vaane. Esfiya in dailykoh story kiyaa kudhinnah ingey mi storyga ithoo amilla ah commnt kuraakan. Thidhen boduvaru.. dhen mi ahves eki nan namuga commnt annaane kan yageen. Kikey dhw bunaany ves..

     1. Exactly my thought.. Ekam balaathi ithoo eki nan namuga miyah reply kuraane.. for sure…

     2. Roadha mahu rangalhu kameh noon hama thigothah bunanyaa kushehnethi a meehehge boluga ilzaamu elhuvumakee vx..ithoo kuraane kameh noon a aky cmnt ginavumaky..ithoo ah ingey ehchakee ithoo In sha Allah uxureh nethihyaa rply kuraanan kan..kudhin hih hama nujehunas..thihen ithoo kamah yageen vanyyaa ithoo kan proof kodhiun edhen dear..plus mi partga cmntx thah kiyaaleema ingeyne negative cmntx kan ginaee..ithoo amilla ah kuranyaa ithoo kuraane tha negative cmntx..positive cmnteynun amill ah kuranyaa hunnana beynun vaanee..n 200 matheega likes ulhey iru a vx ithoo eytha thibunanee..gaimu vx kujjakah ehme like ekeynun dheveynee.. So plx proof eh nethi thihen kiyun huttaalabala..n hama eboih dww 50 50 chance hama a varah cmnt aumah vx..heenukuraa gothah vx kanthah vaa than annaane… Amilla ah cmnt kohgen ithoo ah libeyne faidhaa eh neih..kiyaa meehaku kiyaanee hama..nukiyaa meehaku nukiyaane..thifadha ehchchei hehkeih nethi yageen kama eku bunelaathy dhera ee..kusheh nukuraa meehaku hithah gaimu vx thadhuvaane..so ehcheh bunumuge kurin visnaalun goheh noon..???

     3. You are right ithoo! Aslu e vaagothaky mi story aky varah gina readers ge tharuheebu lebey story eh! Ehenve kanneynge comments ginavany. And yah ithoo amilla akah nukuraane dhw negative comments eh. Hurihaa kameh ves dhenevodigen vaa faraatheh vaakan handhaan kuran jeheyne! Ehves kujjakah aneh meehaage boluga eh ilzaam eh neylhuveyne ehves proof akaa nula eh. So pls think before you speak readers. Ithoo is a very good writer and we love you a lot ithoo dear! ?? Komme meehaku komme ehchekey kiyas don’t stop writing ingey. Abadhuves thigothugai kuriah dhaashey bunaany! ???

     4. Mimiy hun thibeniy shaku balin goes foa vefa!!!
        Nuvaane rangalheh?
        Dhen buney masha kiy ves ithoo ey!!!
        Hama hajam nuvaniy!!
        Aadhen ehenya komentu gina viyey kiyaafa kalhey men gain thanga den uni vaniy tha???
        ” J “viyas dhen thi bodu varu

     5. Yah dhw severus snape! Ehenneh nubuneveyne dhw ehves kujjakah ?

     6. midhen kohaa bodu vehje kamehtha. vahaka hadiyya vahaka nukiyabala. aharunves meee eha varah comment kura myheh nun. ekm mi story rythi kamun hama kureveny. ithoo keep going.. negative comments ves annaane. alhaanula. you are the best writer for me. dhen anehka buney mee ves ithoo ey. m not ithoo. Allah knows.. myhaku kura kamakun emyhakah baehge tharuhybeh libenya hasadha vaa myhunves haadha ginaey mihaaru. islaahu vebala. heyonuvaane. if you don’t like the story, then don’t read it. ehves myheh gaathu ithoo nubune mi story kiya comment kuraakah. rythi vegen comment kureveny huriha kudhinnahves. n ithoo one more thing..you were wrong.mi partgaves ginai hama positive comments. ??? aan dhen varah rulhi aima mi comment kurevuny.. negative comments ves dheynvaane.ekm miha rude koshehnun dho dheynyky. myhunge hiyfalhaigen dhaakahala echihi thidhen buneveny.

     7. OMG.. ????
        Shook haadha varakah dhera thi vy mi vhk ah gina cmntx libeythy..??
        reethi vhk akahnu comntx libeyny vess.?
        dhn thi buny likes vess dheny ithoo amilla ashey thr? LoL?? MEGA MIND!!?

