“ބުނަންވީތަ؟ އެވާހަކަ އަހާނެހާ ހިތްވަރު ނިމްގެ ހުންނާނެތަ؟” ކަޔާން އެއްސެވެ. ނިމްރާ ހިންދިރުވާލާފައި ބޯޖަހާލިއެވެ. އެވަގުތު ކަޔާން ކޮއްލިކަމަކުން ނިމްރާގެ ހިތް ތެޅިގަތީ އެޔެއް މިޔެއް ބަލާފައެއްނޫނެވެ.
“ކަޔާން މޮޔަވީތަ؟” ކަޔާން މޭގައި އަޅާ ކޮއްޕާލަމުން ނިމްރާ އެހީ ރުޅިވެރި ކަމާއި އެކުއެވެ. ނަމަވެސް ރައްދުގައި ކަޔާން ހަމަ އެކަނި ހީލީއެވެ.
“ކަޔާންއަށް މަޖާތަވީ؟ ވައި ދި ހެލް ޑިޑް ޔޫ ކިސް މީ؟ އައިމް އޮންލީ އަވާރްސް އަވޭ ފްރޮމް މައި ވެޑިންގ ހައު ޑެއަރ ޔޫ!!!!” ކަޔާންގެ މޭގައި ތަޅައިގަންނަމުން ބުނި ހިނދު ނިމްރާގެ ދެލޮލުން ކަރުނަ އޮއްސައިތެވެ.
“އަހަރެން އެހިންދޯ އެއީ ކޮން ކަމެއްކަން އަހާނެ ހިތްވަރު ހުންނާނެހޭ؟ ނިމް ބުނީ-”
“ޝަޓް ދި ހެލް އަޕް! އަހަރެން ބޭނުމެއްނޫން ކަޔާންގެ ތި ޝިޓީ ވާހަކަތައް އަހާކައް. ބާއި!” ކަޔާންގެ ވާހަކަ ހުއްޓުވާފައި ނިމްރާ ނުކުތެވެ. ކަޔާން ހިނިތުންވެލިއެވެ. ނަމަވެސް އެއީ ވޭނާއި ހިތާމައިން ފުރިފައިވީ ހިނތުންވުމެކެވެ. ކަޔާންގެ ކުޑަ ދެލޮލުން ފެންނަމުން ދިޔައީ ވޭނާއި ހިތާމައެވެ. “ބަޓް އައި ލަވް ޔޫ……..” ކުރަކިވެފައިވީ އަޑުން ކަޔާން ބުނެލިއެވެ.
ސިކުންތުތައް މިނެޓުތަކައް ވަމުން، މިނެޓުތައް ގަޑިއިރައް ވަމުން ނިމްރާއާއި އާކިންގެ ކައިވެނީގެ ވަގުތުގެ ޖެހުނެވެ. ހުދުކުލުގައިގެ ބޮޑު ވެޑިންގ ޑްރެސްގައި އިން ނިމްރާގެ ދޮން މޫނު، އަޅާފައިވީ ހުދު ކުލައިގެ ޝޯލް އިންފެންނަމުން ދިޔައީ ފުރިހަމަ ހަނދެއް ހެންނެވެ. އަތުގެ އިނގިލިތަކާއި ކުޅެން އިން އިރު އޭނާގެ ހިތް ދިޔައީ ބާރުބާރައް ތެޅެމުންނެވެ. ނިމްރާ ރީތި ކުރަން ތިބި ކުދިން ދުރައް ޖެހުމުން އިސްއުފުލާ އޭނާ ލޯގަނޑުން މޫނާއި ދިމާލައް ބަލައިލިއެވެ.
އެވަގުތު އޭނާގެ ދެލޯ ކުރިމަތިން ސިފަވެގެން ދިޔައީ އިއްޔެގެ އެހާދިސާއެވެ. ލަސްލަހުން އަތް ހިއްލާލަމުން އޭނާ ތުންފަތުގައި އަތް ޖައްސާލިއެވެ. “އޯހ ކަޔާން.. ހައު ޑެއާރ ޔޫ..!” ތިރީ ތުންފަތުގައި ދަތް އަޅާލަމުން ނިމްރާ ލަސް ލަހުން ބުނެލިއެވެ.
