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July 16, 2015 2 Mins Read
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 ކަޔާލް ބިރުން ހުރެ ފަހަތަށް ބެލި އިރު ހިޔަންޏެއް ޖޭމް ވަލު ކައިރިން ހުރަސް ކުރި ހެން ހީވިއެވެ. އެވަގުތު ދުވި ފަރުހިކި ވަހުން ކަޔާލް އަށް ހޮޑު  ނުލެވުނީ  ކިރިޔާ އެވެ. ދެފައި ރޫރޫ އަޅާވަރުން ބިންމަތީގައި ހަރުނުލައެވެ. ގައިގައި ހުރި ބާރެއް ލާފައި ދޮރުގައި ތަޅަން ފެއްޓިއެވެ. އެވަގުތު އާލިޔާ ގޭތެރޭ ހުރެފައި ލަވަ ޖަހާ އަޑު އިވެ އެވެ. ރަނގަޅަށް ވިއްޔާ އެ ލަވަ ޖެހީ ކަޔާލް ދޮރު ތަޅާ އަޑު އިވިގެންނެވެ. 

އިރު ކޮޅަކުން ހަސީނާ ކުއްޏެކޭ ބުއްޏެކޭ ކިޔަމުން އައިސް ދޮރު ހުޅވިއެވެ. “ބަލަ މަ ހަދާން ނެތުނީއޭ… ދެން ހަވަރު އެެއް ކުރާ ވަރަށް ހަޅޭއް ފަޅޭއް ޖަހަން ޖެހޭތަ… ނިކުމޭ ތިތަނުން… ކަލޭ ބައްޕަ އައިސް އެބަހުރި…. ނިމުނީ ކަލޭ މަށޭ  ކިޔާގެން އެންމެ ލަފްޒެއް ކިޔަސް…. ހޭ އަރުވާލާނަންް…  ނިކުމޭ.. ” ހަސީނާ ކަޔާލް އެތަނުން ނެރުނެވެ. ކަޔާލް ހިތުލައިގެން ހުރީ ހަސީނާ ކޮންމެ ކަމެއް ކުރިޔަސް އެވާހަކަ ހޫދް ގާތު ބުނާށެވެ. 

ކަޔާލް ގެއަށް ވަތް އިރު ހޫދު އިނީ ޕޭޕަރު ތައް މާކް ކުރާށެވެ. ހޫދު އަކީ އެ ރަށު ސްކޫލްގެ ދިވެހި މުދައްރިސެކެވެ. “ކާލް ދަރިފުޅާ… ހާދަ ބިރުން ހުރިހެން ހީވެޔޭ.. އަނެއްކާ ކިހިނެއްވީ؟؟؟” ހޫދު ޕޭޕަރުތައް މާކު ކުރުން ހުޓާލުމަށްްފަހު ވަރަށްް ލޯބިން އެހިއެވެ. ކަޔާލް އޭނާ އަށް ޖޭމު ވަލު ކައިރިން ހަންޑި ފެނުނު ވާހަކަ ބުއްޏެވެ. އެއާ އެކު ހޫދު ފެށީ ހޭށެވެ. “ތީ ކާލް ބިރު ގަތީމަ ހީވި ގޮތަކަށް ވާނީ… ކޮބާ.. ދޭ ބައްޕަ ކޮޓަރިއައް ކިޔަވަން.. އިރުކޮޅަކުން ޑޭޑް ދާނަންް… މިއަދު ދިން ވާހަކަ ލިޔެލާ އިގޭ… އިރުއޮއްްސޭ ގަޑީގަ ފާހަނާ އަށް ނުވަންނައްޗޭ ޑޭޑް އަބަދު ވެސް ބުނަމެއްނު ދޯ… ދެން އަވަހަށް ދޭ” ހަސީނާ އެތަނަށް އެވަގުތު އައުމުން ކަޔާލް ބޭނންވީ  ހަސީނާ ލަދުގަންނުވާށެވެ.

