މައިޝާ.. (3)
“ބަޓް ޝީ އިޒް ދަ ގަރލް” ހަމްދާން އެހެންބުނުމަށްފަހު އެބުރުނުއިރު އޭނާ އަށް ފެނުނީ އެގަޑީގައި އެތަނުން ފެންނާނެ ކަމަށް އުންމީދު ކުރި މީހެއްނޫނެވެ.
“މަމައީޝާ…”ލަސްލަހުން ހަމްދާނަށް ބުނެލެވުނެވެ. “ކީއްވެ މާ ފާޑާކަށް ބަލަހައްޓައިގެން ތިހިރީ؟. މަ ފެންނަނީ ބިރުވެރި އެއްޗެއްގެ ސިފައިގަތަ؟”. ދެންމެ ދެއްކި ވާހަކަތައް މައިޝާއަށް އަޑުނީވޭކަން ޔަޤީންވުމުން ހަމްދާނަށް ހަމަޖެހުމުގެ ނޭވާއެއް ދޫކޮށްލެވުނެވެ. ހަމްދާނަށް ހުރެވުނީ މައިޝާ އަށް ބަލަހައްޓައިގެންނެވެ. “މޮޅުވީމަ ކޮންގްރެޓްސް ކިޔަން މިއައީ. ފޮނިވެގެން ވަހަކަ ނުދައްކާ ހުއްޓަސް މިރޭ އެކްސްޓްރާ އަށްާާާާ އަންނައިރު މަގޭ ނޯޓް ފޮތް ގެންނާތި.” މައިޝާ ދިޔުމުން ސަމާހު ހިފަހައްޓައިގެން ހުރި ހިނިގަނޑު ފަޅައިގެން ދިޔައެވެ. ” މަ ހިއެއް ނުކުރަން ކަލޭ ތިހާ ފިޑިކަމަށް. މައިޝާ ކައިރީ އަވަހަށް ބުނަން އުޅޭ. އެހެންނޫނީ ތެޔޮނާށި ކާޅު ޖަހައިގެންފާނެ.” ސަމާހު ވަރަށް ސީރިއަސް ވެލާފައި ވާހަކަ ދައްކަން ފެށިއެވެ. ހަމްދާން ސަމާހުގެ ވާހަކައަށް ސަމާލުކަން ދެމުން ވިނަގަނޑު މަތީ އޮށޯވެލިއެވެ. ” އަސްލު އަހަރެން އޭނާ ދެކެ ވަރަށް ލޯބިވޭ. މަށަށް ހީވަނީ މައިޝާވެސް މަ ދެކެ ލައިކް ވާހެން. ދެން ނޭގެ ދޯ. ކޮންމެ ކަމަކަށްވެސް ވަކި ވަގުތެއް އޮވެއެންނު. އެވަގުތު ޖެހުނީމަ ބުނާނަން. އެކަމް ހީއެއްނުވޭ އޭނަ އެހެން މީހަކުދެކާ ދޭތެރޭ ވިސްނާހެންވެސް”. އެކި ވާހަކަތަކުގައި އެދެމީހުން ތިއްބާ އިވުނީ މަޤްރިބް ނަމާދު ބަންޤީގެ އަޑެވެ. ” އެއޮތް ދިނީ ބަންޤިވެސް. ކަލެއާހެދި ފިހާރައަށްވެސް ނުދެވުނު. މިރޭ އަދި ކްލާހަށްވެސް ދާންޖެހޭ. ހިނގާ ދަމާ.” ހަމްދާން އެހެން ބުނެލުމަށްފަހު ސަމާހުއާއި ދެމީހުން ހިގައިގަތީ ގެއަށް ދިޔުމަށެވެ.
އޯލެވެލް ޓެސްޓުތައް ގާތްވަމުން އަންނާތީ މައިޝާމެން އުޅުނީ ކިޔެވުމައިގެން ވަރަށް ބުރަކޮށެވެ. ހުރި ހަމައެކަނި އަންހެންކުއަޖާއަށް ވުމުން މައިންބަފައިންގެ ހުވަފެންތަކުގައި ކުލަ ޖެއްސުމަށް މައިޝާ ވަރަށް މަސައްކަތް ކުރެއެވެ. މިރާން އެކޭ އެއްގޮތަށް މައިޝާވެސް ބޭނުންވަނީ ގަދަދިހައެއްގައި އޭނާގެ ނަން ހިމެނުމަށެވެ. ކިޔެވުމާއިގެން ބުރަކޮށް އުޅެންޖެހުމުން ކުޑަދުވަސްކޮޅަކަށް ނަމަވެސް ނަޖާހުގެ ޚިޔާލްތަކާއި މައިޝާއަށް ދުރުވެވުނެވެ. ދޭތެރެއަކުން މައިޝާ އާއި، ހަމްދާން އާއި، ސަމާހުގެ އިތުރުން އިތުރު ދެކުއްޖަކުވެސް ބައިވެރިވެގެން ގްރޫޕް ސްޓަޑީޒް ހަދަން މައިޝާމެން ގެއަށް އާދެއެވެ.
“ދޮންބޭ.ބިޒީ ނޫނިއްޔާ އާދެބަ މިތަންކޮޅު ކިޔާލަދޭން. އެކަކަށްވެސް ނޭގުނު ހަދާކަށް.” ލެޕްޓޮޕް ނަގައިގެން މަސައްކަތެއް ކުރަން އިން މިރާން އަށް މައިޝާ ބުނެލިއެވެ. ” އައްދެ ހާދަ ފޯމަލް ތިވީ. މައިގެ ކަމަކަށް ދޮންބެ ބިޒީއެއް ނުވާނޭ ދުވަހަކުވެސް” ކުރަން އިން މަސައްކަތް އެއްފަރާތްކޮށްލަމުން މައިޝާމެން ގާތަށް ދާން މިރާން ހިގައިގަތެވެ. މިރާން މައިޝާ މެންނަށް އެ ސުވާލު ކިޔަވަދޭން ފެށިއެވެ. ވަރަށް ޝައުޤުވެރިކަމާއެކު ކިޔަވަން ތިއްބާ އިވުނީ ގޭގެ ބެލް ޖެހި އަޑަށެވެ. ” އެއޮތް އައީ ނިޝްޔާ”. މައިޝާ އަވަސް އަވަހަށް ދޮރު ހުޅުވަން ދިޔައެވެ. އެތެރެއަށް ވަދެގެން އައި އަންހެންކުއްޖާ ފެނި މިރާން ހުރީ ހައިރާންވެ އެހެން ތަނެއް ބަލާލަން ނޭގިފައެވެ. އެއީ ހަމަ އެ މޫނެވެ. މީގެ ދުވަސްތަކެއް ކުރިން އެހިތުގެ ހަމަޖެހުން ނަގާލި އަންހެންކުއްޖާއެވެ. މައިޝާ އެހާވަރަށް އެކިޔާ ނިޝްޔާ އަކީ މިއީތާއެވެ. މިރާންގެ ކުރިމަތީގައި ހުރި ގޮނޑީގައި ނިޝްޔާ އިށީނުމުން ، އޭނައަށް އަވަސް ނަޒަރެއް ދެމުން މިރާން ފިލާވަޅައިގެން ކުރިއަށްދިޔައެވެ.