“ދަރިފުޅާ…” ފަހަތުން އިވުނީ ރަމްލާގެ އަޑެވެ. ރަތް ކުލައިގެ އަބާޔާއަކާއި އެކު ހަމަ އެކުލައިގެ ބޮޑު ބުރުގަލެއް އަޅާފައި ހުރި ރަމްލާ ފެނި ނިމްރާއަށް ހިނިތުންވެވުނެވެ. ބޮޑު ވެޑިންގ ޑްރެސްގައި ހިފާ ކޮޅައް ތެދުވެ ދެއަތް ފުޅާކޮއްލިއެވެ. ރަމްލާ ކަރުނަވީ ލޮލާއި އެކު ގޮސް ނިމްރާގެ ހަށިގަނޑުގައި ބައްދާލިއެވެ.
“މަގޭ ދަރިފުޅު. މާޝާ ﷲ މިއަދު ހާދަ ރީއްޗޭ…” ރަމްލާ ބުނެލިއެވެ. ނިމްރާގެ ހަށިގަނޑާ ރަމްލާ ގާތް ކޮއްލަމުން ނިމްރާ ހީލިއެވެ.
ހިނދުކޮޅެއް ފަހުން ކައިވެނީގެ މަޖިލީސް ފެށުނެވެ. ގާޒީ ދައްކަމުން ދިޔަ ވާހަކަ ނޫން އެހެން ވާހަކައެއް ނީވޭ އިރުވެސް އެވާހަކަތައް ނިމްރާއަށް އިވޭހެނެއް ހިޔެއްނުވެއެވެ. އެޔައްވުރެއް އޭނާގެ ހިތުގެ ތެޅުމުގެ އަޑު ބާރެއެވެ.
“އަނބިގަބޫލު ކޮއްފިން” އާކިން ބުނެލިއެވެ. އާކިންގެ އެއަޑާއި އެކު ނިމްރާއަށް ހަމަ ބިމައް އާދެވުނެެވެ. ވަގުތު ޖެހުނީއެވެ. މިވަގުތުން ފެށިގެން އެއީ ދެން އާކިންގެ އަނބިމީހާއެވެ. ނިމްރާއަށް ހިންދުރުވާލެވުނެވެ.
ޕާޓީ ފެށިގެން ގޮސް ފަހަރަކު މީހަކު އަހިސް އެޖޯޑައް ސަލާމްކޮއް މަރްހަބާ ކިޔަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. ހިނިތުންވެލަައިގެން ހުރި ނަމަވެސް ކޮންމެވެސް ސަބަބަކާއި ހުރެ ނިމްރާއަށް ދިޔައީ އުނދަގޫ ވަމުންނެވެ.
ފަހަރަކު މީހަކު އަންނަމުން ގޮސް އެމީހުންގެ ތެރެއިން ވަދެގެން އައި ކަޔާން ފެނި ނިމްރާއަށް ދެލޯ ބޮޑު ކޮއްލެވުނެވެ. “ކަޔާން..؟” މަޑުމަޑުން ނިމްރާއަށް ބުނެވުނެވެ.
“ހެއި.. މަރްހަބާ ދެކުދިން…” ކަޔާން އަހިސް ބުނެލިއެވެ. ހީލާފައި އާކިން ސަލާމް ކޮއްލި ނަމަވެސް ނިމްރާއަށް ގާވެފައި ހުރެވުނީއެވެ. ކަޔާންގެ ދެލޮލުގައި އޭރުވެސް ކަރުނަ ބަބުޅަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. އެދެލޮލުގައި އެވީވޭން އާކިންއަށް ނުފެނުނަސް ނިމްރާއަށް އެބަފެނެއެވެ. “ސޯ ހީ ކިސްޑް މީ ކޮޒް ހީ ލަވްޑް މީ؟ ވޯޒް ދެޓް އަ ގުޑްބާއި؟” ހިތާހިތުން ނިމްރާއަށް ބުނެވުނެވެ.
