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*މަންމައޭތީ ލޯބިވާ މަންމާތީ، **ހިތް ރޮނީއޭ މަންމަ ފެނިލާށެ،**މަންމަ ކުޑަކުޑަ ވަގުތު ކޮޅަކަށް, **މި ހިތް ވަނީ ބޭގަރާރުވެފައެވެ،**މަންމަ ގާތުގައި ނެތުމުން ހިތް ކުދިކުދިވޭ،**މަންމަ ކާރީގައި ވުމަށް ހިތް އާދޭސްކުރެ،* ގިޓާއިން ރީތި މިއުޒިކެއް ކުޅެލަމުން އަހާނާ އޭނާގެ ހިތާމަތައް ލަވައެއްގެ ގޮތުގައި ހުށައަޅަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. *މަންމައަށް ހެޔޮ އެދި ދުވާކުރަމެ،**މަންމައަށް ހެޔޮ އެދި ދުވަކުރަމޭ،**ހިތުގެ އަޑިން މަންމާ  ބުނަމެ،**މަންމައަށް ހެޔޮ އެދި ދުވާކުރަމޭ،*. ލަވަ ކިޔާ ނިމުނު އިރު އަހާނާގެ ދޮން މޫނު ހުރީ އެއްކޮށް ޖަންބު ކުލަ ވެރިވެފައެވެ. ދެލޯ ރަތްވެފައި ހުރުމުން ރޮއެފަ ހުރިކަން އެންގެ އެވެ. “ވަހްވަހް… ވަރަށް ރީތި އާނާގެ ތި ސޯންގް… މީހަކު އަޑު އަހާފަ ނުބުނާނެ ތީ ސްކޫލް ކުއްޖަކު ލިޔުނު ލަވައެކޭ.. ހީވަނީ ޕްރޮފެޝަނަލް ލަވަކިޔުންތެރިއަކު ލިޔެފަ ހުރި ހެން” އަހާނާއަށް ތާރީފު ކުރުމުގެ ގޮތުން އައްޒާމް ބުނެލި އެވެ. އެ އަޑު އިވުމާއެކު އަހާނާ މުުނުފުހެލާ އައްޒާމް އަށް ފުރިހަމަ ހިނިތުން ވުމެއް ހަދިޔާކުރާ އެވެ. 

Comments (28)

  1. jiji

    Heekuran kuri ah huri baithah rythi vaanekamah?

    1. Aly
      jiji

      Yeah I’ll try

  2. IsHa IsHa

    then ok

  3. Aly

    Salaam readers….. Mi story ga hunnaane Aly amilla song eh liyefa… Song ge raagaky ‘half girlfriend: mein phir bhi tum ko chaahunga’…

  4. Xxx

    Vvv salhi feshun. ❤❤ Vv unique gothakah theeny beginning genes ladheefa.????? when will the first part come?????? curiously waiting.???

  5. Aly

    Thanks Xxx… Next part vrh avahah up kuraanan..??

  6. Meekkomee

    Feshun vaRah reethi ingyy:) Kon irakun story feshenyy??waitin

  7. Aly

    September 5th ga first part up kuran…. And thanks Meekkomee…??

  8. jiji

    I think kairaa,ahaanaa nd shia are siblings..also the three boys too..Btw aly…hw old u r dear?

  9. Aly

    Maybe…. I’m 15 this year

  10. malsamalkkomal

    Varah reethi ingey Aly….whn next…curiously waitting…??

    1. Aly
      malsamalkkomal

      Thanks malsamalkkomal

  11. Maya

    Intrestin feshun , hope to see a different story in a different track n Aly i am same age as u ??

  12. Aly

    Yeah I’ll try to give you a different and interesting story…. ??

  13. Mimmi7

    Trailer was awesome… N i am sure stry vx Reethi vaane kan ??? hey Mimmi ah vx 15 vejje mi aharuga…. Ur In grade nine right??…. BTW I wanted to ask a question… Mee Mimmige stry ah comment kuri ayaange frnd aly tha?? Mee e aly ah vejjiyaa if I am not wrong ur name must be Alysha right…. Mimmi ah alyge name ingunee ayaan ebainey comments thakuge thereyga alyge real name bunefa?? Alysha.. Vrh Reethi nan.. N mi stryga beynun kohffa huri names vx vrh reethi?? alyge amilla song eh dhw eii… Amilla ah liyunu lava akaa balaa vrh reethi… N raagakah negi song obii… Gud choice?? I luv that song?????

  14. Aly

    Thanks Mimmi… And yes I’m in grade 9… Yes I am the one who commented on your story… And that’s my name… Glad you like it… Thanks again.. ??

  15. Makku

    Varah reethy aly lysm ???

  16. Aly

    Thanks Makku… luv u more

  17. Drax

    Nice starting
    Keep up the great work
    Please write the story till the end
    Hope u will make the interesting great and will write till end

    1. Aly
      Drax

      Thanks… Yeah I’ll try to make it interesting till end Drax

  18. azker

    awwwww i love ur song its so heart touching???…. cant wait to read the story btw cover pic hama habeys??

    1. Aly
      azker

      Thanks … My friend who gave me the idea to write the story is azker too.. ??

  19. juma

    story nice , btw i am also in grade 9 and age 15

    1. Aly
      juma

      Thanks juma… ?

  20. azker

    Hey just think of me as it friend too???

    1. Aly
      azker

      Good Idea

  21. Half girlfriend

    Woww…just read this..will read all the parts soon❤❤and yeah!goodluck

    1. Aly
      Half girlfriend

      Thanks half GF

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