“ޑޭޑް… ޑޭޑް އަށް އެގޭތަ.. މި ހަސީނާ ކުރިކަމަކީ މިއަދު އަހަރެން އަތުން ކުޑަދޮރު ހަލާކު ވީމަ އަހަރެން ފާހަނާ އަށް ލީ… އަދި މިދިޔަ މަހު އަހަރެންނަށް މަންމަ ގާތު ނުބުނެވި ފޫޓްބޯލް ކުޅެންދެވުނީމަ އަހަރެންގެ ގައިގަ އިސްތިރި އެޅީ…” ކަޔާލް އޭނާ ލައިގެން އިން ގަމީސް ބާލާފައި ހަސީނާ އިސްތިރި އެޅި ނިޝާން ދައްކާލިއެވެ.  ހޫދު ކައިރިއަށްް އައީ އަމަށަކު ރުޅި އެއް ނޫނެވެ. “ހަސީނާ!!!” ހޫދު އަޑު ކޮޅަށް ހަޅޭއްލަވާ ގަތެވެ. އެއާ އެކު ކަޔާލް ހަސީނާ އައް އެއްލޯ މަރާލާފައި އެއް މިޔަނުން ހީލިއެވެ. 

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ވާހަކަ އަށް ކޮމެންޓް ކުރުމަކީ އަޅުގަނޑަށް ލިބޭ ކުރި އެެރުމެކެވ.

 

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  1. mi vaahaka kurukoh genes dhevuny thee maafah ehen… dhen anna part dhigukoh genes dheynan… kiyunthen ge faadu kiyumakee alhugandah libey kuri erumeh

  3. reethi dhen dhw .. ekam ehaa ehaa eh noon … aslu maa kuryy .. all i want to say is make it a little intresting plzz .. eyrunn readers kiyaa hiyy vaanyy .. mee advice eh kamah balaa .. but dont take this the wrong way .. so good luck 🙂

  5. reethi vaanehen heevey…ummeedh kuran konme dhuvahakuvrx part eh kiyaalan libeyne kamah…baraabarah upload kurumakee kiyuntheringe ithubaaru libeyne kameh…gudluck…kyp going

  6. kaal haadha laanethey dw , hehehe , vr thafaath , ehn kudhin ulheyny , aniyaa kuraathy birun , n Aaliyaa ves haadha goyhey , aaliyaa tha body nony , kaal tha body , hurihaa kudhin ge age bune dhehchey , igea next prt ga

  9. thanx all.. Aayaa. next part maadhan hedhun noone haveeru genes dheynan.. ummeeddhu kuran enmeenah vex nuxu liyunu vaahaka kamudhaane kamah

  11. ehfaharu bapa,aneh faharu daddy.maakuru……anywayxx reetii and eid mubaarik……..teetha nuhaage dhontha?

  12. story ok. but sifakurun reethi kohafa thankolhe ibaarai kurun ves ragalhu kuran v.

  18. Oh yes!!! Vvv nice…. Vvv habeyxx…. Bt maa kury… Ekn rangalhu kuryma dhn OK vaane.. :-* 🙂 ✌

  21. ey nuzha ur only 12 tha??? omg.. i never thought sooo… hehehe but umureh noon dhw balaanee vahaka reethi vejjeyya enimunee dhw… 😛 but nuzha negetie kh nuvisnaathi ingey but bunanta vahak eh?? mi vaahaka heevanee hama kalhu coat lee meehaaa evaahaka ah base khfa in story ehhen… ehen mibunanee 1st kudadhoru thakuga ball jehigen thalhaigen dhiyaee, dhen faruhaki vas dhu v.. mi dhe kanthah vex kallhu coat lee meeha ga annaane.. ehenve heevnaee copy ehhen.. 🙂 but shabee gabooleh nukuran nuzha copy kuraanekamakah.. eah vure nuzha thedhuveri vaane kan 100% yageen… bute vaahak bunelee hama vahtharu v ma.. but heekuran dhen anna prt thah hama v v bodah different kuraaanekamah… good luck.. 😉

  22. nuzuhaa mee haadha thui dhekken ulhey anhenekey dhoa… pis pis.. copy cat… maa mausoomu vaane kameh neii.. thee hama bodu jahlaadheh igijje..

