ހިތުގަ މިވާ ސޫރަ ތެދޭ!! 5

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1. hey guys.. here is the nxt part.. hope u will lyk it.. n let me knw the mistakes. n i knw its short.. but u knw mi part ga niusha faharehga marry kurn ulhey lucky boy ingihjeyya foohi vaane. i mean dhn e dhemyhunge prt ehnu annaany so ehn part akun feshun okay vaanehn ryn ah fenunyma mihn hedhy.. sry fr making it short.. and thanks fr reading.. enjoy 😉 🙂 🙂 🙂 n curiously waiting to knw that LUCKY GUY dhw 😛 😛 😉

2. Aee jaushan dhw… v heevey ehen.. v nice.. thank u.. keep it up Ryn…

   1. hehehhe may b and may b nt… thnks dark princess.. ryn ah vx hyvey eba thihn bunyma :P,, n thnks alt fr reading. n welcm.. 😉 🙂 🙂 enjoy 😉 🙂

3. hehehe its ok ?

4. ITS OK RYN…. heeeheeeheeee ok dhw..? 😉 anyways mi prt vx vrh habeys….like eh 😛 nxt prt kon irakun? avahah up kohdhehchey…but haadha hyveyey eba jaushan ey eulheny 😮 heeheeheee….waiting waiting ……plx make it fst ingey ryn….bst of luck 😀

   1. thnks shaby fr the its ok.. n yrh nw m fyling gud yay.. n thnks fr reading n liking it.. n ehenney ryn ah vx hyvany jau hn. ekm jau ah nuvehjeyya :o…. 😛 anyways in sha allah vrh avahah up khdheynan 😉 thnks alt

5. hehehh thnks aeon. 😉

6. Hi ryn v reethi rangalhu kurierumeh dhehvaashi (aameen) insha allah

   1. thanks sharu.. 😉 so swyt of u… 🙂 :3

7. Jau nuvehjehyaa foohi vaane

   1. hehhehe thn lts see dhw sharu 😉 .. 🙂

8. Its k ryn…. v nice… waitin 4 the nxt prt… ehaa gina dhuvahu inthixaaru nukuruvahchey

   1. aww.. so swyt of u shai.. thnks fr telling it k.. n thnks fr reading 🙂 labba thihaa lwbin bunyma ryn ehaa las nukuraanan ingey.. 🙂 enjoy :3

9. Its okk my swyt swyt flower gandaaa 😛 … v nalla mi part vs ingey…. I think its jau…. omg dhn kihinw baa vaany curious to know….. btw kn irakun nxt part… 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

   1. thanks my luvly luvly luvly lily gandaa :P.. n thnks fr saying its ok vx.. n yrh evn i cnt wait to upload it n make all u read n knw who the guy is.. .. n vaki day eh neynge bt in sha allah vrh avahah.. luv ya miss ya.. ummwahhxx..

10. Ryn haadha rangalhey avaha up kureema vaahaka liunas bas ahaagen kiyavaathi Ryn a rangalhu kaamiyabee akah edhen n waiting for nezt part

    1. awww thnks nazi.. i will study well in sha allah n thnks alt… 🙂 🙂 so swyt of u…. :3 thnks fr reading.. enjoy 😉

11. Shalhi

    1. thanks crazi 🙂 🙂 🙂

12. hey ryyn very nice i thnk its shan

    1. hheheh owhh.. lts see dhw kenn 🙂 🙂 🙂

13. ‘soafa mathee,??? seriously??? ahannah v majaa koh imagine v emmen “soafa mathee” isheendhe thibeyne goiy..???

    1. dho neem. me too.. hahahahaha?

    2. ahahhahha.. thnks fr reading 🙂 🙂 😉 n enjoy..

14. for me it sounded v awkward when yu askd evryone to say its ok for makn d story short. no, i mean its totally ok evn if its short, bt askn evry1 to say its ok, felt like yu want sympathy from all.. hehe. no hard feelings ingey. but eythi kiyaaleema feel v goi. v maja me ah?? isn’t it a bit ‘seeking sympathy’ type?? LOL

15. thui dhehken ulhey anheneh.. ?

    1. heheh vedhaane dhw 🙂 lolxx… thnks fr reading 🙂

    2. tharubiyyathu!! lol

    3. aharen v foohi ekahala authors thakuge vaahaka kiyan.