ދުވަސްތައް ވޭތުަވަމުންގޮސް އޯލެވެލް އިމްތިހާންވެސް ނިމި ގަދަ ދިހައެއްގެ ތިންވަނައިގައި މައިޝާ ހިމެނުނެވެ. ސަޢީދާ އާއި މާޖިދު އެމީހުންގެ ދަރިފުޅުގެ ކާމިޔާބީއާމެދު ވަރަށް ފަޚްރުވެރިވިއެވެ. ދޮށީ ދަރިފުޅު މިރާން އެކޭ އެއްގޮތަށް މައިޝާވެސް އެމީހުމްގެ ނަން ފަވާލާ ފަޚްރުވެރިކޮށްދިނީތީއެވެ.އެމީހުންގެ ހުރިހާ އުންމީދެއް މިހާރު ގުޅިފައިވަނީ އުމުރުން 14 އަހަރުގެ މިފްޒާލް އާއިއެވެ. މައިޝާގެ މި ކާމިޔާބީ ފާހަގަކުރުމަށް އޭނާގެ މައިންބަފައިން ބޭނުންވީ ކުޑަވަރެއްގެ ހަފްލާއެެއް ބޭއްވުމަށެވެ.
“އޭ މިރޭ މައިޝާ ގާތުގައި އެވާހަކަ ބުނަންވީނު.” ސަމާހުމެންގޭގެ ޖޯލިފަތީގައިތިބެ ހަމްދާން އާއި ދެމީހުން މަޝްވަރާކުރަމުން ދިޔައީ މައިޝާ ގާތުގައި އެވާހަކަ ބުނާނެ ގޮތަކާމެދުގައެވެ. “އިރާދަކުރެއްވިއްޔާ މިރޭ މި ހިތުގެ ހާލު މައި ކައިރީގައި ކިޔައިދޭނަން. މިހުރިހާ ދުވަހުވެސް މަޑުކުރީ މައިގެ ކިޔެވުމަށް އެއިން އަސަރުކޮށްފާނެތީ. މިހާރު ދެން ސްކޫލްވެސް ނިމި އެންމެން ރަނގަޅު ނަތީޖާއަކުން ފާސްވެފަ މިތިބީ. ދެން އެހާވަރަކަށް ވިސްނާކަށް ނުވެސް ޖެހޭނެއްނު.” ސަމާހު ހަމްދާނަށް ބަލާލީ އޭނާވެސް އެކަމުގައި ހަމްދާނަށް އެހީތެރިވާން ތައްޔާރަށްހުރިކަން އަންގައިދޭފަދަ ގޮތަކަށެވެ.
ލ ގަމު ތުނޑީ އަވަށުގެ މޫންވިލާ ގެއަށް ހީވަނީ ޢީދެއް އައިސްގެން އުޅޭހެންނެވެ. މުޅި ގޭގެ މާހައުލުވަނީ ހަލަބޮލިވެފައެވެ. އެކި މީހުން އެކި ކަންކަމުގައި އަވަދިނެތި އުޅެމުންދިޔައީ މިރޭ އަށެއް ޖަހާއިރު އޮންނަ މައިޝާގެ ކާމިޔާބީގެ އުފަލުގައި ބާއްވާ ހަފްލާ އަށެވެ. މައިޝާ ތައްޔާރުވެ ނިމިގެން ނުކުތުމުގެ ކުރިން އަމިްލަ ސޫރަ ލޯގަނޑުން ފަހު ފަހަރަށް ބަލާލިއެވެ. މެރޫން ކުލައިގެ މެކްސީއެއްގައި މައިޝާ ހުރި އިރު ވަކި މޮޑެލްއަކަށް ދޫނުކުރެއެވެ. ކޮށްފާވާ ލުއި މޭކަޕާއެކު އިސްތަށިގަނޑަށް ހަދާލާފައިވާ ގޮތުން އޭނާގެ ރީތިކަން ދެގުނައަށް އިތުރުވެފައިވާކަހަލައެވެ. މައިޝާގެ މި އުފާވެރި ވަގުތުގައި ނަޖާހު ހުންނާނެ ނަމައޭ އޭނަގެ ހިތަށް އެރިއެވެ.
“ދަރިފުޅާ މައިޝާ…”ދަރިފުޅުގެ ކްލާސް ކުދިން މިތިބީ.” ސިޓިންގރޫމް ތެރެއިން ސަޢީދާ ގޮވާލި އަޑަށް މައިޝާ އަވަހަށް ނުކުމެގެން ދިޔައެވެ. ” އައީދޯ..”މައިޝާ ނިޝްޔާގެ އަތުގައި ހިފާލަމުން ހިނިތުންވުމަކާއެކު ދެންތިބި ކުދިންނަށް ބަލާލިއެވެ. އެވަގުތު ނިޝްޔާ މައިޝާގެ ނަސީބާމެދު ހިތާހިތުން ރުޅި އާދެވުނެވެ. ”ހުރިހާ ރީތިކަމާއި މޮޅުކަމެއް ލިބެންވީ މައިޝާއަށް ހެއްޔެވެ؟” ނިޝްޔާގެ ހިތުގައިވާ އެއްޗެހި މޫނުމަތިން ފާޅުނުކޮށް ހިނިތުންވެލީ މައިޝާގެ ފުރާނަ ރޮއިގަންނާނެފަދަ ކަމެއް ކުރުމަށް ހިތާހިތުން ވައުދުވަމުންނެވެ.
ނިޝްޔާ އަކީ މައިޝާ ވަރަށް އިތުބާރުކުރެވޭ ރައްޓެއްސެކެވެ. އެހެންނަމަވެސް އެންމެ ފުރަތަމަ ދުވަހުން ފެށިގެން ނިޝްޔާގެ ހިތުގައި މައިޝާއާ މެދުވަނީ ނަފްރަތާއި ހަސަދައެވެ. އޭނާ ޤަބޫލުކުރާ ގޮތުގައި ހުރިހާ ރީތިކަމާއި މޮޅެއް ލިބެންޖެހޭނީ އޭނާއަށެވެ. ނަމަވެސް ހުރިހާ ކަމެއްގައި އޭނާއަށްވުރެ މައިޝާ ކުރިހޯދައެވެ.
ސްކޫލްގެ ޓީޗަރުންނާއި މައިޝާގެ ރައްޓެހިކުދިން ހަފްލގައި ބައިވެރިވިއެވެ. ތަފާތު ކެއުމުގެ ބާވަތްތަކުން މޭޒުމަތިވަނީ ފަޅުފިލުވާލާފައެވެ. ފާރަށްލެގިލައިގެން ހުރެ ކޯކް ތައްޓެއް ބޮމުންދިޔަ މިރާން ގެ ނަޒަރު ހުއްޓިފައިވަނީ ދުރުގައި ސަކަރާތްޖަހަން ހުރި ނިޝްޔާ އަށެވެ. ނިޝްޔާގެ ކޮންމެ ހަރަކާތެއްވެސް އޭނާ ބަލަމުން ދިޔައީ އެއްވެސް ފޫހިކަމެއް ނެތިއެވެ. އަމިއްލަ ކޮއްކޮގެ އެހާ ގާތް ރައްޓެއްސަކާމެދު މިފަދަ ނަޒަރަކުން ދެކުމަކީ ރަނގަޅުކަމެއްބާއޭ ހާސްފަހަރު މިރާންގެ ހިތަށް އަރައެވެ. ނަމަވެސް އެހިތުގެ މައްޗަށް ބާރުފޯރުވެވޭ ވަރަށްވުރެ އޭނާގެ ހިތްވަނީ ނިޝްޔާގެ ލޯބީގައި ދީވާނާ ވެފައެވެ. ރީތި ކުދިން ފެނުނަސް މިވަރުގެ ރީތިކަމެއް މިރާން ދުވަހަކުވެސް ނުދެކެއެވެ.
