ލޮތްބެއް މަ ނޭދެން ޔާރު ނޫން – 06
ކާއެއްޗެހި އައުމުން ދެމީހުން ކެއުމަށް އިންސާފު ކުރަން ފެށިއެވެ. ކާއެއްޗެހީގެ ވަހުން ބަނޑު ފުރޭހާވެއެވެ. ދެމީހުން ކައިކައި ތިއްބައި ރުކައިން ކުއްލިއަކަށް ތަށި ދުރުކޮށްލާފައި އަނގަމަތީ އަތް އެޅިއެވެ. އޭނައަށް އޯކާ ދެމެން ފެށުމުން ދުވެފައިގޮސް އަވަސް އަވަހަށް ފާހަނައަށް ވަނެވެ. ކައިލް ކޮޅަށް ތެދުވީ ރުކައިން އެފަދައިން ދިޔުމުންނެވެ. ރުކައިންގެ ތަށި ފެނުމުން ކައިލްގެ މޫނު ހުދުވެގެން ދިޔައެވެ.
***ޕާޓް 6***
ރުކައިންއަށް ގެނެސްފައި ހުރި ސޮސެޖް ބަތްގަނޑުގެ ތެރޭގައި ކުކުޅު ފައެއްގެ ކަށިތަކެއް ފަދަ އެއްޗެއް ހުއްޓެވެ. އެ ކަށިތަށް ކައިރީ އިންސާނެއްގެ އިނގިލިބުރިއެއްހެން ހީވާ އެއްޗެއް ވެސް އޮތެވެ. އެ އިނގިލިބުރިއެއްހެން ހީވާ އެތި އޮތީ ފިހެލާފައެވެ. އެހެންކަމުން ރަނގަޅަށް ނުބަލައި މީހަކަށް ހީވާނީ އެއީ ސޮސެޖެއްހެންނެވެ. އެހެންނަމަވެސް ރުކައިން އެ އިނގިލިބުރިއަށް އޫ ހަރާލާފައި އޮތް ގޮތުން އޭގެ ކަށިކޮޅު ފެނެއެވެ. ނަމަވެސް އެ އިނގިލީގެ ނިޔަފައްޗެއް ނެތެވެ. ކައިލްއަށް ވެސް މޭނުބައި ކުރާ ފަދަ އިހްސާސެއް ކުރެވުނެވެ. އޭނައަށް އަމިއްލަ ތަށްޓައް ބަލައިލެވުނެވެ. އޭނަގެ ފްރައިޑް ރައިސްގައި ހުރި ކެރެޓްކޮޅުތަކުގެ ތަފާތުކަން ފެނުނީ އެޔަށް ބަލައިލުމުންނެވެ. ކައިލްގެ މޫނުގެ ކުލަ ފެހިކުލަޔަށް ބަދަލުވެގެން ދިޔައެވެ.
ދެ ތަށީގެ ފޮޓޮއެއް ނެގުމަށްފަހު ކައިލް ވެސް ފާހަނައަށް ދުއްވައިގަތެވެ. ކިރިޔާ ފާހަނަ ތަށްޓާއި ބޯދިމާކޮށްލެވުނު ތަނާހެން އޭނައަށް ކެވުނު ހުރިހާ އެއްޗެއް ހޮނޑަށް ލެވުނެވެ. ރުކައިން އޭރު އަނެއް ފާހަނައިގައި ހުރެގެން މޫނަށް ފެން ވިއްސަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. “މަށަށް.. މަށަށް.. ކެވުނީ.. އައްޗީޑި..” ރުކައިން އޯކާ ދެމެމުން ބުންޏެވެ. “މިއީ ކޮންކަހަލަ ބަޔެއް ކަލޯ.. މިތަން ލޮކްޑައުން ކުރަން ޖެހޭނެ..” ކައިލް މޫނަށް ފެން ގޮށްޓެއް ވިއްސާލަމުން ބުންޏެވެ. ކެއި ހުރިހާ އެއްޗެއް ހޮޑަށްލެވުމުން ދެމީހުން ވެސް ތިބީ ލޮނޑުވެފައެވެ. “މަ ގުޅަނީ ފޮރިންސިކް ޓީމްއަށް.. ކަލޭ އާދިލް ސާރއަށް އަންގާ މިތަން ލޮކްޑައުން ކުރަން.. އެއްވެސް ސްޓާފެއް ޗެކު ނުކޮށް ދިޔަދީގެން ނުވާނެ..” ކައިލް ފޯނުނަގަމުން ބުންޏެވެ.
ރުކައިން ވަރުބަލި ގޮތަކަށް ބޯޖަހައިލުމަށްފަހު އޭނަގެ ފޯނުނަގައި އާދިލްއަށް ގުޅައިލިއެވެ. އިތުރު ވަގުތުތަކެއް ބޭކާރު ކުރުމެއް ނެތި ފުލުހުންގެ ހާއްސަ ބަޔެއް އެތަން ވަށައި “ވާރނިން ބޯޑު” އަދި ކްރައިމް ސީން ޓޭޕް ދަމައިލިއެވެ. އެ ރެސްޓޯރަންޓްގެ ސްޓާފުންގެ މޫނުތައްމަތިން ފެނިގެންދަނީ ހާސްކަމާއި ބިރުގަނެފައިވާ ކަމުގެ މަސްހުނި އަސަރުތަކެވެ. ފޮރިންސިކުން ކައިލްއާއި ރުކައިން ކާފައި ހުރި ތަށިތަށް ބަލައި އޭގައި ހުރި އެއްޗެހީގެ ސާމްޕަލްތައް އެމީހުންގެ ލެބްތަކަށް ފޮނުވިއެވެ. އޭރު އެތާގެ މެނޭޖަރު އެތަނަށް އައިސްފިއެވެ. “ކަލޭމެން ހީކުރަނީ އަހަރުން މީ އިންސާނުން ކައި އުޅޭ ހައިވާނުން ކަމަށްތަ؟ މި ރެސްޓޯރަންޓަކީ ނަން ހިނގާ ތަނެއް ވީމަ ނަން ކިލަނބު ކުރަންނެއްނުން ތިއުޅެނީ… ހަމަ މިހާރު މިތަނުން ނިކުމޭ!!” އޭނަ ކައިލްމެންގެ މޫނަށް އިނގިލި ދިއްކުރަމުން ބުންޏެވެ.
ކައިލް އެއްޗެއް ބުނެވިދާނެ ނެތީ ދުލުކުރީގައި ދައިގަތެވެ. “ބައްލަވާ މީގެ ކުރިން ވެސް މިފަދަ މައްސަލައެއް ފެންމަތިވެފަ އޮތީ.. މިއަދު އަދި އަޅުގަނޑުމެންނަށް މިއޮތީ ރެޑް ހޭންޑެޑްކޮށް ހިފިފަ.. މިތަނުން ދެން ހިނދުމަތް ދެވޭނީ ފޮރިންސިކް ޓީމްއިން އެއީ އިންސާނުންގެ މަސް ކަމަށް ކަނޑައަޅައިފި ނަމަ، އެކަން ކުރި ފަރާތަކާއި އަނިޔާ ލިބުނު ފަރާތެއް ހޯދުމަށްފަހު.. އިބްރާހިމް އިމާދު ކިތަންމެ ރުޅިފުޅު ދުރުވިޔަސް އަޅުގަނޑުމެން އަޅުގަނޑުމެންގެ ވަޒީފާ އަދާކުރުމަށް ތަން ދައްކަވާ.. އެހެން ނޫނީ ތިބޭފުޅާއަށް ފުލުހުންގެ މަސައްކަތަށް ހުރަސް އެޅި ކަމުގެ ދައުވާ އުފުއްލެވޭނެ..” ރުކައިން ހަރުކަށި ރާގަކަށް ވާހަކަ ދެއްކިއެވެ. “ހާދަ ގައްޑާވެގެން އުޅޭ އެއްޗެހިންތަކެކޭ ދޯ ތީ.. ކަލެމެންނަށް އެއްކަމެއް ވެސް ނުކުރެވޭނެ..” ދަތްކުނޑިވިކައިލަމުން ރުކައިންއާއި ދިމާލަށް އަތް މުށްކަވައިލަމުން އިމާދު ބުންޏެވެ.
