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ތިޔައީ މަގޭ ލޮލުގާމިވާ ނޫރޭއިނގޭ ބުންޔޭނުހާ

ތިޔައީމަގޭ ވިންދޭ ހިތުގެ ތެޅުމޭ އަހާށޭ ލޯބިއޭ

ފުންމާނަވީ ބަސްތައްއެކީ ލޯބިން ބުނީ ހިނިތުންވެފާ

ފުންއަސަރުތަށް ލޮލުގައެވާ ލޯތްބަށްބަދަލު ހޭލާވިއޭ

މަންޒަރުނިކަން ފެނިދެނިމެވާ ހަމަކޮންމެ މީހެއް ވީ ލޮލާ

ހިތްވެސް ނިކަންބަންޑުންވެގެން ލޯބިންމިތާ ފުރިދާނެއޭ

ރަހުމާ ނުލާ ބޯކޮށްވެހެން ވާރޭ އެ ފެށި ހަމަލާއަކުން

އަޚުނޭ ނުހާ ދުއްވައިގަތީ އަސްކަނިދަށަށް ރައްކާވިއޭ

ތެޅިގާތަކުން ރާނާފަވާ ވިފުރާޅުގައި ބާޓިނުތަކާ

ފެޅިފައިމެވާ ތަންކޮޅުތަކުން ފެންފައިބަމުން ވާރެ ދިޔައޭ

ޒާރާނަގައި ބައްދާލިއޭ އެހިމާޔަތޭ ދޭނޭކަމަށް

އާރާ އެކީބުނަމުން އިނގޭ މޭގައި ނިކަން ބޮނޑިކޮށްލިއޭ

ދަރިފުޅުތިއީ ސަބަބޭ އިނގޭ ދުނިޔޭގަ އުޅުމަށް މަންމައަށް

ފަރިކުރުވިއޭ މިހަޔާތްމަގޭ ހީލުންތަކެއް އުފަލޭ ތިއޭ

އަވަހަށް ގެޔަށް ވަންއިރު ފުރާޅުން ފައިބަމިން ދިޔައީ ފެނޭ

އަވަހަށް ނިކަން ގޮސް ބާލިދީ އެއް އެތަނުގައި ބޭންދީމު އޭ

މީހެއްގެވެސް ހިލަމެއްނުވާ މުޅިގޭތެރޭ ވީ ފަޅުވެފާ

މީހެއްނުވޭ މިއަދަކު ނުހާ ހަމަ އާއިލާ ދުނިޔޭގައޭ

ވީއެކަނިވެރި ކަން އިނގޭ މުޅިގޭ ހަތަރުފާރުގެ ތެރޭ

ވީއެ އެކުގާ ތުއްތުދަރިފުޅު ނެތް އެކަކުވެސް ދެން އިތުރުއޭ

ތުއްތު ދަރިފުޅު ގޮސް ގޮވައިގެން އޮއްތަމެ އެލީ ބާގޮދަޑި އެއްގާ

ތުއްތު ކުއްޖާ ފުންނިދީގައި ހިލަމެއްނުވޭ ވީކަމެއްއޭ

 

 

 

 

 

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9 Comments!

  1. Shaleen says:
    February 14, 2021 at 4:59 pm

    Hi
    Here I am ???
    V ufaa vejje comment eh kollan edhifa ineema.
    Asluvesss ???

    Dhen bunelan beynunvanee aslu v v v kulhadhaana meehunnah “story” lhemei hadhaaleveynee ingey.

    And thi lhemuga bunedhey vaahakaves v salhi. Also v v v reethi baithuthahves ebahuri . I loved some of them. ❤️❤️❤️ Ehaa reethi ibaaraathun amunaalaafa hureema ingey ?

    Dhen the other side ..
    Bunelaanee Hama baeh baithuthah ebahuri mistakes.
    Ekamvessss. .. I knw adhi visnaalaafa, you can do it more perfectly..

    U can do it. Keep it going …
    Ginain thikamuga ulhenyaa u can do it more perfect…

  2. Shaleen says:
    February 14, 2021 at 5:16 pm

    What’s you age my dear ?
    And v hithah araa kyvvebaaey Hama shaleen kairi bunelee for comment ..
    V special feel vejje
    Thanks dear

    1. redlailacrose says:
      February 15, 2021 at 12:47 pm

      Because ur the only author who replied to my comments.???yess .ur really special ??? because u reply to my comments so kindly and friendly ???and also ur the first one who commented on this poem.???thank u so much for ur comment ?? u don’t know how much it means to me???ur lovely comment has made my day bright??and could u recommend this stry to ur friends. I really wanna get more readers commenters andvoters.???once again thank you so much. May Allah bless you with a bright writing career.???Stay safe.

