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“ބަޓް ޝީ އިޒް ދަ ގަރލް” ހަމްދާން އެހެންބުނުމަށްފަހު އެބުރުނުއިރު އޭނާ އަށް ފެނުނީ އެގަޑީގައި އެތަނުން ފެންނާނެ ކަމަށް އުންމީދު ކުރި މީހެއްނޫނެވެ.

“މަމައީޝާ…”ލަސްލަހުން ހަމްދާނަށް ބުނެލެވުނެވެ. “ކީއްވެ މާ ފާޑާކަށް ބަލަހައްޓައިގެން ތިހިރީ؟. މަ ފެންނަނީ ބިރުވެރި އެއްޗެއްގެ ސިފައިގަތަ؟”. ދެންމެ ދެއްކި ވާހަކަތައް މައިޝާއަށް އަޑުނީވޭކަން ޔަޤީންވުމުން ހަމްދާނަށް ހަމަޖެހުމުގެ ނޭވާއެއް ދޫކޮށްލެވުނެވެ. ހަމްދާނަށް ހުރެވުނީ މައިޝާ އަށް ބަލަހައްޓައިގެންނެވެ. “މޮޅުވީމަ ކޮންގްރެޓްސް ކިޔަން މިއައީ. ފޮނިވެގެން ވަހަކަ ނުދައްކާ ހުއްޓަސް މިރޭ އެކްސްޓްރާ އަށްާާާާ އަންނައިރު މަގޭ ނޯޓް ފޮތް ގެންނާތި.” މައިޝާ ދިޔުމުން ސަމާހު ހިފަހައްޓައިގެން ހުރި ހިނިގަނޑު ފަޅައިގެން ދިޔައެވެ. ” މަ ހިއެއް ނުކުރަން ކަލޭ ތިހާ ފިޑިކަމަށް. މައިޝާ ކައިރީ އަވަހަށް ބުނަން އުޅޭ. އެހެންނޫނީ ތެޔޮނާށި ކާޅު ޖަހައިގެންފާނެ.” ސަމާހު ވަރަށް ސީރިއަސް ވެލާފައި ވާހަކަ ދައްކަން ފެށިއެވެ. ހަމްދާން ސަމާހުގެ ވާހަކައަށް ސަމާލުކަން ދެމުން ވިނަގަނޑު މަތީ އޮށޯވެލިއެވެ. ” އަސްލު އަހަރެން އޭނާ ދެކެ ވަރަށް ލޯބިވޭ. މަށަށް ހީވަނީ މައިޝާވެސް މަ ދެކެ ލައިކް ވާހެން. ދެން ނޭގެ ދޯ. ކޮންމެ ކަމަކަށްވެސް ވަކި ވަގުތެއް އޮވެއެންނު. އެވަގުތު ޖެހުނީމަ ބުނާނަން. އެކަމް ހީއެއްނުވޭ އޭނަ އެހެން މީހަކުދެކާ ދޭތެރޭ ވިސްނާހެންވެސް”. އެކި ވާހަކަތަކުގައި އެދެމީހުން ތިއްބާ އިވުނީ މަޤްރިބް ނަމާދު ބަންޤީގެ އަޑެވެ. ” އެއޮތް ދިނީ ބަންޤިވެސް. ކަލެއާހެދި ފިހާރައަށްވެސް ނުދެވުނު. މިރޭ އަދި ކްލާހަށްވެސް ދާންޖެހޭ. ހިނގާ ދަމާ.” ހަމްދާން އެހެން ބުނެލުމަށްފަހު ސަމާހުއާއި ދެމީހުން ހިގައިގަތީ ގެއަށް ދިޔުމަށެވެ.

އޯލެވެލް ޓެސްޓުތައް ގާތްވަމުން އަންނާތީ މައިޝާމެން އުޅުނީ ކިޔެވުމައިގެން ވަރަށް ބުރަކޮށެވެ. ހުރި ހަމައެކަނި އަންހެންކުއަޖާއަށް ވުމުން މައިންބަފައިންގެ ހުވަފެންތަކުގައި ކުލަ ޖެއްސުމަށް މައިޝާ ވަރަށް މަސައްކަތް ކުރެއެވެ. މިރާން އެކޭ އެއްގޮތަށް މައިޝާވެސް ބޭނުންވަނީ ގަދަދިހައެއްގައި އޭނާގެ ނަން ހިމެނުމަށެވެ. ކިޔެވުމާއިގެން ބުރަކޮށް އުޅެންޖެހުމުން ކުޑަދުވަސްކޮޅަކަށް ނަމަވެސް ނަޖާހުގެ ޚިޔާލްތަކާއި މައިޝާއަށް ދުރުވެވުނެވެ. ދޭތެރެއަކުން މައިޝާ އާއި، ހަމްދާން އާއި، ސަމާހުގެ އިތުރުން އިތުރު ދެކުއްޖަކުވެސް ބައިވެރިވެގެން ގްރޫޕް ސްޓަޑީޒް ހަދަން މައިޝާމެން ގެއަށް އާދެއެވެ.

“ދޮންބޭ.ބިޒީ ނޫނިއްޔާ އާދެބަ މިތަންކޮޅު ކިޔާލަދޭން. އެކަކަށްވެސް ނޭގުނު ހަދާކަށް.” ލެޕްޓޮޕް ނަގައިގެން މަސައްކަތެއް ކުރަން އިން މިރާން އަށް މައިޝާ ބުނެލިއެވެ. ” އައްދެ ހާދަ ފޯމަލް ތިވީ. މައިގެ ކަމަކަށް ދޮންބެ ބިޒީއެއް ނުވާނޭ ދުވަހަކުވެސް” ކުރަން އިން މަސައްކަތް އެއްފަރާތްކޮށްލަމުން މައިޝާމެން ގާތަށް ދާން މިރާން ހިގައިގަތެވެ. މިރާން މައިޝާ މެންނަށް އެ ސުވާލު ކިޔަވަދޭން ފެށިއެވެ. ވަރަށް ޝައުޤުވެރިކަމާއެކު ކިޔަވަން ތިއްބާ އިވުނީ ގޭގެ ބެލް ޖެހި އަޑަށެވެ. ” އެއޮތް އައީ ނިޝްޔާ”. މައިޝާ އަވަސް އަވަހަށް ދޮރު ހުޅުވަން ދިޔައެވެ. އެތެރެއަށް ވަދެގެން އައި އަންހެންކުއްޖާ ފެނި މިރާން ހުރީ ހައިރާންވެ އެހެން ތަނެއް ބަލާލަން ނޭގިފައެވެ. އެއީ ހަމަ އެ މޫނެވެ. މީގެ ދުވަސްތަކެއް ކުރިން އެހިތުގެ ހަމަޖެހުން ނަގާލި އަންހެންކުއްޖާއެވެ. މައިޝާ އެހާވަރަށް އެކިޔާ ނިޝްޔާ އަކީ މިއީތާއެވެ. މިރާންގެ ކުރިމަތީގައި ހުރި ގޮނޑީގައި ނިޝްޔާ އިށީނުމުން ، އޭނައަށް އަވަސް ނަޒަރެއް ދެމުން މިރާން ފިލާވަޅައިގެން ކުރިއަށްދިޔައެވެ.

ދުވަސްތައް ވޭތުަވަމުންގޮސް އޯލެވެލް އިމްތިހާންވެސް ނިމި ގަދަ ދިހައެއްގެ ތިންވަނައިގައި މައިޝާ ހިމެނުނެވެ. ސަޢީދާ އާއި މާޖިދު އެމީހުންގެ ދަރިފުޅުގެ ކާމިޔާބީއާމެދު ވަރަށް ފަޚްރުވެރިވިއެވެ. ދޮށީ ދަރިފުޅު މިރާން އެކޭ އެއްގޮތަށް މައިޝާވެސް އެމީހުމްގެ ނަން ފަވާލާ ފަޚްރުވެރިކޮށްދިނީތީއެވެ.އެމީހުންގެ ހުރިހާ އުންމީދެއް މިހާރު ގުޅިފައިވަނީ އުމުރުން 14 އަހަރުގެ މިފްޒާލް އާއިއެވެ. މައިޝާގެ މި ކާމިޔާބީ ފާހަގަކުރުމަށް އޭނާގެ މައިންބަފައިން ބޭނުންވީ ކުޑަވަރެއްގެ ހަފްލާއެެއް ބޭއްވުމަށެވެ.