  23. heevany thimaa noon ehen meehehge dhontha eh ves nuhunnahen maa velaafa eba vaahaka dhahka ehnu. huh.. kuda kudhin ge gothuga hifahahtabala.. kihineh vegen thi ulheny.. thimaa varu vaahaka liyaa meeheh nethigen.. thui gadaa… maa bodu vefa achaa thalhaane kameh neii foni kaidhaa

    1. What’s wrong this person..r u jealous or what. If can’t say something nice then say nothing at all :.after all we r Muslims and its Ramadan

    2. , kuda kujakas ,story liye vayne dw , mee biruveri n hithaama ekulevay story eh , mee eana ge age aa ves gulhey , dhen kobaatha eana foni kadaafa , dhonthi help viyyaa help viyey bune vithaane dw , eyy adhi fonikedu meh noon dw , plx vaahaka dhahkaa iru anekunnamedhu ves vis naalavah labala ,

    3. “Moya” Eha kuda kujjaku talk kura iru eyna ge visnuma ehgothah dhw talk kuraany. N dhontha vumaky massala ehtha?? Vaahaka kiya hiy nuvanyya nukiya dhookoolla. Thiha hadikoh ehchehi kiyane kameh neiy. Aee adhi 12 yrs ge kujjeh. Thima ge umuruge meehunna thigothah talk kurey. Ehn noony ragalhu vaany comment nukuriyya.

  26. May I tell you how to upload a photo. net ga jahaalaa misaalakah nice people photo ekahala ehcheh.. dhen photo ah fithaalaa.. irukolheh vandhen madukohlaa photo saafu vandhen.. dhen left mouse button ah fithaalaa dhen save photo ekahala ehcheh jahaafa inna thanah fithaalaafa save kohlaafa mi site ah up kohlaa.. gud luck

  28. alhe kaakutha mithaaga mi vaahaka liyunu kuhjaa aa dhimaalah mi ehchehi kiyany.. heyo nuvaane

    2. InshaAllah thiha hadikoh talk kuriyas e kujja akah evves kameh nuvane. We r all with her. Hama dhera vaane thi moya. Mulhi site ga emmenna dhima ah ehchehi kiyamun thi ebureny.

  31. Mee alhe fahe kihineh vefa thibey baeh tha? Hasadha nulaashey meehaku dherakoh rulhi aruvaalevuneema ey maa molhu kameh nooney ajaibeh

  32. mi ohfadha eid ga ves myhunaa hasadha laigen , moya vr ragalhuvaane , hoody ge HASADHA mi story kiyaa liyaa ,

  33. heyo nuvaane , moyayaa, dheybala hoody ge hasadha story kiyaalaafa , eagen ibratheh haasil kuran , i dont care , moya me aa dhimaa lah komme ehheh kiyas , mithanaky mi story ah comment kuran onna thaneh , mi story ge author dhera koh , hithuga jahsan onna thaneh noon , plz , leave her alone

  37. don’t worry aayaa.. meehun kiyaa echissah nubalaa.. nuxu ehaa hiy balikatteh nuvaane.. hithuga jehi ru un e ee nuxu like vaa kameh noon.. and others thanx igea cmt kureema

  38. mi vaahaka liyefa inee adhi kuda kuhjeh e kuhjaa dhera vaane aharemen kuda iruves adhi mihaaruves meehaku ekahala ehchekey keema hama aharemen ves dhera vaanenu.. anekunaa dhey therey visnan vaane. dhen avahah maafah edhey author kairin

  39. umeedh kuran moya ah e story in ibratheh haasil vaane kamah , dhen ves myhunaa hasadha nulaathi igea , noony eaga ulhey kujja ah vyhen vedhaane , myhama moya ah dhey naseyhatheh

  42. haadha hiyvaru gadha eyy dw nuxu , hmm , hiy varu kuran vaane, ekahala myhun kurimathy balikashi vyma thimaage kurimag eh koh bana vaane , good luck sisy