“އިބްރާހީމް އިމާދަށް އެނގި ލައްވާތޯ ޑިޔުޓީގައި ހުރި ފުލުހެއްގެ ގައިގައި ޖެހުން އެއީ ޖަލު ހުކުމް އަންނަ ފަދަ ކަމެއްކަން.. ތިޔަ ކުރެވެން އުޅޭ ކަންތަކަށް އިތުރަށް ވިސްނާލާ.. އިމާދުއަށް ރަނގަޅުވަނީ އަޅުގަނޑުމެން ކުރަން އޮތް ސުވާލުތަކަށް ތެދުތެދަށް ޖަވާބު ދެއްވިއްޔާ.” ރުކައިންގެ ކުރިމައްޗަށް އަރަމުން ކައިލް ވާހަކަ ދެއްކިއެވެ. އިމާދު ދަތްކުނޑިވިކައިލުމަށްފަހު އަތް މުށްކަވާލައި ޖީބަށް ޖަހައިލިއެވެ. “މި ރެސްޓޯރަންޓުގައި ބޭނުންކުރެވޭ މަހުގެ ބާވަތްތައް ގަންނަނީ ކޮންތާކުން؟” ކައިލް ހަމަޖެހިލަމުން ސުވާލުކޮށްލިއެވެ. “ބާޒާރުން.. އެނޫން ކޮންތާކުން އެއެއްޗެހި ގަންނާނީ.. ކަލޭމެން ގަމާރީތަ؟” އިމާދުގެ ދެބުމަ ވަނީ ގޮށްޖެހިފައެވެ. އޭނަ ދަތްވިކައިލަގެން ހުރި އިރު، ރުޅިއައިސްފައި ހުރިވަރުން އޭނަގެ ކަރުގެ ނާރުތަށްވަނީ ފުއްޕާލާފައެވެ. ބޭނުންވާ އިތުރު ސުވާލުތަށް ކުރުމަށްފަހު އެދެވޭ ޖަވާބެއް ނުލިބުމުން ކައިލްމެން ރެސްޓޯރަންޓްގެ އެހެން ސްޓާފުންނާއި ސުވާލު ކުރިއެވެ. އެހެންނަމަވެސް އެކަންކުރީ ކާކުކަން އެނގޭ އެކަކު ވެސް ވާކަމަކަށް ނުވިއެވެ.
އެ ހުރިހާ މަންޒަރެއް ބަލަން ހޫޑީއެއްގެ ނިވަލުގައި، ސްކްރީންތަކެއްގެ ފަހަތުގައި ހުރި މީހާގެ މޫނުމަތީގައިވަނީ ނުލަފާ ހިނިތުންވުމެކެވެ. ސްކްރީންއަށް ބަލައިލުމަށްފަހު އޭނަ މޫނު އަބުރައިލައި ބަލައިލީ ގޮޑީގައި ބަނދެފައި އިން ޒުވާން ފިރެހެންމީހާއާއި ދިމާލަށްށެވެ. އެމީހަގެ ކަނާއަތް ވަނީ އެމީހާ ލާފައި ހުރި ޓީޝާޓުން ބަނދެލެވިފައެވެ. އެ ނޫކުލައިގެ ޓީޝާޓު ލެއިން ކަޅިވެފައިވީއިރު ތިއްކަކަށްފަހު ތިއްކެއް މުށިތަށް މައްޗަށް ވެއްޓެމުން ދިޔައެވެ.
އެމީހާގެ މޫނުން ފެނިގެންދަނީ އަޅަމުން ދިޔަ ވޭނަށް ކެތްނުކުރެވިގެން އުޅޭ މަންޒަރެވެ. “ހެހެ ބޯ ނެތް ކުކުޅުތަކެއްހެން އެހެންމީހުންނާ ސުވާލު ކުރިޔަސް އެމީހުނަށް ކޯއްޗެއްދޯ އެނގޭނީ..” ހިނިގަނޑެއް ޖަހައިލަމުން އޭނަ ބުންޏެވެ. “ކަލޭ.. ކަ..ލޭ ތިއީ އިންސާނެއްތަ؟ މަ ދޫކޮށްލާށޭ.. ކޮންކަމެއް މަގޭ ފަރާތުން ބޭނުންވެގެން ތިއުޅެނީ..” ބަނދެފައިން ޒުވާނާ ވަރު ދެރަ ގޮތަކަށް އަހައިލިއެވެ. އޭނަގެ މޫނަށް ހުދުކަމެއް ވަނީ ފާއްދާލާފައެވެ.
ހޫޑީލައިގެން ހުރި ޒުވާނާ އެއްމިޔަކަނުން ހީލިއެވެ. “ކަލޭ ވިސްނާލަބަ ވޭތުވެ ދިޔަ އަހަރުތަކު ތެރޭ ކަލޭ އުޅެމުން އައި ގޮތުގެ މަތިން.. ހިޔާލެއް ފިކުރެއްނެތި ފެންނަހާ އަންހެނެއްގެ ގަޔަށް އަރަމުން، ކުޑައެއް ބޮޑެއް ބެލުމެއްނެތި އެމީހުން ރޮލާކަމުން.. ނުބައި މީހަކާ ބެހިލެވުނީމަ ވީ ގޮތް ތީ ދެން.. ކިހާ ދެރަ ހެހެ.. އަސްލު މާ އަވަހަށޭ ކޮޕުންނަށް މިކަންތައް ފަޅާއެރީ.. ކަލޭގެ އިނގިއްޔާ ހަންކޮޅު ކާންދޭން މަ ހިޔާރު ކުރީ ކަލޭގެ އެކުވެރިންނަށް.. ހެހެހެ އެހެންވިޔަސް ކޮޕުންނަށް މަށަށް އިނގިލިދިއްކޮށްލުން އެއީ ނާދިރުކަމެއް.. ކަލޭގެ މަސްކޮޅާ ހުރިހާ ތަނެއް ވަކިވެގެންދާއިރު ވެސް ހުންނަން ޖެހޭނީ ތިހެން ތެޅިލަ ތެޅިލާ..” އޭނަގެ އަޑުގައިވަނީ ތަފާތު މަޑުމައިތިރިކަމެކެވެ. އޭނަ އެކުރާ ކަންކަމާއި މެދު ބިރުގެ ކަންފުޅެއް ހުރިހެން ވެސް ހީނުވެއެވެ. ފެންކައްކަން ކުރައަކަށް އެޅުމަށްފަހު އޭނަ ނަޒަރު ހިންގައިލީ ސްކްރީންއަށެވެ. “އަހަރެން ދޫކޮށްލާ ދެން އެހެނެއް ނަހަދާން.. ދެން އެއްވެސް އަންހެނަކާ ކައިރި ނުވާނަން.. މިކަމުގެ އެއްވެސް ވާހަކައެއް އެކަކަށް ވެސް ނާންގާނަން.. އާދޭސްކުރަން…” އެ ޒުވާނާ އާދޭސްކޮށްލިއެެވެ.
އެ ޒުވާނާގެ އާދޭސްތަކުން ހޫޑީ ލައިގެން ހުރި ޒުވާނާގެ ތުންފަތް ކަނަކުން ދެމިލިއެވެ. “އަހަރެން ހިތަށް އަރާ ކަލޭ ކައިރީ ތިހެން ކިތަށް މީހުން އާދޭސް ކުރާނެބާއޭ.. އެކަމަކު ކަލޭގެ މި ކަންފަތަށް އަޑުއިވުނުތަ؟ ނޫން! ހަމަ ކަލޭގެ ބޭނުން ފުދުނީމަ އެއިން ކޮންމެ މީހެއް ވެސް ދޫކޮށްލީ.. އެހެންވީމަ ކީއްކުރަން އަހަރެން ކަލޭ ދޫކޮށްލައްވީ އަހަރެންގެ ބޭނުން ނުފުދެނީސް؟” ތެއްޔަޔަކަށް ހޫނުފެން އޮއްސައިލުމަށްފަހު އެ ތެލި ގެނެސް އައްސާފައި އިން މީހާގެ އަތާއި ދިމާލުގައި ހުޑީ ލައިގެން ހުރި ޒަވާނާ ބެހެއްޓިއެވެ. އެއާއެކު އެ ޒުވާނާގެ ހިތް ގެނބުނު ފަދަ އިހްސާސެއް ކުރެވުނެވެ. “ކީއް.. ކީއްކުރަން ތި.. ތިއުޅެނީ؟ އާދޭސްކުރަން.. އަހަރެން ދޫކޮށްލާ..” ތެޅިގަންނަމުން އެޒުވާނާ ބުންޏެވެ.