“އޭ މިރޭ މައިޝާ ގާތުގައި އެވާހަކަ ބުނަންވީނު.” ސަމާހުމެންގޭގެ ޖޯލިފަތީގައިތިބެ ހަމްދާން އާއި ދެމީހުން މަޝްވަރާކުރަމުން ދިޔައީ މައިޝާ ގާތުގައި އެވާހަކަ ބުނާނެ ގޮތަކާމެދުގައެވެ. “އިރާދަކުރެއްވިއްޔާ މިރޭ މި ހިތުގެ ހާލު މައި ކައިރީގައި ކިޔައިދޭނަން. މިހުރިހާ ދުވަހުވެސް މަޑުކުރީ މައިގެ ކިޔެވުމަށް އެއިން އަސަރުކޮށްފާނެތީ. މިހާރު ދެން ސްކޫލްވެސް ނިމި އެންމެން ރަނގަޅު ނަތީޖާއަކުން ފާސްވެފަ މިތިބީ. ދެން އެހާވަރަކަށް ވިސްނާކަށް ނުވެސް ޖެހޭނެއްނު.” ސަމާހު ހަމްދާނަށް ބަލާލީ އޭނާވެސް އެކަމުގައި ހަމްދާނަށް އެހީތެރިވާން ތައްޔާރަށްހުރިކަން އަންގައިދޭފަދަ ގޮތަކަށެވެ.

ލ ގަމު ތުނޑީ އަވަށުގެ މޫންވިލާ ގެއަށް ހީވަނީ ޢީދެއް އައިސްގެން އުޅޭހެންނެވެ. މުޅި ގޭގެ މާހައުލުވަނީ ހަލަބޮލިވެފައެވެ. އެކި މީހުން އެކި ކަންކަމުގައި އަވަދިނެތި އުޅެމުންދިޔައީ މިރޭ އަށެއް ޖަހާއިރު އޮންނަ މައިޝާގެ ކާމިޔާބީގެ އުފަލުގައި ބާއްވާ ހަފްލާ އަށެވެ. މައިޝާ ތައްޔާރުވެ ނިމިގެން ނުކުތުމުގެ ކުރިން އަމިްލަ ސޫރަ ލޯގަނޑުން ފަހު ފަހަރަށް ބަލާލިއެވެ. މެރޫން ކުލައިގެ މެކްސީއެއްގައި މައިޝާ ހުރި އިރު ވަކި މޮޑެލްއަކަށް ދޫނުކުރެއެވެ. ކޮށްފާވާ ލުއި މޭކަޕާއެކު އިސްތަށިގަނޑަށް ހަދާލާފައިވާ ގޮތުން އޭނާގެ ރީތިކަން ދެގުނައަށް އިތުރުވެފައިވާކަހަލައެވެ. މައިޝާގެ މި އުފާވެރި ވަގުތުގައި ނަޖާހު ހުންނާނެ ނަމައޭ އޭނަގެ ހިތަށް އެރިއެވެ.

“ދަރިފުޅާ މައިޝާ…”ދަރިފުޅުގެ ކްލާސް ކުދިން މިތިބީ.” ސިޓިންގރޫމް ތެރެއިން ސަޢީދާ ގޮވާލި އަޑަށް މައިޝާ އަވަހަށް ނުކުމެގެން ދިޔައެވެ. ” އައީދޯ..”މައިޝާ ނިޝްޔާގެ އަތުގައި ހިފާލަމުން ހިނިތުންވުމަކާއެކު ދެންތިބި ކުދިންނަށް ބަލާލިއެވެ. އެވަގުތު ނިޝްޔާ މައިޝާގެ ނަސީބާމެދު ހިތާހިތުން ރުޅި އާދެވުނެވެ. ”ހުރިހާ ރީތިކަމާއި މޮޅުކަމެއް ލިބެންވީ މައިޝާއަށް ހެއްޔެވެ؟” ނިޝްޔާގެ ހިތުގައިވާ އެއްޗެހި މޫނުމަތިން ފާޅުނުކޮށް ހިނިތުންވެލީ މައިޝާގެ ފުރާނަ ރޮއިގަންނާނެފަދަ ކަމެއް ކުރުމަށް ހިތާހިތުން ވައުދުވަމުންނެވެ.

ނިޝްޔާ އަކީ މައިޝާ ވަރަށް އިތުބާރުކުރެވޭ ރައްޓެއްސެކެވެ. އެހެންނަމަވެސް އެންމެ ފުރަތަމަ ދުވަހުން ފެށިގެން ނިޝްޔާގެ ހިތުގައި މައިޝާއާ މެދުވަނީ ނަފްރަތާއި ހަސަދައެވެ. އޭނާ ޤަބޫލުކުރާ ގޮތުގައި ހުރިހާ ރީތިކަމާއި މޮޅެއް ލިބެންޖެހޭނީ އޭނާއަށެވެ. ނަމަވެސް ހުރިހާ ކަމެއްގައި އޭނާއަށްވުރެ މައިޝާ ކުރިހޯދައެވެ.

ސްކޫލްގެ ޓީޗަރުންނާއި މައިޝާގެ ރައްޓެހިކުދިން ހަފްލގައި ބައިވެރިވިއެވެ. ތަފާތު ކެއުމުގެ ބާވަތްތަކުން މޭޒުމަތިވަނީ ފަޅުފިލުވާލާފައެވެ. ފާރަށްލެގިލައިގެން ހުރެ ކޯކް ތައްޓެއް ބޮމުންދިޔަ މިރާން ގެ ނަޒަރު ހުއްޓިފައިވަނީ ދުރުގައި ސަކަރާތްޖަހަން ހުރި ނިޝްޔާ އަށެވެ. ނިޝްޔާގެ ކޮންމެ ހަރަކާތެއްވެސް އޭނާ ބަލަމުން ދިޔައީ އެއްވެސް ފޫހިކަމެއް ނެތިއެވެ. އަމިއްލަ ކޮއްކޮގެ އެހާ ގާތް ރައްޓެއްސަކާމެދު މިފަދަ ނަޒަރަކުން ދެކުމަކީ ރަނގަޅުކަމެއްބާއޭ ހާސްފަހަރު މިރާންގެ ހިތަށް އަރައެވެ. ނަމަވެސް އެހިތުގެ މައްޗަށް ބާރުފޯރުވެވޭ ވަރަށްވުރެ އޭނާގެ ހިތްވަނީ ނިޝްޔާގެ ލޯބީގައި ދީވާނާ ވެފައެވެ. ރީތި ކުދިން ފެނުނަސް މިވަރުގެ ރީތިކަމެއް މިރާން ދުވަހަކުވެސް ނުދެކެއެވެ.

“ކޮންގްރާ މައި ބްރިލިއަންޓް ގާލް.” ވަރަށް ލޯބި ރަތްކުލައިގެ މާބޮޑިއެއް ދިއްކޮށްލަމުން ހަމްދާން ބުނެލިއެވެ. “މައި ކައިރީ އެބޮއި ވަރަށް ބޮޑު ވާހަކައެއް ބުނަންވެފަ.” ހަމްދާން ދިއްކޮށްލި މާބޮޑީގައި ހިފާލަމުން އޭނަވެސް ވާހަކައެއް ބުނަންވެފަ އޮތްކަމަށް ބުންޏެވެ. ހަމްދާނަށް ހީލެވުނީ މައިޝާވެސް ބުނަން އުޅެނީ އޭނާދެކެ ލޯބިވާ ވާހަކަ ކަމަށް ހީކޮށެވެ. ނިޝްޔާ އަށް އެވަގުތުއެތަން ފެނުމުން ދަތްކުޑި ވިކައިގަތެވެ. މައިޝާ އެހާ ހެވިފައި ހަމްދާނުގެ އަތުގައި ހިފާލިތަން ފެނުމުން ނިޝްޔާ އަށްކުރެވުނީ ނުބައި އިޙްސާސްތަކެކެވެ. ވަގުތުން މިސްރާބުޖެހީ މައިޝާމެންނާ ދިމާލަށެވެ. ” މައި އަހަރެން….” ހަމްދާންގެ ވާހަކަ މެދުކަޑާލީ ނިޝްޔާ އޭނާއަށް ގޮވުމުންނެވެ. މި ރީތި ފުރުސަތު ގެއްލުމުން ހަމްދާން ހުރީ ނިޝްޔާ ދެކެ ހިތްހަމަނުޖެހިފައެވެ. ” ދާން ހިނގާބަ ނިޝީ ގެއަށް ލައިދޭން. މިހާރު ލަސްވެސްވެއްޖެ. ބޭބެ ކުޑަކަމެއް ދިމާވެގެން ނާދެވުނު. ޕްލީސް.” ހަމްދާން ހިތްހަމަނުޖެހުނުކަން ނުދައްކާ މައިޝަާއަށް އެއްޗެއް ދޭން ޖެހޭ ކަމަށް ބުނެ އެތަނުން ދިޔައީ ނިޝްޔާ ގޮވައިގެން ދާން ބޭނުންނުވީމައެވެ. ނިޝްޔާ ދެރަވެފައި ހުރުމުން މައިޝާ އޭނާ ހިތްހަމަޖެހޭތޯ މަސައްކަތްކުރިއެވެ. ” ނިޝީ. ދޮންބެ ކައިރީ މިބުނަނީ ނިޝީ ގޮވައިގެން ދާން. ޑޯންޓް ވޮރީ.” ނިޝްޔާއަށް އިހުސާސް ކުރެވުނީ އެއީ މައިޝާ އޭނައަށް ކޮށްލި މަލާމާތެއް ކަމަށެެވެ. ނިޝްޔާ ނޫނެކޭ ބުންޏަސް މައިޝާ ދިޔައީ އޭނާގެ ދޮންބެ ގާތަށެވެ. ” ދޮންބޭ ނިޝީ އެކަނި ގެއަށް ދާން ޖެހިގެން. ދޮންބެ ދާންވީނު ނިޝީ ގެއަށް ލައިދޭން.” މައިޝާގެ އެ ޖުމްލައިން މިރާންގެ ހިތް އުފަލުން ނަށާލިއެވެ. ” އެނީތިން ފޯ ޔޫ މައި ޕްރިންސެސް.” މައިޝާގެ ކޮލުގައި ލޯބިކޮށްލަމުން މިރާން އެބުރިލީ އޭނާގެ ހިތުގެ ރާނީއާ ދިމާލަށެވެ.