16. Varah varah varah reethi mi part ves

    1. thnks alt.. 🙂 enjoy.. n thnks fr reading…

17. Varae reethi akamku vaahakaiga abahuri sifa kodhinumuga kudhi kudhi masalathae misaalakae sofa matheega bandhun aey gae badaluga mathi bay nun nokoae sofaga bayn dhun akamkuves reethi

    1. thanks…i wil improve it nxt prt ga.. thnks fr telling me.. thnks fr reading.. 🙂 🙂 😉

18. maafu kohdhinun aee v reethi sifa eh. namaves amihlayah ehen meehun kairee miveni hen bunaashey buneema i also find it a lil awkward!!

    1. thanks… n thnks fr reading 😉

19. ryn ge comment thakun v heevey always need more attention hen. kuree part ga ves bodu conversation eh in :/ othr writers here dnt du dat!

    1. thnks.. n thnks fr reading 😉 😉

20. Sofa ga isheennaanii..
    Vaahaka v reethi ekam comment bai maa show off. Their is no anonymous to chase you. No need to comment back like that. Just say due to some personal reasons you were unable to write long enough ey. Late vanii vx ehenveyey. Thats all..
    Ehaa show off vaaehchehnun.
    Just hama hiyaaleh ngey!

    1. thnks … n thnks fr reading.. 🙂 🙂

21. taking my mwrds bck cx if my luvly readers fyl awkwd n nt lyk it so who am i? dhwww 🙂 … luv ya all… n thnks fr reading.. 🙂 🙂 😉 😉

    1. wrds*

22. ryn ur so sweet. n bas gabool kurn ya adhi maa sweet.. n asluvx it felts awkward but i know for some people that little its okay means alot.. anyways strory varah reethi.. waiting for next part. and how old are you if u dont mind?

    1. ehhehe thnks…. yrh tht its okay means alot to me aslu… bt nvr mind.. thnks fr reading and i am going to b 16 😉 n HMSTH stands fr HITHUGA MIVAA SOORA THEDHEY? 🙂

    2. wow ur right nw seeing this.. great i really want to chat with you.. reply libetho balan mi iny ves. nd welcome. yeah i like this story it stands for hithuga mivaa soora thedhey.. you are smart.. what? 😮 your just 15 and writing stories which are so nice.. ehenve dw kuda kuda brain eh innany :p.. your adhi small dont know ehnu what most of the people like nd dislike.. i thought ey comments hurigothun your adhi small kan.. but bodu vaa varakah dhas vaane.. n when is your birthday? next year? 🙂

    3. hehehe yrh.. thnks fr reading the stry 😉 n lyk vaa thyvx… hahah nw ryn ah vure kuda kudhinvx miah vure rythikh liyaane.. 😉 u think i am KUDA.. laaee hehhehe…btw nyc to meet u…. n my b day is 18 nvmbr.. 🙂 😉

    4. HAPPY BIRTHDAY IN ADVANCE TO MY FAVOURITE AUTHOR.. 🙂 your so sweet thankyou for giving the answers.. meehun konme ehcheket kiyas just be yourself.. bodu vamun dhaa varakah gina ginain dhimaa vaane mikahala faadu kiyunthakaa.. but i know and you know that your not a girl who likes to show off if so you will never take your words back and realise your mistake.. thats the reason i am saying your sweet and kind.. ehabi meehunnah anga dhehvaafa onnanee ves ekahala ehchehi meehunnah kiyan not seeing the good side of people and ehchehi thakeh kiyan. dont worr about them.. the way they dont know how you are in real life even we dont know how they are in real life.. :p hope to chat with you in next part.. bye..thankyou once again

    5. thnks…. n see u nxt prt in n bye… n once again thnks fr wishing me.. 😉 🙂 <3

    6. kae thiulheny emanje aa hithaa vegen hen mashah heevany.. LOL

    7. hevehnu.. ma ulhey gotheh ingeyny mashah.. :/

23. Neext Part Please Upload Soon Dear :’)
    .nice story so far. ??

    1. thanks.. in sha allah vrh avahah up khdheynan.. 🙂 🙂 once again thnks fr reading

24. V rythi…..kyp it up …….waiting 4 next part…

    1. thnks mary 😉 🙂 n thnks fr reading 😉

25. Jaushan n niusha vakinukurahchey.
    Soafaa mathyga ey bunyma varah hama nujehey.. soafaagai ey bunyma dhoa rythy. Waiting for nxt part