ހޫޑީލައިގެން ހުރި ޒުވާނާ ނުލަފާ ގޮތަކަށް ހީލުމަށްފަހު ބަނދެފައިއިން ޒުވާނާގެ އަތުގައި ލޭމަނާކުރުމަށްޓަކައި އައްސާފައި ހުރި ފޮތިކޮޅު ނައްޓައިލިއެވެ. “ޝޫޝް މާ ގިނައިންނެއްނުން ތިޔޮއް ލޭ އަންނަނީ.. އަހަރެން މިއުޅެނީ ލޭމަނާ ކުރަންނޭ.. ކުޑަކޮށް ތަދުވާނެ އެނގޭ އެކަމަކު.. ހިތްވަރުކޮށްލައްޗޭ..” މަލާމާތުގެ ރާގަކަށް އެހެން ބުނެލުމަށްފަހު އެ ޒުވާނާގެ އަތުގައި ހިފައި އާވި އަރައަރާ ހުރި ހޫނު ފެންތެލި ތެރެއަށް އެ ޒުވާނާގެ އަތްކޮށްޕައިލިއެވެ. އެއާއެކު ތަން ފަޅައިގެން ދާފަދަ ބަރު ހަޅޭކެއްގެ އަޑާއިއެކު ހޫޑީލައިގެން ހުރި ޒުވާނާގެ ނުރައްކާތެރި ހުނުމުގެ އަޑުން އެތަން ގުގުމައިގެން ދިޔައެވެ.
ލޭގެ ޓެސްޓުތައް ހަދައިލައި، ބަނޑު ސްކޭން ކުރަން ދުންޔާ ހޮސްޕިޓަލަށް ދާން ތައްޔާރުވަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. ޔާދިން އޮފީހުން ބްރޭކް ނަގައިގެން އައިއިރު ވެސް ދުންޔާ ތައްޔާރުވެ ނުނިމެއެވެ. އެކަމާ އިރުއިރުކޮޅާ ދުންޔާއާ ދިމާކޮށްލައެވެ. މެރޫން ކުލައިގެ އަތްދިގު ގަމީހަކާއި ކަޅު ފަޓުލޫނުގައި ބެގީކޮށްގެން ހުރި ޔާދިން ފެންނަނީ ވަރަށް ސްމާޓްކޮށްށެވެ. އޭނަގެ ކޮނޑާއި ހަމައަށް އަރާ ކަޅުކުލައިގެ ސިލްކުކޮޅެއް ފަދަ އިސްތަށިކޮޅު ކޮނޑުގައި ކޭއްތެމުން ދިޔައެވެ. “ދޫނީ ތިހާ ތަތްވެގެން ކިހިނެތް އުޅޭނީ..” ނިތްކުރިމަތީގައި އަތް ބާއްވައިލައިގެން ހުރެ ޔާދިން ބުނެލިއެވެ. ޔާދިންގެ އަޑުގައި ހުރީ ލާނެތްކަމެވެ. ލިބެން އުޅޭ ދަރިފުޅު މިއަދު ސްކޭނުން ފެނިގެންދާނެނެތީ އޭނަގެ ހިތް ދިޔައީ ޑަންޑަންލާފައި ޖެހެމުންނެވެ.
ޔާދިންގެ ޖުމުލައިން މޫނު ހަދައިލައިގެން ހުރި ދުންޔާ މި ނިމެނީއޭ ގޮވައިލިއެވެ. ޔާދިން ހިނިއައިސްފައިހުރެ ދުންޔާއަށް އެހީވާން ފެށިއެވެ. “މްމް އަހަރެން މިހުންނަނީ އަހަރެންގެ ދަރިފުޅު ބަލާ ހިތުން ކެތްމަދުވެފަ..” ދުންޔާގެ ފަހަތުން ބައްދައިލަމުން ޔާދިން ބުންޏެވެ. ދުންޔާ ވެސް ޔާދިންއާއި އެއްބަސްވުމުގެ ގޮތުން ބޯޖަހައިލިއެވެ. ކާރުގައި ދެމަފިރިން މިސްރާބު ޖެހީ ހޮސްޕިޓަލަށްދާށެވެ. ކޮންމެ ވެސް ސަބަބަކާއި ހުރެ ދުންޔާގެ ހިތް ނުތަނަވަސްވަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. އެހެންނަމަވެސް އެއީ މާބޮޑު ކަމަކަށް ނުހަދާ އޭނަ މަޑުމަޑުން އިނެވެ.
ސީސައިޑް ރެސްޓޯރަންޓް ދޮށުގައި މައުލޫމާތު ހޯދަން އައިސްފައި ހުރި ނޫސްވެރިންގެ ތެރޭގައި އައިނާ ހުއްޓެވެ. ރުކައިން އެތަނުން ނިކުތުމުން އެންމެން އޭނަ ވަށައިލިއެވެ. މީހުންގަނޑު ފަޅަމުން ރުކައިން އޭނަގެ ސައިކަލާއި ދިމާލަށް ހިނގައިގަތީ އަވަސް ރަހުމަތެއްގައި ނޫސްވެރިންގެ ކިބައިން ސަލާމަތްވެވޭނެ ކަމަށް ހިތާހިތުން ދުޢާ ކުރަމުންނެވެ. އެވަގުތު އޭނަގެ ލޮލުގައި އަޅައިގަތީ ފިރެހެނަކު ގަދަކަމުން ޒުވާން އަންހެންކުއްޖެގެ އަތުގައި ހިފައި ދަމަމުން މީހުންގަނޑާ ދުރަށް ގެންދާ މަންޒަރެވެ. ބަލާކަށް ނުހުރެ ރުކައިން އެމީހުންނާ ކައިރިވެލިއެވެ.
“ޝިޔާން ހަމަ މިހާރު އަހަރެންގެ އަތުން ދޫކޮށްލާ! ކޮން މޮޔައެއްވެގެންތަ ތިއުޅެނީ..” އައިނާ ގަދަ ހަދަމުން ބުންޏެވެ. ޝިޔާންގެ މޫނުމަތީގައިވީ ނުލަފާ ހިނިތުންވުމެކެވެ. “އައިނާ މިތަނަށް އައިސްފަ ތިހުރީ މައުލޫމާތު ހޯދާކަށެއްނުން.. އަހަރެން މިއައީ މައުލޫމާތު ދޭންނޭ.. ދެން ރީއްޗަށް އާދެބަލަ ދޯ..” އައިނާގެ އަތަށް ބާރުކޮށްލަމުން ޝިޔާން ބުންޏެވެ. “ހަމަ މިހާރު އޭނަ އަތުން ދޫކޮށްލާ!!” ރުކައިން އަޑު ބާރުކޮށްލަމުން ބުންޏެވެ. ރުކައިން ފެނުމުން ޝިޔާންގެ ދެލޯ ބޮޑުވިއެވެ. އޭނަ އެއްމިޔަކަނުން ހީލިއެވެ. “އަހާ މަމީ އެންޑް ޑެޑީއާ ފިލައިގެންތަ އަހަރެންނަށް މޫނު ތި ދައްކައިލީ؟” ޝިޔާން ބޯއަރިކޮށްލަމުން އަހައިލިއެވެ. “ކޯއްޗެކޭ ކިޔާކަށް ކަލޭ ތިއުޅެނީ.. ހަމަ މިހާރު އެކުއްޖާ ގައިން ދޫކޮށްލާ!!” ރުކައިންގެ އަމުރާއިއެކު އިވިގެން ދިޔައީ ޝިޔާންގެ ނުލަފާ ހުނުމުގެ އަޑެވެ.
