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1. Me first v v reethi akan haadha kuray

2. Hyyyvey v rythi vaane hen.. nxt part avahah up khdhehchey

3. Alhe avahah up kohlahche. V rythi vaanehen hiyvey.

4. Hii twnkle star

5. Woww.. v v rythi feshumeh.. nd I luv horror story.. kn irakun nxt part up kohdheyny… nd v v biruveri kurahchey ingey… All the best??

6. heevey reethi vaane hen…. next part ASAP up kolaathi… 🙂

7. Reethi vaanehen heevany dhen liumuga kuh bas ebahuri misaalakah meyz mathy in fenfulhi meyz mathy fenfulhi hunnaany ingey biruveri vaahaka varah kiyaa hiyy vey avahah up kohdhehchey☺

8. Thank you all…mee alhugandu furathama vaahaka so mistakes hunnaane….ur feedbacks helps alot…mivaahka avahah up kohleveytho balaanan

   1. Alah liyunu echchaka bala vvv reethi

9. Maakuru heevanaa vaahaka liyan neengehneehem

10. too short.

11. thankolheh kuru.. first stry aa balaafa feshun salhi.. avaha uo kohdhehchey.. Nern ves horror strys varah kiyaa hihvey.. gud luck..

12. thankolheh kuru.. first stry aa balaafa feshun salhi.. avaha up kohdhehchey.. Nern ves horror strys varah kiyaa hihvey.. gud luck..

13. plx vaahak liyanyaa thankolheyh avahah vaahaka upload kohbi……other wise stop writin story……..eyrun maa ragalhu vaaney dhw……..

14. 😛 salhi story e best of luck

15. V v salhi..inthizaaru kuraaanan dhn onna bayah..but mi vaahaka v kuru..dhn onna bai dhigu koh liyan vaane??

16. woooow salhi mi part…..hope next part veehaaves avahaka up ko deynekama…….v kiyaa hithun mihuriiiiii………..

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