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1. Dear Writer,
   Varah gina kuh ebahuri. Upload kohlumuge kurin kiyaalaafa upload kollahchey ingey dhen.
   full stop jahan jey than thanuga fullstop jahahchey and meehun bunefa hunna jumala thah vakinn ingey gothah liyun edhen. ginainliyunu varakah rangalhu vaanee adhi kuriyah dheveyni ves. umeeedhu kuran feedback gaboolu koh rangalhu kohlaane kamah 🙂

   1. i agree this comment…. 🙂

   2. Ebunaahen space ves netheema v undhagu kiyan. Dhen anehhen heevey vaahaka gandu reethi vaanehen..

   3. Even I agree with this. Comment

2. Kaleyney mikocheh…
   Hithah furathma vx eri ethi hama mibunely…. Dhen faharakun all mistaks rngalhu kohlanche… Hyvey reethivaanehen….

3. mee kochehttha?
   dheybala bulhalaa meedhaa vaahaka amillayah liyegen kiyan …

   1. Thanks vaahaka kiyaa kujja

4. Varah salhi vaanehen hyvany but next time mistake thah ragalhu kollahche… Meehun bunaa ehchis ves komaakoalhyga liyunyma kiyaalan faseyhavaany hurihaa kudhinnah.. Hope u ll understand….?

5. Alhugandu liyany phonun ehnn v a varah udhagoo …..adhi phonai elhi keyboardga komaakoalhi ei nuhurey….in other words next time I’ll reduce my mistakes hope u readers understand….plzz wait for episode 2 on Tuesday…hope u enjoyed…??

   1. Dhen download kollaba ingey keyboard eh.. ” ” eyrun beynun kureveynu..

   2. N thedheh upload kollumuge kurin kiyaalaafa mistakes vy varakun rangalhu kollaa ingey..take ur time correcting the mistakes.. waiting for second part

6. Varah reethi vaanehen heevey..❤ words thah space dhookohfa liyahchey nd baeh words ebahuri hussnoonu laafa like ‘hondu’ ‘vandhey’….mistakes rangalhu kohlanikn ok vaane.. good luck dear..❤ waiting?

7. Gdluck dear..

8. konme meehaku dhakkaa vaahaevves vaki folhuvatheggai liyelabala. dhen neratorge baives vaki folhuvathakun kuriyah gendhaanee. eyrun vaanuvaa dhenegannan faseyhavaane. liyumugawi thi gengulhey styl goheh noon. try kollabala migoiyves.

9. plx improve writing story is nice but laguage problem

   1. mi mivaahaka liyun kujjaa ah liyevifa in gothah enlish in liyefa tha.. Fullstop nujahaa

10. Haa shaviyaneega shaviyani onna iru e akuru liyeveythoa belun edhen. V undhagoo kiyan.

11. v.shali

    1. Thanks

12. Mee koahcheh?Hehe..v gina mistakes eba huri..Kyan vc neyngun..Nxt time rangalhu kohlaane kamah hykuran..

13. All the best??

14. Masha allah rythi n vrythivaane hen hyvanyves dhen mistaks thah check kollun v bodah edhen first time v ma vedhaane ehen anyway keep it up n all the best

15. Miee konrashehge bahakun Liyaa vaahaka eh ?
    Baeh faharu Heevey huvadhoo bahun liyefa hurihen .dhen faharakun rangalhu drivehi bas beynun
    kuraanekamah unmeedhu kuran

    1. dhivehi*

16. hus noonu beynun koffa huree nubai kon kan faahaga kuran. liyamun dhiya varakah rangalhu vaane. reethi vaanehen hyvanee mi vaahaka.
    misaalakah gandi(gadi), hondu(hodu)
    dhn anna part ga rangalhu kuraane kamah unmeedh kuran

17. Alhe dhen iah vure ragalhu kohleveynnu upload kurumuge kuirn

18. haha mee konchehtha

19. Hi, mi story in vaanuvaaeh neyge’… anehkaa is this a style of writing stories which I don’t know about????

20. Vaahaka kiyaifin huthureh ves noon ekamaku mee kon bahuruvaegge vaahakaekkan bunedheebala gaimu mah dhivei baheh non

21. mivaahaka kiyan v undhagoo husnoonu laan nujeyhey thantha husnoonu laafa hurema bas mulhin badhaluvani. mikan thatha rangalhu kolachey vahaka hevani reethi vaney hen.

22. Vaahaka hadi vaanehen hiyeh nuvey. Ekam mahsala aky maabodah mistake ginaee. Jumlaves vaki kohfaeh neh. Ehenve v udhagoovi kiyan. Dhen faharakun rangalhu kohla dhehchey igey

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