އޭނަ ހިނިއައިސްފައި ހުރެ އައިނާ އަތުން ދޫކޮށްލިއެވެ. އެހެނަސް އޭނަގެ މޫނުމަތީގައި ވަނީ ނުރައްކާތެރިކަމުގެ ވިދުވަރެކެވެ. އޭނަ އައިނާ ދޫކޮށްލުމުން ރުކައިން އައިނާ އޭނަގެ ފުރަގަހަށްލިއެވެ. “ދެވަނަ ފަހަރަށް ކަލޭ މި އަންހެންކުއްޖާގެ ގައިގަ އަތްލާފިއްޔާ ކަލޭ އޮންނާނީ ޖަލުގޮޅީގަ.. އަޑުއިވިއްޖެ؟ ދެން އައިނާއާ ވައިއެޅުނަސް ނިމުނީ.. ދާންއުޅޭ!” ރުކައިން ހަރުކަށި ރާގަކަށް ބުނެލިއެވެ. ޝިޔާން ނުލަފާ ގޮތަކަށް ހީލައިގެން ހުރެ އެއްފަހަރު ރުކައިންއަށް ބަލައިލާފައި، އަނެއްފަހަރު އައިނާއަށް ބަލައިލިއެވެ. “ޔެސް ސާރ” ޖެއްސުމުގެ ރާގަކަށް އެހެން ބުނުމަށްފަހު އޭނަ ދެއަތް މައްޗަށް ހިއްލައިލިއެވެ. އަދި އޭނަ އައިކޮޅަށް ދާން ހިގައިގަތެވެ. “ހެހެ ރާކިންއަށް ތިކުޅެވުނީ އަލިފާނާ… ފާރޫގުމެނަށް އެމީހުންގެ ވައުދު ނުފުއްދުނީމަ ދެން އަހަރެންނަށް މި ކަމަށް ފިޔަވަޅު އަޅަން މިޖެހުނީ.. ހޮސްޕިޓަލުގަ އޮއްވަ މަރައިލެވުންނަމަ ކިހާ ރަނގަޅު..” ޖީބަށް އަތްޖަހައިލައިގެން ހުރެ މަޑު ހިނގުމެއްގައި ދިޔަ ޝިޔާން އޭނަގެ އަމިއްލަ ނަފްސަށް އަޑުއިވޭ ވަރަށް ބުނެލިއެވެ.
ޓެސްޓްތަކުގެ ނަތީޖާ ހިފައިގެން ޔާދިންއާއި ދުންޔާ ތިބީ ޑޮކްޓަރު ކޮޓަރީގައެވެ. ޑޮކްޓަރު ޔާދިންއާއި ދުންޔާގެ އުފާވެރި މޫނަށް ބަލައިލި ވަގުތު އޭނަގެ ހިތުގައި ހަމްދަރުދީ އުފެދިގެން ދިޔައެވެ. “އައިމް ސޮރީ.. އަހަރެންނަކަށް ނޭނގެ މިހެން ބުނާނީ ކިހިނެތް ކަމެއް.. އެކަމަކު ދުންޔާ ބަނޑުބޮޑެއް ނޫން..” މަޑުމައިތިރި ރާގަކަށް ޑޮކްޓަރު ބުނެލި ޖުމުލައިން އެ ކޮޓަރީގައި ކުޑަ ބޮމެއް ގޮވިފަދައެވެ. “ޑޮކްޓަރ ނޫން.. އަޅުގަނޑު މިތަނަށް އައުމުގެ ވީކްއެއް ކުރިން ކިޓަކުން ޓެސްޓު ކުރިން.. އޭގަ ޕޮސިޓިވް ކަމަށް އަންނަނީ.. އަ..އަލުން ޓެސްޓުތައް ހަދައިލެވިދާނެ ތޯ..” ދުންޔާގެ ކަރަށް މީހަކު ހިފައި ވާން ކުރާ ފަދަ އިހްސާސެއްވިއެވެ.
ޑޮކްޓަރު ފުންނޭވާއެއް ދޫކޮށްލައި ޓެސްޓްކިޓްގެ ބްރޭންޑާއި ނަން އަހައިލިއެވެ. ދުންޔާ ޖަވާބު ދިނުމުން ޑޮކްޓަރ އިސްޖަހައިލިއެވެ. “ތި ބުނި ބްރޭންޑުން މިފަހަރު ރާއްޖެއަށް ލިބިފައި ހުރި ބެޗްގަ ވަރަށް މައްސަލަ ގިނަ.. އައިމް ސޮރީ..” ދުންޔާގެ ދެލޮލަށް ޖަމާވެފައިވި ކަރުނަތަށް ފައިބައިގަތެވެ. ހިތުގައި ކޫރު އެޅިފައިވި ނަމަވެސް އަނބިމީހާ ރޯން ފެށުމުން ޔާދިންއަކަށް މަޑަކުންނެއް ނުހުރެވުނެވެ. ދުންޔާ އޭނަގެ މެޔާއިލާ ބޮނޑިކޮށްލިއިރު ޔާދިންގެ ދެލޮލުގައި އުފެދިފައިވި ކަރުނަތައް ލޯމަރައި ބާރުކޮށްލަމުން ހިންދައިލިއެވެ. ދެމަފިރިންނަށް ވަގުތު ދިނުމުގެ ގޮތުން ޑޮކްޓާރ އެ ކޮޓަރިން ނިކުތެވެ.
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Finally after a long wait.
Mi bai vrh furihama. E hoodie laigen e hury kaaku baa? Vrh curious vey eba. Mi shiyaan gandah company libuneema ves aina ah nubehi nuhurevenytha 🙄🙄🙄
When’s next?
Lysm Maash 🫶🏼🫶🏼
Yes hehe after a long..
Thankyou so much darl.. I’m happy U liked itt..
Let’s see dhw kaaku kan.. yea shiyaan ragalheh nuvi.. next part Insha Allah will try Monday GA up kureveytho..
Love you more darl💜🦋
Heyyyyyyy maashhh
Finally u r backkk
Miadhu iru eryhsure iru irukolhaa mi site ah eba vadhevey..vhk kiyaa hithun
Masha allah mi part vs vrhh reethi🤍
Hodu levey varu vefa hury ebai kiyai nimunu iru. Ehn hedhy shiyaan tha???soo cuurioouss..Alheyyy noooo….dhen yaadhin dhaany dhunya dhookohlaafa…hih huhtey kahala gthkh vhk thi ninmaaly…😭😭😭Mihaar enme inthizaar kureveny mai r kail ge scene akkh..curiously waiting…whens next???lyyysmm🫶🏻🫶🏻
heyyy aanaa yesss I’m back..
Oh ehen dhww😭😭 thankyou sooo muchh darlll I’m happy U liked itt..
Hehe let’s see kaaku kuri kameh tho dho..
Let’s see dhunya menah vaagoi.. mai menge scene annaane next part ga.. next part Insha Allah Monday ga up kohleveytho balaanan….
Love you more darl💜🦋
Hey maash💜
How ru?
Mi part varah ves reethi Maashaa Allah💗
Bro disgusting! who would’ve serve their customers human meat😖
So thi ulhey meeheh revenge naganee dhw?
Ah I feel so bad for dhunya😭😭 and yaadhin too😭
They’ve waited long enough!
But why do I feel like the doc is lying tho!
When next?
Ly💗
Heyyy darll..
I’m very busy but hanging there hehe😭 hope your doing well..
Aww thankyou soo muchh.. I’m happy U liked itt.. eeek obviously that hoodie😭 yea that man it tryna get revenge hehe..
Samee I feel so bad bad for her.. she and Yaadhin was soo hopeful😢.. let’s see let’s see dhww.. next part Insha Allah Monday ga will try..
Love you more darl💜🦋
komme pt aku heevani abadhu eh vhk eh liyefa onna hn kudako foohive mihaaru mi vhk kiyan v.shaugu veri vaaneh kamah kiyan fehti vhk eh mi.. adhi eha lahun nereni mi kn kahala author etha
She puts a lot of effort mi hurihaa ehcheh type kuraashaa , upload kuran!!