    1. hehehhe ;)… lts see dhw vaa gotheh.. n thnks fr telling me. i will imprve it.. 🙂 n thnks alt fr reading 😉 😉

26. Vvvv reethi mi vaahaka kuda kuda kokkoa…..:-):-):-):-):-)

    1. hehheheh thnks xee.. :).. enjoy.. thnks fr reading 😉 🙂 😉

27. Vaahaka v rythi

    1. thanks 🙂 🙂 enjoy 😉

28. Nice waiting fr the next part..????

    1. thnks luv 😉 :)… enjoy 😉

29. Al-hamdhulillaah!
    Mi bai vs varah salhi…Aishaa v kiyaa hithun hithun hithun huhta mi nimuny….v v reethi mi prt 🙂
    I m waitin 4 da nxt prt….

    Ryn…..
    Advance koh…..Happy Birth Day…Ryn ah….n Ryn ulheny kon grade eh gaatha????

    1. aww so swyt of u.. thnks dear.. 🙂 :)… n thanks fr wishing me.. 🙂 <3 n ryn 10 ninmaifin 😉

30. Very nice this prt

    1. thanks 🙂 🙂 enjoy 😉

31. Ryn as i believe professional writers wont reply back like that..
    I am not a writer but thats what i belive..
    Story up kohfa eyge thireega dhn up kuraani kondhuvahaku kan kuruvii kyvekan nuny lasvy kyvekan simple words in liyelyma v. Personal vaahakathah nudhakkaane mithaaga. Cox mii public dhw! Mamma dhin tharubiyyathey kiyaafa ekahala vaahaka nudhakkaane. Eyrah meehun malaamaih kuraane.
    Ryn ebajehey mikahala kanthahthah rangalhukuran. Ngey!
    N comments thah kiyaafa improve kuran try kuraathy v ufaave assu. Good luck

    1. thanks kii.. i will not repeat it again.. n once again thankyou soooo much. 🙂 <3 :3

    2. v rangalhu vaahakaeh. me ves thaaeedhu kuran. mi site in feney v zimmaadharu liyun therin. nan kiyaakah nethin. ekamaku ryn men eba jehey islaahu vaan.

    3. yes. nd age bune , b’day bune.. publicizing all d personal info. writers here dnt evn tell thr age wen askd. yeah only some responsble ones..

32. HMSTH mn kahala meehun ulheythii ginafaharah ehen meehunah heyo visnun visnen ulhefavx magun kassaalany.. vaahaka kiyaameehun obviously kiyaane dhw comments. Kiyaairu HMSTH mn personal chats kohfa huriima v awkward vaane assu. Gabool kuranjeheyne dhw! Mii public thanehkan. This is not for personal chatting n stuffs. HMSTH ah Author ngenya personally msg eh kohlaafa bunelanvi. Gabool kuran aharumenah neygeykan ei kaakukan. Ekam faadukiyumakii anekaa ah libeyne kurierumehkan dhannanjeheyne. Evves haalehga malaamaih kuraakahnun. Hageegaih dhw assu. Ummeedhu kuran vaahakathakuge comments kiyan balaairu personal gossips nuhunnaane kamah. Becox thats not the style of professional readers nor writers.
    Thanx

    1. once again thnks kii 😉 ;)..

    2. exactly!! thats wat i was thnkn 2. foohi vaa goiy vey personal stuff liyefa hureema. cud said as show off.

33. kii your right. but i dont think she knows him or her or else i am sure she will tell him all that personally. plus she cant even stop him or her in the public and in my view she tried to avoid most of the things she has given small small replies… so in my view she is doing right cs no one will like to stop someone and not give the answer etc. and hmsth seriously it seems that your are so flirty.. ryn be careful.. and from my side too happy b day in advance.. and waiting for the next part.

    1. thanks.. 😉 n once again thnks fr wishing me.. 🙂

34. Ryn plz plz avaha up kohlladheebala

    1. dear maadhamaa rey ryn up khdheynan nxt part.. 😉 sry fr late… 😉 wait fr tmrw nyt.. ingey…

35. V reethi story.. v kiyaahithun indhaa enimuny. Beynun v avahah next part kiyaalan. Kndhuvahakun dhn up kohdheny??

    1. in sha allah mirey up khla dheynan.. 😉

36. V lwbi masha allah

    1. thnks 😉 🙂

37. V nice ?

    1. thanks 😉

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