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1. I am a 12 year old girl who loves to write dhivehi stories.

2. Hey guys..ummeeedhu kuran hurihaa kiyuntherin nah ves kamidhaane kamakh..Next part miahthure dhigu koladhevey toa masaikai kuranan..
   MUCH MORE LOVES..
   ♥♥♥♥♥♥

3. This part is so so great. When is the next part dear. I just love this.

4. Varah reethi ????????? whn is next part?. Eh song eh we one of my favourite ??hehehhe

   1. Hehe..Thamks Meekko..next part wednesday night ga..Mal geves..hehe?

5. Thanks vernon.. next part Wednesday night ga..?

6. V Reethi kiyanimunu iruvas nagun? when is nxt part and I love that song ??

7. Thanks Mal?…
   Next part Wednesday night ga…
   Mal geves..hehe ?

8. ❤❤❤❤ v v v reeethi

   1. Thanks Munymoon..?

9. Wow mall???…Im just speechless..u r sooooo talented❤❤❤???..Mi bai vec v v rythi???…I like dat song very muchh..
   Whn will u upload the nextuu???..Waiting waitingg

   1. jiji meekko ves meenyyy kehmadhu vefa to read next part ?????

   2. Kee waitting…?

   3. Wednesday night oa.. Maves ekahala mikahala haalegga??.. Rain rain go away.. Wednesday wednesday come to us

   4. Hehe.. hehe.. hehe.. hehe…
      ?????

   5. Hehehe??

   6. Thanks jiji..mal ah ves varah reethi songeh eyy..nex part Wednesday nightga…?❤

   7. Malkko…. Meekko ah mihaathanah ingunu gothigaa Luc!f3r ah rhymes ves kiyan ingyy???? LOL???

   8. Hehe…??Kaaku bunee Luc!f3r ah enge ey..luc!f3r tha bunee Meekko kaareega..

   9. Hehe…??Kaaku tha bunee Meekko kaareega luc!f3r ah kiyan engeeh..luc!f3r tha..

   10. Mal ah kamudhaany hus baby ehchehi dhnn???..Same as my naughty Luc!f3r ganduu???..

   11. Hehe..jiji..??

   12. hheheh

   13. jiji…. Fonuvaafa v but adhi accept eh nukuryy

   14. bunyy ahkee nun comment ga eyynyy nun tha fehnan

   15. Meekko thibuny kaakah fonuvi vhk thr..me (or) Dhiraa

   16. ???Oh malko ah dhww…ok.ok

   17. Meekko mi bunyy meekko fonuvaa feemyy dhiraa ah but adhi accept eh nukuryy

   18. I didnt ryhme it??.. Meekko dhw.. Poetry isnt my thing.. Main shaair hoon nehi..

   19. Hehe..nikan lava eh kiyaalabala luc!f3r..heevanee varah reethi vaanehen..???

   20. Ma lava kiyan gnaa heevaany Eid ah kathilan ulhey haaleh emme fahu faharah karu feleyhen

   21. Hehe..hehe…eid ga lava kiyanthr

   22. Eid ah rah rashu haalaa kukulhu kathilaennu.. Eyge emme fahuge halheykuge adu heney ma adu heevaany???

   23. Hehe..lol..
       luuuccch!f3rrr..??????

   24. Heheh?? Luc!f3r

10. Few mistakes.. Flow of story is nice.. Btw loon aa ben ge past kiyaidhemun gendhaanan dhw? I dont knw what to choose.. Past or present.. Both interests me..

11. Thanks luc!f3r…Hmmmm…yeah..mi visnanee both past aa present ves gennan…let’s c dhw..?

12. woww varah reethi ingyyy mi part ves

13. Thanks…?

14. Wow vv nice…malko this is fabulous…btw ben v handsome ingey….keep working hard…may allah bless you with a bright future….

    1. Thanks Navya…
       Hehe..?

    2. After all itx BenZayn (Benzene)

    3. Hahahaa..luc!f3r..???

    4. Hahaha

    5. Does any of u knw what Benzene is? Look it up

    6. Yes..ingey

    7. That’s something in A level chemistry so im guessing none of u.. Cuz the oldest here is 15

    8. Hehe..

    9. Can u explained it Luc!f3r???

    10. Explain what??? .. Navya buny Ben handsome oa.. Ben ge character pic akah Zayn inyma… BenZayn.. Sounds like Benzene.. C6H6.. Itx structure is a hexagon.. A perfect regular shape.. Handsome vaanu perfect vyma??.. It was a chem joke though

    11. Hehe..bunaane dhw handsome ey..benzene ey dhw eii..????

15. Jiji…heyy..missed u a lot…mee zaa ingey…hope u didn’t forget for me…and that gmail gandu ok eh nuvi…uurrghhh i hate it a lot…kihineh dhn talk kuraany..miss our talks tho vv bodah…reply kurahche..