If you don’t like it ,then don’t read
Just because you don’t like it doesn’t mean ehn meehunnah ves kamaku nudhaane ekey!!!
Plz don’t say these kind of words ,it’s not nice at all
Thank you Zaaansss I’m happy you understand💜💜
kamekey meehun aa nubehi hurebe dhw
andd maash liyaa vhk thah is hama always the besttt mi vhk ekanyeh noon vaki
annddd we all know for a FACT that maash writes these strys vrhhhh burakohh ulhemunkanvess so you better keep your words to yourself
aand btw your stry tastes are not the same as others so plzz keep these words to yourself
also if you dont have any nice thing to say or comment plz dont and kamunudhanyaa dont read ik there are baivaru meehun mi vhk kiyaa hihvaa
love, maashstrylover
Thankyou Naeen I’m happy U like my stories.. I’m happy U understand understanding darl💜
So you think mi part vrh foohiyey, then nukiya madun hunnan ves neygunu dhw comment section ga aga gadha kuran! Bayyeh huvaa
Thanks for defending me darl.. but please be respectful😅💜🦋
Ohh sorry for that.. I try to upload komme week aku 2 parts.. you see I’m juggling work, studies and this also.. if U think it’s easy it’s not.. it’s very difficult really.. I do this because I really love to write.. this is something I enjoy doing.. and about U thinking the story in boring, hurihaa Emmen ehkahala stories eh like eh nuvaane.. maybe mystery and action isn’t Ur cup of tea… 💜🦋
Mi part vrh vrh slahi igey❤️❤️
Very curious abt hoodie laagehn ulhey miha
Maireen aa Kyle haadha cute ey dhww
Aina aa rukain dhw gulheyni
Alheyy dhunya aa yaadhin geh part kiyaafa vrh dheyrahvee
When next part??
Thankyou so much darll.. I’m happy U liked it.. let’s see kaaku tho hoodie laagen eulheny dhww.. let’s see dhww vaagoii..
Next part Insha allah Monday ga💜🦋
Hiii maash ragalhuthaaaa
Test thah kihineh dhiyaii
Mi part vess varah reethi
Why did I knew that was going to be a igiliburi
And is rukain really raakin??
And I feel saurrrr bad for dhunyaa
I wanna punch shiyaan
Patiently waiting for next part
Lysm♥️
Hiii Luna.. I’m fine alhamdhulillah.. I hope your going good as well.. thankyou so much darll.. I’m happy U liked it.. hehe let’s see what happens next dhww.. love you more darl💜🦋
i agree with siraa
that is bcx i feel like every episode presented too lengthy not in words but in the story line itself.
Every episode is very short and nothing new happens and it feels like a waste of time
and it takes a long time for the next episode to be uploaded.
i personally have to reread to remember and that itself is a lot of work.
I heard that maash is bxy and i understand that.
so why not finish the story first instead of doing this to readers??
it gets really boring if i am being honest.
this is not an attack at you. this is my sincere opinion as a reader who wants an author to improve where they are lacking.
If you feel it’s a waste of time why bother reading huh?
Having short memory ain’t maash’s fault! I ves hama vaahaka up vaa dhuvahu baraabarah kiyan but I have it in my mind! Proves that readers like you have no interest while reading ehenve hadhaan netheny previous ep ga vaa echeh!
If your to be so honest why not keep it to your self huh?
I know all of you are going to come at me for that comment saying things like ”if you don’t like it, simply don’t read”. The whole reason i am saying this is because i do want to read this story. I don’t think that people who don’t want to read the story will read it except people who want to get personal with the author. and i am not like them.
That’s not how we say it dummy!
“If you ain’t interested, why bother reading huh?”
Our languages powerful and meaningful unlike your boring vocabs🙄
Yeah you are exactly like them and you heard me right!
Yeah Nyb we r not so simple to say random stuffs and if cursing words are necessary we won’t even step back to say it
and maash dear with all due respect❤️
your own fake comments defending yourself is very obvious. If you look at the way you talk/respond and the way these ‘comments’ defending you are written, the similarity in the way of speech and the amount of full-stops are outing you. The commas and the exclamation marks included. And these defending comments were commented at a very close timing too which seems too good to be just a coincidence. and both you and those comments have the same bad attitude – tone i saw in the comments of another episode of this story. bcx not every one talks that way.
and it is honestly kind of embarrassing to see that an author would stoop this low.
if you can’t handle collective criticism then i suggest you don’t write at all.
i have tried my best to not sound rude but fake things have always irritated me.
if it weren’t for that i would have just kept quiet.
sure, you can hide behind those ‘sympathy’ and ‘defending’ comments for now.
but it then will never improve you.
That ain’t with all due respect
ekm with ALL due RESPECT my foot!
I get really pissed of when ppl like you are hallucinating alright!
Hama Maash lover💜 bunee thedheh you don’t have defenders
Ehenve then dhey roalan🙄
And she ain’t that low and dumb to defend herself pretending to be reader! Heck nah she has her DEAR READERS to protect her and defend her from TOXIC ppl like you and I mean it
MAASH AKY ABADHUVS GAVAAIDHUN VHK UP KURAN VRH MASAIHKAIKURAA AUTHOR EHH…KIYAVAMUN JOB AH DHAMUN VHK LIYAMUN HURIHAA KMH MANAGE KURAN VRH UNDHAGOO VAANE…MI SITE GA HUHNA HURIHA VHK EH KIYAATHYVE INGEY MAASH AKY HAMA FAAHAGA KOHLEVEY AUTHOR EHHKAN… VHK UP KURAN BUNAA DHUVAHAH UP KURAN VRH TRY KURAA AUTHOR EHH..MAASH KURIN VS BUNFE OTHY 12 GA VHK UP KURAANAMEY…MAASH GE EXAMS EY OTHY EDHUVASKOLHUGA…EHNVR AMILLA MYHAA AHVS VISNEN JEHEYNE AUTHOR AKHVS ABADHU VHK LIYUMAH HUSVE NUHUREVEYNE KAN…AMIHLA MYHA AKY AUTHOR AKH VEFA EHN MYHAKU THI GOTHAH CMNT KOHFA HURIYYEY U GE VHK AH….DHERA VAANE…HAMA EGOTHAH MAASH VS DHERA VAANE…EHNVR KONME MYHAKUVS JEHEYNE ANEHKAA R DHIMAALAH EHCHEKEY BUNUMUGE KURIN VISNAN…READERS JEHEYNE THANKFUL VAANVES…HILEY VHK KIYAN LIBEYTHY…PRO STRY AH LIYEVEN OI IRUGAVS MAASH FREE KOH VHK GENESDHEYNY EHMNHVS KIYEYNETHYVE DHWWW..VHK KIYAAHITHUN KIYANYAA EHVS SHAKUVA EH THI GOTHAKAH NUKURAANE…THIGOTHAH CMNT NUKOH ENME RANGALHU VAANY VHK NUKIYAI FIYYA…ENME FAHARAKU S AMILLA MYHA AKY MAASH KAMH VISNAALAFA HITHAH ARUVAALA THIMAA MYHA AH MI KIYUNY KOAHCHEH KANN
ABADHUVS LAAWWBIVEYYY MAASHH🤍
Don’t humiliate her! Definitely not on my watch!
Maash already said that she’s really busy but still to let us feel that she didn’t stop writing, and to make us happy cuz she know without her, our day ain’t completed so she’s trying her best!
Why won’t ppl like just get it?
Regarding what you said fake comments defending herself is cheep and low, that is exactly how YOU describe your own self! Who knows you commented earlier with the name ‘siraa’ and now agreeing with her in the name of ‘reem’!
Even if you don’t have defenders she has! I’m telling you yh she does have defenders!
And some ppl tone can be matching! No one has a specific different tone!
