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1. Nice but v kuru …… dhn vaagoi balan v beynun waiting……. Next part kon iraku ???

2. U need to improve ur writing skill v bodah

3. Vrh nice ekm mistakes eba huri.. knme line ehge s fahu bai nufeney… ehnve vr goiyy undrstnd vrn udhagoo… vrh kuru mi bai… nxt prt dhigu khlahcheyy… nd line ge nimeythan fwnna goiyy hadhrdhevnyr hadhr dhehcheyy….gud luck… ly… ♥♥♥

4. salaam i will improve y mistakes next time and net part dhigukohlan saturday

5. vaahakaigai ehves ottareh nei

6. Mee baby kudhin liya kahala vaahaka dhw.. ehves ohtareh neh.. thivarun nuliyey

   1. baby vaahaka ky kyh kuran dhw ehen vru nukiyaba

7. Varah reethi! You can write storys ❤❤❤
   Daily koh up kohdheefiyaa rangalhu! Meehun kiyaa ehcheh balaanikameh neh!
   Vaahaka kuda koh dhigukohlan feney!
   Keep going dear❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

8. Pls continue this story don’t stop written this story varah reethi story eh mee for mee ???????

9. Kamaku nudhey v.Sorry… hieh nuvey vaahakaeh heneh

10. aakko is new ehenvyma mistakes huredhaane. Alah vaahaka liyan fashaairu kohme meehakahves mistakes hedheyne. Story ga huri mistakes bunedhinumakee rangalhu kameh ekamaku vaakaige ohtareh nethey or baby kudhin liyaakahala vaahaka ekey bune tease kuraakah konmehen nujehetne.aakko is giving her best effort so you two should appreciate her . Not tease her.

11. Kohme meehakah ves new vyma mistakes hedheyne. Khinmehen nujehe baby story ekey noony ohtareh nethyey bune tease kuraakah. Aakko is trying her best as this is her first time.we should encourage her. not tease her.

    1. True…….go forward aakko…kyp it uppppp

    2. I know we all are with you akoo. Mi devey negative comments amila strength had aasiyaa you will surely be sucess akoo. Good night ????????

12. Yes aakko.. u can do it.. plx don’t stop.. love the story.. waiting for next part.. ly.. tc

13. thankyou guys

14. It’s a nice story. If you truly want to write you can in sha Allah.don’t lose hope. Take negative comments as your road to success.

15. Yess❣❣❣ I believe u can do it aakko I first read ur comment ehh himi ge story akun dhen just got interested in u…..meehunnge bad comments libunakas ekamaa sad ve liyun huttaa nulaa try to improve from wat they say…. Aakko ahh vaane I have faith in u…..dhen faharakun miahh vure dhigu kollaafa ginain ehen good writers ge liyun thahh kiyan vee eyrun vs varah body than improve vaane….and comment thakahh reply kuranyaamu readers ge loabi varah bodahh libey ne…n aakko by the way how old r u???

16. Vara mistake ebaulhey example aka blaa iru erashadiyaeema ragalhu vaane ehaa aslu nugulhey. Adhi sifskurun vara madhu eyee ehen bune ithutievhes vaahaka aka nugos seedaa rsshsdevun vaahaka. Well akku frankly bunaananama I’m not so good in stories stuff even through i like reading. Me Naz a boda heevaagothun fena mistakes. But hama sifakirun madhu. Anyway all the best and i hop you will try to work on this and if their is any appropriate thing i said I’m really sorry for it
    But this is my opinion in reality ??????????????????

17. Varah reethi????
    Don’t stop written this story there some readers didn’t understand ?????
    And you have to accept positive comments and negative comments ???
    If you are continuing this story you will improve day by day so pls continued this story ????
    ????????

18. Varah reethi story. Waiting for next part.

19. Meehakah vaahakeh liyan neygunas dhen bodu varu thee dhogeh hama thigothah hurihaa vaahakeh liyey inge

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