“ކޮންގްރާ މައި ބްރިލިއަންޓް ގާލް.” ވަރަށް ލޯބި ރަތްކުލައިގެ މާބޮޑިއެއް ދިއްކޮށްލަމުން ހަމްދާން ބުނެލިއެވެ. “މައި ކައިރީ އެބޮއި ވަރަށް ބޮޑު ވާހަކައެއް ބުނަންވެފަ.” ހަމްދާން ދިއްކޮށްލި މާބޮޑީގައި ހިފާލަމުން އޭނަވެސް ވާހަކައެއް ބުނަންވެފަ އޮތްކަމަށް ބުންޏެވެ. ހަމްދާނަށް ހީލެވުނީ މައިޝާވެސް ބުނަން އުޅެނީ އޭނާދެކެ ލޯބިވާ ވާހަކަ ކަމަށް ހީކޮށެވެ. ނިޝްޔާ އަށް އެވަގުތުއެތަން ފެނުމުން ދަތްކުޑި ވިކައިގަތެވެ. މައިޝާ އެހާ ހެވިފައި ހަމްދާނުގެ އަތުގައި ހިފާލިތަން ފެނުމުން ނިޝްޔާ އަށްކުރެވުނީ ނުބައި އިޙްސާސްތަކެކެވެ. ވަގުތުން މިސްރާބުޖެހީ މައިޝާމެންނާ ދިމާލަށެވެ. ” މައި އަހަރެން….” ހަމްދާންގެ ވާހަކަ މެދުކަޑާލީ ނިޝްޔާ އޭނާއަށް ގޮވުމުންނެވެ. މި ރީތި ފުރުސަތު ގެއްލުމުން ހަމްދާން ހުރީ ނިޝްޔާ ދެކެ ހިތްހަމަނުޖެހިފައެވެ. ” ދާން ހިނގާބަ ނިޝީ ގެއަށް ލައިދޭން. މިހާރު ލަސްވެސްވެއްޖެ. ބޭބެ ކުޑަކަމެއް ދިމާވެގެން ނާދެވުނު. ޕްލީސް.” ހަމްދާން ހިތްހަމަނުޖެހުނުކަން ނުދައްކާ މައިޝަާއަށް އެއްޗެއް ދޭން ޖެހޭ ކަމަށް ބުނެ އެތަނުން ދިޔައީ ނިޝްޔާ ގޮވައިގެން ދާން ބޭނުންނުވީމައެވެ. ނިޝްޔާ ދެރަވެފައި ހުރުމުން މައިޝާ އޭނާ ހިތްހަމަޖެހޭތޯ މަސައްކަތްކުރިއެވެ. ” ނިޝީ. ދޮންބެ ކައިރީ މިބުނަނީ ނިޝީ ގޮވައިގެން ދާން. ޑޯންޓް ވޮރީ.” ނިޝްޔާއަށް އިހުސާސް ކުރެވުނީ އެއީ މައިޝާ އޭނައަށް ކޮށްލި މަލާމާތެއް ކަމަށެެވެ. ނިޝްޔާ ނޫނެކޭ ބުންޏަސް މައިޝާ ދިޔައީ އޭނާގެ ދޮންބެ ގާތަށެވެ. ” ދޮންބޭ ނިޝީ އެކަނި ގެއަށް ދާން ޖެހިގެން. ދޮންބެ ދާންވީނު ނިޝީ ގެއަށް ލައިދޭން.” މައިޝާގެ އެ ޖުމްލައިން މިރާންގެ ހިތް އުފަލުން ނަށާލިއެވެ. ” އެނީތިން ފޯ ޔޫ މައި ޕްރިންސެސް.” މައިޝާގެ ކޮލުގައި ލޯބިކޮށްލަމުން މިރާން އެބުރިލީ އޭނާގެ ހިތުގެ ރާނީއާ ދިމާލަށެވެ.
މިވާހަކައިގެ ދެންއޮތް އެޕިސޯޑުގެ ލިންކު ކޮމެންޓް ސެކްޝަންގެ ތިރީގައި ވާނެއެވެ.
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wow…vrh vrh rythi mi partves..
waiting for the next part
Thank you aysh..
I was wrong…. Vaahaka reethivaan fashaifi…. Waiting for next part.. ?????
Lol Ekkala amilla ah comment kuraa kujaa feshy dhw.. Hini aadhey meenage vaahaka kiyanves
Thnkyu maisha?
Dhen emme reethi thankolhun thi nimmaalee… Between I love this story… Keep it up X-girl
Thnkyu sallu
are you a boy or a girl??….because my friends also call me sallu….tell mee….
vaahaka varah reethi…kon dhuvahakun next part???
Nxt part Iraadha kurevviyya tmrw ga..
Thnkyu sal?
V reethi keep it up
Thankx Naf ☺
Miothy again maisha ge namuga thanx ey bunefa. Whats happening x girl
varah reethi mi part ves
Thankx maee☺
Very nice story dhen konirakun anehpart up vàanee
Thankx Thaa☺next part tomorrowga
Story wrh reethi
Thankyu Bella?
My god ekkala amilla ah commnt kuraa kujaa. mi storyga huri gina commnt mi X-girl amilla ah kohfakan yagyn
You are wrong oopx..
Oh really? trust denied
Oops sorry guys.. Author ID uin nuun dhw mi commnt kurevuny. really sorry
Who are you?
Thankyu everyone for the lovely comments
Ehbai meehun J vaane meehaku reehchah vaahakaeh liyanyaa
LOl A big fat lol. X girl Author id in bunan nukerigen commnt kohfi anehkaaves
Myhunnah jehssun nukoh waahaka liyaa hiy wanyaamu amilla yah waahka liyumah gowaalan maisha ah ..
Thanx Bella
Mi story liyaa kujjaa akiy maisha tha? Ekm liyun theriyaa ge comment innaniy green kulaige.. maisha akh neygunu dw ekameh .. adhi bunefi ehnu author id in nuney mi msg kurevuniy.. thihaa waahaka liyaa hiywanyaa mu amillayah liyan veenu..
Vaahaka varah reethi…..
Lol Maisha varah beynun dwh author akh vaan ..thihaa beynun vanyaa amilla ah story liyegn publish kuran vnu. And x girl ah vx hurihaa phn akun comment nuvx kureveyne dwh mistake vx hedheyne .. Anyways best of luck x girl
Lahka phone beynun veytha thafaathu nan namuga comment kuran. If you think that you are dead wrong. Stupid rapunzel
Haas’s majaley… Vaahaka liyuni kaaku
Maishathr nooni x-girl thr
Vaahaka liyany x girl..maisha namuge e commnt tah kohfa hury Ehn kujjeh..author ge comment tah innaany green koh
Author ge commnt green koh innaathy tha kury partgaves reehchey kiyaafa commmnt kohfa ae green kulaiga iny e comment
Aslu waahaka liyaniy X girl kiyaa kujjeh.. ekn ngeyne comment kuraa iru.. then thi maisha akiy knmevx ehn myheh..