މިވާހަކައިގެ ދެންއޮތް އެޕިސޯޑުގެ ލިންކު ކޮމެންޓް ސެކްޝަންގެ ތިރީގައި ވާނެއެވެ.

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209 Comments!

  1. aysh says:
    March 21, 2017 at 8:57 am

    wow…vrh vrh rythi mi partves..
    waiting for the next part

    1. X-girl says:
      March 21, 2017 at 9:08 am

      Thank you aysh..

  2. Maisha says:
    March 21, 2017 at 10:14 am

    I was wrong…. Vaahaka reethivaan fashaifi…. Waiting for next part.. ?????

    1. jookool says:
      March 21, 2017 at 10:52 am

      Lol Ekkala amilla ah comment kuraa kujaa feshy dhw.. Hini aadhey meenage vaahaka kiyanves

    2. X-girl says:
      March 21, 2017 at 10:57 am

      Thnkyu maisha?

  3. Sallu says:
    March 21, 2017 at 10:20 am

    Dhen emme reethi thankolhun thi nimmaalee… Between I love this story… Keep it up X-girl

    1. X-girl says:
      March 21, 2017 at 10:56 am

      Thnkyu sallu

    2. Anonymous says:
      March 21, 2017 at 10:58 am

      are you a boy or a girl??….because my friends also call me sallu….tell mee….

    3. sal says:
      March 21, 2017 at 10:59 am

      vaahaka varah reethi…kon dhuvahakun next part???

  4. X-girl says:
    March 21, 2017 at 11:31 am

    Nxt part Iraadha kurevviyya tmrw ga..
    Thnkyu sal?

  5. Naf says:
    March 21, 2017 at 11:45 am

    V reethi keep it up

    1. Maisha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 1:01 pm

      Thankx Naf ☺

    2. Inaa ❤ says:
      March 21, 2017 at 1:57 pm

      Miothy again maisha ge namuga thanx ey bunefa. Whats happening x girl

  6. maee says:
    March 21, 2017 at 12:03 pm

    varah reethi mi part ves

    1. Maisha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 1:02 pm

      Thankx maee☺

  7. Thaa says:
    March 21, 2017 at 12:05 pm

    Very nice story dhen konirakun anehpart up vàanee

    1. Maisha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 1:02 pm

      Thankx Thaa☺next part tomorrowga

  8. Bella says:
    March 21, 2017 at 12:32 pm

    Story wrh reethi

    1. X-girl says:
      March 21, 2017 at 1:00 pm

      Thankyu Bella?

  9. oopx says:
    March 21, 2017 at 12:47 pm

    My god ekkala amilla ah commnt kuraa kujaa. mi storyga huri gina commnt mi X-girl amilla ah kohfakan yagyn

    1. Maisha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 1:05 pm

      You are wrong oopx..

    2. oopx says:
      March 21, 2017 at 1:08 pm

      Oh really? trust denied

  10. Maisha says:
    March 21, 2017 at 1:04 pm

    Oops sorry guys.. Author ID uin nuun dhw mi commnt kurevuny. really sorry

    1. Maisha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 1:07 pm

      Who are you?

  11. Maisha says:
    March 21, 2017 at 1:06 pm

    Thankyu everyone for the lovely comments

  12. Maisha says:
    March 21, 2017 at 1:11 pm

    Ehbai meehun J vaane meehaku reehchah vaahakaeh liyanyaa

    1. lol says:
      March 21, 2017 at 2:39 pm

      LOl A big fat lol. X girl Author id in bunan nukerigen commnt kohfi anehkaaves

  13. Bella says:
    March 21, 2017 at 1:31 pm

    Myhunnah jehssun nukoh waahaka liyaa hiy wanyaamu amilla yah waahka liyumah gowaalan maisha ah ..

    1. Maisha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 11:26 pm

      Thanx Bella

  14. Bella says:
    March 21, 2017 at 1:38 pm

    Mi story liyaa kujjaa akiy maisha tha? Ekm liyun theriyaa ge comment innaniy green kulaige.. maisha akh neygunu dw ekameh .. adhi bunefi ehnu author id in nuney mi msg kurevuniy.. thihaa waahaka liyaa hiywanyaa mu amillayah liyan veenu..

  15. Rapunzel says:
    March 21, 2017 at 1:49 pm

    Vaahaka varah reethi…..
    Lol Maisha varah beynun dwh author akh vaan ..thihaa beynun vanyaa amilla ah story liyegn publish kuran vnu. And x girl ah vx hurihaa phn akun comment nuvx kureveyne dwh mistake vx hedheyne .. Anyways best of luck x girl

    1. Inaa ❤ says:
      March 21, 2017 at 2:00 pm

      Lahka phone beynun veytha thafaathu nan namuga comment kuran. If you think that you are dead wrong. Stupid rapunzel

  16. mm says:
    March 21, 2017 at 1:59 pm

    Haas’s majaley… Vaahaka liyuni kaaku

  17. mm says:
    March 21, 2017 at 2:01 pm

    Maishathr nooni x-girl thr

    1. X-girl says:
      March 21, 2017 at 2:14 pm

      Vaahaka liyany x girl..maisha namuge e commnt tah kohfa hury Ehn kujjeh..author ge comment tah innaany green koh

    2. mm says:
      March 21, 2017 at 2:29 pm

      Author ge commnt green koh innaathy tha kury partgaves reehchey kiyaafa commmnt kohfa ae green kulaiga iny e comment

  18. Bella says:
    March 21, 2017 at 2:12 pm

    Aslu waahaka liyaniy X girl kiyaa kujjeh.. ekn ngeyne comment kuraa iru.. then thi maisha akiy knmevx ehn myheh..

    1. Bella is X-Girl says:
      March 21, 2017 at 2:36 pm

      Ehntha?

  19. Rapunzel says:
    March 21, 2017 at 2:13 pm

    Nobody is perfect kmmhnx girl ah favour kuranyky nun myhakh olhign comment eh kurevidhaane dwh .. Vaahaka kiyaa hih nuwanyaa nukyma nimunyma nu

    1. Rapunzel is X-Girl says:
      March 21, 2017 at 2:37 pm

      Olhigentha nuuni commnt gina kuran amilla ah ehn nan namuga kuranyth?

  20. Rapunzel says:
    March 21, 2017 at 2:15 pm

    And x girl akh vaahaka kiyaa emmnge phn akun comment nuwaane dwh … Stupid Inaa❤ dhn v vaahaka

    1. Rapunzel is X-Girl says:
      March 21, 2017 at 2:40 pm

      LOl ekan ingeye. Eh phone use kuraathy ehnu olhigen author id inves e innany amilla vahaaka reehchey kiyaafa commnt kohfa dhw.

  21. lol says:
    March 21, 2017 at 2:46 pm

    X- Girl maafah edhiba dhw dhen. Thihen ei nan namuga commnt nukoh. Kuh gabuul koh readers ah maafah edhiba dhw. Bust v maves dhogu hedhy ehn story akah kurii commntey kiyaafa. Ekam hama yagyn ae mi story ahkan kury. kurukoh genesdhyfa iny mi story viyya.. bundhi hama nujehey excuse eh dhehkyves. so?

    1. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 2:51 pm

      Thimeehunaa behey tha? thivarun vaahaka nukiyaa thibey

  22. L says:
    March 21, 2017 at 3:11 pm

    Mihaaru konmea story yen liyeafa hunairu.comment than liyaa kudhin varan bahus kolaa dhw..story liyaa kunjayan ehnves kahala hinvaru dhinumen novey..aslu miyaky varan dheara kamen..vahaka rangalhu konlan comment en liyea vi dhaanea .eakamu miyaky dhen bodu varu dhw..

