ނަފުރަތުވުމުން…5 ފަހުބައި…

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1. Me first dhw…

   1. Mistakes ebahuri…Nimun maa kuruvefa hama eh nujehe..but ok…Next story eh liyaa iru mi kanthah rangalhu kohgen liyan masahkaiy kuraathi ingey..Good luckkk??????????????

2. Not bad… Gud mi part ves…

3. varah kuh ginakan faahakohlevey. vaahaka heevanee trailor eh hen vaanuvaa eh neyge so varah hadi vaahaka. vassalaam alaikum

4. Mee dhn Vaahaka eko.. Okay thi age kujjakaa Balaafa.. I’m one year younger than u ekm I write better stories ig..not mi site ga

   1. Umm it’s a bit rude as you said you do better than her. It would be better if you suggested her ways in which she could improve. If you’re better enough you could have said the best methods. I mean, she had tried her best right? Why don’t you support her and appreciate her work? Who knows how hard she tried to write this much even? If you are saying you’re better than her that confidently, why don’t you share us the site where we can read your stories? We also wanna read yours as well. I’m hoping your stories are also better like you said. Anyway, writer you did well in your level. I appreciate your hard work, but there are some mistakes like grammar. Ekahala kankan rangalhu kohlyma Adhi rangalhu vaane. In sha Allah. Sifakurun thah ves ithuru kohlaafa scene thah ves ithuru kohlaa. Adhi kuhli kuhliyah haadhisaathah gensumuge badhaluga rangalhah kiyaidhemun madumadun twist thah geney ingey. Adhi rangalhu vaane in sha Allah. Not everyone does their best in their firsts. So keep going. Do not give up. You can and you will. ? Allah is with you. So do I. In sha Allah you can do better. Read other well known author’s stories more often.

   2. She tried her best right?*

5. Not bad

6. Yes she tried her best.. Ekm this sucks… And ma noolhemey vaguthu that gina vegeneh.. Ya eyge badhaluga bitakaa chat kurin as ragalhu vaane..ik I’m kuda for this

7. Dhn ma liyaa Vaahaka tha kiyan beynun vanyaa kiyaalaa magey dhivehi fothuga hunnaane baivaru liyefa. English fothuga ves hunnaane English Vaahaka thA?an Ya bye see ya goodnight. Im gonna go and suck a dick, urgh I feel so horny.. ?

   1. Lol… Come suc mine.. Beautiful.. Can I have ur insta id sisis, and what’s ur real name

8. reethi ingey. ekam miah vuren story dhigu kohlinama varah reethi vaane. next story liyaathi ingey. furathama rough koh storyga vaagoi plane kohlaabala eyrun faseyha vaane. i ah ves ingey i akyves perfect writter eh noonkan i also done many mistakes. writter eh vehjehyaa baeh readers faraathun varah negetive comment ves annane. ekamakuves ekamaai alhaa nulaa kuriah dhaashey bunelaanii.. don’t give up ingey. i kw vaahaka type kuran ehaa vaguthu dhaane kan. i really appriciate your hard working. love u. don’t be sad ingey. in shaa allah adhi kohmeves dhuvahakun perfct writter akah vaane. when next story

9. It’s not nice..ninmaali goi and it’s like a trailer..but next time do it better…good luck

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