ކަޔާންގެ ނަޒަރު ދެން ހުއްޓުނީ ނިމްރާއާއި ދިމާލަށެވެ. “ހެއި. ކޮންގްރާޓްސް..” ނިމްރާއަތައް އޭނާ އަތުގައި އޮތް ޕާރުސަލް ދިއްކޮއްލަމުން އޭނާ ބުނެލިއެވެ. “ތޭންކްސް..” ނިމްރާ ބުނެލިއެވެ. އެވަގުތު އެދެލޮލުގައި ކަރުނައިގެ ކޯރެއް އުފެދުނު ފަދައެވެ. ވޭނުން ފުރިގެންވާ ނަޒަރަކުން ނިމްރާއާއި ދިމާލައް ބަލާލާފައި އޭނާ ހިނގައި ގަތެވެ.
ނިމްރާ ބޭނުންވީ ކަޔާން ފަހަތުން ދާށެވެ. ނަމަވެސް……
ކައިވެނީގެ ހަފްލާ ނިމިގެން ގެއަށް ދެވުނު އިރު 30 12 ވެއްޖެއެވެ. ބޮލައް ބަރުވެފައި ހުރުމުން ނިމްރާ ގޮސް އެނދުގައި އިށީނެވެ. ނިމްރާގެ ފަހަތުން ވައިން އާކިންވެސް ގޮސް ނިމްރާ ގާތުގައި އިށީނެވެ.
“ހެއި. އަހަރެން ބޭނުން ވާހަކައެއް ބުނެލަން..” އާކިން ބުނެލިއެވެ. ނަމަވެސް މާބޮޑަައް ވިސްނުމުގެ ސަބަބުން ބޮލުގައި ރިއްސައިގަނެފައި ހުރުމުން އާކިން ވާހަކަ ދައްކަން ފެށުމުން ނިމްރާ ގާތައް އައީ ފާޑެއްގެ ރުޅިގަނޑެކެވެ.
“ދެން މިރެއަކު ނޫނެއްނުންދޯ؟ މާދަމާ. ވަރަށް ވަރުބަލި ނިދާލަން ބޭނުމީ” އާކިން ބުނާނެ އެއްޗަކައް ބަލާވެސް ނުލާ ނިމްރާ ގޮސް ފާހާނާއަށް ވަދެ ދޮރު ޖެހިއެވެ.
އެނދުމަތީގައި އޮތް އަލަކާ ދެލޮލުގައި އެހެން ރޭރެޔެކޭ އެއްފަދައިން މިރޭވެސް ވަނީ ކަރުނައިގެ ކޯރެކެވެ. އަރިއަކައް އޮށޯވެލައިގެން އޮތް އިރު ރޮއެ ރޮއެ އެދެލޯ ވަނީ ދުޅަވެފައެވެ. ނަމަވެސް އެމަންޒަރު ދެކޭނީ ކާކު ހެއްޔެވެ؟ ކަރުނަ ފުހެދޭނީ ކާކު ހެއްޔެވެ؟ ދެލޮލުން ކަރުނަ ފުހެލާފައި އަލަކާ ތެދުވީ ބަނޑުހައިވެގެން ހާންތިވާން އުޅޭހެން ހީވުމުންނެވެ. ނަމަވެސް ތެދުވުމާއި އެކު ބަނޑައްވީ ގޮތުން އަލަކާއަށް އަލުން އިށީންދެވުނެވެ.
އިސްޖަހާލަމުން އަލަކާ ބަނޑާ ދިމާލައް ބަލައިލިއެވެ. އެވަގުތު އަލަކާގެ ބަނޑުގައިވީ ކުޑަދަރިފުޅުގެ ހިލަމެއް އަނެއްކާވެސް ވެލިއެވެ. އަލަކާގެ ދެލޮލުގައި ކަރުނަ ވިދާލިއެވެ. ނަމަވެސް މިފަހަރުއެއީ އުފާވެރިކަމުގެ ކަރުނައެވެ. މަންމަގެ ވޭން ދަރިފުޅައް އިހުސާސްވީތާއެވެ. އަލަކާ އަވަސްވެގަތީ އެމަންޒަރު ވީޑިއޯ ކުރުމަށެވެ. ލައިގެން އިން ޓީޝާޓު މަތިންވެސް އެކުއްޖާ ތޮޅެމުން ދިޔަ މަންޒަރު ދިޔައީ ވަރަށް ރީއްޗައް ފެންނަމުންނެވެ. ތަފާތު ގޮތް ގޮތައް ވީޑިއޯ ނަގާފައި ލުބާންއަށް އަލަކާ ފޮނުވިއެވެ.