    1. Hope u didn’t forget me…

    2. Yessh dhoony…kihineh miss nuve huhnaany..Plc hangouts use kuran v nu..Kitty athuga ihnaane mail vec..Buneba prvt koh dheyshey????

    3. Oh nuvaane dhw mail sakaraaiy vefa inihyakaa..So dhn kihineh hadhaany..zaa ge sis eh ge foanun.tlk kohhba ehnvyma???

    4. Umm sis eh ge dhw!!!mail noon ehcheh beynun nukuran tha???i want to talk to u so badly…vv vhk ebahuri dhahkan vefa…

    5. Hangouts dhn use kurany..But sis bunymehnu ein tlk eh nukureveyne ey..So kihineh hadhaany???

    6. Jiji.. I can be a girl if u seriously want??

    7. Gurl eh noon thr thiiii..Ehenkamah i mi ohh hurihaa dhuhu hykry..I dont like to tlk boys actually

    8. When Antibax and Lifebuoy mixes.. Anti-boy eh dhw?

16. Hey mal vvv salhi mi vaahaka ? ??

    1. Hey Ash..thanks…?

    2. Malkko ah ingyy tha mi ash story kee school GA indhegen ?????

    3. What..dhehtha Ash..
       Hehe..???

17. Vv reethi mi part ves… ??? Hama rangalhauves curious vejje..Hehe?? Love you so much ??? Malkko

18. Thanks Dhonthy..love you m and m..♥♥??

19. Dhonthy can I ask a question.. if u don’t mind☺️☺️☺️☺️ how old are u????

    1. 13 kanne

    2. 13 noon 14 hen heevanee..13 kanneyge..

20. malsamalkkomal mi part ves salhi..waitting for next part..hii kobaa kihinen tha haalu kulhu?

21. Thanks Rappu…

22. Varah reethi mi part vx waiting for next part ???

    1. Thanks Nannu.keep waiting….

23. Hey guys…

    1. Is anyone out there,,

    2. Out where?

    3. Oohh lucifer eba ulhen dhw!!wassup??

    4. Hama othy.. Btw do u have a fb id? I hate emails

    5. Nahhh…viber use kuran…but fb use kuran dhw sometimes sis ge phn in…

    6. Maybe i shud just put all my contact info here.. Anybody who wants can contact nu eyrun??

    7. Haha..that sounds good…btw i didn’t know boys ves esfiya in vhk kiyaa kameh.for me that’s kinda cool tho..and do u have a fb id??

    8. Which one shud i give? Thats one im thinking.. Shud i give u my prime ID directly or secretly?

    9. Luc!f3r aee gurl eh noon thr? .dhw luc!f3r…Btw hangouts use kurangnaa dhekudhin vec dhiraa a msg kohlaba prvt koh i ge mail dheyshey kiyaaha..Eyrun dheyne eyna??

    10. Umm yahh dhw it’s a public place… And if u send ur id then all will be able to see it…btw eyrun lucifer ah vv gina frnd request libeyne…lol

    11. And jiji drling…i don’t use hangouts…viber and instagram use kurany…but i can’t say my id cox its a public place…srry..

    12. Alhe haadha dhera ey..its means mail eh vec use nukuramey dhww sissy

    13. Jiji..Meekko eii girlh thr boy eh thr

    14. Yhhh…srry babes…aslu msg kuran thikahala app use eh nukuran navya eh…i like fb,instagram,viber also snapchat..jiji use nukuran..

    15. Heii jiji…kihineh tha drla??

    16. Eyy lucifer mihaaru knthaakah thi fily??

    17. Ma email aa fb Id aa phn number jaha jahaa comment nudhiya??

    18. Haha…thihenney vaany..ehaa dhey hithun viyya thiulheny…just joking ngey…maybe u should leave some space between the letters and numbers…

    19. Adhi try koaba???

    20. Maybe a crime here.. Isse Thoa’il..

    21. Luc!f3r…. dhee phone number…???

    22. Ma ham ajaibu antharees isse 45124 @ gmail . com
        Ehery space dhyfa??

    23. Dhen number fonuvaakah noolheveyne.. Ma han gossi.. Hai ves vejje..

    24. Haha…han ves dhaane ehnu…crime eh viyya kohgen thiulheny…btw ismail ehchekey tha lucifer ah kiyany??don’t mind hama ahaaly..