So You just can’t say what ever you want! If you wanna read her stories then be respectful! And firstly you ain’t maash so you won’t know if she’s criticising herself and defending herself after that! And don’t tell me you are the God so you’ll know ey! I swear these kinda comments pisses me off so bad! So better mind your own language
My bad!
not criticising comments but fake comments*
Omg guy’s those who don’t like maash ge story be quiet and leave this story without reading pls ….. Enmen ge taste ehgotheh nuvaane ey understand vebala 🤧…. Esfiya in gavaidhun story kiyaa reader ehge haisiyyathun I’m saying maash aky top author’s ge thereyn ekaku!!!! She’s uploading when ever she got time right? Visnaaliyas ingeyne author’s kuraa bura massaikaiy konme word eh type kuraa iru haadhahaa Gina vaguthekey episode akah ves ..aslu reader’s have to be thankful for her hardwork ingey…. Dhen thigothah dhimaalah vhk hadi ey buneema it’s badd it’s really bad konme gotheh viyas author kuraa bura massaikaiy understand nuvaany eii disrespectful reader eh v ma kmh gaboolu kureveyne konme meehakah ves … Hama dhen hithah araahaa ehcheh govaalaa iru anehkaage feelings aa dheythereyga ves visnaalun rangalhu alsu…. If maash aky miadhu thimaa nama you’ll feel the same way…. And for those who don’t like this story pls I suggest you guys to leave this…
Exactly ghost girl!!!!
Maash is hama EXCELLENT AUTHOR eh!!! I REPEAT!!!!!!!
consider me a hater if you must. i am simply stating the truth. defenders exist and i agree with that. but i havent met many readers with time to continuously check one episode of a story. maash you are just proving my point. stop with the fake defence comments. please be a better author. i am in a group chat with many other esfiya readers that was created back in 2021. and all of us think that you are really embarrassing for this. you do know that comment id mails can be checked right ?
and if someone said this story is boring its so that the author can be creative and become better. it’s for growth. babying the author and these so called defence comments will not get any of you anywhere. especially the author. the fact that maash doesnt respond to comments asking her to be better really proves that how self-centred she is and that she believes that she is so great. honey you are not all that. you have to take consideration for comments asking you to improve instead of being someone hiding behind all these sympathy comments. have some guts. face it. you are not as great as you think you are and thats fine too. there is always room to become better.
This story just started.. vhk eh fashaairu kankan vamun dhaany laslahun madu madun.. kudhi kudhi problems dhen gennaane, mi ep ga vx eba aadhy problems.. after that kunnu, massala bodu vaa Bai.. dhen massala hallu kohfa massala nimeyny.. this is how all stories are written.. kuhlli akah vhk feshey hisaabun kanthahgadeh nuvaane.. vrh plan kohfa story mi liyany..
I told in the other comment why I couldn’t respond.. I was hurt and I had a minor shutdown which happens to me when I’m hurt.. and no I do not think I’m the most perfect author in the whole site.. I never think like that.. I’m trying to always improve little by little.. komme ep ehga vx readers bunaa Kan Kan ragalhu kohlan.. and I told U before and I’m telling U now I DID NOT REPLY OR DEFEND MYSELF IN OTHERS NAMES.. vaguthu libey varakun comments ah reply dhemun mi dhany… If that’s Ur opinion on me you can believe Ur own words.. U can’t just throw accusations without any proof.. and I assure U there will be no proof of that cause I have never fake commented my story with others names..
i really hope you understand what i am saying and try to be better maash.
you have potential as an author. no one becomes a super good writer over night. you have mistakes that can be fixed.
especially these stupid defence comments. please grow up and stop defending yourself. these fake comments are very unnecessary. sure they can make you feel better. but in reality, it’s just very embarrassing. and shows how low you are.
I just want to clarify that I am not sending fake comments in to my name.. it has been a busy weekend for me and I do not have time to argue in my comment section by other names.. if U don’t believe me that’s Ur choice.. iyye aisfa huri comments aisfa hury haveeru.. I wan hanging out with my cousins at the evening 4 ga work nimun gothah.. mi kamah my cousins heki vaane.. I saw the comments 6 30 ga.. and today also I’m very busy at work.. I didn’t have time to check my phone.. I’m not that cheap or low to do something like that.. and I don’t know who is commenting on those names… And I never said maash mi emme molhu writer ey.. I’m always open to feedback.. comments in anna feedbacks ah vx maash positively koh nagaigen improve kohfa hunnany.. but this is too much reem… Vakin vaahaka dhahkaalan beynumiyya U can contact me through mail or insta.. I didn’t reply reem ge first comment ah cause I was deeply hurt with what U accused me of.. god knows I’d never done that.. and maash ah Allah gandhy huvaa kurevidhaane ehen names thakuga comment kuri kudhinnaky maash noon kama medhu.. please think before U accuse someone with something so disgusting..
assalaamu alaikum author maash🪷
alhugandu mee maash ge reader eh kushaky koba story in feshigen
ehenve alhugandu ves mi bunelany busy kujjeh he haisiyyathun.
reem dhehky ves ragalhu vaahaka eh.. ekamaku reem maashah kuri desrespect ah alhugadu ehves varakah support eh nukuran. bunefa oh goi kamu nudhany.. point rangalhu ekamamku
alhugadu comment nukuriyas baraabarah kiyan..
maash ves eba jehe ragalhu kollan ingey..heyo edhey faraatheh gothuga alhugandes mi bunany.
maa gina dhuvas upload kuran nagany.. ehen gina meehun ekkoh liyelaa fa genesdheny busy kamun.. maash thihen hadhany thi kiyun therin dheke lobi vaathi kan igey. ekamamku v.v.udhagu gina readersah.. alhugadu ge aunt akaa friend eh ves mi site in kiyaa.. e myhun ves bunani mi fadha kan kamun udhagu vaa vaahaka.
mi comment section ga v.bodah hiyaalu faalhu kuraathi alhugadu ves sharekollan beynun vi
Vaalaikumu salaam asma,
Sorry for late reply.. Vrh ufaa vejje maashge hurihaa vhk eh kiyaala hiyaalu faalhukohlan alah comment ehkohleema.. insha allah maash kairy ragalhukohlan beynunvaa kankan buneleema ragalhukohlaanan.. I’m sorry ehaa gina dhuvas upload nukoh hurevuneema.. exams aa hure kuda break eh nagaali vhk bunelin sitega.. dhen maash abadhuvx komme week aku 2 parts genes dheynan.. free viyya 3 partsvx insha allah..
ehkoh story liyefa up kuranya maash bodah beynunvany story ah credit libey gothah pro ah up kuran.. ekam ehen hadhan beynun nuvany story kiyan beynunvaa gina kudhinnah ehen hedheema nukiyeyne nethy.. I’m soo sorry readers ah udhagoo vaathy honestly readers ah udhagoo kurumaky eh irehgavx maash ge intention eh noon.. insha allah dhen liyaa story eh ehkoh liye nimmaafa up kohdheynan pro ah nuviyas.. adhi ehfaharu bunelaanan, thankyou for ur kind thought💜🦋
Maaiy raskalaange aa vakeelu kaleyney 😭
Mi heevanee esfiyaiga Alah author eh vhk upload kurun delay vegen ulhey hen rulhi aruvannn…. Kehtheri nuvevey haaluga vhk nukiyabala ekuh kanthah fala nukoh 😭
Guys why disrespect the author js becux vhk lahun up Kuryma ? She has her reasons right ? Like IMO u should focus on ur exams no matter what , so she dis the same thing by taking a little break
So now she’s uploading again ? It’s not a problem dhw ehaa Gina dhuvas Viyas… I’m happy that she is continuing dhw kithanmme Gina dhuvas Thakeh fahun viyas like for me it’s better than the story being discontinued (I’m not saying Ingey that maash is going to do this ey ) so pls js try to understand the reason the author is saying , and most importantly Think before saying anything , words can hurt alot , and also when saying things plss say it w RESPECT (I’m js saying this becux after seeing the comments I felt really sad knowing the author was hurted by these comments, maash js know tht ur one of the best authors I’ve known 😘 , ur stories are the Besttt 🥰 )
Vhk akee delay vx vedhaane echeh! Doesn’t mean hithu hurihaa echeh kiyaashey! Thi meehun ( those who are blaming her) hee kuranee vhk liyefa up kurumakee haadha faseyha kamekey! Alhe molhiyya konme dhuvahaku vaahaka eh Up kohbala! Or weekly! Maash always up weekly or daily it’s just the delay only this time! Cuz she has her exams
And the fact that accusing Maash for stuffs she didn’t do is really DISRESPECTFUL!.