ކުރެވުނު އައު އިހުސާސްއާއި އެކު އަލަކާ ކޮޓަރިން ނުކުތީ ހިތްހަމަ ޖެހުމުގެ ހިނިތުންވުމަކާއި އެކުއެވެ. ނަމަވެސް ސިޓިންގ ރޫމްއިން ފެނިގެން ދިޔަ މަންޒަރުން އަލަކާ ރޮއެގައިން އަޑައް ގޭކައިރީ ހިސާބުތަކުގައި ތިބި މީހުންވެސް އެގޭދޮށައް އެއްވާން ފެށިއެވެ.
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މިވާހަކައިގެ ދެންއޮތް އެޕިސޯޑުގެ ލިންކު ކޮމެންޓް ސެކްޝަންގެ ތިރީގައި ވާނެއެވެ.
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Varah furihama Maashaa Allah!!
Mi part kiyaafa I almost cried 😭
Kiyaan ah e vee haadha dhera gothekey!!!
N alaka, what did she see??
I’m so curious
When next?
Lysssssm💗💗💗
alhe shiherrr mhr haadha laheyyy up vaale
but vrh reethi ingey when next part
cant wait hama
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Shihama’s story was an absolute masterpiece, overflowing with depth, emotion, and a captivating sense of wonder. From the very beginning, her words painted a vivid and immersive world that felt as real as it was magical. The way she crafted her descriptions was nothing short of breathtaking—every detail, no matter how small, was carefully placed to draw the reader deeper into the heart of the narrative. Her ability to bring settings to life made each scene feel like stepping into another universe, where every sight, sound, and feeling was tangible. But it wasn’t just the world-building that made Shihama’s story exceptional—it was the characters who truly brought it to life. Each character was beautifully developed, with distinct personalities, strengths, and vulnerabilities that made them feel like real people rather than just figures on a page. Their relationships with one another felt authentic and dynamic, evolving naturally over the course of the story in ways that were both heartwarming and, at times, heartbreaking. Shihama had a remarkable talent for weaving emotional depth into every interaction, whether it was a quiet moment of introspection or a powerful, life-altering revelation. What made her storytelling even more compelling was how she intertwined themes of love, courage, and identity with such subtlety and care. These themes never felt forced but instead flowed organically through the characters’ journeys, making their triumphs feel earned and their struggles deeply relatable. The plot itself was a perfect balance of mystery, action, and emotional exploration. Just when you thought you had everything figured out, Shihama would introduce a twist that shifted your entire perspective, keeping you hooked until the very last page. Yet, despite the surprises, everything felt deliberate and cohesive—each piece of the puzzle fit together seamlessly, revealing a narrative that was as intricate as it was satisfying. What stood out most was the heart Shihama poured into her storytelling. It was evident in the way she gave even the smallest moments meaning, allowing readers to feel the weight of every decision and the beauty of every fleeting joy. Her writing was poetic without being overwhelming, striking a perfect balance between lyrical prose and raw, honest emotion. And as the story reached its conclusion, it left a profound sense of both closure and possibility—like the end of one journey was just the beginning of another. Shihama’s ability to touch the heart while engaging the imagination was a rare gift, and her story was not just something to be read, but something to be felt and experienced. It lingered in the mind long after the final words, a testament to the power of her storytelling and the care she poured into every page. Without a doubt, Shihama’s story wasn’t just good—it was unforgettable.
Bro This is definitely nomme!!
Like seriously???
Stop the cap
Dude!??
Now these stupid ppl are blaming me for the things I’ve never done!!
N these weirdos doesn’t even know that anybody can write anything on other ppl names!