Ehntha?
Nobody is perfect kmmhnx girl ah favour kuranyky nun myhakh olhign comment eh kurevidhaane dwh .. Vaahaka kiyaa hih nuwanyaa nukyma nimunyma nu
Olhigentha nuuni commnt gina kuran amilla ah ehn nan namuga kuranyth?
And x girl akh vaahaka kiyaa emmnge phn akun comment nuwaane dwh … Stupid Inaa❤ dhn v vaahaka
LOl ekan ingeye. Eh phone use kuraathy ehnu olhigen author id inves e innany amilla vahaaka reehchey kiyaafa commnt kohfa dhw.
X- Girl maafah edhiba dhw dhen. Thihen ei nan namuga commnt nukoh. Kuh gabuul koh readers ah maafah edhiba dhw. Bust v maves dhogu hedhy ehn story akah kurii commntey kiyaafa. Ekam hama yagyn ae mi story ahkan kury. kurukoh genesdhyfa iny mi story viyya.. bundhi hama nujehey excuse eh dhehkyves. so?
Thimeehunaa behey tha? thivarun vaahaka nukiyaa thibey
Mihaaru konmea story yen liyeafa hunairu.comment than liyaa kudhin varan bahus kolaa dhw..story liyaa kunjayan ehnves kahala hinvaru dhinumen novey..aslu miyaky varan dheara kamen..vahaka rangalhu konlan comment en liyea vi dhaanea .eakamu miyaky dhen bodu varu dhw..
Story reethi keep it up..huntaa nulaa kuriyan gendhey
saabahey X-girl. baeh kiyun therinnah v varu vey eba. alhaanulaa story v furihama. mi maisha ge name ga negative koh comment kuraa kujjaa amilla ah vaahaka liyegen kiyan feney. kuh kureveynee insaanunnah. so ehn myhunge kuh dhahkan noolhe amilla ah islaahvaan feney maisha. v salaam dhn. hama bunely.
MI site ah story eh nuliyan. Ekam 2 thin fotheh liyefa publish kohfin.. bookshop thakun alhuganduge story liben hunnaane.
X-girl kanney einee maisha namuga comment (2nd comment) koffa i was wrong ey kiyaafa. Comment kuran name box ga eh faharu name jahaafa comment kohffiya e name dhen ves innaane. Ehen vefa eothy x-girl ah. Maisha namuga thanks ey bunefa eothy x-girl ah olhigen.
theena ah kon kameh? nubehey kanthakaa nubehibalaa
aslu x-girl ge vaakaha rythi v ma baeh kudhinnah hama hajam nuvany… knmehen thihaa joke nujahaa alhe thi comment kuraa bayaku amilla ah vaahaka eh liyefa up khbh.. ehaa hiyvareh nethyma ehn myhunnah joke jahany… ekm x-girl is far better than u all.. thihen bunelaa ehchakun fahathah nujeehyne kn eba ngey.. knme dhuvahaku vaahaka eba up kurey.. j vaa bayaku hama thihen thibenjeheyny.. gud luck x-girl.. u r da best
lol. THi X-Girl amilla ah kuri commnteh kan yageen. Shine men thihbaa x girl ae besto.. Hinives eba aadhey.
u like shine and dat doesnt mean i hv to… x-girl is tha best fr me. bayakh haadha vareh eba veyey dhw… n ngey kithanme ehcheh kiyas u ol wait fr dis story kn..
lol elsa ah reethi vaanehnu cx your X-girl. ehnn namehga commnt kuriyas. keehkuran mivaahaka ah inthizaaru kuran v ki eh. Ekam furathama dhuvahu mi story kin. eygen e commnt fenunu fahun mihaaru hama ekani commnt bai kiyaalany. Hahah. hama hini annany ey theenage commnt fenifa
Koohtha thi varah gaiga hakuru nungulhaaa Bala!!
Thivarah hakuru ungulaigen foni vanyaa hinyaa eh ehchihives anaaney!!!!
Dhera kamehnu… vaahaka kiya hiy nuvanya nukiyabala… konmehn nubehey kanthaka maa bodu vegn ulheny kyhkuran tha lol
Asluves dhw mae. Thankyu dear
Omg. Kiyun therin haadhahaavaa molhey ehn myhun judge kuran. Vaahaka liyaneekee moyain neh noon. Eyah comment ithurukuran ehn myhunge name jahain commnt kuran. So plx story ah faadu kiyaa kudhin visnaalan jehey ehcheh bunumuge kurin mi buneveny keekey kan. Mi story ah ginain commnt annaathi j vany tha. Noonee reethi vma ekm hajam nukureveny tha. Lol
Gina comment my foot. X-girl amilla ah kohfa ae. balaaba 1st partga. Eyni olhigen author id in kurevifa.
Olhign kamh vedhaane. Bt mean eh nukurey aee comment ithurukuran kuri kamekey. Possible kameh ehn kujjaku kiyaafa comment kury kamhvx. I mean x girl ge lap o phn in. So ehn myhunnah blame nukurey dhariyaa. Mioh tharah gee zamaanugavx haadha nuvisney kudhin ulhe ey. koohtha my foot
Lol.. Anehkaa aneh molhu vaahaka. X-girl buny ehn story akah kuran ulhenikohshey. maybe haas vefa hury rangalhah visnaa nulaa bunevuny dhw bust v ma. Dhen ehn story akahshey buni iru koohtha nei ehn story akah commnt kohfaves. ekam fahun kada nuvaan veghen huri kohfa. Aslu story kiyaa ninmmaafa commnt kuraairu story badhaluveytha.. dhen its fine. dhogu hedhi meehakah ekameh. olhuvaali meehakah e kameh.
Koohtha haada molhey dw..koohtha wareh nei .. koohtha ah ngey wiyyaa comment kuraniy kaaku kan ..anehkkaa koohtha akiy noonbaa x girl?? Ekmvx x girl wareh hama nei .. story is beautiful nd thi gothugai kuriah daathi myhun kiyaa ehchakah nubalaa specially koohtha men kahala myhun..
awwwn. Thats really sweet of you bella. Thankyu for supporting me.
Wat mi kaaku x grl fan ge name ga mi comment kurany. Bahyeh.
Koohtha ah visney koohtha hn ulhebah. Haha. Bodu kamh mi mees meehunah ngey varun vx. X girl vareh nethey Hama buneveynee.
Ingey varunney lolah fennah e othy. dhen hini naiyya dheraehnu. hama dheravey e fakeerah commnt nulibigen amilla ah commnt kuraathy. Ehnve mi commnt gina kohdhenyves
Comment gina kurukamy libey prideh nun dhw..I am happy cox u ol r reading my story..nd love you ol??
Lol ehn v ma hurihaa commenteh kiyan dhw thi iny. Hehe alhe gina kuran vegenehnu amilla ah comment kury. haha. adhi eyoh bust vi molhu gotheh
I didnot read your story. I only read comments. cx they are damn funny. your stupid mistakes
Oh plx koohtha. Story nukiyaa comment kiyaany moyain. X grl comment Gina kuran v keehve. Aee maa mathiveri vaa kamhtha? Koohtha ah haadha nuvxne ey dhw
Koohtha heevany x grl aa jahsaalain ulhey hn. Heevany eh noon yageen Hama. Koohtha majaa kuraa hit vanyaa ehn myhunge agu nuvehteyne hn enjoy kurey. Hama bunely?
