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1. yey me first , nuxu haadha molhey , vr salhi mi prt

2. thanx aayaa.. next part miadhu haveeru 5 ehaa iru genes dhevey thoa balaanan igea..
   alh gadu liyaa furathama vaahaka vumun mistakes hurun ekasheegen vey… kuru koh genes dhevumun v bodah maafah edhen

3. its ok nuxu , 5 ehaa iru eyy , serious koh tha

4. Varah salhi vaane hen heevany.. varah kuru ekam…

5. BEST OF LUCK n EID MUBAARAK girly

6. ey aisha ge kalhu coat lee meehaa ge copy eh dhoa

   1. I also think so..but nubuney mihaaru its kind of different

7. kyve photoeh nuly…………haadha kureyy,,,,,mivarah liaanama kiyaahitheh nuvey………

8. hama ekani thafaathaky haseenaa aiee addoo ah e vaahakaiga yoosuf annaany eyna ge dhari govaigen addoo ah.. dhen nanthah.. hama kuda kuhjaa fengadu therey boalha kulhen ovefa boalha jehunu gothakun biloori thalhaigen dhaany.. so same… haseena varah rulhigadha vaane

9. mistake thah ragalhu kolyma , ok vaane , ryhti vr

10. kohlyma*

11. noon.. mee dhahtha dhin aidia eh.. ekam evaahaka aa vahtharu vaane.. but not that.. kon vaahaka eh tha anonymous.. kalhu koatu leee meehaa.. aharen balaanan.. ekam e vaahaka aa haas bai dhen dhaanee thafaathu koh.. thanx shiaa

12. v reethi

13. Vrh reethi…

14. But furathama thankolhu Kiya lyma hyvy e vaahaka liyefa oi hen anyway vaahaka varah salhi

15. vr vr rythi ,vaane hen hyvay

16. thanx sama, niha. and friend

17. thanx ishaa

18. Koba next part 5:10 vejje

19. alhey , cnt wait to read next prt , avs plx , dhigu kohlaafa photo eh ves lahchey , earun salhi vaany

20. Rangalhu… ekamaku tankoleah rangalah balaafa publish kuri nama… baeh ibaaraai takuge kuh eba huri… mustaqbalga ekantahtah rangalu kuran visnaathi… misaaalakah anbi in taafa hus nooneah innaane.. den gaiga thibi hoalitah mi ibrai rangaleahnun… etan islah kohlaathi…. vahakaige nan v reethi… hyvany conceptves v reethi vaanehen… best of luck….

21. Rangalhu… ekamaku tankoleah rangalah balaafa publish kuri nama… baeh ibaaraai takuge kuh eba huri… mustaqbalga ekantahtah rangalu kuran visnaathi… misaaalakah anbi in taaga hus nooneah innaane.. den gaiga thibi hoalitah mi ibrai rangaleahnun… etan islah kohlaathi…. vahakaige nan v reethi… hyvany conceptves v reethi vaanehen… best of luck….

22. First vaahaka ar balaafa v salhi….kuda kh rangalhu khlan jehey than than ebahuri bt ur jux amaxin keep going one day u wil b grt stry writer in sha allah

23. poor kayaal , haadha biru gannaney eana , dhen nuxu ves kaal ah ehen hadhaa kah nuvaane eh nun , hehehe 🙁 🙂 😉

24. Faheh jahaaaafi

25. Mi vaahakaaige feshun hama gaimuvex v reethi… ummeedhu kuranee mi vaahaka vex daily kh up khdheyne kamah…. 😀 dhen mistake thah rangalhu kureema hama ehvanaige story akah vaane hama… good luck nuzha… 🙂 EUD MUBARAK TO ALL… 😉

26. Amaaz n charu e buny dhedheh , ekanthah thah , ragalhu koh lyma , vr furi hama vaane story , i want to see u as a grt author in future , once again best of luck , sisy

27. Aaliyaa ur right…we’re with u nuzha… u can do it… dhw aaliyaa… we wnt u to b 1 of the bst writer… bst of luck.. 😉

28. thanx all.. 4 min therey aneh part fonuvaanan igea Aayaa

29. OK NUXU GANDAA , DW SHABEE 🙂

30. pic eh nuly adhi pic laan neygeythee.. ekam fahun ekan ragalhu kohdheynan

31. amaax bunihen aayaa ah ves vr rythi mi story ge name , BTW 4 minute vejje , nuxuu

32. second part nikumejje

33. thanx amaaz.. alhugandu kuda veema ehenvee.. hen dhahtha lavvaa ekan rangalhu kuraanan

34. Nuzha thee kihaa kuda kujjeh tha?

35. hehehe.. im 12. but Xaahee dhonthi gaathun hunnaanee vaahaka liyan dhaskohffa

    1. Wow. Keep trying nuzha. Hope v molhu vaahaka liyuntheriyakah vaane kamah. :* 🙂

    2. Vaahaka kiyafa hiyeh nuvey eha young girl eh liyefa in vaahaka eh hen. V reethi.

    3. 12 yrs ge kujjakaa balaafa excellent. V reethi. Vaahaka ehaa dhigu nukuriyas quality kureveytho balaa ingey.. All the best to u dear

36. Wow vv nice..

37. Reethivaanehen heevanee
    .. furathama veema mi fieldah maruhabaa… avas avahah up kureema kiyuntherin kiyaahihvvane… so keep up the good work to impress ur readers..Thank you

38. Try keep trying…. you ll improve… i ll forward you a new concept for a long story…. try to write it… actually i dnt ve enough time for this since working in tough job… best of luck now n forever…..

39. copy

40. Copy story eh

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