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ބޭރުގައި އުޅެފައީ ޝިނާނަށް ގެޔަށް އާދެވުނުއިރު ހުރީ މެންދުރުން އަނބުރާ އެކެއް ޖަހައި ބޮޑުވެފައެވެ. މިހާރު ޖަމްނާ އިންނާނީ އޭނާގެ އިންތިޒާރުގައެވެ. ” ޒިންދަގީ ރެސްޓޯރެންޓު ” ގެ މަތީ ފަންގިފިލާގައެވެ. ޝިނާނު އައި މަގުމަތީ ޖަމްނާ ވަނީ ފަސް ފަހަރު ޝިނާނު ނައިސް ލަސްވެގެން ގުޅާފައެވެ. ޝިނާނު އަވަސް ކޮށްގެން ރެސްޓޯރެންޓަށް ދިޔައިރު ޖަމްނާ ކުޑަކުއްޖެއްހެން ތުންދަމާފަ ބޮޑާ ހާކަން އިނެވެ. އަންހެނަކަށް ވުރެ ޝިނާނު ތަތް ވާނޭ ކިޔާ ދިމާ ކުރަން ފެށިއެވެ. ޝިނާނު ވެސް އޭނާގެ އަންހެނުން މޫޑު ރަނގަޅުކޮއްދިނުމުގެ ގޮތުން އެކިކަހަލަ ސަމާސާ ކޮށް ހެދިއެވެ.
ޝިނާނު ރެސްޓޯރެންޓަށް އައީ ޖަމްނާ އެދިގެން ބޮޑު ޙަބަރެއް ދޭންވެފަ އެބަ އޮތޭ ބުނުމުންނެވެ. ޝިނާނު ހުރީ އެވާހަކައެއް އެނގޭ ހިތުން ކެތްމަދުވެފައެވެ.
” ޖަމް …. ދެން ބުނެބަލަ ބޮޑު ސަޕްރައިޒް ޖަމް ތިބުނަން އުޅޭ…. އަހަރެން މިހާރު އެވާހަކަ އެނގޭ ހިތުން ހުރެވެނީކީ އެއް ނޫން…. ދެން އަހަރެން ނުތަޅުވަ ބުނެބަލަ….” ޝިނާން އެކޭ ގަޔައް ހިނި އަރާގެން އުޅޭ މީހެކޭ މާ ބޮޑު ތަފާތެއް ނެތެވެ.
ޖަމްނާ ޙަބަރެއް ދޭން ވެފަ އެބަ އޮތޭ ބުނީއްސުރެން ޝިނާނުގެ ހާލަކި މިއެވެ. އެވަރުންވެސް ޖަމްނާ އެވާހަކަ ބުނާކަށް ނޫޅެ އިތުރަށް ޝިނާނު ތަޅުވާލިއެވެ. ޝިނާނުއަށް މިހާރު އެތާ މަޑުން އިނދެވޭ ކަމަކަށް ނުވިއެވެ. ޖަމްނާ އިނީ އޭނާގެ ފިރިމީހާ އުޅޭ ގޮތުން ބަނޑަށް ހީހީ އަވަދި ވެފައެވެ. މޫނު މަތިން އެކަން ނުދައްކާ ވޭތޯ ބެލިއެވެ. ކައިރީ ހުރި މޭޒުތަކުގަ ތިބި މީހުންވެސް މި ދެމަފިރިން އުޅޭ ގޮތުން ތިބީ ހިނި އައިސްފައެވެ.
“ސާބަހޭ ޝިނާނޫ….. ހަހަހަ… ވަރުގަދަ ކަމެއް… ކެތްތެރިކަމެއް ވެސް ނެތް ދޯ… ލޮލް… ހުމްމްމް… ކަނުލާ އަޑު އަހާ އިނގޭ… ޝިން….. ޝިން ބައްޕަ އަކަށް ވަނީ.. އަހަރެން މަންމަ އަކަށް ވަނީ…” އެންމެ ފަހުން ޖުމްނާ ޝިނާނަށް އެޙަބަރު ދިނެއެވެ.