MIulheny X-girlge mistake gabuul nukohgen. Matha adhi agu mivahtany? amilla meehaa gamaaru kamun agu vehtifa othy? hehe hama paka paka laafa heveny. ey gadi jeheny. dhen dhaniyye ingey. Varah loves babe
Dn nudhey kootha adhi madu kurey
I read or not. Itx none of your business. I know u love my story.if ur not reading comments gina kuran comment kuran hurey. Jxt Idc?
I read or not.. Its not ur business, I know u love my story.? love you ol and idc
Saabahey dhariya saabahey????
Hehe. Aslu thedhah bunaya I was really bored at home. ehnve kuraane kameh nethigen commnt kury. Now got a chance to go out. Secret reipe ah midhany kaan. Bye bye X-girl. Mirey anehkaaves mi pagege mi storyge commnt bain dhimaavaane kamah heekoh vakivelan. shukuruiyya alhuganduge comment that kiyan thiya beykaaru kurehvi vaguthu kolhah. v.salaam
haha Amilla ah Author id in comment kohfa adhi Unregistered inves comment kohfa. You deserve a big loud laugh
Koohtha kuraane kamh nethiyyaa namaadhu kohfa qran kiyavabh. Nd hendhunaa havru GE zikuruthah. Gaimu savaabu libeyne.
Dn nudhey kootha adhi madu kurey
Kootha hajam kuran dhas kureyy
Ey mi koohtha mihr dhogu vx eba hadhaa story furathama keemoa. Ekm anehkaa ebain kohfa i did not read your story oa. Hama H1N1 annany
Hahah.. maisha ah vure ginain amihla ah coment kohfa hurimeeheh mitha nuves neh… thi publish kuri fothehge name aa ehkoh buneleema dhw ingeynee… thi fotheh ge fenvarehves.. .. j viyas thii boduvaru hen heevanee…. enmen kohfa huri coments thakun heekuran maisha ah lesson eh libihjje kamah… we all love ur stories x .girl.. keep up the good wrk.. 🙂 😀
Koohtha vx mi story ah v intixaaru kuraakan Eba ngeh ??? koohtha vx thi hadhaa molhethi dhogu than dwhh first part keemw and I now I don’t read ey ???
Nd thiha like nuvaa story eh vihya nukiyaa adhi coment ves nukoh dhookohlihya rangalhee..:D
What is wrong with you people.. Who ever is writing the story let the writer continues.. whether the write comments on her own or not y shud u give a damn.. U guys r supposed to read the story not fight n make fun of the reader.. Such childish people.. Grow up people.. This is not a platform to fight..
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Haha make fun of the reader? Really? Lol ? Amilla ah liyaa ehchehi kiyaafa comment kohba dhw? kiyey nukiyey eh neynge ehnu
Kootha waru dhogu hadhaa myhaku adhi nudeken.. aslu koohtha mi story kiyaafa comment kuraniy..kootha akiy enme perfect myhaa dw dn.. heyo nuwaane myhunah mistake hedeyne.. we are humans nd humans do mistake.. nd koohtha gaaboolu kuraa gothugai mi hurihaa comment kuraniy x girl.. ehnvma koohtha ah hurihaa ehchevx feney hurihaa kmh ngey so knmevx kmh dauwaa eba kurewey dw .. aslu koohtha ah waahaka liyan neyge ehnvma myhaku maa molhah kamh kuraathy j waniy.. thi dn bodu waru koohthaa..
Kootha foohi vegenvx u do read dhw my story..u shud have done other things to fill our time?? u read my story and comment it be cox U LOVE IT..so cheers?
Lol ge bahuruva haadha hadiey. Hajam lol
Reethi bahuruwain waahaka dehkun edhen..
aslu mivaahaka vvvvv rythi.. x girl ah bunan beynun vany ur hama best ey…Kootha foohi vefa huryma ehn comment kurevuny.. Sorry everyone.. Sorry x girl.vvvv loabiwey❤??
Your not koohtha!!
Haha another koohtha?
Aslu xell blv kuraa gothugai mi waahaka reethi new waahaaka akah balaafa. Mistake hedeyne e ee adhi massala ehnun . Keep it up . Kon irakun den next part.
vaahaka liyaa kudhinnah hiyvaru dhinumuge badhalugai xuvaabu kuraa gotah comment thah kurumaky v dhera vaan jehey kameh..x girl, myhun kiyaa ehchss thakun hiyyvaru libigane kuriah dhaan v.. v rythi mi story
wait..whts wrng wid u ppl. ehchehi nukiyaa vaahaka kiyan beynun nuvanyaa nukyma v..btw mivaahaka nw kinda interesting..gud luck x grl
Amila ah liyun theriyaa comment kuravvaanama ekan rangalhu kohlavva
Eyrah e nimuneee nu
Dhen maa bodu haasaru ehen kudhin nudhemiyas
Hini annanee
Hama ehaa foni tha hini ananee!!!!
Alhugandah visnunu gothuga writer ebahuri v ginain eki nan namuga comnt kohfa. Liyun v ehvattar.. adi writer eba masahkaiy kurey ehen myhun rulhi aruvaa bodah mithan fasaada kuran thats not good x girl.. ehcheh nubune huriyya thimage agu ehen myhun kurimathyga hifehehteyne.. maisha ge name ga ehme kuryga kohfa huri comnts vx aee x girl ge liyun.
Seriously com? x grl ge writing i mean bas beynun kuraagothah ehn myhun vx comment kohfaane. Zamaan badhaluvaahn Gina myhun letting akurun liyaairu short form ah liyany. So Hama liyun ehgoeh vumakee naadhiru kamh nun.
X grl fan , ENO packate h boan viynu!!!
LOL?
I saw bella repunzal nd elsa. Mi story in nuuny adhi dhima nuvey disney princess thakaa. Author ah bunelaany everyone do make mistakes ey. That doesnt mean you should lie to everyone’s face. Hama reehchah bunefa maafah edhunu nama o ehcheh nubuni nama dhw.. Dhen balaalyma varah reehchah ingey eki nan namuga commng kohfa mi hunny X girl kan. Aslu furathama fashaiganna kolhu commnt nulibunas thigothah reethi story upkohdhenya reader baigannaane. Ekam famous vaan nubai gotheh thi choose kury. Mi sitega ulhey gina kudhin mi dailykoh story kiyaa commnt kiyaa kudhin. So thigothah eki nan namuga commnt kuraairu varah bodah ingey. Not only me. Mi sitega dailkoh story kiyaa kudhinnah ingeyne. Ehnve evarah kudhin e kiyany author ey commnt kohfa ae. Nd reehchah balaalyma eba ingey author ge commenting style nd author ehn nan namuga kohfa huri commnt thah. X girlge fan nd bella ah varah salaam. Baeh kudhin hajam nuvegen huvaa kuranves eba kiyaa ?
I will give a big fat Lol to X.girl. I am a huge fan of koohtha ?
For your kind info Cinderella aky vx Disney princess eh does that mean u are also x girl ?? mi vaahaka ah haadha demand bodey dwhh I recommend x girl vx honest vaan and vaahaka nimendhen genesdheyne kamah hykuran ❤
I am not a princess, I am a queen?