    1. L says:
      March 21, 2017 at 3:13 pm

      Story reethi keep it up..huntaa nulaa kuriyan gendhey

  23. LOL says:
    March 21, 2017 at 3:16 pm

    saabahey X-girl. baeh kiyun therinnah v varu vey eba. alhaanulaa story v furihama. mi maisha ge name ga negative koh comment kuraa kujjaa amilla ah vaahaka liyegen kiyan feney. kuh kureveynee insaanunnah. so ehn myhunge kuh dhahkan noolhe amilla ah islaahvaan feney maisha. v salaam dhn. hama bunely.

    1. hahaa says:
      March 21, 2017 at 3:37 pm

      MI site ah story eh nuliyan. Ekam 2 thin fotheh liyefa publish kohfin.. bookshop thakun alhuganduge story liben hunnaane.

  24. Nas says:
    March 21, 2017 at 3:25 pm

    X-girl kanney einee maisha namuga comment (2nd comment) koffa i was wrong ey kiyaafa. Comment kuran name box ga eh faharu name jahaafa comment kohffiya e name dhen ves innaane. Ehen vefa eothy x-girl ah. Maisha namuga thanks ey bunefa eothy x-girl ah olhigen.

    1. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 3:39 pm

      theena ah kon kameh? nubehey kanthakaa nubehibalaa

  25. elsa says:
    March 21, 2017 at 3:39 pm

    aslu x-girl ge vaakaha rythi v ma baeh kudhinnah hama hajam nuvany… knmehen thihaa joke nujahaa alhe thi comment kuraa bayaku amilla ah vaahaka eh liyefa up khbh.. ehaa hiyvareh nethyma ehn myhunnah joke jahany… ekm x-girl is far better than u all.. thihen bunelaa ehchakun fahathah nujeehyne kn eba ngey.. knme dhuvahaku vaahaka eba up kurey.. j vaa bayaku hama thihen thibenjeheyny.. gud luck x-girl.. u r da best

    1. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 3:45 pm

      lol. THi X-Girl amilla ah kuri commnteh kan yageen. Shine men thihbaa x girl ae besto.. Hinives eba aadhey.

    2. elsa says:
      March 21, 2017 at 3:51 pm

      u like shine and dat doesnt mean i hv to… x-girl is tha best fr me. bayakh haadha vareh eba veyey dhw… n ngey kithanme ehcheh kiyas u ol wait fr dis story kn..

    3. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 3:58 pm

      lol elsa ah reethi vaanehnu cx your X-girl. ehnn namehga commnt kuriyas. keehkuran mivaahaka ah inthizaaru kuran v ki eh. Ekam furathama dhuvahu mi story kin. eygen e commnt fenunu fahun mihaaru hama ekani commnt bai kiyaalany. Hahah. hama hini annany ey theenage commnt fenifa

    4. U says:
      March 21, 2017 at 7:43 pm

      Koohtha thi varah gaiga hakuru nungulhaaa Bala!!
      Thivarah hakuru ungulaigen foni vanyaa hinyaa eh ehchihives anaaney!!!!

  26. Maii says:
    March 21, 2017 at 3:41 pm

    Dhera kamehnu… vaahaka kiya hiy nuvanya nukiyabala… konmehn nubehey kanthaka maa bodu vegn ulheny kyhkuran tha lol

    1. X grl fan says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:12 pm

      Asluves dhw mae. Thankyu dear

  27. X grl fan says:
    March 21, 2017 at 3:58 pm

    Omg. Kiyun therin haadhahaavaa molhey ehn myhun judge kuran. Vaahaka liyaneekee moyain neh noon. Eyah comment ithurukuran ehn myhunge name jahain commnt kuran. So plx story ah faadu kiyaa kudhin visnaalan jehey ehcheh bunumuge kurin mi buneveny keekey kan. Mi story ah ginain commnt annaathi j vany tha. Noonee reethi vma ekm hajam nukureveny tha. Lol

    1. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:07 pm

      Gina comment my foot. X-girl amilla ah kohfa ae. balaaba 1st partga. Eyni olhigen author id in kurevifa.

    2. X grl fan says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:27 pm

      Olhign kamh vedhaane. Bt mean eh nukurey aee comment ithurukuran kuri kamekey. Possible kameh ehn kujjaku kiyaafa comment kury kamhvx. I mean x girl ge lap o phn in. So ehn myhunnah blame nukurey dhariyaa. Mioh tharah gee zamaanugavx haadha nuvisney kudhin ulhe ey. koohtha my foot

    3. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:40 pm

      Lol.. Anehkaa aneh molhu vaahaka. X-girl buny ehn story akah kuran ulhenikohshey. maybe haas vefa hury rangalhah visnaa nulaa bunevuny dhw bust v ma. Dhen ehn story akahshey buni iru koohtha nei ehn story akah commnt kohfaves. ekam fahun kada nuvaan veghen huri kohfa. Aslu story kiyaa ninmmaafa commnt kuraairu story badhaluveytha.. dhen its fine. dhogu hedhi meehakah ekameh. olhuvaali meehakah e kameh.

  28. Bella says:
    March 21, 2017 at 4:06 pm

    Koohtha haada molhey dw..koohtha wareh nei .. koohtha ah ngey wiyyaa comment kuraniy kaaku kan ..anehkkaa koohtha akiy noonbaa x girl?? Ekmvx x girl wareh hama nei .. story is beautiful nd thi gothugai kuriah daathi myhun kiyaa ehchakah nubalaa specially koohtha men kahala myhun..

    1. X grl fan says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:10 pm

      awwwn. Thats really sweet of you bella. Thankyu for supporting me.

    2. X grl fan says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:17 pm

      Wat mi kaaku x grl fan ge name ga mi comment kurany. Bahyeh.

  29. X grl fan says:
    March 21, 2017 at 4:14 pm

    Koohtha ah visney koohtha hn ulhebah. Haha. Bodu kamh mi mees meehunah ngey varun vx. X girl vareh nethey Hama buneveynee.

    1. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:17 pm

      Ingey varunney lolah fennah e othy. dhen hini naiyya dheraehnu. hama dheravey e fakeerah commnt nulibigen amilla ah commnt kuraathy. Ehnve mi commnt gina kohdhenyves

  30. X-girl says:
    March 21, 2017 at 4:19 pm

    Comment gina kurukamy libey prideh nun dhw..I am happy cox u ol r reading my story..nd love you ol??

    1. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:21 pm

      Lol ehn v ma hurihaa commenteh kiyan dhw thi iny. Hehe alhe gina kuran vegenehnu amilla ah comment kury. haha. adhi eyoh bust vi molhu gotheh

    2. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:25 pm

      I didnot read your story. I only read comments. cx they are damn funny. your stupid mistakes

    3. X grl fan says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:40 pm

      Oh plx koohtha. Story nukiyaa comment kiyaany moyain. X grl comment Gina kuran v keehve. Aee maa mathiveri vaa kamhtha? Koohtha ah haadha nuvxne ey dhw

    4. X grl fan says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:45 pm

      Koohtha heevany x grl aa jahsaalain ulhey hn. Heevany eh noon yageen Hama. Koohtha majaa kuraa hit vanyaa ehn myhunge agu nuvehteyne hn enjoy kurey. Hama bunely?

    5. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:50 pm

      MIulheny X-girlge mistake gabuul nukohgen. Matha adhi agu mivahtany? amilla meehaa gamaaru kamun agu vehtifa othy? hehe hama paka paka laafa heveny. ey gadi jeheny. dhen dhaniyye ingey. Varah loves babe

    6. Rapunzel says:
      March 21, 2017 at 5:50 pm

      Dn nudhey kootha adhi madu kurey

  31. X-girl says:
    March 21, 2017 at 4:36 pm

    I read or not. Itx none of your business. I know u love my story.if ur not reading comments gina kuran comment kuran hurey. Jxt Idc?

  32. X-girl says:
    March 21, 2017 at 4:39 pm

    I read or not.. Its not ur business, I know u love my story.? love you ol and idc

    1. X grl fan says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:42 pm

      Saabahey dhariya saabahey????

    2. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:43 pm

      Hehe. Aslu thedhah bunaya I was really bored at home. ehnve kuraane kameh nethigen commnt kury. Now got a chance to go out. Secret reipe ah midhany kaan. Bye bye X-girl. Mirey anehkaaves mi pagege mi storyge commnt bain dhimaavaane kamah heekoh vakivelan. shukuruiyya alhuganduge comment that kiyan thiya beykaaru kurehvi vaguthu kolhah. v.salaam

    3. koohtha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:44 pm

      haha Amilla ah Author id in comment kohfa adhi Unregistered inves comment kohfa. You deserve a big loud laugh

    4. X grl fan says:
      March 21, 2017 at 4:52 pm

      Koohtha kuraane kamh nethiyyaa namaadhu kohfa qran kiyavabh. Nd hendhunaa havru GE zikuruthah. Gaimu savaabu libeyne.