“އަލްހަމްދުލިﷲ…. ތީ ހާދަ އުފާވެރި ޙަބަރެކޭ… އަހަރެން ތި ޙަބަރު އަޑު އިވޭނެ ދުވަހަކަށް ހާދަ އިންތިޒާރެއް ކޮއްފީމޭ… އެންމެ ފަހުން އަހަރެންގެ އިންތިޒާރަށް ނިމުމެއް އައިސްފި.. އަލްހަމްދުލިﷲ….ޖުމް އަށް ވަރަށް ބޮޑަށް ޝުކުރިއްޔާ.. އަހަރެން ބައްޕަ އަކަށް ވާން އުޅޭކަމުގެ ޙަބަރު ތިދިނީ…އަހަރެން ޖަމް ދެކެ ވަރަށް ބޮޑަށް ލޯބިވޭ….”ޝިނާނު އަށް ހީވީ ބޮޑު ޢީދެއް އައި ހެނެވެ.
ދުވަހަކު އުފާ ނުވާ ވަރަށް ހުރީ އުފާ ވެފައެވެ. މި ޙަބަރު ލިބިގެން ވަގުތުން ޝިނާނު ލޮލުން އުފާވެރި ކަމުގެ ކަރުނަ ނިރާލިއެވެ. އެދެމަފިރިން ކައިވެނި ކުރިތާ ފަސް އަހަރު ވެއްޖެއެވެ. އެމީހުންގެ އެންމެ ބޮޑު ހުވަފެނަކީ، އެމީހުން ދިރިއުޅުން ފަޅުފިލުވާލަދޭނެ ކުޑަ ކުޑަ ދޫންޏެކެވެ.
ވަރަށް ލޯބިން ޖަމްނާ އަތުގަ ހިފާލާފަ ވަރަށް ލޯބިވެޔޭ ބުނެލިއެވެ. މި ހަރަކާތުންވެސް ފެނިގެން ދަނީ މި ދެމަފިރިންގެ ވަރުގަދަ ލޮއެތްބެވެ. އެމީހުންގެ އެ ލޯބި ހަރަކާތުންވެސް ކައިރި މޭޒުތަކުގަ ތިބި މީހުންގެ ލޮލުން ކަރުނައިގެ އަސަރު ފެނިލިއެވެ. އެމީހުންގެ ޙަޔާތައް އިތުރު ބާބެއް އިތުރުވިޔެވެ.
ދުވަހަކަށް ފަހު ދުވަހެއް، މަހަކަށް ފަހު މަހެއް މާޒީ ވަމުން ގޮސް ނުވަ މަސް ފުރިއްޖެއެވެ. ޖަމްނާ އަށް އެއްމާބަނޑު ދެ ކުދިން ލިބުނެއެވެ. އެއީ ފިރިހެން ކުއްޖަކާ އަންހެން ކުއްޖެކެވެ. ހަތްދުވަސް ވުމުން އަޤީދާ ކަތިލާ ބޮޑު ކެއުމެއް ބާއްވާ އުފާ ފާޅުކުރި އެވެ. ފިރިހެން ކުއްޖަޔަށް އަޒުހަރު ޝިނާން އަދި އަންހެން ކުއްޖަޔަށް އަޒުރާ ޝިނާން ކިޔެއެވެ. އެއްމާބަނޑު ދެ ކުދިންނެއް ކަމަކު އެހާ ވައްތަރެއް ނޫނެވެ. އަޒުހަރަކީ ޝިނާން ގެ ތައްގަނޑެކެވެ. އަޒުރާ އަކީ ހަމަ ޖަމްނާ ގެ ނަކަލެވެ.
ޝިނާން އާއި ޖަމްނާ އަކީ ހަމުގެ ކުލަ އަލި ބައެއް ކަމުގައި ވުމުން އަޒުހަރު އާއި އަޒުރާގެ ހަމުގެ ކުލަ ވަރަށް އައްޔެވެ. އެދެކުދިންގެ އެންމެ ޙާއްސަ ސިފަ އަކީ ވިލުނޫ ކުލަ ދެ ލޮލެއެވެ. ކޮންމެ މީހަކުވެސް އެދެކުދިން ފެނިފައި ލޯބިން މޮޔަ ވާ ވަރު ވެއެވެ. ކޮންމެ މީހެއްގެ ދުލުން ވެސް އެންމެ ފުރަތަމަ އިވިލލަނީ ” މާޝާ ﷲ ” .. އެވެ. ޝިނާން އާއި ޖަމްނާގެ ޙަޔާތަށް ވަނީ އަޒުހަރު އާއި އަޒުރާ އައުމުން ބަޙާރު މޫސުން ގެނުވާފައެވެ. އެ ދެކުދިންނަކީ އެދެމަފިރިންގެ ލޮލުގެ ނޫރެވެ. ހިތުގެ ހަމަޖެހުމެއެވެ.