Oh god rapunzel ?
Ehn princess ulhthi eu cindrella gennan mi commnt kuret. Alhe get ve bae dhw.
Hae hae hae get vebae.
Fosheneeki nuuney ???
Cinderella aky vx princess eh..does that mean ur also xgrl..lol, x grl dheke thihaa rulhi annanya comment nukuryma vnu..
Foshey vaahaka dhekevije thr mithaanga Cinderella hamaiga thr thihury hae hae wefa dwh get waan v Cinderella hn heevany hae hae vaan ehn thanakh dhaan v nu
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Allah gandhy huwaafa kohfa bunebah ehn myhunge name ga hurihaa comment eh kurany x girl kan ehaa yageen kamaaeku bunan kereyne myhaku Eba huribaa?? For sure I am not x girl and there will be many more like me.. Huwaakoh bunan kerenyaa bunebh
Konme konme kamakah allah gandhee huvaa kurakah nuvaane… Aee varah nubai aadhaeh..
Mi part ves v nice….. Keep it up x-girl… Luv you.. ?… Next part konirakun…. Meehaku kiyaa ehchakah alhaanulaa story kuriyah gendhahchey….
Thankyu Yoonii.. hurihaa readers ah bunelan beynunvany vv bodah thanx ey.. Vaahaka liyan ithuru hiyyvareh libeny..lv u ol?
Gud..thihen thibeyni kudhin…waiting next part
Aslu vahaka eh bunantha…. Konme meehaku kobme ehchekey bunyas first lartga comment koffa aee xgirl amilla ah hama mi story ah.. But olhigen.. Amilla id ga… Aee alhugandahvex ehfaharu olhigen amilla id ga vahaka akah comment kurevunu ehen namehga kuran ulhenikoh… Caux alhugandu alah mi site beynunn kuran feshitha kairi veema alhugandu handhaaneh neiyh log out vaakah.. And comment liyefa post kuran fihthali thana handhaan v id in log out nuveveykan..and eyru already e comment post vejje.. So alhigandah yageen xgirk ahvex v e gothahkann.. But emme fueuthamavex bunee ehen vahaka akah comment kuran ulhenikohneii.. Aslu thedhah buninama.. Mi kudhin miharu miha rulhi ais geneiy noolheyne dhw…. Heekuran dhenvex xgirl thedhu bunaane kamah.. Handhaan kurey adhi dhuvaheh eba oiyg.. Edhuvahun dhigu hadhakah anga hulhuvaavex nuleveyne… Miadhu thedhu bunefiyya edhuvahuh libey azaabu madhu vaane.. Allah ah biruvethi ve bala..
Mi part vex v rythii ❤
Dhen vaany kihinehbaa dhw… nishy e ulheny kihineh tha alhe.. ?
Let’s see dhw Thuka
Vrh vvv salhi mi part!!!! I just luv it!!! Mi kahala vaahaka kiyaa hiyvx vani ???
Thnx Aysha
Congratulation u got 100 comments….anyways varah reethi ingey mivaahaka
Thnkyu Aysha..?
I saw bella repunzal nd elsa. Mi story in nuuny adhi dhima nuvey disney princess thakaa. Author ah bunelaany everyone do make mistakes ey. That doesnt mean you should lie to everyone’s face. Hama reehchah bunefa maafah edhunu nama o ehcheh nubuni nama dhw.. Dhen balaalyma varah reehchah ingey eki nan namuga commng kohfa mi hunny X girl kan. Aslu furathama fashaiganna kolhu commnt nulibunas thigothah reethi story upkohdhenya reader baigannaane. Ekam famous vaan nubai gotheh thi choose kury. Mi sitega ulhey gina kudhin mi dailykoh story kiyaa commnt kiyaa kudhin. So thigothah eki nan namuga commnt kuraairu varah bodah ingey. Not only me. Mi sitega dailkoh story kiyaa kudhinnah ingeyne. Ehnve evarah kudhin e kiyany author ey commnt kohfa ae. Nd reehchah balaalyma eba ingey author ge commenting style nd author ehn nan namuga kohfa huri commnt thah.i really like koohtha. I am a huge fan of you. X.girl comment kuraairu dhenves visnaigen ingey kuraany ?
x girl bunefi dw olhigenney kurewuniy.. so aharumennakh neyge eiy thedeh kamh or dhogeh kamh.. mi situation ga aharunmen blv kuran jeheynee x girl buni ehchakh. X girl e buniy thedeh or dhogeh kamu gai waanama judgment day ekan vx ngeyne.. dw ekm mithaaga thibi baeh kudin hama yageen kamaa eku e bunaniy eiy x girl hedhi dhogekey hageegai neygey iru.. ehnvma waki myheh nun enmevx eba jehey Allah ah biruwethi waan .. heekurun thakun duruheliwaan.. shakku kurumakiy vx rangalhu edevigen waa amaleh nun.. ehn myhunnah jehssun kurumakiy vx edevigenwaa amaleh nun.. ehnvma ehn kujjaku buni gothah ehaa yageen waa myhaku Allah gandy huwaakohfa buney x girl e hedy dhogekey nd mi hurihaa comment kuraniy hama x girl ey .. alhugandu bunaaniy hama gaimuvx alhugandu miy x girl eh nooney.. ekan denewodi genwaa faraatheh eba wey.. so myhunnah jehsun nukoh shakku nukoh thimaa kiyaa hiy wanyaamu waahak kiyaaniy if not nukiyaaniy .. rangalhu gotheh buneden beynun waanam reechah comment kohfa ethankolhu rangalhu kuran bunaaniy.. we are humans nd humans do mistake.. mistake hedhigen dw kuri erumeh libeyniy vx..
X grl ???????????????
Mi story feshigen me kiyan. Story kuriyah dhaa goi reethi. Bt baeh ibaaraahthah genesfai hunnah gothun kiyan undhagoo ingeyy. Dhn visnaalaigen libuneema you can do better than.? And bunelan othee ehn name thakugaa comment nukuraa sheyy. Eyrun readers bala eh nugahnaane dho. Varah reethi koh ingeyy baeh thahthanugaa amilla ah comment kohfaa huri kan. And I do accept olhigen vx vedhaane kamah. Ekam abadhu eh kameh e thah faharaku thakuraaru nuvaane dho. Maisha namuga kithah faharu eba inn rep kohfaa. Hama rangalha kah mi bunelee ingey. All the best. And be honest dear ??