    5. Rapunzel says:
      March 21, 2017 at 5:52 pm

      Dn nudhey kootha adhi madu kurey

    6. Rapunzel says:
      March 21, 2017 at 5:55 pm

      Kootha hajam kuran dhas kureyy

  33. X grl fan says:
    March 21, 2017 at 4:57 pm

    Ey mi koohtha mihr dhogu vx eba hadhaa story furathama keemoa. Ekm anehkaa ebain kohfa i did not read your story oa. Hama H1N1 annany

  34. Mai says:
    March 21, 2017 at 5:08 pm

    Hahah.. maisha ah vure ginain amihla ah coment kohfa hurimeeheh mitha nuves neh… thi publish kuri fothehge name aa ehkoh buneleema dhw ingeynee… thi fotheh ge fenvarehves.. .. j viyas thii boduvaru hen heevanee…. enmen kohfa huri coments thakun heekuran maisha ah lesson eh libihjje kamah… we all love ur stories x .girl.. keep up the good wrk.. 🙂 😀

  35. Rapunzel says:
    March 21, 2017 at 5:08 pm

    Koohtha vx mi story ah v intixaaru kuraakan Eba ngeh ??? koohtha vx thi hadhaa molhethi dhogu than dwhh first part keemw and I now I don’t read ey ???

  36. Mai says:
    March 21, 2017 at 5:10 pm

    Nd thiha like nuvaa story eh vihya nukiyaa adhi coment ves nukoh dhookohlihya rangalhee..:D

  37. Amin says:
    March 21, 2017 at 5:15 pm

    What is wrong with you people.. Who ever is writing the story let the writer continues.. whether the write comments on her own or not y shud u give a damn.. U guys r supposed to read the story not fight n make fun of the reader.. Such childish people.. Grow up people.. This is not a platform to fight..

    1. Anonymous says:
      March 21, 2017 at 5:30 pm

      ????????

    2. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 11:21 am

      Haha make fun of the reader? Really? Lol ? Amilla ah liyaa ehchehi kiyaafa comment kohba dhw? kiyey nukiyey eh neynge ehnu

  38. Bella says:
    March 21, 2017 at 5:29 pm

    Kootha waru dhogu hadhaa myhaku adhi nudeken.. aslu koohtha mi story kiyaafa comment kuraniy..kootha akiy enme perfect myhaa dw dn.. heyo nuwaane myhunah mistake hedeyne.. we are humans nd humans do mistake.. nd koohtha gaaboolu kuraa gothugai mi hurihaa comment kuraniy x girl.. ehnvma koohtha ah hurihaa ehchevx feney hurihaa kmh ngey so knmevx kmh dauwaa eba kurewey dw .. aslu koohtha ah waahaka liyan neyge ehnvma myhaku maa molhah kamh kuraathy j waniy.. thi dn bodu waru koohthaa..

  39. X-girl says:
    March 21, 2017 at 5:36 pm

    Kootha foohi vegenvx u do read dhw my story..u shud have done other things to fill our time?? u read my story and comment it be cox U LOVE IT..so cheers?

    1. Anonymous says:
      March 21, 2017 at 6:40 pm

      Lol ge bahuruva haadha hadiey. Hajam lol

    2. Xell says:
      March 21, 2017 at 6:52 pm

      Reethi bahuruwain waahaka dehkun edhen..

  40. Koohtha says:
    March 21, 2017 at 6:17 pm

    aslu mivaahaka vvvvv rythi.. x girl ah bunan beynun vany ur hama best ey…Kootha foohi vefa huryma ehn comment kurevuny.. Sorry everyone.. Sorry x girl.vvvv loabiwey❤??

    1. O says:
      March 21, 2017 at 7:47 pm

      Your not koohtha!!

    2. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 11:00 am

      Haha another koohtha?

  41. Xell says:
    March 21, 2017 at 6:56 pm

    Aslu xell blv kuraa gothugai mi waahaka reethi new waahaaka akah balaafa. Mistake hedeyne e ee adhi massala ehnun . Keep it up . Kon irakun den next part.

  42. SHE says:
    March 21, 2017 at 7:03 pm

    vaahaka liyaa kudhinnah hiyvaru dhinumuge badhalugai xuvaabu kuraa gotah comment thah kurumaky v dhera vaan jehey kameh..x girl, myhun kiyaa ehchss thakun hiyyvaru libigane kuriah dhaan v.. v rythi mi story

  43. no name says:
    March 21, 2017 at 7:17 pm

    wait..whts wrng wid u ppl. ehchehi nukiyaa vaahaka kiyan beynun nuvanyaa nukyma v..btw mivaahaka nw kinda interesting..gud luck x grl

  44. lilyyy says:
    March 21, 2017 at 7:45 pm

    Amila ah liyun theriyaa comment kuravvaanama ekan rangalhu kohlavva
    Eyrah e nimuneee nu
    Dhen maa bodu haasaru ehen kudhin nudhemiyas

  45. Maisha says:
    March 21, 2017 at 7:46 pm

    Hini annanee

    1. Lame says:
      March 21, 2017 at 7:48 pm

      Hama ehaa foni tha hini ananee!!!!

  46. Com says:
    March 21, 2017 at 7:54 pm

    Alhugandah visnunu gothuga writer ebahuri v ginain eki nan namuga comnt kohfa. Liyun v ehvattar.. adi writer eba masahkaiy kurey ehen myhun rulhi aruvaa bodah mithan fasaada kuran thats not good x girl.. ehcheh nubune huriyya thimage agu ehen myhun kurimathyga hifehehteyne.. maisha ge name ga ehme kuryga kohfa huri comnts vx aee x girl ge liyun.

    1. X grl fan says:
      March 21, 2017 at 8:00 pm

      Seriously com? x grl ge writing i mean bas beynun kuraagothah ehn myhun vx comment kohfaane. Zamaan badhaluvaahn Gina myhun letting akurun liyaairu short form ah liyany. So Hama liyun ehgoeh vumakee naadhiru kamh nun.

    2. I Recommend u says:
      March 21, 2017 at 9:00 pm

      X grl fan , ENO packate h boan viynu!!!
      LOL?

    3. Cindrella says:
      March 21, 2017 at 11:35 pm

      I saw bella repunzal nd elsa. Mi story in nuuny adhi dhima nuvey disney princess thakaa. Author ah bunelaany everyone do make mistakes ey. That doesnt mean you should lie to everyone’s face. Hama reehchah bunefa maafah edhunu nama o ehcheh nubuni nama dhw.. Dhen balaalyma varah reehchah ingey eki nan namuga commng kohfa mi hunny X girl kan. Aslu furathama fashaiganna kolhu commnt nulibunas thigothah reethi story upkohdhenya reader baigannaane. Ekam famous vaan nubai gotheh thi choose kury. Mi sitega ulhey gina kudhin mi dailykoh story kiyaa commnt kiyaa kudhin. So thigothah eki nan namuga commnt kuraairu varah bodah ingey. Not only me. Mi sitega dailkoh story kiyaa kudhinnah ingeyne. Ehnve evarah kudhin e kiyany author ey commnt kohfa ae. Nd reehchah balaalyma eba ingey author ge commenting style nd author ehn nan namuga kohfa huri commnt thah. X girlge fan nd bella ah varah salaam. Baeh kudhin hajam nuvegen huvaa kuranves eba kiyaa ?
      I will give a big fat Lol to X.girl. I am a huge fan of koohtha ?

    4. Rapunzel says:
      March 21, 2017 at 11:47 pm

      For your kind info Cinderella aky vx Disney princess eh does that mean u are also x girl ?? mi vaahaka ah haadha demand bodey dwhh I recommend x girl vx honest vaan and vaahaka nimendhen genesdheyne kamah hykuran ❤

    5. Queen elsa says:
      March 21, 2017 at 11:51 pm

      I am not a princess, I am a queen?

    6. Cindrella says:
      March 21, 2017 at 11:53 pm

      Oh god rapunzel ?
      Ehn princess ulhthi eu cindrella gennan mi commnt kuret. Alhe get ve bae dhw.
      Hae hae hae get vebae.
      Fosheneeki nuuney ???

    7. Queen elsa says:
      March 21, 2017 at 11:56 pm

      Cinderella aky vx princess eh..does that mean ur also xgrl..lol, x grl dheke thihaa rulhi annanya comment nukuryma vnu..

    8. Rapunzel says:
      March 22, 2017 at 12:02 am

      Foshey vaahaka dhekevije thr mithaanga Cinderella hamaiga thr thihury hae hae wefa dwh get waan v Cinderella hn heevany hae hae vaan ehn thanakh dhaan v nu

    9. Cindrella says:
      March 22, 2017 at 12:04 am

      ????

  47. Rapunzel says:
    March 21, 2017 at 7:59 pm

    Allah gandhy huwaafa kohfa bunebah ehn myhunge name ga hurihaa comment eh kurany x girl kan ehaa yageen kamaaeku bunan kereyne myhaku Eba huribaa?? For sure I am not x girl and there will be many more like me.. Huwaakoh bunan kerenyaa bunebh

    1. Anonymous says:
      March 21, 2017 at 8:52 pm

      Konme konme kamakah allah gandhee huvaa kurakah nuvaane… Aee varah nubai aadhaeh..

