އިންތިޒާރުގައި ހުރިން (ނިއު ޗެޕްޓަރ)

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1. If u havent read the previous part then u can go through my stories and read it but may b nukiyas somehow mi chapter ge therein kudakh e baithah genevifa huryma ingidhaane about their past life.. Mi chapter feshigen dhaany Suma and Maaxinge hisaabun…. 🙂 mi storyga main character akah ihnaany Yainaa and Yaain. You guys will know more later 😉 Ask me any questions if u want. And ya.. Story up kureveyne dhuvaheh adhi decide eh nukuran.. But very soon.. Good night tc 😉

   1. Varahh faahaga kohhleveyy thankolheh bunan tha?mi vahaka yahh idea nagaafa mi othy aisha ge story yakun right?eii e story ga vx ulheyne beybe dheke loabi vgn..jeena ulheny dhaanish dheke dheevaana vgn..heevany copy kuran ulheyhen..don’t mind ingey..hama buneli?

2. Ryn happy to see ur story. Kiyaa hithun inthizaaru ga eba hurin

3. Yaina and yaain??? Kuree chapter ga nuulhey baeh…?? Right
   Maazin n suma ge life genesdhehchey v happi koh…. Am waiting for tha storie…plz avahha up kuran fashahchey ryn….missed yuh
   Thanks altt ?

4. Thank u ryn..story v reethi waane henn heewany cant wait…pls awahah up kurah chey

5. Young maazin name change kohly dhw yaain ah. V interestin vaane henhyvey, waitin mi story ah

6. Alhey Ryn haadha dhuvaheh vejjey Ryn ge story ah wait kuraa thaa…plx kin irakun up vaanyy

7. glad to c ur new story…?☺ avahah up kuran fashahchey…..?

8. oh your back
   nice to see you?

9. Beautiful

10. Ohh..sumaagea dhari yaana .dhen suma gea dhontha gea dhari yaain dhw..v reethi vaanea .plx ryn avahan up kondhenchey…?☺

11. “Dhe foshi hifailaigen” egothakah noon liyaany dhefoshi hifaigen.dhivehi bahun ragalhah liyan dhas koh bala Ryn.

    1. ehkala Aisha……. pispispis… story nufashanis molhu meehaa aharun rulhi aruvan feshee……. rangalheh nuvaane…..

    2. Aisha vaahakaeh liyan vynu??thi varah molhiyyaa..?

    3. Myhak rangalh goiy bunyas goas mi vany.. liyuntheriyaa ah rangalh goiy kiya dyba dhn thibi myhun vx.. thi myhun thi edeny eyna ge kurierumah kamah vanyaa

    4. Ryn ge vaahakathah keema egeyne dhivehi bahun ragalhah liyan neygeykan dhivehi bahah kurafi aruvan thohcheh Ulheney.magey hithah araa Ryn ge dhivehi mudhahrisakey kaakubaaey.soodhube kairiah dhivehi Bas dhas kuran fonuvabala furathama.

    5. Mi chum handi menaa hedhi ey Ryn menah kuri erumeh nulibigenves miulheny……..abadhu Ryn bahattanee goani fulah laafa………..meehaku Ryn ge story ah faadeh kiyas emeehaka jassaalaane……..bala faadu keema dhw Ryn ah ekan rangalhu kuran ingeynyves………

    6. Desperately waiting for the last episode………………………………………….?????????????????????????????

    7. Desperately waiting for the last episode………………………………………….??????????????????????????????

    8. kalo lone star gandaa… mashah varihama goas than than rangalhu kuran kiyaa dhinas…. ekam thimeehun eyna aa vaahaka dhah kanee vrh rude koh…. ehen ve ma mihen kiyanee… ehves haalehga goani fulah laakah noon…. rude koh vaahaka dheh kumuge badhaluga than kolheh reethi koh rangalhu kuran jehey kanthah kiyaadhee, ekan thah rangalhukuran liyun theriyaa hih hamajehey gothah hihvaru laa dheynama gaimuves masheh thimeehun ge comment thakah reply eh nukuraanan…… and Ryn ur fans are waiting for ur story…

