ހުރީ ވެވިފާ ބާކީ… (ނުވަވަނަ ބައި)

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1. salhi

2. Oh no!!! Dhen vaanee kihineh??????
   Shaxlyn. Plz next part avaskollaathi. Cant wait…..

3. Mihaaru onnaane ikaan bust vefa ?
   Anyways v salhi story ?

4. Akinge xoxo akee xivee eh noon dhw
   …

5. Ikaan dhw.. meega Baaky mivany thaaraaennu .. cheee .. Manama ikaam hetakah bawaalaanan .. huri nubaikan .. ma enme nahtany ekakun nufudhigen ulhey ekahala firihehun dheke.. mimeehunnah reethi veema e nimuny hurihaakameh ves ..huh.????

6. wow nice kiya kiya hutta nimejje dhen maa kuree ingey egey kuruvee kivve kan ves ekamaku dhen faharakun thankolheh dhigu kohlachey varah salhi habeys…

7. Story reethi ebavey… XO akee jinni eh tha? XO miharu sifa vee mansha story ga azeem aa alhaigaiy jinni gothah…

8. Subhaan allaah bast vanee kanneynge, mioh v gotheh dhw, v reethi ma sha allaah.

9. Mi ikaan gandah vegen e ulhenyy keehtha…
   Vvvvvvvv salhi mi story..
   Can’t wait…
   Avahah up kohlahcheyy…
   Plx plx…

10. kaley v ehnu erotic vaahaka eh liyan. anehkaa maana ingey tha erotic ge. hurey mi bunedheny neygenyaa “of, relating to, or tending to arouse sexual desire or excitement.” ehkahala vaahaka kiyaane varah ginna myhun vaane. kaley varah molhuvaane ehkahala vaahaka liyan. hyvey varah experience hurihen. kaley alhe liyedheyn v ehnu ehkahala vaahaka eh masha. adhives thankolhe bodah sex baitha detail kohdhinyaamun v salhi vaane.

    1. hahahaha

    2. thi dhen bodu varu dhw j viyas. shaz maa molha vaahaka liyaathy dhw thiulheny j vegen. konme echekiyas shaz vareh nuvaane ehves writer eh.

    3. yeah yeah i totally agree with u @nunnu, eyna vareh nuvaane ehves writer eh. eynahaa vahushy koh vaahaka liyan ingey writer eh nuhunaane. eh level ah ehves writer ahakah nudheveyne. She is the one&only keke

    4. Hahaha writer birugannavantha thiulhenee… Noonee mi vaahaka kiyaigen meenayah asareh kuree thoacheh… Mee real life ga beh meehunnah dhimaavaa kankan… Im happy the writer has the guts to write it this way… I dont find it porn… Ikaan ah basekoffa iniyyaa ikaan ulhey giy liyaa iru mikahala feel eh theenayah vanee thoacheh… Prostitute anhen kudhinge vaahakaves hurey ei massalaakah nuvey dhw

    5. yeah yeah i know. ehkam mihaa detail eh nuney eh story thakeh. adhi nukiyan mihaa detail dhivehi sex story eh. writer birugane dhaane thytha kaley anonymous ge namuga comment thi kurany. anonymous ge namuga thi comment kuraa myhaa ah neygeny mi vaahaka kiyaafa masha assaru kuraavaru.

    6. Anonymous a haadha vare thivee. i think pornstar touched your heart or somewhere else. Difficult to digest the truth. LOL 😀

    7. anonymous namuga shazulynu dhw thi comment kurany keke

    8. yeah yeah jailam bro masha ves hyvany anonymous ge konmes thaaku ailevijje kanneyge ehen nunama dhn koh asereh eh kurany eheh

    9. pornstarr haadha vareh thi vany kanbulo mi vaahaka kiyaafa.. ehenve ey bunany shaxlyn feelings describe kuraale molhy eyy.. pornstar ah hama hageegathuga ves goi vehjje.. goodjob writer

    10. yeah yeah @mysterious writer ah molha bunedheveyny ves writer ah experience kurevifa huri feeling thakenu. ehenve ey mi bunanany v experienced writer ehkey. mysterious ah ves thi bunevuny hama aharen buni vaahaka ehnu.