Alhe reem ah othee kon proof eh to accuse maash like that?
We defend her not her herself
miadhu mi comment kollany maash ge kokko ehfadha rahttehssehge haisiyyathun..
guys… this is too much.. she clearly said she is going to take a break ey exam kairi vaathyve.. ekamaku vess maash liyun therinnah kuraa respect aai eku episode 5 upload kolladhin exam nimumuge kurin.. i was proof she did that for her readers i was on CALL with her when she proofread the episode as well.. i read the episode erey when she was correcting it.. and honestly? i should have stopped her erey upload kuriya nudheyn..!
maash aky abadhuvess kiyuntherinnaai medhu visnaa author eh.. she does everything she can to improve her writing.. mihn mibunany i have seen how she plans the story as well.. i have seen how she planned the plot and everything.. she had the plot ready even back when she was writing “insaafu libeynebaa?” !! thats how she planned everything!
dhn thibuny part lass vymaey.. its okay dhw aslu rulhi annan evvess ehcheh nubune if she just disappeared into thin air BUT SHE DIDN’T! hama varah varah reethikoh bunedhin dhw part lass vaaney test dhuvasskolhey.. and authors ain’t AI bots were humans too🥲 emme vaahaka eh viyass liyelyma ingeynee miee kihaa time nagaa kameh kann.. and that “fake commemts” vaahaka.. i’m here as proof she was beyruga kan ihye haveeru.. she had no idea what was going on…
dhn part lassvun.. yess hama lass vedhaane.. lass vedhaane kithamme kameh huredhaane.. grief, family matters, assignments, exams and job.. authors aky 24 gadi iru liyan thibey baeh noon.. even we will have a life outside of writing dhw..
criticism vess annaane.. ekan naannaane evvess vazeefaa eh midhuniye aku neh.. but guess what? she was REALLY excited for this episode.. she was sooo excited.. but, these comments crushed her deeply.. i know how much she was hurt.. i know how much she cried.. so, bunelan othy criticism dhinass vess author ge hithah kulhadhaana vaakahalaige criticism dheyshey… bunaa iru reethikoh bunaashey.. alhugandumen authors akyvess hama insaanun.. alhugandumenge meythereygavess othy hama ekkala kuda kuda maskolhu.. hama alhugandumenah vess thadhuvey.. asaruvess kurey..
Guys! Just please stop accusing Maash!
It’s not Maash who’s faking herself to defend comments! I’m telling you as a huge fan of Maash, she ain’t that low or cheap!
Then ehen kiyaa meehaku show us the proof before accusing her like that!
Then vhk delay vaneeyo! That’s totally fine! Even as an author they’ll have their own life and personal stuffs and this time she has clearly said that she has exams and plus she was hurt! So why bother saying that? Ehen noonas Maash abadhu vx vhk baraabarah up kurey! Just one time delay akah this is too much!
I’m really sad and disappointed to know Maash is hurt😭
She is saying again and again that she did not fake her into the defending comments yet still been accused! She’d even God promised but still.. Really disappointing!
Hope y’all will stop blaming her! She’s also a human, a girl! She’ll have feelings too! And I definitely know the feeling of been unjustly accused, I’m saying this through my personal experience!
Same same @Your fav bab, I was once falsely blamed too and it hurts! Ehen kiyaa meehaku, ehn kiyaa iru proof eh dhehkkiyas faafa veri eh nuvaane!
Im also really hurt to know maash’s disappointed in us!
dhw frfr @Nyb like its not easy vhk liyefa kuh filuvaa kanthah kohffa avas avahah up kuran i totally agree w tht and plus its not a problem dhww gavaidhun vhk up kuraane maash and eyna ge exams othyma dhw js once js once e delay v … she had her reasons dhw
roefa thi vahtharah ulhen adhi meehaka nei kaneyge eha bodu ehche bunevifa eh
meehun bodah comment koffaa huree liuntheriya ah ragalhakah
thiyaa varun thiya koodhun liyan noolhe😐
mi site ga kurin es ulhunu kihaa baivaru authors mi kahala ehchehi ivifaa huri
mi dhen maa hih bali kujjaki kanneyge
meehunah emeeheh ge hiyaalu bunun ovey.adhi liuntherya ekan heyokoh aduehun ovey
ekan balaa nuganeven yaa vaahaka liyun fiavaa ehen mageh hoadhun budhdhi veri.
mi dhen reethi vaahaka aka vias emme ragalhu thaa enmen mihaa fonu aruvan
bodu cheyneh kahala vahaka thake liyaa koodheh🤮
thats not how ppl and you point out the mistakes! And pointing out is fine but should at least be respectful plus falsely accusation is the main problem here! Sikudieh neth ehcheh huvaa🙄
Yeah then humanity ey kiyaa ehcheh thiya meehun gayaku nuhunnaa thee get eh nuvaane!
I see i see😝
action and mystery liyaani white rosse men vaahaka liyaa gothah.
mi vaahaka mi bodujoke eh
this vhk its not a joke ingey its hama one of the best vhk i have read here mi site ga …. and plus i think writers have their freedom of choosing the types of stories they wanna write its not somthing tht is owned by anyone … besides think before saying things …
Mihaa varu aruvaakahaa nujehey vhk delay viyakas…readers kaery nubune eh nun dhww maash break negy kyeh…readers kaery ga buni vrh reethikoh maash ge exams fesheye next month ga..12 ga vhk up kiyaanamey…and she did..eyge kurin vs 1 episode up kuri.ekamunvs engey dhww maash beynunvaa kan readers r hamayah vhk genes dheyn…knme myhakuvs beynun vaany exams kaeri vaairu eyah ready vaan….job ah dhamun kiyavan dhamun dhn ohnaany kuda vaguthu kolheh…vaguthu nulibeyne…exams kaeri vefa oi iru beynunvaany exams ah ready vaantha nuny vhk liyan tha…ikkkk vhk liyan maash beynun vaane….eyah vure bdh maash ah maaka important vaane exams….
Improve kuran kmh vefa huriyya vs reethi koh buneveyne….ekm hithu hurihaa ehcheh thi govany…rahumeh hamdharudhee eh neii….mioh hurihaa dhuvahu ehvs delay eh nethi vhk genesdhin author akaa dhimaalah…enme faharaku break eh nagaafa aima hithu huriha ehceh govany….sikundyga theikmh nethy ey buneveyny…
Site ah vhk nulias vhk liyaa kuhjeh ge haisihyathun mi bunany….enme kuru vhk eh liyan vgn plan koh vhk reethi koh geneveyne gthkh plan kuran vs atleast hour eh varu nagaa…mikiyany kuru vhk ehge vhk…dhn visnaala seasons thah genesfa ekieki episodes thah gennnan plan kuran nagaane vaguthu.. Ihsaas vs nukureveyne…type kohfa mistakes huri thw balaafa hama jehey thw balaafa, ehurihaa kmh kuran haadhahaa vagutheh nagaaney…
ehfaharu hama vhk liyaa hithun hama seasons thakah bahaigen vhk liyan feshin..ekm enme 2 eps liyevuny kuriyakah nudhevunu.vrh undhagoovi kuriah gendhan…ehnvr alhugandah visney emyhun ge bura masaikai….hama egth ehn readers vs jeheyne visnan..evaru nuvisney varuge kuda kudhinneh nun thiee….