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Alheyy thy jiji menge frnd Ary thr…OMG..
Can’t believe this…Story hama obi ingey
❤❤❤????♥♥♥♥♥
yh that’s her… rysh… the story is fab… <3 keep it up… luv yuh! hope to c ur stories more often
yh jiji that’s me… maybe a ghost dw.. ahahaha.. missed u girl… nd thanks
Omg assu thr..Ary long story eh liyan fashaa
Ehemma..heheh?♥??
IN SHA ALLAH…. i will start writing a long story.. ekm neige seedha bunaakah… school busy v ma nuvey kameh vaa gotheh.. this is the story i wrote.. at the term test exam.. hehe.. once again thank u for ur support jiji
yh jiji that’s me… maybe a ghost dw.. ahahaha.. missed u girl… nd thanks
HEY EVERYONE…. EID MUBARAK TO ALL??… mee Cute Lips ge first story …. hope u guys like it.. feel free to comment the mistakes…. IN SHA ALLAH .. i will start a long story soon.. but i will upload the parts after i wrote it all.. cux i don’t want to disappoint my readers… LYSM GUYS????????????????
Heii kitty darlinn ah Ingeythr yuh story liyun kameh….?
yh ngeyne…
Oops sorry ingey..Ngeyne inyma ehaa v balai nulevuny darlinn..
Really sorry gurl ????
ahahah…. is okay eyy.. sorry nubunaane…???????
Let her knw o hingaaba surprise eh dheyn..hehehe??
Let her knw o hingaaba surprise eh dheyn..hehehe??
Ary bunaane story liyaakah neygeyey..
EKAM MI STORY VEC HAMA superb ey?????????..hehe
no.. i don’t know to write story… mi dhn try kohffa.. kitty mena shaa em menah dhahkaalyma buny.. esfiya ah laan.. ehnve …. share kohly.. so i can improve my writing…thanks for ur support jiji???
no.. i don’t know to write story… mi dhn try kohffa.. kitty mena shaa em menah dhahkaalyma buny.. esfiya ah laan.. ehnve …. share kohly.. so i can improve my writing…thanks for ur support jiji???
Alhey varah reethi mi story… Its veryyyy beautiful.. Just some mistakes are there… U’ll improve in time… I hope we’ll get to read a new story of urs soon.. Ly girl… Keep up the good work dear ❤️❤️❤️??❤️???
thanks kityy… ur support made me do this … ehehehhe…. btw i feel relaxed nw… sharing this story.. even it’s not gud.. ehehehe… btw.. thanks a lot kitty.. ur support make me better… LYSM…. THANK YOUUUUU??????????????????????
Ary lemme knw ingey whn Yuh ar writing long story ingey…cuz to tell yuh something..
N kitty dear why jiii comment kuryma habareh nuvany..I really miss edhen yuh ey darlinn????♥
ooooh…. can i knw now… plz… when i get a gud idea… i will start…. but i will only upload it … after writing all the parts.. i mean after completing the whole story…
Awwn im sorry, hama busy koh ulheythy habareh nuveveny.. I miss you too darling
Umm vv reethi mi story.my cute lips ge first story dhw.aryy i hope to see ur another story.gd luck.eid mubaarak arry&hurihaa readers.
varah reethi cute lips.. alah liyaa kuhjakaa balaaafa hama best eyy buneveynee… ibaaraaaih kurun varah reethi and thankolheh bodah facial expressions genesdhineema furihama vaane… kudakoh typing errors eba huri ingey.. cute lips ge dhigu vaahaka eh fehnaane kamah ummeedh kuran
awwn thanks ib@.. yh my first story..IN SHA ALLAH i will upload a story soon.. i will try to upload at the big holiday..once again THANKS FOR YOUR SUPPORT……LYSM…. EID MUBAARAK???????????