11. Writer ah boy ehgge feelings kiyaidheyn e ingenee cox shes a boy dhw…. Thi bunaa ehchakun varah hini aadhey…. Kommehen nujehey writer feel kuraa scene eh kiyaidheykah… Hehehe…. Growup pornstar

    1. Anonymous aadheyba ma grow up kohdheyn thivaru vanyaa. writer kuran jehey kanthaa kuran nujehey kantha enme bodah ingeny anonymous ah tha.. hyvany writer amilla ah kohfa hunna comment ehen.

    2. Pornstar ah maa bodah getuvany thoache… Mashaky writer eh… Ekamu shaz eh noon ahahnaky… i knw alot abt writing…. Ehenve pornstar buni ehchaka aharn comment kuree… Pornstar ah kihaavaraka vaahaka kiyunbaaaaa.Then ok thaa. I knw ur a big fan of shaz kan mihaar. Iru irukolhun comments thah kiyaafa replyves dhey viyyaa.Thihaakah varah vaahakaeh kamudhaanee. I frankly love this story. Shaz dont think abt this negative comments. Story hama habbu

    3. #PornStar when did you said that This story writer is a boy. It seems only boys have sex & horny feelings, girls don’t have them. I think thats what Anonymous is trying to say. I’m really enjoying this man.

    4. Zeyn… Aharn buni echchakee pornstar buni writer vahushy veemaey mikahala gothah liyan ingeynee writer experience koffa hunna kankamey liyeveynee. So boy ehgge ihusaas girl writer akah nuliyeveyney dhw ebunanee. Girl akah e feel eh nuvaanethaa. I was saying that pornstar buni ehchakah radhdhu dhyfa. Ok bro

    5. Shazleen ah miathuren rangalha vaahaka liyan ingeyne dhn miyothy kon hadi eh haavaafa. Ahanna hyvaa gothuga mi vaahaka kiyaa ginna myhunnaky 18 aharun mathyge myhunhen. Vaahakaige cover ga 18+ jehumun eh vaahaka akee bodethi meehunge vaahaka ehkan engeyne. ehenviyas eyge maana akee hurihaa kame detail kurumeh noon. fenvaru rangalhu liyun therin konmehen nujeheyne maabodu detail eh readers ah dheykah. Readers amihlla ah writer bunedhen ulhey ehche sifa kuraane. Konmehen “mihaaru buraage vaagandu nataalaifiye, hury oriyaamaa ey” mikahala sentence tha beynun nukuriyas. Ahanna fenna gothuga mee writer visnaalan jehey point eh.

    6. Hahahaha
       @yushfa
       I havent seen such sentence. Too fantasy high ppl.
       Lol hama heveneee.
       Porn akaa gaathahves nuliyevey. Ekamu porn eko.

    7. vara masaikaiy eba kurey writer dhifaau kuruma. Writer amilla ah kuraa comment viyaa

    8. lol a nukiyeneenu shaz ge vaahaka ehenveema. I saw some sentences like that from ziban story. But Its my favourite story.

12. Mi vaahaka varah down vaa vahtharakah dhiya But i can see an interest now. Vaahaka ah thi genai twist varah kamudhey. Ikaan bust vaan dhw e ulhenee. N previous comments kiyaafa hevenee. Pornstar i think u havent read 18+ stories. Thee kudakujjehdhw

13. V reethi

14. ??? v nice… Avahah next part …. Plsssssssssss…….. Love this story ???

15. adhives mi vaahaka reeche noon 🙁

16. Hahahaha. Mathee coments kiyaafa h heveneeeeeeeel. Hahahaha kekekeke hahahahaha guys u dont have anything else todo ????