  45. Anekka e ehchehi kiyunu meehaa ge maafu nulibijjeya ey ves kanbodu vaan jehey varu kameh dhen mihen bunaa meehaa kanneyge goas vaany ekamaku hama Heyo edheythey mi bunany maafah edheyshey Hoody ge Hasadha vaahaka kiyaalaafa visnaane kamah ummeedh kuran.. nuxha alhaanulaa meehun kiyaane ekahala ehchehi eemaan kan bali kashi veema vaa goi ey hama gina faharah.. aneh meehaa hithuga jahsaalevuneema heevanny edhen varah molhu kamekey e kohlevuny.. mee dhivehinge kasheega harulaafa huri kameh. hiyvaru dhera nukuraathi Nuxha.. e kee meehakah e kameh kuri meehakah onnaany e kameh.. hiy heyo kohlaa.. emmennaa dhey therey ga ves hiy heyokohlaa.. e meeheh kuri kameh e meehakah.. Hiyvaru dhera nokoh kuri ah dhey.. insha allah e meehunnah ves visneyne dhuvaheh annaane.. Mi bunany Hama aamukoh emmennah.. anekaa dhera koh hithuga jahsaa meehaa dheke allah subhaanahoo vatha aalaaa ruhi vodigen nuve ey.. adhi kiyaa dhentha haadhisaa eh.. Dhe anhenun igey.. vaa gothaky ekaku sunnai roadha hifaa hama varah ginain sunnai thah adhaa kurey.. aneh anhen meehaa aky ehaa ginain sunnai kanthahthah koh ulhunu meeheh noon ekamaku eyna meehunnah varah ragalhu muaamalaai kurany ves hama v rahalhah.. ekamaku ehkala sunnai roadha aa sunnai kanthah thah kuri anhenna aky avahterinnah ves varah dhoo nubai meeheh.. dhen keerithi rasool saadhu mi hadhees kurahvany eyge therein allah ge hazrathuga emme maai vee sunnai kanthah ehaa ginain nokoh ekamaku ehen meehun eyna ge dhulaa athuge nubai kamun minju kuri anhen meehaa kamah. ehen veema dharinney.. mifadha haadhisa thakun ibrai libigannamathoa.. ehen meehun thimaa ge dhulaa athuge nubainakum minju kurumaky thimaa ge vaajibeh.. vaajibeh ge mahchah sunnatheh is nuvaane.. ey evy gothaky ehen veema anekunnah thima ge hiy khaalis kuramaa thoa

  46. V habeys vaahaka eh.. u r only 12 …. v good try to improve ur talent. Gud luk and eid mubarak

  47. nux kyve photo eh nulyy???? and is this story based on a girl or a boy .. kayaal ah dhw ..? and reethi photo eh internet ga serach koh genn hoadhaba .. mi storyy ga photo eh nethyma varah ehn gothakun hyvanyy

  50. thanx all.. kiaa alhugadu balaanan igea pic eh leveythoa dhen anna story ga… don’t worry anonymous.. konmes ehdhuvahaku visneyne dw

  54. Nuzhaaa!! Vv salhi ingey stry and meehunna kiyaa echesah nubala kuriah dhey insha Allah u will be a great dhivehi writer,not to mention u are a good writer now too!!!love uuu gaal!

  55. well Nuxha ey Teen eh dhoa.. Teenage years thakaky v hadhaanun filuvaalan udhagoo vaane dhuvas thakah ehen bunaairu varah majaa kanthah thakaa vex kurimathi laan jehey hama emme hadhaan hunnany majaa dhuvasthah. So BTW I’m 13 will be 14 this year.. Good luck igey Nuxha.. Nuxha ge dhahtha eh tha Zaahee aky? Zaahee ey anhen kuhjeh tha? Sorry igey hama ahaaly.. Gd thinadhoo hey mi ehey Anonymous ge eh bai onnany Gd thinadhoo ga.. hehe..

  56. And ‘moya’ ge namuga cmmnt kohfa in meehakah bunelan othy eii hama hageegathu gaives moya ekey!don’t u support me readers?

