ލޯބީގެ ނަޒަރުން….2

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1. Salaam here is the second part and feel free to comment..
   Next part insha allah tommorw

2. Too short… Pls make it little longer… But its a nice story

3. ME FIRST DHW??????..VRH VRH VRH RYTHI MI PRT VX..KUDAKOH NAMAVX IMPROVED FAAHAGA VAAN FASHAIFI..???☺☺KEEP UP THE GUD WRK

4. Hiii!!!??? Mi stry ah adhi kiriyaa mi cmnt kurany… dear ge mi stry vvvv rythi masha allah???ekm baeh mistakes vs ebahuri… misaalakh mendhuru keumuge badhaluga mendhuru sai beynun khfa inun kahala kudhi kudhi mistakes… ekm vs hama vvvv rythi…??? e mistakes ah dhn faharakun liyaa iru visnaalahche… so, mansha mn ae makunudhoo kudhin thakeh dhw… dhn dear vs thy makunudhoo kujjeh tha??????? keep it up dear???❤❤❤

   1. No i am not from makunudhooo my atoll and island is seacret…….hehe thanx

   2. Hehe I was just kidding dear??? nothing else

5. Hehe I was just kidding dear??? nothing else

   1. Hehe that ok

6. Nice.??

   1. Thnx

7. Adhi hama ….neyge bumaakah ….ekam vaahaka eh viyya thankolheh dhigukoh genes dhineema reethi vani

   1. Aslu kohme dhuvahaku up kohdheyaamun thihenbunan jeheytha??

8. lovely flower… pls respect to readers… shes right… u need to make it a little bit longer… if u want to get more friends and fans in esfiya, do respest them… give respect n get respect… so you’ve ask to point out the mistake so she/he did… so don’t take it negative… k…btw… story is superb… but their are simple mistakes to improve … anyways… fares bunii ves ehaa rude kohneh ves noon dhw

   1. Ur story is nice but not ur attitude… Plxxx dnt get me wrong… We both readers and writers should respect each other…. Yeah i agree with you… Writers should not tlk to the readers like that..and yes i also believe that u should make the story longer…

9. masha allah Varah reethi

10. Hey mi part ves v rythi…..ummeedhukuran next part miahvure dhigu kohlaane kamah…plx rulhi naannahchey anehkaa mihen buniima….thats what i feel….ingey….well overall koh v salhi….but some mistakes adhi ves ebahuri…but afterall this is ur first story….ehnviima rythiii..and one more thing veehaa ves bodah sifakurun ithuru kuranviii.eyrun vaahaka v rythi vaane….hope u will improve……

    1. Thanks

11. story reethi namaves liyumughe mistakes thr ranghalhu kohlumun ithruah furihama vaane adhi miah vuren dhigu kohllun edhen

12. Vàahaka shalhi ingey Dhigu kolĺanikoh varah reethi vàane

    1. Thanx

13. v reethi vaahakaeh

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