  48. Yoonii says:
    March 21, 2017 at 8:19 pm

    Mi part ves v nice….. Keep it up x-girl… Luv you.. ?… Next part konirakun…. Meehaku kiyaa ehchakah alhaanulaa story kuriyah gendhahchey….

  49. X-girl says:
    March 21, 2017 at 8:30 pm

    Thankyu Yoonii.. hurihaa readers ah bunelan beynunvany vv bodah thanx ey.. Vaahaka liyan ithuru hiyyvareh libeny..lv u ol?

    1. Niky? says:
      March 21, 2017 at 8:53 pm

      Gud..thihen thibeyni kudhin…waiting next part

  50. Anonymous says:
    March 21, 2017 at 8:50 pm

    Aslu vahaka eh bunantha…. Konme meehaku kobme ehchekey bunyas first lartga comment koffa aee xgirl amilla ah hama mi story ah.. But olhigen.. Amilla id ga… Aee alhugandahvex ehfaharu olhigen amilla id ga vahaka akah comment kurevunu ehen namehga kuran ulhenikoh… Caux alhugandu alah mi site beynunn kuran feshitha kairi veema alhugandu handhaaneh neiyh log out vaakah.. And comment liyefa post kuran fihthali thana handhaan v id in log out nuveveykan..and eyru already e comment post vejje.. So alhigandah yageen xgirk ahvex v e gothahkann.. But emme fueuthamavex bunee ehen vahaka akah comment kuran ulhenikohneii.. Aslu thedhah buninama.. Mi kudhin miharu miha rulhi ais geneiy noolheyne dhw…. Heekuran dhenvex xgirl thedhu bunaane kamah.. Handhaan kurey adhi dhuvaheh eba oiyg.. Edhuvahun dhigu hadhakah anga hulhuvaavex nuleveyne… Miadhu thedhu bunefiyya edhuvahuh libey azaabu madhu vaane.. Allah ah biruvethi ve bala..

  51. Thuka says:
    March 21, 2017 at 10:13 pm

    Mi part vex v rythii ❤
    Dhen vaany kihinehbaa dhw… nishy e ulheny kihineh tha alhe.. ?

    1. Maisha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 11:32 pm

      Let’s see dhw Thuka

  52. Aysha says:
    March 21, 2017 at 10:59 pm

    Vrh vvv salhi mi part!!!! I just luv it!!! Mi kahala vaahaka kiyaa hiyvx vani ???

    1. Maisha says:
      March 21, 2017 at 11:33 pm

      Thnx Aysha

  53. hello Hola hi hey(HHHH) says:
    March 21, 2017 at 11:27 pm

    Congratulation u got 100 comments….anyways varah reethi ingey mivaahaka

  54. X-girl says:
    March 21, 2017 at 11:39 pm

    Thnkyu Aysha..?

  55. Cindrella says:
    March 21, 2017 at 11:46 pm

    I saw bella repunzal nd elsa. Mi story in nuuny adhi dhima nuvey disney princess thakaa. Author ah bunelaany everyone do make mistakes ey. That doesnt mean you should lie to everyone’s face. Hama reehchah bunefa maafah edhunu nama o ehcheh nubuni nama dhw.. Dhen balaalyma varah reehchah ingey eki nan namuga commng kohfa mi hunny X girl kan. Aslu furathama fashaiganna kolhu commnt nulibunas thigothah reethi story upkohdhenya reader baigannaane. Ekam famous vaan nubai gotheh thi choose kury. Mi sitega ulhey gina kudhin mi dailykoh story kiyaa commnt kiyaa kudhin. So thigothah eki nan namuga commnt kuraairu varah bodah ingey. Not only me. Mi sitega dailkoh story kiyaa kudhinnah ingeyne. Ehnve evarah kudhin e kiyany author ey commnt kohfa ae. Nd reehchah balaalyma eba ingey author ge commenting style nd author ehn nan namuga kohfa huri commnt thah.i really like koohtha. I am a huge fan of you. X.girl comment kuraairu dhenves visnaigen ingey kuraany ?

  56. Bella says:
    March 21, 2017 at 11:58 pm

    x girl bunefi dw olhigenney kurewuniy.. so aharumennakh neyge eiy thedeh kamh or dhogeh kamh.. mi situation ga aharunmen blv kuran jeheynee x girl buni ehchakh. X girl e buniy thedeh or dhogeh kamu gai waanama judgment day ekan vx ngeyne.. dw ekm mithaaga thibi baeh kudin hama yageen kamaa eku e bunaniy eiy x girl hedhi dhogekey hageegai neygey iru.. ehnvma waki myheh nun enmevx eba jehey Allah ah biruwethi waan .. heekurun thakun duruheliwaan.. shakku kurumakiy vx rangalhu edevigen waa amaleh nun.. ehn myhunnah jehssun kurumakiy vx edevigenwaa amaleh nun.. ehnvma ehn kujjaku buni gothah ehaa yageen waa myhaku Allah gandy huwaakohfa buney x girl e hedy dhogekey nd mi hurihaa comment kuraniy hama x girl ey .. alhugandu bunaaniy hama gaimuvx alhugandu miy x girl eh nooney.. ekan denewodi genwaa faraatheh eba wey.. so myhunnah jehsun nukoh shakku nukoh thimaa kiyaa hiy wanyaamu waahak kiyaaniy if not nukiyaaniy .. rangalhu gotheh buneden beynun waanam reechah comment kohfa ethankolhu rangalhu kuran bunaaniy.. we are humans nd humans do mistake.. mistake hedhigen dw kuri erumeh libeyniy vx..

  57. X grl fan says:
    March 22, 2017 at 12:33 am

    X grl ???????????????

  58. Shahu says:
    March 22, 2017 at 1:05 am

    Mi story feshigen me kiyan. Story kuriyah dhaa goi reethi. Bt baeh ibaaraahthah genesfai hunnah gothun kiyan undhagoo ingeyy. Dhn visnaalaigen libuneema you can do better than.? And bunelan othee ehn name thakugaa comment nukuraa sheyy. Eyrun readers bala eh nugahnaane dho. Varah reethi koh ingeyy baeh thahthanugaa amilla ah comment kohfaa huri kan. And I do accept olhigen vx vedhaane kamah. Ekam abadhu eh kameh e thah faharaku thakuraaru nuvaane dho. Maisha namuga kithah faharu eba inn rep kohfaa. Hama rangalha kah mi bunelee ingey. All the best. And be honest dear ??

  59. vv sad says:
    March 22, 2017 at 9:22 am

    I also didn’t read mi story maa comment ginavegen mi balaalee.. thedheh me ah ves faahanga kurevunu meega gina comment koffa imy author amilla yah kan. I think aee v findi amaleh. mi site ga v gina story thakah negative comment kurey ekam ehem writers readers aa jassaalaigen comment nikurey. eki nan namuga. v foohi vejje mi story aa medhu. I will definitely not rread the story. ehaa dhah fenvarakah writer vettuneema. mihen buneema ahannaa dhimaalahves govaalaane hehe

  60. X-girl says:
    March 22, 2017 at 9:23 am

    Evvx Ehn namegga comment kohfa eh noannaane.. Maisha ehga namuga vx..bayaku myhn xgrl a jassaalaign ulheny..honest veveyny mivarah.readers kairy bunelan beynunvany Ehn myhnnah shakku nukuraashey..n comment tah kuraa iru vaki myhakaa jassaalaign comment kurumuge badhalugai productive comments tah kuraashey..tbh x grl noannaane Ehn evvx namegga comment kohfaeh..bash readers in bayaku x girl ah vgn comment kuryma ebahuri x girl kameh hykoh…x girl nukuraaa kameh nuvx hutteyne dhw

    1. mm says:
      March 22, 2017 at 9:57 am

      Sun reehchey kiyaafa amihla ah Kuri cmnt o

    2. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 11:03 am

      Joke of the century? Haha Dhen ehnviyya thedhuveri kamaa eku buneba kuri part ah amilla ah reehcye kiyaafa kuri comment? hama huvaa kohfa bunan kerey ae mi story ah kuri commntehkan. Bust v ma olhuvaalan ehn story akahshey buny

  61. X-girl says:
    March 22, 2017 at 9:26 am

    Myhn ehaa avahah judge kuraakh nuvaane..e comments tah kuru ku

    1. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 11:06 am

      Judge my foot. X girl adhi alah dhw thi story thi liyany? ehn v ma x girl ah neyngeny ey.. aslu Normally esfiyaige ulhey kiyuntherin dailykoh kiyaane commentsves. emyhunah notice vaane Writers nd readerge comment. KIthanme olhuvalaan masehkai kuriyas. X-girl fan aaa bellaa aa nan namuga rahdhu dhemun thi dhany x-girlkan kiyaa konme meehakah ingeyne. So my advice is first lear to be honest…

  62. X-girl says:
    March 22, 2017 at 9:32 am

    Myhn ehaa avahah judge kuraakh nuvaane..e comments tah kuri kudhinnah ingeyne aee x girl nunkan..so comment kura kudhinvx honest vaane govaalan..author ge namuga nun Ehn evvx namegga comment kohfa huri kan yageen vaairu, o hykuraariu
    Thi kureveny shakku and myhunge boluga dhogu tah thi alhuvany..