Your welcome.dear.umm ary viber use kurn thr
umm.. i use my mom’s nmbr… but i don’t talk people that i never met… through mom’s phn.. nd she will never allows me..sorry darla
Ary darla whn will yuh wryt a story..
Ok kuru story eh viyac..I really wanna read yur story..ehnve??♥?
Ary darla whn will yuh wryt a story..
Ok kuru story eh viyac..I really wanna read yur story..ehnve??♥?
ahahah… neige bunaakah.. seedha… but i got a idea.. i will start it .. as soon as possible.. look i have a little problem at my own privacy life… i need time to get over with it????.. sorry for that.. but as soon as i could i will write a short story.. i am not ready to write a big story.. i also planned a long story.. first i will write a short story first.. like 3 or 5 parts.. i think it might be that much.. i donno rlly.. i have not started yet…… sorry once again.. i have my own life problem… due to something i can’t share it with the public… sorry for the delay i have to do… HOPE U GUYS WILL UNDERSTAND MY SITUATIONS …. LYSM??????????
Iss okk ehemma…Taken Yur time dear??
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thanks…??
Gurl free dhw mi gady..just tlk kohlan kamah kudakoh
kiyaalan reethi, bt koba kunnu? first story aa balaafa rangalhu.. you can improve.. btw this comment section is like a chat platform.. ehn nuhadha
ok sorry ngey… i will improve nxt time… thanks for ur support.. nd thanks for reminding me that… i forget that.. ahahah… thanks btw… nd chatting rite..here u can share ur ideas.. nd tell me what to do to improve my writing… but we don’t talk much here.. cux the chatting grp had made grps… through apps… here is only the readers… i cannot talk through apps….plz don’t take this comment as a rude comment… okay….LYSM.. but i will try to control too much talking…
Omg aryyy….i can’t believe…it’s really u….btw vvvvvvvv loabi ngey story…some mistakes are there..but u will make them good whn time passes….ibaaraaiy thaves v rythi….impatiently waiting for a story of urs…next story dhigukohlahchey….lysm gurl…keep going…
yh it’s the anga gadha Cute Lips … LOL??? .. thanks zaa.. soon i will write a story based on a true incident… yh that part will be long … but not much.. i will try ….LYSM…THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT ZAA?????????
Aryy.. omg thats you.. dhiraa ge story ga ary koffa in comment balaafa mi kiyaali mi story.. first aa balaafa its good.. then skwl ga liyaa stories hunnanne mi gothah.. eheheh.. v nicee ey bunananee.. waiting for your long story.. haha.. lep in comment kureema emojis manaa..hehe
Luv yaaa..:))
Aryy.. mii Wattpad in ary aa talk kuri ham.. don’t tell my real name.. plz plz anyone.. ham keema ok
yh that’s me Ham… heheh really … naseebehnun bunevun kan dw.. ???ahahah.. actually story innaany kudakoh change genehssa… schwl ga liyefa innaany mi story … ekm mihaaru kudakoh age update kohly.. ehehe … i am planning to write a long story.. but not much long.. neige kihaa vareh vaane kameh.. the incident is big.. ekm eythi vs change kohlaagen liyaany… dhn balamaa dw.. adhi start nukuran… i am also using lap sisy.. i knw ur Ham darla.. don’t worry i won’t bust peoples names on public.. . THANKS FOR UR SUPPORT HAM… LYSM..???????????????
Ham dear can I be Yur frnd too..Hehe..nd ham use kurany hama ekani wattpad thr?
Coz Wanna tlk yuh tlk yuh privately bt wattpad akun noon ingey..?
i think… she use viber.. ehn kee … viber use kuramey…i don’t have her nmbr…
but i can give jiji nmbr to her if u want.. through wattpad..now u tell me what to do… i will help u guys ???
Omg.. inaa last thr.. adhi mii balailevuny vec.. cn’t believe cute lips stry eh kamah… Inaa vec stry eh liyanvy dhw.. btw miss u gurl.. little little mistakes ebahuri.. bt this is ur first vyma ok.. Masha Allah vvv reethi.. alhe long stry eh liyebala.. plz ingey..
yh v avahah liyan mi gasthu kurany… btw avhah fashaaba…. kitty vs liyaany inaa liyan feshyma oa. … so start avhah…. ekm rysh ehah liyaany.. eha ehaa dhigu story eh noon.. konms varakh dhigu story..LYSM miss u more..sisy.THANKS FOR UR SUPPORT???????????????????????