I also didn’t read mi story maa comment ginavegen mi balaalee.. thedheh me ah ves faahanga kurevunu meega gina comment koffa imy author amilla yah kan. I think aee v findi amaleh. mi site ga v gina story thakah negative comment kurey ekam ehem writers readers aa jassaalaigen comment nikurey. eki nan namuga. v foohi vejje mi story aa medhu. I will definitely not rread the story. ehaa dhah fenvarakah writer vettuneema. mihen buneema ahannaa dhimaalahves govaalaane hehe
Evvx Ehn namegga comment kohfa eh noannaane.. Maisha ehga namuga vx..bayaku myhn xgrl a jassaalaign ulheny..honest veveyny mivarah.readers kairy bunelan beynunvany Ehn myhnnah shakku nukuraashey..n comment tah kuraa iru vaki myhakaa jassaalaign comment kurumuge badhalugai productive comments tah kuraashey..tbh x grl noannaane Ehn evvx namegga comment kohfaeh..bash readers in bayaku x girl ah vgn comment kuryma ebahuri x girl kameh hykoh…x girl nukuraaa kameh nuvx hutteyne dhw
Sun reehchey kiyaafa amihla ah Kuri cmnt o
Joke of the century? Haha Dhen ehnviyya thedhuveri kamaa eku buneba kuri part ah amilla ah reehcye kiyaafa kuri comment? hama huvaa kohfa bunan kerey ae mi story ah kuri commntehkan. Bust v ma olhuvaalan ehn story akahshey buny
Myhn ehaa avahah judge kuraakh nuvaane..e comments tah kuru ku
Judge my foot. X girl adhi alah dhw thi story thi liyany? ehn v ma x girl ah neyngeny ey.. aslu Normally esfiyaige ulhey kiyuntherin dailykoh kiyaane commentsves. emyhunah notice vaane Writers nd readerge comment. KIthanme olhuvalaan masehkai kuriyas. X-girl fan aaa bellaa aa nan namuga rahdhu dhemun thi dhany x-girlkan kiyaa konme meehakah ingeyne. So my advice is first lear to be honest…
Myhn ehaa avahah judge kuraakh nuvaane..e comments tah kuri kudhinnah ingeyne aee x girl nunkan..so comment kura kudhinvx honest vaane govaalan..author ge namuga nun Ehn evvx namegga comment kohfa huri kan yageen vaairu, o hykuraariu
Thi kureveny shakku and myhunge boluga dhogu tah thi alhuvany..
Kurin reehchey kiyaafa amihla ah Kuri cmnt o
Haha,, Hama hini annany.. Dhen mihaaru aneh ukulhu thi use kuray sympathy hoadhan. Comment kuraa kudhin honest vaan govaalaairu Furathama Author Honest vaan govaalan. Authorves amilla ah comment gina kuran reeyhchey kiyaafa comment kuraairu. Nd thigothah sympathy hoadhan olhuvaalaa iru hama rangalhah X-girl ah ingeydhw X-girlves ehn nan namuga X-girl dhifaauga comment kurikan. Bunantha rangalhu vaahaka eh? Mithaa ulheny moyainneh nooney. Readers dailykoh comment kiyaa hadhaairu maa rangalhah notice vaane. So furathama X-girl honest veba dhw. Aaan yes thimanna comment nukuramey kiyaafa dhogu hedhiyas X-girl amilla ah ingeydhw thimman ehn nan namuga comment kuraakan. We don’t have valid proof Ekam Hurihaa kameh molhah dhenevodigenvaa faraathehvey. Miadhu thihen kithanme dhogeh hedhi dhaane. Ekam rangalhu gothuga thedhuveri kamaaeku kuriyah dhoyaiyya allah thibaage masehkathuga barakaai lahvaane.
When next part…i like this story
Thankyu flower.. Tonight genesdheynan
X girl mage commentah reply kuran biru gannany tha? Noonithedhu haama kuran fas jehenytha?
Ryn ge story nikumnyma mi vaahaka kiyan feshy,,, Ekam Comment thah fenifaves mi vaahaka kiyan foohivejje,,, MIhaaru ulhey writers ves dhw,, Kikey bunaany,, shinemen kahala kudhinnah nuvaane mikudhinney,,, X-girl ah heyo visnun dhehvaashi,,,
Aameen
ameen
X-girl maafah edhen vehje dhw
mm Fadaboeba
mm ah tha ingeny maafah edhen v ma..amilla meehaa islaahvebala dhw
X girl nujehey knmehn maafah edheykah thihaa hayaai kuda baeh ge kairin.. nd thimyhunnah kureweyne ehvx kmh noannaane.. knme gotheh wiyas waahaka liyuniyma kiyaane myhun waane.. x girl ehaa dah fenwarakh nuwettey dhah fenwarah wetti gathy comment kuraa baeh myhun.. knme myhakuvx emyhakaa dimaalh hadi ehchehi kiyanyaa dhifaau ga waahaka dahkaane.. thy dn enme molhu myhunno dn kiywe tho amillayah waahaka nuliyaa thi thibeniy..
Yageeney thivx X-girl ge agakan
mm fada boeba dhw
Mashahves yageen X-girlkan. X-Girl use kuraane 2 dot jumala nimeythaanga. hama anthareesvey miulhey meehunaa hedhi
2 dot jahan ngeny Hama ekani x grl ah tha. Koohtha vx jehyma jeheyne. Comment thah egothah kuran Hama evaru balaafa kuraa myhun vx thibeyne like koohtha
X-girl aa dhekolhah kuraairu eyna comment kuraa gothah kuran try kohfaane. ekam ehkolhah talk kuraairu keehvebaa X-girl comment kuragoi balaigen comment kuran v eh.. manje kiyey nukiye eh ingeytha eba? bust vaneenu thi
Masheh noon dhw amihla ah cmnt kurany
Bella madun hurey… Thandhoru neygenya nukiyani
Bellage bahuruvahuri gothun ingeydhw hayai kuda ee kaakukan
Bella name ga hadikan waahaka dhahkaafa hury aslu kurin bella name ga comment kuri kujjaa nun.. alhugandu ehaa hadi bahakun waahaka nudahkn.. mikan denewodi genwaa faraathun eba wey.. Allah knows better..
keke.. kada v ma ae mihaaru ehn meehunge comment eyo. majaa dhen mikudhin kulhey game..
Hajam ah aslu hajam nuwevunu .. eiy den ma kuraane kamh tha? Stupid hajam …
Koohtha mee kaakutha adhi meehunnah faadu kiyan. Amilla ah vaahaka liyefa up kohbh. Koohtha ge huri fenvareh vx ngeyne thaa. Mi story ah ekanyeh noon mi koohtha moya gov kee. Ryn ge story ah vx. Like nuvanyaa nukiyaanee. Aharnvx esfiyaige story daily koh kiyan. Ekm nudhan liyuntheriyaa ah hithah aihaa ehcheh govamunneh.
Haha Alhugandu govaane ehcheh ingeyni alhugandah. ae thibeyfulhaa aa behey kameh noon ingeytho. Dhen lala
Saabahey koohthaaa
Thank you mm
Mashah yageen mi koohtha vx eki nan namuga comment kuraakan emyhaku ulhey goi thaa ehn myhunaa medhu vx feel vaaany
Haha no. Koohtha hama eh namuga mi comment kurany. Ehnve ehnu koohthage comment eha aginai. mi part ah koohtha ahvure ginai comment kohfa huri meeheh neennaane.. Ekam thikudhin koohtha aa face kuran jehilun vegen eki nan namuge thi comment kurany. Ekani hunnan jehunas koohtha hunnaany koohthage gothuga. thi meehunah ketheh nuvey eh namuga kohgen adhi eyah support dheyn eki nan namuga comment kuran jehey viyaa. Comment kiyaalyma ingeyne koohtha koffa huri comment thah.. Dhen miyah reply dheyn ulhey bella nd X-girlge fan. majaa varah thi meehun ulhey gothun
koba x-girl koohtha yaa eku date akah dhaan v nu. koohtha maa boah foohi vegennw ulheny..
my request to all readers. stop commenting to this story. no need to waste ur time reading nd commenting to.a story whose writer is so dishonest, surely she her self has lost her value in our eyes. she degraded herself. arguing nd calling others bad jus cox of her ego. im done with this. gudbye
agree.. eyna kuran ulhunu kan vejje viyyaa comment gina kuran ulhunee ekan vejje. congrats for getting many comments through dishonesty. a new form of marketing. lier.