    1. mm says:
      March 22, 2017 at 10:10 am

      Kurin reehchey kiyaafa amihla ah Kuri cmnt o

    2. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 11:16 am

      Haha,, Hama hini annany.. Dhen mihaaru aneh ukulhu thi use kuray sympathy hoadhan. Comment kuraa kudhin honest vaan govaalaairu Furathama Author Honest vaan govaalan. Authorves amilla ah comment gina kuran reeyhchey kiyaafa comment kuraairu. Nd thigothah sympathy hoadhan olhuvaalaa iru hama rangalhah X-girl ah ingeydhw X-girlves ehn nan namuga X-girl dhifaauga comment kurikan. Bunantha rangalhu vaahaka eh? Mithaa ulheny moyainneh nooney. Readers dailykoh comment kiyaa hadhaairu maa rangalhah notice vaane. So furathama X-girl honest veba dhw. Aaan yes thimanna comment nukuramey kiyaafa dhogu hedhiyas X-girl amilla ah ingeydhw thimman ehn nan namuga comment kuraakan. We don’t have valid proof Ekam Hurihaa kameh molhah dhenevodigenvaa faraathehvey. Miadhu thihen kithanme dhogeh hedhi dhaane. Ekam rangalhu gothuga thedhuveri kamaaeku kuriyah dhoyaiyya allah thibaage masehkathuga barakaai lahvaane.

  63. Flower says:
    March 22, 2017 at 11:10 am

    When next part…i like this story

    1. X-girl says:
      March 22, 2017 at 11:46 am

      Thankyu flower.. Tonight genesdheynan

  64. koohtha says:
    March 22, 2017 at 11:48 am

    X girl mage commentah reply kuran biru gannany tha? Noonithedhu haama kuran fas jehenytha?

  65. Foohivejje says:
    March 22, 2017 at 11:51 am

    Ryn ge story nikumnyma mi vaahaka kiyan feshy,,, Ekam Comment thah fenifaves mi vaahaka kiyan foohivejje,,, MIhaaru ulhey writers ves dhw,, Kikey bunaany,, shinemen kahala kudhinnah nuvaane mikudhinney,,, X-girl ah heyo visnun dhehvaashi,,,

    1. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 11:52 am

      Aameen

    2. hajam says:
      March 22, 2017 at 1:56 pm

      ameen

  66. mm says:
    March 22, 2017 at 12:07 pm

    X-girl maafah edhen vehje dhw

    1. Bella says:
      March 22, 2017 at 12:18 pm

      mm Fadaboeba

    2. Bella says:
      March 22, 2017 at 12:19 pm

      mm ah tha ingeny maafah edhen v ma..amilla meehaa islaahvebala dhw

  67. Bella says:
    March 22, 2017 at 12:38 pm

    X girl nujehey knmehn maafah edheykah thihaa hayaai kuda baeh ge kairin.. nd thimyhunnah kureweyne ehvx kmh noannaane.. knme gotheh wiyas waahaka liyuniyma kiyaane myhun waane.. x girl ehaa dah fenwarakh nuwettey dhah fenwarah wetti gathy comment kuraa baeh myhun.. knme myhakuvx emyhakaa dimaalh hadi ehchehi kiyanyaa dhifaau ga waahaka dahkaane.. thy dn enme molhu myhunno dn kiywe tho amillayah waahaka nuliyaa thi thibeniy..

    1. mm says:
      March 22, 2017 at 1:36 pm

      Yageeney thivx X-girl ge agakan

    2. Bella says:
      March 22, 2017 at 1:48 pm

      mm fada boeba dhw

    3. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 1:50 pm

      Mashahves yageen X-girlkan. X-Girl use kuraane 2 dot jumala nimeythaanga. hama anthareesvey miulhey meehunaa hedhi

    4. X grl fan says:
      March 22, 2017 at 1:54 pm

      2 dot jahan ngeny Hama ekani x grl ah tha. Koohtha vx jehyma jeheyne. Comment thah egothah kuran Hama evaru balaafa kuraa myhun vx thibeyne like koohtha

    5. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 2:29 pm

      X-girl aa dhekolhah kuraairu eyna comment kuraa gothah kuran try kohfaane. ekam ehkolhah talk kuraairu keehvebaa X-girl comment kuragoi balaigen comment kuran v eh.. manje kiyey nukiye eh ingeytha eba? bust vaneenu thi

  68. mm says:
    March 22, 2017 at 1:17 pm

    Masheh noon dhw amihla ah cmnt kurany

  69. mm says:
    March 22, 2017 at 1:20 pm

    Bella madun hurey… Thandhoru neygenya nukiyani

  70. mm says:
    March 22, 2017 at 1:31 pm

    Bellage bahuruvahuri gothun ingeydhw hayai kuda ee kaakukan

    1. Bella says:
      March 22, 2017 at 1:46 pm

      Bella name ga hadikan waahaka dhahkaafa hury aslu kurin bella name ga comment kuri kujjaa nun.. alhugandu ehaa hadi bahakun waahaka nudahkn.. mikan denewodi genwaa faraathun eba wey.. Allah knows better..

    2. hajam says:
      March 22, 2017 at 1:55 pm

      keke.. kada v ma ae mihaaru ehn meehunge comment eyo. majaa dhen mikudhin kulhey game..

    3. Bella says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:24 pm

      Hajam ah aslu hajam nuwevunu .. eiy den ma kuraane kamh tha? Stupid hajam …

  71. X grl fan says:
    March 22, 2017 at 1:35 pm

    Koohtha mee kaakutha adhi meehunnah faadu kiyan. Amilla ah vaahaka liyefa up kohbh. Koohtha ge huri fenvareh vx ngeyne thaa. Mi story ah ekanyeh noon mi koohtha moya gov kee. Ryn ge story ah vx. Like nuvanyaa nukiyaanee. Aharnvx esfiyaige story daily koh kiyan. Ekm nudhan liyuntheriyaa ah hithah aihaa ehcheh govamunneh.

    1. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 1:52 pm

      Haha Alhugandu govaane ehcheh ingeyni alhugandah. ae thibeyfulhaa aa behey kameh noon ingeytho. Dhen lala

    2. mm says:
      March 22, 2017 at 1:59 pm

      Saabahey koohthaaa

    3. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 2:23 pm

      Thank you mm

    4. Rapunzel says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:10 pm

      Mashah yageen mi koohtha vx eki nan namuga comment kuraakan emyhaku ulhey goi thaa ehn myhunaa medhu vx feel vaaany

    5. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:23 pm

      Haha no. Koohtha hama eh namuga mi comment kurany. Ehnve ehnu koohthage comment eha aginai. mi part ah koohtha ahvure ginai comment kohfa huri meeheh neennaane.. Ekam thikudhin koohtha aa face kuran jehilun vegen eki nan namuge thi comment kurany. Ekani hunnan jehunas koohtha hunnaany koohthage gothuga. thi meehunah ketheh nuvey eh namuga kohgen adhi eyah support dheyn eki nan namuga comment kuran jehey viyaa. Comment kiyaalyma ingeyne koohtha koffa huri comment thah.. Dhen miyah reply dheyn ulhey bella nd X-girlge fan. majaa varah thi meehun ulhey gothun

    6. maal says:
      March 22, 2017 at 7:22 pm

      koba x-girl koohtha yaa eku date akah dhaan v nu. koohtha maa boah foohi vegennw ulheny..

  72. vv sad says:
    March 22, 2017 at 2:02 pm

    my request to all readers. stop commenting to this story. no need to waste ur time reading nd commenting to.a story whose writer is so dishonest, surely she her self has lost her value in our eyes. she degraded herself. arguing nd calling others bad jus cox of her ego. im done with this. gudbye

    1. huh says:
      March 22, 2017 at 2:06 pm

      agree.. eyna kuran ulhunu kan vejje viyyaa comment gina kuran ulhunee ekan vejje. congrats for getting many comments through dishonesty. a new form of marketing. lier.