    1. Nuz m from same island ingey. Miharu v beynun thee kon kujjehkan balaalan. Hama egifa ves huredhane dhw. Fb use kuran tha kokky??

  60. EID MUBAARIK ALHUGANDU GE FARAATHUN VEX AAYAA… AND OTHERS AH EID MUBAARIK IGEA.. 🙂

  61. Hurihaa Kudhin nah Bunelan othy v sorry eh.. Mashah kurin Nuvisnuny… Ekamaku Anonymous e dhin Naseyhai fenifa hama again kulhu hikijje.. Mashah vure ethah ahareh hagu kuhjjaku mashah dheefa ein naseyhai fenifa hama lolun karuna aii.. Mee hama thedhu hageegai.. Asluves visnijje.. AnekkA dhera kohluneema ma hithakah hamajehumeh kieh araameh nulibey.. Mashah Maaf Kurey emmeney

  63. alhugandu ehvex meehakah hiy bura eh noon moya namuga cmt kuri dhahtha or beybe… v ufaa vey visnuneeethee… EID MUBAARIK 🙂

  64. Mashah kurin visnifa othy varah goas koh.. mami haama kurany thedhu hageegai.. Ma mainbafain Mah alhaeh nulaa.. dhen egoi migothah eburen aadha vefa othy.. hama moya eh hen ebureveny.. ma gey meehun ves ma dhera kureveythoa balaany Geyga ulhey meehun ves… ehenve hama kiriyaa drugs beynun nukurevi hunnany.. Mashah maaf kurey mee hama thedhu hageegai

  67. vr dhera vehje moya ge haal fenifa , aayaa moya ah maaf kohffin , namanama drugs use nukurahchey beybey

  70. moya ge namuga ulhey beybe or dhahtha…. namaadhu koh gen dhuaa kohba allah ah thimaa ah rangalhu dhiriulhumeh libeeythoa balan… adhi emeehun dheke hiy bura kuraakah nuvaane igea

  71. anonymous ah vr bodah thnks , moya ah naseyhaiy dhinyma , vr happy vejje ,moya kiyaa fa comment kuri beybe ah ves vis nunyma

  74. moya beybe plz , drugs use nukurah chey its ur enemy , earun beybe ge musthaq bal halaak vun noon kameh nuvaane

  81. Aaya ey Mee beybe eh nooney dhahtha eh ehkala Zaisha ge vaahakaiga ulhey Malak kahala kuhjeh.. Age 19 ah vure mathi vaane.. age 20..

  86. Ma varah Interest hunna kameh vaahaka kiyumaky ehenve varah ginain vaahaka sites thakah vannan.. Ma varah beynun mi adhavalhun salaamai vaan.. Ma magu furehdhee Magey bafaa.. e bafaa adhives e othy jalu golhy ga.. mee hadhaa thedhu.. umurun 10 aharu furuneehsure bafaa ulhuny ma magu furahdhan.. umurun mihaaru 20 aharu vefa inas ma mivany fun adhavalheh therey..

  87. hehe , mioh haa iru mi ulhevuny beybe ekey kiyaigen dw , plz dhen ehen noolhehchey igea dhahthaa

  88. Namaves magey ihsaas thah ekaku ves balai nugai.. eyruves bafaa ulhuny maguthah mathy gina vegen.. eyna eyruves masthuvaa thakethi beynun koh ehen mihen ulhuny

  89. thikamuge faruvaa aky alhukan , vyhaaves ginain allah ah alhukanthah kurun gina kurey , earun dhahtha , thi adha valhun salaa maivaane

  90. eynage hurey nahalaalu 2 dhadhari mashah egigen.. dhen neygi ves huredhaane… meee hadhaa thedhu.. bafaa mashah masthuvaa thakethi ves dheyn ulhunu.. magey amaa ves dhe aii uraala gen hury e hurihaa kameh ve dhiya iru ves please mashah ehy vey

