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1. Alhey sifa kohdhinun rangalhu kohllan jehey.. N eba huri mistakes.. Loyefa kiyaalaa nama up kutumuge kurin…hope dhen onna baiga rangalhu vaane kamah.. Grade two ga ulhey kujjalu liyefa oiy ehcheh hen hyvany

   1. Furathama thimaa amillayah type kurumuga mistakes nulaa liyeveytho balaaba .. btw aashaa menn haa molheh nuwaane dhw emmenneh.. eyna vs try koffa eyothi waahaka liyan.. and insha allah adhi aashaa ahh vure reethikoh eyna waahaka liyaane ?☺?

2. Nice plzz nimendhen gennachey?

3. Nice…. but haadakurey digukohlaane kamah ummeedukuran .. well done keep it up

4. Nice but kobaa story ge aneh bai

5. Haadha kurey..
   Thankolheh dhigukoh up kohlabala

6. V rythi ekam haadhakurey n kon irakun nxt prt up vaany❤❤

7. Schoooley… Hahah

   1. Thigothah miihunnaa dhimaa ah malaamaiy kuraairu thii mme furihama miihaatha? Hama rangalhah ngeyne ei mistake eh kan.

8. School kiyaairu innaanee kaafu. Chaviyanyeh noon

9. Nice ..whn nxt part ..

10. ummm.. alsu idea varah salhi… ekamaku ibaaraaiykurun thankolheh reethi kohfiyya story varah reethi vaane’..i mean thankolheh matured style eh gengulhefiyya varah reethi vaane ey…nd mi part thankolheh kuru…

11. Nice. Ebunaahen school liyair skool liyahchey. N I think dhigukoh liya vahakaeh nama sifakohdhinumuge bai n nan ithuru ehchehi genaima salhivaane bodah. Hama heeva ehcheh 😉

12. School mee kon bahakun kiyaa gothebbaa

13. ??

14. Alhe aashaa comment kurithaa neytha mistake eh…

15. Varah hadi

16. abunaaheh ehaareechehnoon.hadi.

17. Aslu mi story ge concept varah salhi?.. next part thankolheh dhigu kohla dhechey…? nd kithanme negative comments othass dheravegen or ladhun story nuliye nuhunnachey.. hurihaa enmen ehvareh nuvaane.. no one is perfect.. nd i guess this is ur first story.. ginain try kuri varakah molhuvaane❤

18. Varah reethu but school ge badhalah leehve suchool iny

19. Dear the concept is nice.. but mistakes have dw.. but its ur first time.. ginain try kuryma adhi miahvure rangalhuvaane??

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