12. OMG……. finally.. ryn sissy ge story start kuranee…. m speehless…. hama huvaa… trailer kiyaafa ves soni vehttijje… best of luck sissy

13. Ibaraiy kuran das kuryma baraabaru vaane ryn ge stories..

14. Inthixaaruga hurin eii ryn ge emme salhi story…
    Ekam enme fahun nerun story ehr ehr eii nun..
    Hope mi story vx inthixaaruga hurinhrr habeyx vaane kamah..
    Loves<3<3<3

15. wow…. finally ur back again dhw…
    varah wait kohfin rynge new stry akah….
    trailer kiyaafa heevany stry varah salhi vaanehen…

16. Hithaama verikan inthihaa ah. Dhen esfiyaiga minoon ehcheh noannaane thoache. ?

17. Heevanee kuvveri loabeege copy eh hen…

    1. Dhw.. Rynves enme fahun shine copy kury dhw.. pix pix…

    2. Rynge story thah fbga hingany reethi v ma ehnuun.. konme dhuvahaku dheiru dhalhayah vaahaka kiyan libeythi.. Sifa kurun varah hadi rynge.

    3. Yeah kuhveri loabeege concept hama. Copy kurumaai nukurun ee emeehhge kameh. Ehen noonas esfiyaga copy kuraameehunge vaahaka maabodah hingaa.

18. Ryn…???
    Yuh are back…??
    I missed yuh a lot..
    Story reethi vaane hen heevey..
    Best if luck…?

19. Hini annanee. Vaahaka nuves kiyaa copy ekey kiyan feshi iru heevanee vaahaka ekkoh kiyaa nimaafa buneehen. Ryn buni kanneynge dho vaahaka othee nimen kairivefa ey kureege story ga. Dhen eyna dheke foohiviyas thee boduvaru , thaneh dhoreh nubalaa copy kuranee ey bunaairu thi buneveny kihaa bodu ehchehkan neyngeythee dherai.. Mii liyuntherin ge ethah dhuvahegga masaikai. Thimeehun eyna hunareh nethey bunyas vaahaka liyaa hihvaathee dho e liyefa up kuranee eyna ves dhuvas thakeh dho e heydhakuranee mikamaa. Nuves kiyaa hurefa copy ey bunaairu mii ves isnaanun kamah ingen dhaskobbala. Ryn ge hunaru hurey varah molhu. Kudhi kudhi kanthahthah improve kollan jeheyny mashakah nufene kaleymen thihaa thui vaan jeheyvaruga bodu massalaeh eyna ge vaahaka thakun. Kureege vaahaka thakun fenunas eyna mihaaru varah improve koffi. Mashah fennanee eyna ge vaahaka thah nukiya hurun. Aharemen kiyaafaanan.

    1. hini ayas rulhi ayas mi ee hama copy concept eh…

    2. Rangalhahvanya ryn ah hithu oi ehcheh commnt kuran nukereythi ehn namakun miyothy comment kohfa.. mashah 100% yageen ae rynkan.. adhi maa rangalhukoh eba othehnu id in commnt kohfa..

    3. my goodness!!!
       what is this???
       hurebala nikan thitanun maa copy ey copy ey kiyaa miyhun vaahaka eh liyaa dhuvahun dhahkaala dheynan kaakukan copy kuraniy!!!

20. Ryyyn ge new story eh yayyy! 😀 desperately waiting fr the next part!

21. Inthizaaruga hurin furathama baiga ulhey boy ah kiyanee MAAZIN.dhen mi storyga ulhey Yaain akee Maazin baa.?
    Varah inthizaaru kurevey mi story ah

22. Thankyou guys! And i just wanna say its not a copy and i started to write this chapter just when i finished “inthixaaruga hurin” eii vrh vrh kurin!!! Before shine uploaded that story.. And i dont really need to explain this tho.. But wanted to make “my readers” sure that I dont copy. It actually isnt nice for this story to b known as a “copied concept story” cx i have spent a lot of time and day with this. Its not that long but i worked hard with this one since i finished First chapter. Thankyou.!