  92. Magey bafa ey bunan ves ma ladhuganey.. heyo nuvaane.. mashah ehy vedy.. Mashah ehy vedhy.. Magey nuhurey masthuvaathakethi beynun nukuraa ehves rahumaitheri meeheh nuhurey… guest house thakun ehen mihen ulheny drug ves beynun kurey e meehun bunebala magey amaa ah kahiruvakey ves hee nuve

  93. oh really dhahtha dhen OK v haalu ga dw.. manma halhey lavaathee log in vex nuvevun.. maadhan eid namaadhah dhahchey dhahthaa

  95. subuhaanah loah , haadha gohey , moya dhahtha , dhen higaa mivaahaka thah nimaalan , comment kuraa thaneh nun dw mee , myhun echehi kiyaa faaane dw

  96. v ufaa kohfin visnuneethy.. ebunaahen kommeves kuhjaku e dhahtha ge hayaathuge vaahaka vaahaka eh ge sifaiga genes dheyn vee ehnu.. Eid mubaarik

  97. thedheh , maadhan eid namaadh ah dhah chey , gos fa , hurihaa namaadh eh ves kuraathi , dhen konme namaadh eh fahuga , kurevunu kuhthakah thaubaa ve allah ge axrathgaa dhuaa dhannavahchey igea

  101. hiyeh nuvey nuzha aky 12 years ge kuhjjeh hen.. really… but this story is awesome.. 🙂 ekm maa kuru. dhn first time veema ok dhen. but next part dhigu kow liyeveythoa masahkkai kurah chey ingey.. 🙂 so nuzu thi ulheny gr.6 ga dhw.. hehhehe.. gud luck ingey drlin… all the best. 🙂

  102. Ok dhn ekamaku me ma mihureeeeeeee ginain copy… Kalhu cort lymeehaa kiyaa vaahakaegge thanthan laafa.. But ok 12yrs akas adi vane hiy varukolla salhivaane… Ummeedhukuran thy amilla vaahaka liyaa molhu kujjaka vaanekama.. Keep it up my dear…

  103. thanx lme and jui…
    hey ziy.. tharaana ge egeytha.. thinadhoo v famous ge eh e ee.. alhe dad noony mom kairin ahaaba.. tharaana rasheedh ge kid eh… kiyevee thinadhoo in tha? thinadhoo bod school in kiye viyya zaidh egeythha?? im eyna ge kokko

    1. I think i knw now. Qaec ga kiyevin. Zaid egey. Bt not frnds. I think comment koh introduce vun eha ragalhu noon hen. Hehe. 🙂

  104. thinadhoo kiyavaa quran kiya vaa dhey dhonfaan dhahtha egeythoa alhe mommy gaathu ahaaba

  105. If you can take up a challenge i ll give you to write the last chapters of shudoo story…. or kushakaanula…

    Writing is a great art… you can take concepts from any where… even from a kids cute smile: expressions on old peoples face… n even from your friends m from every where….

  106. Keep the character control…. give concentration on how you express the events…. make sure you bring the right narrations n right dialogue on right time….. dont give clues from first paragraphes on what ll happen next…. keep the suspense n climax…
    If you think like that it ll be easy n in the future you ll be a bright writer. . First start from short stories… then go for long stories… if you had a dream you can make it real one day but you must work hard with dedicaton, determination n keeping your goal in your mind now n forever… i welcome new fresh writers…. best of luck m keep it up the good work…. bye…

  111. kon kudhinneh eid namaadh ah nudhany , nudhaakudhin fureytha gendhaane , hahaha

  117. Haadha varekey dhw shabee nulaa miothy khlaafaa… but moya ah visnuneethee v happy… im sorry for moya… v dheravejjee… 🙁 may u get a blessed n happily life…. 🙂

  118. moya gaathu bunantha vaahaka eh.. meethe wrong koh nunagaathi igea. alhugandu vaahaka liyanee alhugandah vaahaka liye veythee. others thanyou

  120. Nuzu beginning is ok. try to put more creative ideas in your story. And please not to share your personal information to public.
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  121. އުއްމީދު ކުރަން މި ވާހަކަ އަށް ވުރެ ފުރިހަމަ ވާހަކަ ލިޔާނެ ދުވަހަކަށް.*

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