    25. Ismail echcheky noon.. Ismail Thoa’il??

    26. Wow…nice name…hehe srry…dhn isse jahaafa inyma ehn buny…wait fb ga search kohlaanan…issr thoail dhw jahaafa innany??

    27. Madukohba Luc!f3r aee gurl eh noon thr??..yess malsamalkkomal..meekko is a gurl..Nd zaa im fine..hw abt u

    28. Thoa’il with an ‘

    29. Jiji.. I can be a girl if u want.. Thoa’il with an apostrophe

    30. Uhun…Gurl akah vaane kameh neiyy….

24. Meekkomee

    1. Yeshh

25. Maadhamaa tha..dhen Anna month ga thr or dhen Anna hafthaa gathr…Mal buneemehnu dhw Miadhu guess kuraanan ey…
    If you never mind..?

    1. Guess

    2. August 10th ge fahun

    3. varah reethi ingyyy mi part…………..i can tell meekkomee ge birth day

    4. Nuvaaneh bunegen???

    5. Luc!f3r ah ingyy tha k@!**** Ehnee ves boy ….. I think his first comment ….dhww…..???

    6. Haan Luc!f3r August 10 he fahun 14 v ma bunaanu okk nun dhn

    7. I see.. Cool

    8. Meekkomee… I m 14 years ingey?????

    9. Ohh…

26. Wow!!! Mi part ves varah reethi dying to read the next part… waiting waiting ???

27. Thanks Makku..keep waiting…

28. Meekkomee. ..guess kuraanan dhw..

29. Thanks K@!****

    1. Malkko ….k@!**** Gabooleh nukuri 12 year kamakah

30. Malkko ah age ah kee

    1. Hi Meekkomee❤️❤️❤️

    2. Hi dhonthyy❤️❤️

31. Kagaku mee thr

    1. Yeshh …fahun meekko vahaka dhahkaanu ingyyy mi dhanyy thaakah dhaan…ash bunyy 8 GA tlk kuraana mww

32. Hehe..Meekko viber use kurin tha

    1. Mal beynun kurantha? Ehenve tha number dheyn buny

    2. Nop but mom ge number in baeh faharu vahnan….mihaaru ehaa vagute nukibyy mom ge phn hoodhaakah

33. dhonthy….

    1. Oiy dhoonee

34. OK. .brw

35. Dhonthy viber use kuranthr?????

36. Aan use kuran

37. Hmm..can I talk you..viber in

    1. Aan talk kureveyne.. Friends aa talk kuranvaanennu dhw…

38. Meekkomee. .Msg me..dhiraa buni mail dhyfymoa??

    1. Mireyy on vevyy thee balaanu ingyy..mi ulhenyy mihaaru ves homework tha nunimigen???

39. lucifer..viber use kuranthr. .hmm mm ehenve

    1. 9826783

    2. I thought Lucifer akee girl kujjeiy kamau.
       Number save koffa balaaleema ingunee boy ekkan.. Hehe..

    3. Let me guess.. U thought i was a girl.. Wanted to talk.. Saved my pic.. I turned out to be a guy.. So have u deleted it then??

    4. My number.. Not my pic??

40. Dhonthy..but how can I get your number…

41. Hehe… Malkko Gmail use kurantha… Gmail beynun kurangnaa just hama mail kollan vee.. Dhonthi ge via Gmail innaane aishoo ge vaahakaige fourth vana episode ga… Comment section ga innaane. just check

    1. Hangout use kuran tha dhonthyy??

    2. Nooney Meekkomee❤️❤️ Dhonthi use eiy nukuran

42. Ok

    1. But dhonthi ah hama gadiah reply nukurevidhaane ingey… Bcs dhonthi ge amilla phone eiy noannaane.. Dhonthi au phone libeyne iraadhakurevviyyaa mireyge vaguthegga.. Gaaiggandakau 10 jahaairu.. E gadeega dhonthi ah Gmail in vaahaka dhekkeynee…