Mihurihaa cmnts thakeh kiyaafa,..0.1%humanity vs nethybaaey hithah ery…maash dhera vaane varu visnaafa vrh dheravey….alhugandah mihaa asar kuraairu visnaala maash ah vaane varu….dhn ithurah ehchekey kiyumuge badhalu amilla myha visnaalaba maash ein state ga thimaa myha huryma vaagoi…hama egth maash vs dhera vaane…eii vs insaaneh…hitheh ovey enmenge vs ohna hen…ihusaasthakeh vs huhnaane…soo plzzz ehn myhakaa dhimaalah ehchekey bunumuge kurin visnaala..cuz words can hurt a lot…soo plzzz
MAASH PLEASE MYHUN KIYAA EHCHAKAH NUVISNAA MAASH KURAA HIHVAA KMH KUREY…KONME FADHA SITUATION EHGA VS ABADHUVS AANAA GE SUPPORT LIBEYNE..IA..❤️
fake comment liyaa maash 😂😂😂
Fake comment liyaneeky maash eh nooney heybali vaakah fake comments liyany Kaley
dhnme mi balaali insta profile….lol mi hithun vara reethi kamah heekurani cheedi…maa gadha velaagen angain naaran ulhe manje ehkey…bodethi fake comment kure eh nu eba thimaa ah thimaa fenifa huri golaeh…hithun meena haaa molhu writer eh nei mi site aku…maa fan-base bodu kama hedhigen ulhey iru mi golaa ge followers es eha madhu…views ves vara dhah ehen vaahaka thakaa balaafa…..dhen writer friends kolhaka amilla fake comments bodi eh ehkollaagen varah famous kama hedhigen ulhey aalaathe…cheedi mulhi esfiya ah ves huri bodu ladheh maash…..🤮😂
@rashusoru
Asthagufirullah theeedhen fukeh bodu varu maaiy Allah hehdhevi insaanekey Kaley thee …. Konme meeheh ves hahdhavaany emeehehge enme rivethi sooraiga ey mihira buraanchaaa …. Nulafaa kamuge hahdheh nethehnu Kaley eh
Nulafaa kamuge enme hadi vahtharu rulhi aruvan meehunge maa personal kankamaa nuvebala
@19
Varah nubai gothakah thi amalu kurevenee… Meehehge bura massaikathah huras alhaa iru emeeha vaane dhera ihusaas nuvany tha??? Mhr thigothah thikiyaa ehchihsah I would say thee maash ge dhushmanekey… Konme vhk liyuntheri ehves vhk liyan fashaany kuri erun libumah unmdheedhu thakeh kohgen… Maash ves egothah varah foni unmeedhu thakeh kuraane ekuhjaage kuri magu thi bandhu kuran massaikaiy kurany viha gadha lafuzu thakakun thee ehves insaanihyathu Kameh neiy meeheh kamah mi comment thah fenna meehun buhdhi salaamathun hureeyaa gaboolu kuraane … Mikahala kos meehun dhahkaa vhk ah Maash faheh nujeheyne……. maash aky varah baivaru reader’s ge favorite eh!!!!!
Maash ge unmeedhu thah vehyaa laa modelan thikuraa massaikaiy kaamiyaameh nuvaane inshallah…. Aharumenge loabivaa rangalhu massaikaiy theri author maash ithuru hiy varakaa eku kuri ah oiy thaanga fenumuge unmeedhu thah kuran…. Maash author lysm tc ❤️
😂😂😂😂😂😂maash ge fake comment eh subboos
Awwwnnn ehen v ma vhk thah kiyaalin dhww hadi viyas.. maash viyya Hadi vaahaka eh nuvx kiyeyne.. thi in vx ingeney vhk reethi vegen kiyaali Kan thanks for Ur lovely comment bro.. haadha coward v ma ey dhw comment section ehga thi vhk dhahkany.. alhe private koh msg kohbala thihaa coward nooniyya.. never said I was reethi kujjekey mihaaru curious vejje thimeeheh hunna goi balaalan.. only insecure ppl try to attack other people.. keep on going bro adhi vx vaahaka kiyahchey💜🦋
mi eguni maash kan hama fake comment es mikurani
liyuntheriyaa ah ekani delete kureveyni comments
comment kuri irukolhe kurin..mihaaru neh adhi ithuru 2 defend comments ebain.
hadi fala huthuru maash
is that true maash?
are u deleting comments?😕
didn’t expect this from u
wasnt going to believe that accusations
but u leave me no choice
i hate fake authors soo much
I’m deleting Hadi ehchehi kiyaafa huri comments and I don’t want to reveal my name and stuff those are private.. ekan haama kuranya I’ll delete it
yea u lost a BUNCH of readers today onwards including me
you and your different personalities that defend comment every 5 second can go ahead
with your fake fans…..
u are the most disgu sting person
I’m writing for those who appreciate me.. Allah gandhi huvaakohfin mihaaru vx eh irehga vx noannaane fake comment kohfa.. and god knows I didn’t so I don’t care if U believe or not.. and I don’t need disrespectful readers anyway.. I write for those who appreciate my stories
u are the worst author in this site
That’s Ur opinion 👍
yes maash ah ovey comments del kuruma unapprove kurumuge baaru.. vhk dhahkan beynumiyya insta in vhk dhahka fidi nuve.. and site admin vx nukuraane hadi ehchehi govaafa onna comment thakeh approve eh. mi ge fahun hadi ehchehi kiyaafa bully kohfa hunna comment accept eh nukuraanan.. and kurin vx bunihen bunelaanan I did not post fake comments and I know @soru @rashusoru and @19 are the same person kan.. email beynun nukuriyas author ah fennaane eh namehga fake comments kuraa kudhin from their codes… and honestly amilla ah ehen kohfa maashge mathin elhuvun is soo embarrassing.. and this fala comment in vx eba engey dhuvahaku maash fenifa huri insaaneh noon Kan thi.. and kurin mi story ah comment kuraa kudhin mihaaru vx kurany.. I didn’t tell them to defend me but I appreciate it and I’m not that low amilla vhk comment kuran.. @19 @soru @rashusoru amilla comments ah reply kurany ehen meehun thi kujja defend nukuraathy ehnun.. furathama amilla meeha emme perfect tha? Amilla meeha thi dhuvahaku vx vhk eh liyuny meeheh tha? Noony did Allah create U emme furihama hithah ehen meehunge sifathakah malaamai kuranythi? No I don’t think so.. no one is perfect.. and if maasha huthuriyya thimeehakah kon gehlumehtha vany? Seriously this is getting out of hand.. stop it.. and face me like the manchild U are in insta not public ga ehen meehunah dhahkan.. vrh keikohfin ehchekey nubuneveytho but this is pure cyber bullying and I will not stay quiet!
For those who are bullying and talking nothing related to the story:
Comment kuraany vhk aa gulhey gothun not argue kuran or to bully ekahala comments vx del kuraanekamuge vhk bunelan💜🦋
Mee dhen kon kameh
Ehen meehunge hardwork ah faadu kiyumaky kada kameh dho
Maash vehaa bura masaikaih kuramun ves upload eba kureythaa
Kale men vaa endhumathy dhemifa ovegn hate comments kuri ekey kiyaafa maa molhehnoon vaki
Whats with the disrespect
Hajamu nuvanyaa saaiboani kaigen ulhebe
Aaekey Zaaaaanaeen!
Hama heybali vagen ulhey baeh huvaa!!
Oh god.. These ppls have zero humanity.. Respect her.. I literally cried shihaa ge comment kiyaafa. Fahun maash fala ey buneema gis levijje.. I know maash… I ge vrh close friend ey eiy kurin maash ge vx ekuveriey. I dont know abt now. Ekam eiy vrh fahun. I have seen maash… She is not fala or even ugly. She is so beautiful.. Readers! Pls dont comment like that. Authors are also humans. As shihaa said not AI.. Respect their stories n them..
Alhe meehaku ajaibeh nuvaane tha mi meehun ulhey gotheh dhw vhka hadii aa nukeema v nu 🙄 and meeheh knmme gothakah huhttas aee ehn meehunnaa behey kameh noon body shaming is not acceptable here or ehn thaaku viyas 😒😒 mihen dhn maash defend kureema anehkkaa buney maash amihlla ah kuraa comment thakey mee 🙄🙄 authors ge hard work appreciate nukurevenyyaa madun thibebala heyonuvaane 🙄 anyways vhka hama v salhi 😍 u r too gud Ma Sha Allah 😍♥️ one of the best writers in esfiya♥️ meehun kuraa ekahala comments ah belumeh nethi kuri ah dhey You are the best on your own way girl.. 😙 waiting for the next part 🤍