    1. do you have anything else to do other than reading others comment and laughing gutt dude

    2. lol shazlyn

    3. Hahaha mashahves heveneeee

    4. This story is too boring. but the comments are so hillarious this keeps me up at this hour. and its getting better & better… :’) :’)

    5. Midnight thibuny thedhe hyvany myhunge samaalukan hoadhan ulheyhen ehthedhe gattu ayya thyna ithurukameh nethytha comment tha kiyaafa ehen myhunaa dhimaalah kameh nethigen hey thiulheny thi kiyany 😛

    6. hahaha gutt ayya and gutt ammadey 　　　

    7. foohi vaahaka eh

17. mee shazlyn amilla ah fans hodhan vegen kuraa kameh henn heevey. publicity stunt eh jahsanee kanneyge. Writers in kuraakameh mee.
    amilla ah negative comment kuranee eyrun readers ge sympathy hodhan vegen.

18. Another joke Hahaha

19. Fakkaaaaaaaaa

20. Kamudhaa vaahaka eh nun mi

21. Haadha vareh aruvaalaafa miothy. Migothah manshaa vaahakayah ves comments ai.ekamu mi meehun mi vaahaka nimendhen kiyaane. Kmme bayakah comment kuraane. Well in my opinion this story is good. Good luck shaz. N ikan is really bad ey dhw. I like it. ?

22. Comments thah hama habeys……hahahahahahahaha???????????

23. OMG!!! haadha vareh aruvaafa miyothy. ehbunaahen mi story ves myge kurin nerunu story ves thankolhe over detail ey buneveyny. not nice

24. Kommeves kameh v manu shaz lyn ge hurihaa vaahaka ehga ves 18+ jahaafa e hunnanee….lol

    1. 18+ vejjeya ehaa detail koh nugeneyas understand vaane dhw kiyaa myhaa ah. mithaa ehba ulhey 18+ eh koachekan neygey myhun like pinker.

    2. I don’t think even the author of this story understand the meaning of 18+

25. ahaan miyothy konfadha roalhi eh araafa. kobaa shazlyn? mi story liyaa writer ehves echekey mikama nubunany kyveyo. shazlyn ge faraathun ehen liyuntherintha anonymous ge namuga talk kurany i mean mithaa zuwaab eh kurany i mean radhu dheny myhun kiyaa echessa.. this is fun early morning this made my day #pornstar lol 😛 😀

26. THIS IS NOT A NICE STORY << MY OPINION
    IF ANYONE HAVE ANY PROBLEM WITH MY OPINION, PLS FEEL FREE TO F*** OFF
    URS D 🙂

27. this story rocks.. if u have any problem… then go to hell…I dont care who it is

    1. Stiry hadi yas narakayah dhaakah nujehey

28. problem is not story but . maybe he / she is jealous with writer

    Right D for dugger???????

29. boring and disgusting
    vaanuvaa ves neyngey Firihenaku goi neyney anhenaka hinga najaaiz gulhumeh. anekka jinniehtha e anhenaa aky?
    adhives eynage life ga dhe anhenun ithurah eba thibi.
    bed ah vaki meehaku,laari aa hedhi mery kuree. loabivanee ehen meehaku dheke. disgusting firi henun ulhey ekamu mee than kolheh boduvaru
    And writer hero akah eyna hadhaafa glorifying that disgusting man
    you should have a standard set for your main character.
    writing a little bit of erotic will do.

    1. hahah .. mashah dheraee kae mivaahaka keema.. dhen ves upkohfiyaa kiyaane ..koahchekey kaey men kiyaakahtha ..mee vaahaka ekey thihaa varu thi aranyky

30. Pornstar kae dhaanveenu porn film kulhen!!kae ah haadha varekey dhw thivee..kae ah mi fenwarah vaahaka nuliyeveynethee kae j vany e’ee vaagothaky. mee kaakutha konmehen fupan..kaey sizuga hurey.. kae ey hih vare hureeya mi cmntah repli dheebala..???