43. Thanks lucifer?

44. Okk..?

45. So 10 kalhaa iru dhw

46. Hey Lucifer I’m 17 ey

47. How old are you??

    1. Lucifer ah 20

    2. 20.. My ex wife is atleast a bit older than the others here

    3. Thanks CMS…??

    4. I hate how comments get messed up in esfiya.. Itx like they play akun bakun with the comment and then display it here

48. Btw vaahaka hama habeys ??

49. What are you talking about lucifer…

    1. Candy Morningstar is Ex wife of Lucifer Morningstar..

50. Hehe..

51. Lol…

    1. Hi i am meeko bestfreind mi vaahaka v reethi

52. Thanks Ash…Meekkomee grthr

    1. Yeshh kind of Bestty??? but child hood in feshigen Aisheen as friends

53. Ehm ehm ..ash ?? No you’re not her “best friend”…….. I am ……ask meekkomee …..

    1. Ehvareh 2 meehun mee….??dhn thibegen olhulaa faaneh???

    2. Ash ahh olhifa inyma bunelyy ? u knw me nun dhwh ?? meekkomee,…….

    3. Heheh…. Meekkomee ah ingyy Thuy kaaku Kan????

54. Btw malsamalkkomal ……stry is awsm …..I started readin it meekkomee bunegn ???

    1. Heheh??nimunyy tha kiyaa ehkoh

    2. Yeahhh …?????

    3. Hehe..thanks Aisheen..
       Meekkomee..

55. Hii all….kon baeh thibyy migadhyy GA???

56. Dhonthi ebaulhen

    1. Hoi dhonthi

    2. Hama aslu tha use eh nukuran tha???

    3. Hi Aisheen..
       And Meekkomee… Dhonthi hangouts use eiy nukuran.. Hama ekani Gmail and viber use kuranee

    4. Aisheen kiyanyy hii eh ves nun dhww Hoi dhww?????????

57. ?

    1. Heheh??meekko ah ingyy Aisheen ulhyyneh kan

58. hii someone friend mee.am 14 years girle

    1. Ey hi??? Dhonthi ves mee 14 years ge girl eiy

    2. Hi rappu.?

59. Hii??meekkomee ah varah ahvahah 14 vaaneh

60. Dhonthy…neii gmail eh

    1. Thi bunee Malkko ge Gmail neiy vaahakatha

61. Noony..hehe..ethaaku nethy dhonthyge gmaileh

    1. Alhe so sorry Malkko… Dhonthi au rangalhau nubalai eynee bunevifa.. Third vana episode ga innaanee…. So sorry.. Eiy dhonthi au rangalhau balainulaa bunevifa eynee

62. It’s ok…eba kuran iru kolhakun..?

63. Malkko.. Dhonthi au phone libeyne 10 gadi bai kan haairu. Bcs dhonthi ge dad bunee thankolheiy fahunnoa phone libeynee.. Eyrah Malkko wait kurachchey ingey.. I will reply

64. Yeah.. now i got the phone.. You can mail me Malkko.. ok

65. Hmm.mi kuraneee

66. jiji..miadhu school in ah ea SA invit kuraanu ingyy???reyy GA on nuvevunyy ma??

    1. Hurihaa kudhin nah ves Gud mornin??????

67. Maasha Allah

68. Maasha Allah…. Good morning all

69. Good night to all then??

    1. Ohh sryy Luc!f3r ah Gud nite ingyy??

    2. Hi Lucif3r… I m sorry that I can’t talk to you… Bcs dhonthi ge parent vee rashun beyruga.. So hiehnuvey ehaa avahah annaane heneiy… But avahah aissiyyaamun will contact you ingey??

    3. Meekko.. That was cuz i was sleepy egady.. And Dhonthy.. Im more concerned about how u r living if ur parent is away.. Contact me on anywhere u like.. Im on almost every social media????

    4. Come on Lucif3r…. Its my dad.. I m now with my mom and my siblings… Dhonthi bunee parent ey dhw.. Parents ekey nubunamennu??? Hehe… Anyways will contact you dad rashau aima… 1 month fahun dad annaane kamau bunefa othee

70. Hahahaa…..lucifer??????

71. Haadha vareh aruvaalafa meeko a aisheen.

    1. Vernon …. friends will talk…ehn v ma okk vaaneh talk kuri yas????????

    2. Yap meeko is right

72. Hey mal and lucifer can you talk to me in viber

73. Hey Ash. .yes .talk kurevidhaane viber in..hangout use kuran tha.. kobaa number..eyrun dhw talk kurevynee Ash..

    1. Hey Malkko… Dhonthi au heevanee monthevvaru vaane kanneynge dhonthi ge parent rashun beyruga hunnan.. So dhonthi ge parent aima viber in meet velaanan ingey.. ???