    1. Shine ey nukuyaathi.. shine is the best.. sifa kurun rangalhu kuran beynumiyya shinege story kiyaaba.. sifa kurumaky kobaikan eyrun ingeyne.. dhen enma fahun kei nuvegen shinege story conceptves copy kury dhw ???

    2. Thihen viyya bunevidhane shine vx copy kuryyey..anyway im a big fan of shine..and ryn ge vx..hahahahah

    3. my goodness!!!
       you people are insane
       shine maamolhey shine ge vaahakaige copy ehkey!!!
       what is this???
       hurebala nikan thitanun maa copy ey copy ey kiyaa miyhun vaahaka eh liyaa dhuvahun dhahkaala dheynan kaakukan copy kuraniy!!!

    4. mi kudhin copy copy kiyaa iru neyge aslu copy paste kuraa myhun. myyge kurin ”blue sea” ge namuga up kuri vaahaka akyy ves myge 3aharu kurin kulhuduffushi onlin ah up kohfa inn vaahakaeh..copy paste kohfa ekam ehhves myyhaku nubuney eii copy ekey.. ryn hama story eh liyaa irah huthurey noony copy ekey kiyaane..ehn viiyyaa ekaku vaahaka liyunythy dhn thibi emmen vaahaka nuliyan vyynun e ves vaany copy kury kamah dhww.. thi beyflhunah noannaane rangalhu gotheh.. abadhuves writters ah ethi govaany. writters vaahaka liyaa kuraa bura massakatheh nufennaane.

    5. Kaimen Knmehen ryn aa behen jehey tha?? Copy copy copy!!! Dhen maa shine ve ganegen.. Ma haadha nattayey.. Mashah hyvany Kaimen thi thiby guraidhoo ah fonuvalan vefa hen..

23. baby maaxin akee yaain thrrr

24. Yayyy At last I’ve been waiting for this since you told us about it ?♥♥

25. Yaayyy… Hope to read soon??? Gud luck???

26. rryn kithah part tha innany story ga

27. Heiii mishkaa e story ga ulheyny joona eh jeena eh noon..:p
    Btw varah salhi trailer vs..m waitin

28. mi story ga girl ge namaai boy ge nan ehgoi v ma kiyaalan feshumun ves undhagu vehjje. n. dhonbe mee thin lafz ge baheh noon. e ee thin akuru ge eh lafz. ryn mikahala kanthakah visnaa…. vahaka eh liyunas kamaku nudhaane. eyga hunnaane dhw balan jehey kithanme kameh. ryn ge mifaharu vahakaiga kury vahaka aai balaafa improvements thah aissa hunnaane kamah ummeedhu kurany

29. hey pretty…. hws u? donni y but m missing u so badly today…. have lots to share wid u…. bt i couldnt login to esfiya chat. sumone plx tell me hw to join d chat room. pretty reply me soon ingey girl? nd yea jxt ignore all d negative commnts nd delete negative people as well. YOU PEOPLE GO TO D HELL INGEY WID UR NEGATIVE COMMENTS. seriously i feel like kill u all togethr…. stay away frm my girl. pretty plx do no worry about those people. jxt move on wid ur talent. hardly waiting 4 ur reply… 🙂 keep smiling always.

    1. Jai… i was just missing u today.. I swear… and its actually midnight and start of a new day so i have to say i missed u yesterday more than the other days for no reason. Ehn dhuvas dhuvahu vx veyey ingey 😛 And i really check libeythw jai ge comment eh.. Annnnd tonight im lucky.. Been days dhw? And esfiya Chatroom ah now nuvadheve. Admin told update eh khlaashey but eyge fahun neynge. And thankyou cx of this comment i just got my confidence back… And Thankyou once again.. No words cx u made me cry with it.. And u made me laugh too. Arg miss u and i have loads to share too… like loads and loads. Hope u will see this *fingers crossed* and miss vey. 🙂

30. Thankyou guys.. And hopefully will up mi feshey week ga tc 😉

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