31. THIS IS A NICE STORY IF ANYONE I MEAN EVERYONE HAVE NO PROBLEM THEN F**** WITH DAMN D

32. Pornstar go to hell

    1. Pornstar naraka ah dhiyaima Anonymous dealer suvaruge vadhevenee tha

33. Pornstar kae birun fileeetha…. Hahhaha .. Kae ah thinoon vareh vaanetha.. kaey Sizuga hurey .. Noony ma kaey sixah kandaalafaanan??? Lol

    1. kae varuge cheap golayakuge mithaa ney. hithun vara majaa. varah gahdaavefa. Manje ge visnumuge koshikan engenee thivah thara commentu kureema. hama bunelee

    2. Ahentha..Kaley haadha molhey madhah judge kuran..kae ingeytha kaey thee kihaa cheap meehehkan..Thee namegga gutt ammadey tha..noony hama hageegathugaves kaey gutt tha hama…hieh nuvey ekam thee gutt golaeh heneh..lol???

34. haadhahaa naathahuzeebee kulavarekey thi dhakanee Manje eh kamaku. Writer ah hama hajamu nuvee. Hurihaa comment eh kiyaalumun faahaga vee ehen. V reeche bunun Majubooru baa Story eh kamaku.

    1. dhen kaley men thidhahkkany varah thahuzeebu kulavarehtha.. puh .. ma ehcheh bunyma thiyaa anga kofany.. nooney kaleyah hajamu nuvee.. mashah dheraee kaleymen story varuaruvaafa kiyaathee

35. My God!!! kihine mi vany. Shaxlyn koba? Writer mikamaa alhaanulanee keeve baa. Noony writer vez hury hama ekani story reechey bunaa kudhinnaa eku tha? thats sad 🙁 I read regularly but adhi ehaa reeche noon. unmeedhu kurany dhen huri part tha interesting vaane kamah.

36. Cmon guys, this is just a story. Ehen noonas writer e liyany baeh meehunnah dhimaavaa kamehge vaahaka dho. Mithaa eba huri kanneynge boys kudhin comment kohfa hadi ehchis kiyaafa. Thihen comment kuranya writers in kihaa foohi vaane. Self confidence gehley kanhala comment thikurany ves. Hiy hama nujehenya ehn buneveyne reethikoh comment kohfa ves. Ekam mithaa baeh meehunge comment thah varah hadi koh huree. Please don’t do that.

37. Zumraaaaa dhw

38. mulhi esfiya ga vez noolhey mi writer noony negative comment hajam nuvaa writer eh. Ekan miadhu saabithu vejje. writer aah ehkolha vaahaka dhakaafa thibi meehunge basmagu huri goi vez fenijje. Story eh vejjeyaa negative vez positive vez comment libeyne. Negative comment eh dhey konme meehakaa dhimaa ah araigannaaka adhi nuve. But mi thanun fennanee eyge opposite. Writer vez ekan huttuvaakah noolhe. As if this what she want. Esfiyaige ehen writers in namoonaa ah balan writer gaathun edhen.

39. Shazlyn vareh neh.
    dhen la la laaaaaaa..
    Bibibeeeee tototooooooo..
    puh.
    hama jay vaniii mi negative comments liyaaa meehun. LOL .

40. XO akee kaakukan next part ga ingeyne nama. story ehaa drag nukurachey. Asluves mi Ican is too much.

41. Reethi….
    Bloody hell izan nulafa…
    I hate him…
    Thara will be sad… If she find out…

42. Vvvvvvvvvvvvv hadi

43. Story v v reethi. Heekuran avahah update kuraane kamah

44. rangalhu badhalakaa eku story kiyaalan libeyne kama heekuran

45. Vaahaka varah kamudhey. Keep it up

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