Whr is kitty?? Dhimaavec ??nuvey… N zaa ge stry continue nukuranythr..☹️☹️??alhe e stry kiyaahithun ulheythaa kihaa dhuvaheh.. n ur stry ah vec wait kuran eba ingey.. LYSM.. ❤️❤️❤️❤️??
kitty gaathu bunefin… eyna annaane fiya gandu alhaagen.. inaa Sisy viyya..ahahah.. ehn kanthah mathin hadhaan netheyne…. will get to read my story nxt time…LYSM????
Inaa im hereee i missed u so much, ina vec habareh nuvey viyya.. I have been waiting for u like since idk kon dhuvaheh kameh vec… But i swear i really miss u a lot.. Dhn mi rysh gandu madu kurey prvt koh message eba kuran… Ina adhivx gmail use nukuran thr or wattpad?.. I wanna talk to you so badly ???
Last ga wrong emoji eh fonuvifa eyndhy.. Sorry
Hahaa.. gmail use nukurevign miulheny.. so sad.. I wanna talk to u too.. alhe thi ekaku athugavec phone eh nehthr.. n where is zaa..
I have a phone girl zaa on vma bunaanan ina eba huriyey.. And y is ur name changed?
U mean phone eba othey.. cn’t v talk by phone?? N name dhw.. name change kolly dhn.. hahaa.. scarlet jahan vythr??
Nooney hama ok…. We can talk phone in.. Well i dont use viber tho.. I use telegram… Phone in vhk dhahkan v hama.. Sorry ingey late reply ah namaadhu kohlaigen aeema las v
I cn’t use telegram.. so kihineh hadhaany
Alhey then what do u use tho?… Use kuraahaa ehchihi buneba kitty konmeves ehcheh use kuraany dhn… ?
Nope…No number dhygeneh nooney..I mean if she use gmail ey..mi visnany alun gmail use kuran..ehnve ??❤..nd e num eh noon mihaaru beynun kurany..so no need for that..hihi
Mihaaru knthaakah thi vany kitty..
Ooh.. aissi dhw.. dhn kihineh dhw vaki hadhaany vec.. alhe Viber use kobbala.. inaa ah ehn ehcheh use kurevendhn..
Viber use kuran number eh beynun vaanehnu.. And i dont have one.. But try kuraanan mirey ingey.. But yageeneh noon
Haa.. ok.. hey I have to go… Bye.. bt mirey adhi dhimaa kollahchey..
Scwl ah dhaan tha..hehe?
Yeah In sha allah mirey kuraanan… Bye tc ly
Ina vehje… viber hulhuvaifin… God that was a close one.. Alhamdhulillah.. Anyways opened it just to talk to you….??.. Kuda risk eh negiyas ok vaane dw… Now we just need to add each other ?
ehnve dw iny just joined viber.. say hi araafa…mi fenuny mom phn balaalyma…
I dn’t have u guys no.. hoadhany kihineyy
Eyh Reem kiyaa story write kuraa author eh ulhe ehnu…eyna ah fonuvaba ina ge num….dhn kitty eyna ah msg kohfa bunaany inaa sis ge num dheyshey..eyrun num libifa ehnu e othy…Massala hahlu v nu dhw..hehe????
kihineh thi bunaa author ah nmbr fonuvaany…. hama evs publi eynun…
Wait thihen vanynama em aa rysh vec mithiby nu dw?
rysh bunefin kitty kairi…
Alhey ina kihineh number share kurany?
Srry for the late reply guys.. Actually reem use a different no to use Viber.. so v can do this.. as jiji said.. dhw
Guys r u there…
Yeah im here.. So we can do it?
And i don’t even know her viber number or anything i don’t even know her
Reem ge stry ge 5 th vana prt ga innaane her no.. v can say our number dheyshw dhw.. ok ennu eyrun..
Hey.. ok thr kitty ah..
Yh thanks mi balany
Btw kon reem eh idrk ingey ?