Totally agree with you. By the way congrts X-girl for getting so many comments. Your dream came true. NOt only X-girl. X-girl fan & bella too
Mioh kameh dwh mi nunas mi site ga vaahaka liyaey writer dheke like nuwanyaa vaahaka nukiyabah dwh comment kuran time waste kurany kykurn!! Like waa writers ge vaahaka thah kyma hunnaany ragalhah
That’s none of your business
myhaku story eh liyuney kiyaafa eiy koohtha aa behey kamh vx nun.. hurihaa kanthaa behen ngey gola eh miy huwaa .. dariyaa thi noon kamh kuran neygeniy tha?? Aan neygey thy thaa dw j vegen thiulheniy .. you are a big loser koohtha.. and you deserve a big fat LOL..
loser loser loser
Really? I didnt know that. Thank you so much for telling me bella
YOu copied my ” Deserves big fat lol” sentences which is actually created for you guys… bravoooo.. poopies….
Bella akah neyngeytha
Loser akah vegenney winner akah veveyniy!?
Koohtha saabahey adhi hihvaru kohlaa???
Mi koohtha mn ge eba ulhey hajam kurumuge massala eh… ebai ragalhu kohlaa… ?
I have one question. Keehvetha comment kuraairu enmen ehafahraa thi kurany. bella anna iru elsaves eba aadhey. eyge maana aky hama eki nan namugaey comment kuramun thidhany. hehe visnaalaigen ulheba dhw
Koohtha thiulheny vaanuvaa.com ga thr…. knmevs kujjaku alhe eheevebh koohtha ah….
Elsa thihuriynu???
Elsa ah ingeyeh nu vaanuvaa . Com huri than, so they bala koohtha ah ehiyvaan?
Aslu eiy koohtha eh nun eiy kuhtha
You only know how to bark dhivehin bunanyaa wahwah jehun and you deserve a ONE way ticket to hell and RIP..
haha thives hama X-girl. Eh gadiehga comment kurmaun thidhany. Ehfaharu bella aneh faharu elsa mihaaru blacky o. kekkekkekekekkekekekekekek
Koohtha thee hama fisaari kanbaleh ? i salute you
Need some popcorn
dhefaa dheytherah pop corn alhaigen ovebala
ebunaahen. mi pop corn kaan anna thantha. mi koohthage supporter eh thoahcheh
Bayyehnu. Maes huthu ehcheseh nukiyan dhw. Nufoshibala.
Koohtha anga aa dhefai iraigen ovebala mithaa. Kihaa boduvejje kameh meena akaa hedhi mihaaru. bolah nuhoroppaan
Fake elsa…. v elsa ah vaa hiyvey dhw…. beynun vias thidhen bodu varu… hama hini annany….
Haadha dhah fenvarakh thi vetteny koohtha… elsa eh belle eh repunzel eh huthuru bahakun vaahaka eh nudhakkaane…. thihaa dhaiy fen varakh emyhun nueh vetteyne… knme hen elsa namuga huthuru bahuruvain vaahaka dhakkaane kameh neh… j viyas thi bodu varu
bodu museebaatheh kahala meehheh koohtha mi
Allah akbar. THihaa hadi mudadhaaru bahuruva gengulhey meehunaa jadhalu kuraakah nethin. varah salaam. . . . . . .
N im nt u koohtha… huthuru bahiruvain vaahaka dhakkan… thihaa dhaiy fenvarakh masheh nueh vetteynan….. hama hajam nuvany dhw…. pispiss… mashah hama yagyn elsa namuga huthuru bahun vaahaka dhekky hama thi gotheh fotheh neh koohtha kn… blacky buny hama ragalhah… u only knw hw to bark… bark bark bark… dhn v salaam kuraane kameh nethigen ulhey koohtha ah
Thiy dhogeh elsa?
First of all its koohtha not kutha?
And elsa your lame?
Finally You guys( x girl ge allies) are annoying and dont know how to digest( i recommend to see a doctor?)
Kootha birun filyy…kootha thy evvx ehcheh nun xgrl a alhaa balaairu,, x grl vaahaka liyamun vaaahaka publish kuramun 180 ahvure Gina comment kuramun eaah reply kurany,,loll..so bunelan beynunvany x grl aa nubeheyshey…ur a beeeeeeeg zero…dn lalalalal
Idc kmme myhaku kmme ehcheh kiyas..story liyun nuhuttaaanan and I will upload it asap. So ppl kiyaa ehchessakun down eh nuvaaane? love you ol my fans
You don’t have fans…. Mujib malaamai kurany bustveema…. Dhnvx kuh gaboolukohba…. Maafah edhumaki kusheh noon
Koohtha ah ngeynii wahwah jahn nd auguraana gowan..
Adhi fake elsa namuga auguraana gowaniy.. nd i dnt need to copy your sentence.. ehn hama ekani buneweniy koohtha ah tha .. oh god thankolheh kurin bunelinama koohthaa .. oooops kuhtha ey dw miy
Hama emma watson hen bella foniyey!!
Tell you what?? your no one!!
Got it!!!
NO ONE
Koothage anga mulhi esfiyaiga..thaahiru nama vx rycheh nu
Alhe elsa ah thihaa yagyn kamaa eku belle r rapunzel egothag comment nukuraanekan ingeny keehveyo? ?
Ehn v ma ekaku dhw thin namuga thi comment kurany. Ehnve ehnu ehaa yagynkan thiothy
Wait wait Lol kiyaa myhaku march 21 van a dhuwahu 2:39 ga ” lol a big fat lol” jahaafa…… Busted busted koohtha busted ….koohtha hithun v saalihu vgn eki nan namuga comment kurany neygeyne kamah tha? Thaubaa vgn ehn myhunah echiss kiyan anga hulhuwaany
Oho mhr miothy bust wefa dw .. kobr koohtha ehchekey kiyaabala dw dnn
Ekm mi koohtha ulheyne dw maa molhu myhakh wegen .. busted busted .. Hahahahaahahahahahaha kuhtha bark bark bark bark .. miy mhr Lol kuhtha hahahahahahaha Adhivx mey fuhpaalaign auguraana gowaathi ehn nan thakuga ..
Ohhh got it. Repanzel bella nd elsaves hunnany ham ehgithakah comment kohfa. Eh gothakah thiki jahaafa. So thi hama ekeh dhw. Anehkaa X.girl tha???
Ekaku nun comment kuraniy .. hama thafaathu thin myhun mi comment kuraniy .. mhr saafu wejje bunebala ah ..
Koohtha mhr bunebala ah change vee tha?
Bunebalaaa kiyve hey change weeee?
I am really sorry for everything. Alhugandah maaf kohdhehchey. Well wishes ?
Your not koohtha!!!
Ahah another trick of x girl!!?
Koohtha kurinvx thi goi otheh nu dw..
V v reethi story… Dhn ekamaku j viyas thy bodu varu… alhaanulaaa… vaahaka kurish gendhaathi…