    2. Mal number phonuvaa
       Please

74. Ok..dhonthee

75. Hey ash on vaanan 9:30 haairu emmen on vachay tlk kuran ?????

76. Ash..you hangout use kuranthr…waite…lucifer ge gmail innaane waanan umurah ge 9 vana part ga.. u ge gmail eh indhytha..eyrun hangout in vaahaka dhehkynehnu..u hangout in lucifer ah message kura..malves kuraana.?..hangout use nukurannaa bunachy..eyrun malkko ithurugothe hedhytoa balaanan..??

    1. It is on this part.. Navya “Hey guys” kanne jahaafa in comment egge replies therey.. Space dhyfa ekam innaany so removed spaces

    2. Malkko hangout use kuran tha??

    3. Meekko ahthuga ehboi ash ge number

77. Hey lucifer..and others too…

    1. Hii

    2. My is not going

    3. Navya ah fb in ma fenuntha?

78. Sorry i hang out beynumeh nukuran but viber baynunkuran

    1. Dhn koche????ash mi ulhenyy mi geyaa dhimaalah MAA ahvigdha vegen????kihineh hadhn v???????????????????????????????????????

79. Hi navya

80. Lucifer and mal ge number dheeba????????

    1. Ashh ..test fashyyha tha miadhu??

    2. Sorry Ash…I number nudhevy ne mithaaku..??sorry..u lucifer aa vaahaka dhahkaa..ok…

81. Ya

    1. Ohhh ??? ?????

82. Miadhu negy test eh noon ey rivision eh
    Hehe?

    1. Ohh sryy thihen v yaamu division fashyy ha tha?????

83. Thidhimaalah v avigadha dho meeko????

    1. ????☀️☀️☀️☀️Haan ehn nun tha eyynyy bunefa mihiri s**** I mean ash????????

84. Ops sorry ☺️☺️??

85. Ash ge number dhentha ??? Mal and Lucifer

    1. 9922526 me ash ge number.
       viber in hi jahaa ok dho???

    2. Mieves noon ash ge number aki …. 7798345
       Meeash ge number aki

86. Hello guys..maadhamaa school ga varah muhimmu kaneh othumun miry vaahaka up nukurevey ne ingeu…inthihaa ah maafaha edhen…maadhamaa reyga mal a liye vunu emme bodhu koa liyevey toa masikikutaana..hope u all will understand…inthihaa ah maafhah edhen??
    ..love you all my readers..♥♥♥♥♥

    1. ??? Itx okay

    2. Its ok

    3. It’s ok malkko ??

87. It’s OK my lovely Malkko❤️❤️❤️ School kanthakau focus Kuran vaane bodah ingey??? And next part up kodhdhechchey ❤️❤️❤️ lots of loves from me Malkko

    1. Thanks lucifer , dhonthy , Ash and meekko for understanding ??

88. Thanks dhonthy…yeah..next part avahah up kurevey toa masaikai kiraanan…nights..??

    1. Turn off the light
       Lay on bed to ur right
       Wish u all a goodnight
       Sweet dreams sleep tight

    2. Gud nite all??

    3. Good night ????

    4. Good morning dear friends

    5. Gud mornin ??

89. Meekkomee ge haalu kihineiytha? And where’s Malkko

    1. Meekkomee haalu ragalhu dhonthyy ge haalu kihineh tha?????☺️☺️☺️☺️???

    2. Think school ga

    3. School gaey dhonthy

90. Meeko is here with me she is doing her work

91. Dhonthi hun aisgen mi ulhenee. Ehenve school au nudhevifa miothee.. Hehe.. Ehen irakun enmen dhimaakollaanee dhw

    1. Get well soon dhonthi???

    2. Get well soon dhonthyy ??????

    3. Dhonthyy hangout use kuran v nun eyyrun meekko as talk kurevyyneh……if u want ingyy..if u don’t want ahlhaanulaa

    4. Hiyvaru koggen namaves fahu gadeega dhiyain school au.. Mihaaru kudakoh rangalhu??? By the way, thikudhinge haalu kihineiytha? ??

    5. No veryy veryy Gud but okk?????

92. Lucifer meeko bunee hangout beynun kuray heyo udhagoo kohlan meeko bunee

    1. Majalakah bunyy dhn ash ahga gadha kamun eh bunyy???

    2. I do use now

    3. Alhe fahe mi bunyy nun tha majalakah shyy ehn bunyy dhn ash ahga gadha kamun bunyy Yee……varahge ash eh mee ves hehehe ??

93. Malkko whn is next part

94. ??

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