121. Mi story ninmaane kameh neh ithoo.. varah reethi mi story???

     1. Awwhh..thanxx my dearr????

122. E kon aanaa eh tha….aa gothah ais Aan fahathunviyya e alhu vailee…eyoh enmen therey ulhey goi balaaba…I feel so sorry for Dhim and Aan…alah fenunu meehakaa hedhi ulhey varu balaaba…anhen kujjakah veethee ladhu ganehje…

     BY THE WAY..THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER ITHOO….THANKS A LOT♡♥♡

123. Best story in esfiya site, but now i’m getting boring …. why ithoo… konkamakaa genas dhey ehgothakah thi genas dheny story 🙁

124. Magey evves shakuvaaeh neh Ithoo??? ekam vaahakaigaivaa dhelobiverin gulhuvaaladhee puleeeeez ilthooo e irun Vv ufaafaaane?????

125. alhee kommes myhaku bunabala esfiya ah ragister vaane gotheh….aslu engey and ethaa neii login eh dhen kihineh hadaaanyyyyyy…… ithooo can you tell me..pls pls.pls

     1. Aayu please use the following link to register on esfiya. http://www.esfiya.com/wp-login.php?action=register

126. Acchydi kurin rycchas mihaaru varah hadi mivaahaka

     1. Vaahaka hadivee yey kiyaafa thihen bunegen nuvaanenun…. dhen mi vaahaka hadeeyya nukiyabala…thihen bunanyaa writers ves foohi vaaneynun nubunyas… evves vaahaka eh thimanna ah kithamme hadi yakas accheedi ey bunegen nuvaane….

     2. Thy anekkaa ithoo tha

127. Hadi ihyaa vaahaka nukiyabala….

128. Hu ,ithoo varan dhuvash konlaafa mi comment konlee .eakamu Abadhuves kiyan story .v v v v reethi mi part ves .thyhama best writer ever n ever i realy love it??????

129. Ahannakyves v madhun comment kura myheh. Mi conmenta ekuves eh adhadhu ginavaane. Ithoo myhun kiya ehchissah nuvisna. Vaahaka vvvv rythi. Dhigukoh genes dheythyves v loabivey.keep it ithoooo alhugadu mihury hama ithoo r eku

130. Kn yaana eh kaana eh tha??..adhi maa vefa athu vejje kuru kuru ethi kolheh laign yuan balaatho balan..yuan nulhe dhim nun ehn anhen kuhjaka dhimaalah balaakah?..ithooo yuan nurovvaba eha varah..hiyy dhathi vegen maru vedhaanu??..insha allah..v avaha dhn yuan aa dhim aa gulheyne??..ithoo thnxxxx alotxx…keep it up..???negative feedback ves libeyne ..think positive alwys…hiyy varaa eku masaikai kura kudhn ah abadhu ves kuri erun libeyny…j vaa myhun ves thibeyne..eki myhun ge hiyaal thafaathu vaane ..eyee dhuniye ge aadha ehnu dhw..thy hama fisaari kanbaleh??..im really proud of u..????

131. Mivaahaka aky aharen mi site in kiyamun ai emme rythi vaahaka ey abadhuves bunin. Ekam now hadi
     Ithoo ragalhu kuran jehey kanthah ragalhu kollanikoh kuriyaa evvarah adhives rythi vaane vaahaka eh meew

132. How r u ithoo, story varah reethi, keep up the good work ?

133. mi vaahaka hiey nuvey eygothakah ves kurin liyevifa oiy echaka gulhumeh oiy heneh. dhimra dhurah dhiyaee meehaku bunegen. ekam mihaaru hieh nuvey ekan handhaan huri heneh. e gothah dhuru vi iru ekaku anekaku blame eh nukureveyne right? maybe ur a learning writer. varah ves haasaru dhigu. and also imla kuh ves varah gina. ibaaraiy kurun ves varah rangalhu kuran jehey eba.

134. ithoooooooo…. dhn yuaan aa dhim gulhuvaba dhwww…. ehn noonee dhn mi story eh nukiyaanan… heheh… v v v reethi ingey mi part vx…

135. wow! chaaley ❣

136. Stry ehaa reehcheh noon mihaaru..Dhim n munaz..V foohi..Dhn dhim n yuaan gulhuvabala..

137. Kn irakun thr anh part

138. ajaibeh mee!! kaaku vaki gaboolu kuraany ithoo amihla yah cmnt kuraaney. ekamu thifadha ilzaameh myhehge boluga alhuvan heyo nuvaane miyoh roadha mahu!! mi story ehaa reethi vefa gina likes libifa support libeythee dhw thikahala cmnt thi kurany!! dhn anekka bune mivx ithoo ey!!ekamaku dhw!! ithoo don’t worry about it. go forward with the same effort. don’t be sad! ithoo liyaa hurihaa baehvx vv reethi n kuriyah oihthaa vv reethi vaane n there is no doubt about it.

139. vvvvvv reethi mivaahaka konduvahakun meege anehbai up kondheny vvvv kiyaahithun

140. Kaleyney mirey up ves nukollanytha???

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