Ppl who’s heads are full of rocks 🙄
Here’s the paragraph:
Shihama’s story was an absolute masterpiece, overflowing with depth, emotion, and a captivating sense of wonder. From the very beginning, her words painted a vivid and immersive world that felt as real as it was magical. The way she crafted her descriptions was nothing short of breathtaking—every detail, no matter how small, was carefully placed to draw the reader deeper into the heart of the narrative. Her ability to bring settings to life made each scene feel like stepping into another universe, where every sight, sound, and feeling was tangible. But it wasn’t just the world-building that made Shihama’s story exceptional—it was the characters who truly brought it to life. Each character was beautifully developed, with distinct personalities, strengths, and vulnerabilities that made them feel like real people rather than just figures on a page. Their relationships with one another felt authentic and dynamic, evolving naturally over the course of the story in ways that were both heartwarming and, at times, heartbreaking. Shihama had a remarkable talent for weaving emotional depth into every interaction, whether it was a quiet moment of introspection or a powerful, life-altering revelation. What made her storytelling even more compelling was how she intertwined themes of love, courage, and identity with such subtlety and care. These themes never felt forced but instead flowed organically through the characters’ journeys, making their triumphs feel earned and their struggles deeply relatable. The plot itself was a perfect balance of mystery, action, and emotional exploration. Just when you thought you had everything figured out, Shihama would introduce a twist that shifted your entire perspective, keeping you hooked until the very last page. Yet, despite the surprises, everything felt deliberate and cohesive—each piece of the puzzle fit together seamlessly, revealing a narrative that was as intricate as it was satisfying. What stood out most was the heart Shihama poured into her storytelling. It was evident in the way she gave even the smallest moments meaning, allowing readers to feel the weight of every decision and the beauty of every fleeting joy. Her writing was poetic without being overwhelming, striking a perfect balance between lyrical prose and raw, honest emotion. And as the story reached its conclusion, it left a profound sense of both closure and possibility—like the end of one journey was just the beginning of another. Shihama’s ability to touch the heart while engaging the imagination was a rare gift, and her story was not just something to be read, but something to be felt and experienced. It lingered in the mind long after the final words, a testament to the power of her storytelling and the care she poured into every page. Without a doubt, Shihama’s story wasn’t just good—it was unforgettable.
Brw cutie girl aa your fav bab thee ekaku tha?
Vhk v reethi maashallah
Masha Allah mi part vx vrh reethi
When’s next part??
Curiously waiting for the next part
mi part ves v reethi masha allah
curiously waiting for next part
keep it up
nim and aakin dhuru nukurachey
lubaa and zeviar ves
alakaa and lubaan ves
they all are made for each other
mi part kiyaafa rovijje
i appreciate your hard work
haadha curious kohlaafa thi nihmaaly
tc
ly shihaa
Your fav bab you’re not all that for posting Ai paragraphs stop please. You’re not funny
true ive seen cutie girl in other stories doing the same thing using ai to comment honestly its so annoying
Excuse me!
It’s not me!!
N I’ll tell you that I was the first person who commented n i didn’t comment AI paragraphs FYI😠😡😤
N Ik that I’m not funny so plz😤
I don’t think it’s your fav bab who’s posting AI paragraphs! But cutie gurl!
So let her be
Yea ur right it’s this stupid cutie girl I hated her from the start
Mi part ves vrh vrh reethi
When’s next part
Sybau u faking kid your fav bab and cutie
Oh my gosh! I was away for 5 days and this comment section turned into a gossip spot?
To those involved: please just stop it. This is a comment section, and in here, readers express their emotions, expressions, and what they feel after reading the episode. So just don’t judge it. Every one should have their freedom of expressing their views regarding the circumstances in the story, and of course, how they feel about the author.
Using AI to do that, might occur a bit appealing and everyone might not like it. But you don’t have the right to say wrong and talk trash behind their back. If you find something displeasing, just tell them politely, with respect.
Keep your name bright and beware that what you say might cause your dignity to fall, especially in social media platforms like this. It could spread and you might have to suffer later. So think before you say something or comment.
As for the episode, I’m curious to know what Alakaa just saw. It can’t be something bad.. but why else did she shout her throat out. Just, don’t make it too hard for her and her baby. Lubaan too
When’s the next episode shihaa? Take care and take your time.
Don’t worry, I will wait
You must have your reasons and I can understand
Take care Shiher 🖤
Mi part ves varah reethi
Maasha allah
Lysm shiherr