  3. Shaleen says:
    February 14, 2021 at 5:19 pm

    Hey
    Adhi 1 thing
    Aslu shaleen ge vaahaka page in redlailacrose ge comments ah reply nukureve Hama.
    I think kommes issue eh eba ulhey.
    I wil ask esfiya site admin kairi
    Ehen vanee keevvetho

    1. redlailacrose says:
      February 15, 2021 at 12:49 pm

      Ok. I’m really happy that u try to reply to my comments. I’ve commented on many stories.but no author has replied.

  4. redlailacrose says:
    February 15, 2021 at 12:59 pm

    Oooh ??? thank you million times ??you may even not believe this ??but I’m quite new at making poems??i think its been only 6months since I’ve started writing poems???but i always had an interest in poems and songs???and im really happy that you liked my poem??❤️and took ur precious time to comment on my poem???and one more thing ??? i myself read this one after posting and found out it needs some editing ????any ways once again thank u so much.?? I always liked ur stry but its been just afew days since I’ve logged in.so i couldn’t comment to previous episodes ??? after seen the comment section empty from many episodes i knew that it would be really sad for the author because we are writing our story freely just for our readers??? i dont know About u .but for me seen the comment section empty makes me think i should stop writing or something ??? anyways thanks for your lovely comment ?? stay safe bye

    1. Shaleen says:
      February 15, 2021 at 4:13 pm

      Awwwn!!! Thank you sooooo much dear.
      I like to do poems too.
      Dheythere akun foohi veema lhen hadhaalan.
      And rajjeyge v famous author eh “zel” dho. He requested me for a poem and
      For him I did 1 poem myself. ❤️ Including full of his story names..? as he told to me.
      Hehe
      So that’s not problem ingey v lahun poems hadhan feshiyas v touch ebahuri.. hama adhives beynunvanee hihvarei ingey..

      Yeah … Redlailacrose bunaahen single comment eh nulibumakeeves v dheravaa kamei..
      Ekamves mihaaru hithah aranee site thakun comments ginain nufennanee aslu login massalaiga.
      Bt register vefa hunna Madhu meehakah comment eh kolleveynee. So ekamaa ehaa bodah shaleen nuvisnan.
      Bodah balanee vaahaka kiyaa meehunge amount and likes libey varu … That’s all for me.
      Ekamves v ufaa vaakamei ei emme meeheigge comment eh libumakeeves Hama kurierumei.???

    2. Shaleen says:
      February 15, 2021 at 4:19 pm

      And please don’t loose your hope..? and keep going.
      One day you will achieve goals your self
      Dhen aslu liyuntherikamakee:
      Hithaa sikundiyaa athaa loluge beynun koggen kuriyah dheveyne kamei.
      So v muhimmu kamei komme kameiggaves kuriyah dheveynee hedhey mistakes thah repeat nukoh..
      So ekamah visnaalaafa negative comment eh libunas ei v positive komment eh kamah amilla ah gabool kollaa hithaa dhekolhahves.
      Dhen e negative comment ah v chill koh reply kolleema okay vaane. Amilla ahves hih Hama jehun libeynee egoy.
      Readers ge comments ah debate kuranviyyaa writter ge value eh noannaane ingey
      So don’t loose your hope. Think positive and go on ….
      That’s your right
      I will be there for you ?

  5. Shaleen says:
    February 15, 2021 at 4:19 pm

    And please don’t loose your hope..? and keep going.
    One day you will achieve goals your self
    Dhen aslu liyuntherikamakee:
    Hithaa sikundiyaa athaa loluge beynun koggen kuriyah dheveyne kamei.
    So v muhimmu kamei komme kameiggaves kuriyah dheveynee hedhey mistakes thah repeat nukoh..
    So ekamah visnaalaafa negative comment eh libunas ei v positive komment eh kamah amilla ah gabool kollaa hithaa dhekolhahves.
    Dhen e negative comment ah v chill koh reply kolleema okay vaane. Amilla ahves hih Hama jehun libeynee egoy.
    Readers ge comments ah debate kuranviyyaa writter ge value eh noannaane ingey
    So don’t loose your hope. Think positive and go on ….
    That’s your right
    I will be there for you ?

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