އަބަދުވެސް ލޯބި ދޭނަން….6

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1. fahu paragraph ga mistake eh ebain.
   Hope you will correct it.. btw story ah beheygothin bunnany nice ey… try to lmprove…
   GOOD LUCK …..

   1. Love your storys 2 dear…I saw that mistake..Ekam dear men kairi ehen nubunevuniyyey..I mean liyumuge fahun e mistake fenuny??☺☺

2. Salaam everyone ??Here is the 6th part of my first story..Point out the mistakes..love you more❤❤????

3. Whn nxt

   1. Next part on next Wednesday..I hope you will wait ??

4. yey me first dhw…… story salhi<3 loves

   1. Lets jst call it a tie

   2. Mifaharu selean dear second ingey??Next time first hoadhahche ingey..I am so glad cox mi part dear ah kamudhiyaeema..

5. Vaahakaige emuni ekulevun neiykan faahaga kurevey….vaahakaige scene thah maakuruveemaves hadhivaane…..kuda thankolheh dhigu kollaa thanaai haalath sifa kurumun varah reethi vaane…..Thi umuruge kujjaku liyaa vaahaka akaa alhaa balaairu varah rangalhu….meehun dhey comment thah adu ahauge kuriadhaanama varah molhu liyun theriyakah vaane!

   1. Jakhallah khairan, Insha allah I’ll improve it..

6. v reethi maasha allah…. aslu vx dear v hii varu gadha ngey…..hehehe

   1. Happy vejje naash dear ah mi part kamudhiyaeema ☺☺Anehkaa kaakutha hivvaru gadhaee…

   2. Ooh me ge vaahaka dhw…Thanks alot ingey

7. Kuda kujjaku liyaa vaahaka eh gah kiss kuraa vaahaka dehkun ehaa rangalhu heneh hiyehnuvey. Im a mom. Ti umuruga aharenge dhariyehves tihisaabah dhaakah hih hama eh nujeheyne. Ehenve hama bunely manma ehge point of view..

   1. Ok but…Evarakah nennane kiss kuraa bai genesdheefa eh..

8. liyuntheriyaa kuraamassakathah shukuru dhannavameve. liyuntherinakee insaanunanah vumun liyuntheringe liymunves kuh fenumakee varah aamukamekeve. efdha kuhthakakee meehaku bunedhinumune noonee ginafaharu faahaga nukurevey kuthakekeve. thiyafadha umurun hagu beyfulhuku liyuvaa liyuthakun kuhfenunamee adhi maayoos vaavaruge kameh nooneve. alhugandah faahaga kurevunu dhethin kameh dhannavaalaanameve. faruthama kamakee vaahaka eyge furihama asarugai genese dheveynee sifa kurun rangalhuveema eve. ebai mi vaahakaa gai madhukana faahaga kurevey…dhevana kamakah faahaga kurevunee emuni ekulevun vaahakaigai neiykameve. thinvanakamakee vaahakaige manzaruthah nuvatha scenetha maakuru kameve. ehene vejjenama kiyaafaraaiythakah nagaiganana undhagoovaaneeve. mi kanthah thakah visnaalaigen liyan aadhakoffinama thiya faraathakee isaahithaku molhu liyuntheriyakah vedhaane eve.

   1. Thanks eynaa dear…Insha allah I’ll improve it..

9. wlc dear…

   1. U 2 buddy ??heheh

10. Vaahaka vaahnee vaahaka ah. Kisss Vax kuraaneh. Ehn v mah mom ah engen jeheyneh loabi vaahaka thakugah eh vaahaka ahnaaneh Kan Vax. Mih part v re-think. Dad eh geh haisihyathun buneleeh hama. I am ah dad…??

    1. Heheh thanks Dad beybe

11. mihaaru comments ga rangalhu kuran huri kanthah fiyavaa alhugandhu dheyn othee 3 naseyhatheh. ei vaahaka liye nimmafa 1 faharu namaves alum kiyaa mistake huritho check kollun. dhevana kamakah mi story liyaa iru akuruthakaa jumulathah burivefa ehunnani liyan beynunkuraa comp nooni phone ge font english ga innathi. font dhivehi ah badhalu kollaigen liyuneema paragraph thah hunnani reethikoh evvarah. 3 vana kamakee alhugandakeeves dandelion gothah varah kuda iru vaahaka liyan feshi kujjeh. feshi iru alhuganduge vaahaka thah ves hunnani mikahala gothakah. mi bunee varah mistakes hurey. ekamaku hivvaru eluvaa nulaa miadhaa hamaah meehunge naseehai adu ahaigen improve kuramun kuriah gendhevuneethee mihaaru varah ufaavey. so my point is dont lose hope. best of luck?

    1. Jakhallah khairan dear ☺☺Dear thibunynu jumla thah burivefa hunna vhk…Dandelion vhk liyany tab in…dhivehi fontah badhalu nukureveythy dhera e…Ekam balaanan dear buni gothah kanthah kureveythw ☺☺Thanks for the advice..I’ll try my best???

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