Hey.. inaa vec msg eh koffin.. on ehga noon iny.. so i also tell her eyrun bunaane kanneyge
Aan libijje i msgd u 2
Jiji ah thanks vec nubuney evaru kohdhinyma dhw..hehe
Heyy Cute Lips… story varah rythi <3 .. And story ge idea ves genesdhyfa oii goih ves varah furihama Maasha Allah <3 <3 <3
Srry jiji.. n thanks a lot.. jiji Viber use kuran thr..
Alheyy inaa miulheny rysh ge rashuga ey miadhu..
Yahh. .mom ge phn in use kurany. .So nukereyne ey.. nd dear gmail use kohba plc…eyrun ok eynu….Noony jiji ah 10 nimigen amihla foaneh libendhn wait kuraakah nu jeheyny..plc ina dear????
Haha.. I cn’t.. dhn mihenn talk kollaany dhw..
Jiji buniyya inaa nukuraane use eh?
yhh… for now we have this way… btw what is ur island inaa.. kitty gaathu bunelahchey… dhn i will ask herr… oka… we r from same atoll… remember… we may meet someday soon..IN SHA ALLAH…
?HD.Vaikaradhoo thr inaa.hehe
Vaikaradhoo eh noon.. bt ingunas nubunahchey public ga.. btw rysh I’m in ur island..
whattt… i wanna meettttt
but i can’t go out…that’s the sad part….
Ekyvve yoa Ary ah nunikumeveny.
Heheh…lemme guess ekm….hanimaadhoo dhw ina?….
inaa sisy… may i know ur island… thooo nubuni…. thoo kairi bunebala rysh kairi bunebalaashey…. rysh nubunaanan ekaku kairi vs….
Hei kobaatha hurihaa kudhin..jiji aeema fily dhw…hehe..ok ok ingey..,????????????????
no.. m here. jiji
Vvvvv reethi… ekm kuda koh dhigu kohli nama ey hithah araa… ❤❤❤ekmves story vv reethi. N sorry for late comment… aryge story liyumuge hunaru eb huri. U r talente.. ❤❤❤❤ ary sis ge faraathun mi kahala reethi story thah fennaaane kamah mmeeed kuran.. ❤❤❤❤❤ n ary where is the cove pic ❤❤ tc
GOOD LUCK FO NEXT STORY
thnks ISHU… ohh cover pic dw…. hadhaan nethuny… plus pic eh nuhoadha iny ehnve… nxt time i will try to improve more …. thanks darla..????????????????
Ary i m here toi
Vrh Reethi
THANKS BRO….??????
Ary did yuh got my mail…If so plc reply soon ingey????
chking rn
varah reethi. Miah vure dhigu koh linama varah reethi vees . but varah reethi vaahaka .when another story
THANKS Rai…. yh kuruvaane… nxt time liyaany dhigu koh… neieg bunan kon dhuvahakun kameh up kureveyny.. i am wrirting.. ehkoh liyefa upload kuran fashaany… hope u guys would wait…??????????????????
Kon reesh reesh kiyaakah areeshaa kiyaaba furihama namun vaahaka dahkaba areeshaa ahmed……
y don’t u share ur real name dhn..if u want others want me to call me rysh.. i never told them to call me rysh… so if u don’t want to call me rysh or ary… call me areesha ahmed…. still my name is not completed..
Areeshaa ahmed firt u dont know how to tlk english well first u can respect others and be honesty.u will lie me so ill hate u
Anonymous!!!hw dare yuh to fight her…yeah ebu naahn anonymous ge name share kuran v nu..Being A reader nd frnd of her, v rulhi aissi thigotah tlk kuryma….
Ary….jiji kuri mail thakah reply kohba ingey as soon as yuh could..ary noony ehn kudhihnaa tlk kurevihje…Wi Fi kairii bunaathi mifaharu slow nuvahchey..hihihi
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Areeshaa ahmed firt u dont know how to tlk english well first u can respect others and be honesty.u will lie me so ill hate u
when did i lie.. yh i believe i donno much english.. who said i knws.. hate me if u want.. i don’t care…if u hate me.. i never said bad words before.. but u used first …nd could u tell me the lie i had said….i wanna knw.. i don’t remember it…
Nice story aree