    2. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 2:25 pm

      Totally agree with you. By the way congrts X-girl for getting so many comments. Your dream came true. NOt only X-girl. X-girl fan & bella too

  73. Rapunzel says:
    March 22, 2017 at 2:38 pm

    Mioh kameh dwh mi nunas mi site ga vaahaka liyaey writer dheke like nuwanyaa vaahaka nukiyabah dwh comment kuran time waste kurany kykurn!! Like waa writers ge vaahaka thah kyma hunnaany ragalhah

    1. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 2:57 pm

      That’s none of your business

  74. Bella says:
    March 22, 2017 at 4:20 pm

    myhaku story eh liyuney kiyaafa eiy koohtha aa behey kamh vx nun.. hurihaa kanthaa behen ngey gola eh miy huwaa .. dariyaa thi noon kamh kuran neygeniy tha?? Aan neygey thy thaa dw j vegen thiulheniy .. you are a big loser koohtha.. and you deserve a big fat LOL..
    loser loser loser

    1. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:26 pm

      Really? I didnt know that. Thank you so much for telling me bella

    2. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:28 pm

      YOu copied my ” Deserves big fat lol” sentences which is actually created for you guys… bravoooo.. poopies….

    3. Liliy - anne says:
      March 23, 2017 at 8:17 pm

      Bella akah neyngeytha
      Loser akah vegenney winner akah veveyniy!?
      Koohtha saabahey adhi hihvaru kohlaa???

  75. Elsa says:
    March 22, 2017 at 4:28 pm

    Mi koohtha mn ge eba ulhey hajam kurumuge massala eh… ebai ragalhu kohlaa… ?

    1. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:30 pm

      I have one question. Keehvetha comment kuraairu enmen ehafahraa thi kurany. bella anna iru elsaves eba aadhey. eyge maana aky hama eki nan namugaey comment kuramun thidhany. hehe visnaalaigen ulheba dhw

    2. Elsa says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:54 pm

      Koohtha thiulheny vaanuvaa.com ga thr…. knmevs kujjaku alhe eheevebh koohtha ah….

    3. Liliy - anne says:
      March 23, 2017 at 8:21 pm

      Elsa thihuriynu???
      Elsa ah ingeyeh nu vaanuvaa . Com huri than, so they bala koohtha ah ehiyvaan?

  76. Blacky says:
    March 22, 2017 at 4:31 pm

    Aslu eiy koohtha eh nun eiy kuhtha
    You only know how to bark dhivehin bunanyaa wahwah jehun and you deserve a ONE way ticket to hell and RIP..

    1. koohtha says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:32 pm

      haha thives hama X-girl. Eh gadiehga comment kurmaun thidhany. Ehfaharu bella aneh faharu elsa mihaaru blacky o. kekkekkekekekkekekekekekek

  77. Shaai says:
    March 22, 2017 at 4:43 pm

    Koohtha thee hama fisaari kanbaleh ? i salute you

  78. Fira says:
    March 22, 2017 at 4:45 pm

    Need some popcorn

    1. X-Girl fan says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:53 pm

      dhefaa dheytherah pop corn alhaigen ovebala

    2. Bella says:
      March 22, 2017 at 4:57 pm

      ebunaahen. mi pop corn kaan anna thantha. mi koohthage supporter eh thoahcheh

    3. Fira says:
      March 22, 2017 at 10:12 pm

      Bayyehnu. Maes huthu ehcheseh nukiyan dhw. Nufoshibala.

  79. Elsa says:
    March 22, 2017 at 4:51 pm

    Koohtha anga aa dhefai iraigen ovebala mithaa. Kihaa boduvejje kameh meena akaa hedhi mihaaru. bolah nuhoroppaan

    1. Elsa says:
      March 22, 2017 at 5:06 pm

      Fake elsa…. v elsa ah vaa hiyvey dhw…. beynun vias thidhen bodu varu… hama hini annany….

    2. Elsa says:
      March 22, 2017 at 5:09 pm

      Haadha dhah fenvarakh thi vetteny koohtha… elsa eh belle eh repunzel eh huthuru bahakun vaahaka eh nudhakkaane…. thihaa dhaiy fen varakh emyhun nueh vetteyne… knme hen elsa namuga huthuru bahuruvain vaahaka dhakkaane kameh neh… j viyas thi bodu varu

  80. Bella says:
    March 22, 2017 at 4:52 pm

    bodu museebaatheh kahala meehheh koohtha mi

  81. koohtha says:
    March 22, 2017 at 4:55 pm

    Allah akbar. THihaa hadi mudadhaaru bahuruva gengulhey meehunaa jadhalu kuraakah nethin. varah salaam. . . . . . .

    1. Elsa says:
      March 22, 2017 at 5:13 pm

      N im nt u koohtha… huthuru bahiruvain vaahaka dhakkan… thihaa dhaiy fenvarakh masheh nueh vetteynan….. hama hajam nuvany dhw…. pispiss… mashah hama yagyn elsa namuga huthuru bahun vaahaka dhekky hama thi gotheh fotheh neh koohtha kn… blacky buny hama ragalhah… u only knw hw to bark… bark bark bark… dhn v salaam kuraane kameh nethigen ulhey koohtha ah

    2. Harris J says:
      March 23, 2017 at 8:29 pm

      Thiy dhogeh elsa?
      First of all its koohtha not kutha?
      And elsa your lame?
      Finally You guys( x girl ge allies) are annoying and dont know how to digest( i recommend to see a doctor?)

  82. Rapunzel says:
    March 22, 2017 at 5:10 pm

    Kootha birun filyy…kootha thy evvx ehcheh nun xgrl a alhaa balaairu,, x grl vaahaka liyamun vaaahaka publish kuramun 180 ahvure Gina comment kuramun eaah reply kurany,,loll..so bunelan beynunvany x grl aa nubeheyshey…ur a beeeeeeeg zero…dn lalalalal

  83. X-girl says:
    March 22, 2017 at 5:22 pm

    Idc kmme myhaku kmme ehcheh kiyas..story liyun nuhuttaaanan and I will upload it asap. So ppl kiyaa ehchessakun down eh nuvaaane? love you ol my fans

    1. mm says:
      March 22, 2017 at 6:31 pm

      You don’t have fans…. Mujib malaamai kurany bustveema…. Dhnvx kuh gaboolukohba…. Maafah edhumaki kusheh noon

  84. Bella says:
    March 22, 2017 at 5:56 pm

    Koohtha ah ngeynii wahwah jahn nd auguraana gowan..

  85. Bella says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:00 pm

    Adhi fake elsa namuga auguraana gowaniy.. nd i dnt need to copy your sentence.. ehn hama ekani buneweniy koohtha ah tha .. oh god thankolheh kurin bunelinama koohthaa .. oooops kuhtha ey dw miy

    1. J says:
      March 23, 2017 at 8:32 pm

      Hama emma watson hen bella foniyey!!
      Tell you what?? your no one!!
      Got it!!!
      NO ONE

  86. Rapunzel says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:04 pm

    Koothage anga mulhi esfiyaiga..thaahiru nama vx rycheh nu

  87. Bunebala says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:09 pm

    Alhe elsa ah thihaa yagyn kamaa eku belle r rapunzel egothag comment nukuraanekan ingeny keehveyo? ?
    Ehn v ma ekaku dhw thin namuga thi comment kurany. Ehnve ehnu ehaa yagynkan thiothy

  88. Rapunzel says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:10 pm

    Wait wait Lol kiyaa myhaku march 21 van a dhuwahu 2:39 ga ” lol a big fat lol” jahaafa…… Busted busted koohtha busted ….koohtha hithun v saalihu vgn eki nan namuga comment kurany neygeyne kamah tha? Thaubaa vgn ehn myhunah echiss kiyan anga hulhuwaany

    1. Bella says:
      March 22, 2017 at 6:24 pm

      Oho mhr miothy bust wefa dw .. kobr koohtha ehchekey kiyaabala dw dnn

  89. Bella says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:11 pm

    Ekm mi koohtha ulheyne dw maa molhu myhakh wegen .. busted busted .. Hahahahaahahahahahaha kuhtha bark bark bark bark .. miy mhr Lol kuhtha hahahahahahaha Adhivx mey fuhpaalaign auguraana gowaathi ehn nan thakuga ..

  90. Bunebala says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:14 pm

    Ohhh got it. Repanzel bella nd elsaves hunnany ham ehgithakah comment kohfa. Eh gothakah thiki jahaafa. So thi hama ekeh dhw. Anehkaa X.girl tha???

  91. Bella says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:17 pm

    Ekaku nun comment kuraniy .. hama thafaathu thin myhun mi comment kuraniy .. mhr saafu wejje bunebala ah ..

  92. Bella says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:20 pm

    Koohtha mhr bunebala ah change vee tha?
    Bunebalaaa kiyve hey change weeee?

  93. Koohtha says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:23 pm

    I am really sorry for everything. Alhugandah maaf kohdhehchey. Well wishes ?

    1. Jk says:
      March 23, 2017 at 8:35 pm

      Your not koohtha!!!
      Ahah another trick of x girl!!?

  94. Bella says:
    March 22, 2017 at 6:28 pm

    Koohtha kurinvx thi goi otheh nu dw..

  95. YammYoon says:
    March 23, 2017 at 1:46 pm

    V v reethi story… Dhn ekamaku j viyas thy bodu varu… alhaanulaaa… vaahaka kurish gendhaathi…

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