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1. Hi this is my first comment. I just want to say i love your storys isha??.i read all your storys.its great. But if you make story little longer than it will be perfect.

   1. THANK u ?

2. Nice

3. Vvv rythi vaahaka eh..kyp it up ishaa ishu??❤❤?????????????..ly sooooo much koyaa????

   1. Thank u

4. Varah reethi ishu.. But im sorry if i said anything which hurt u… Pardon… I never meant to hurt you… Overall .. Ur story is beautiful but mistakes Adhives ebahuri and a bit short .. E rangalhu kohlanikoh hama baraabaru vaane

   1. Thank ummm in sh allah

5. varah hadi thi stry gandu

   1. For u not for us… ??… Its the best story… And for ur kind information its not a stry “gandu” … Ish this story is the best ingey…

6. Foohi story eh

7. Aslu mi story hama nujhehey and alhaiganna gotheh eba hurey.. eha saafeh nuvey aslu ayaan ge bayehves..
   ●sifa kurun varah poor
   ● mulhi story arrange kohfa huri goyhves eha kamunudhey
   ● story clearly readers aa hama ah foaru kohdhevifa eh nei
   ● story ga javaabu nulibey kanthah eba huri
   ● 5 years therey ayaan and story ge main lead ge gulhun oyh goyh ves bunedhin namaves readers ah getu vaane story faseyhain
   ● and the story you bring on os very short isha.. emme part akun isha ah mulhi story reethikoh liyeveyne.. no need to lont it unless you dont have that much ideas.. aslu readers ah kamudhaany story dhigu vefa and reehchah genevifa hurihya.. isha story genesdhyfa hunna goyh varah kuru aslu .
   ● what happened between zaan and the main lead girl? Not clearly info given
   And many more like this

   One more thing “kitty” aslu isha ah heyo edhenya inprovement gennan beynun vanya mistakes isha ah kiyaidhyba.. just dont say varah reethi or mistakes eba huttey.. love it eyy.. we clearly know that this story isn’t very much clearly provided to readers.. just pointout the mistakes.. its always better to make someone cry rather than makin them happy saying lies.. mihaaru isha ah bad feel vedhaane but mistakes kiyaidhy push kuri varakah hama isha ah faidhaa vaany..

   1. I do point out the mistakes.. And thank u… I do want her to improve her writing skills thats y im trying my best now to improve her.. Ur words were very good and helpful.. Im sure ishaa will improve after reading ur comment.. I say its beautiful b cox at some point the story is written very nicely… I like it b cox i try to understand the story.. I try to get what shes trying to write.. Thats y i say that the story is beautiful… I hope ishu would take both of our comment positively…. Ishu u might think that i have changed very much in the past few days.. Ur right.. Bcox i want u to be a successful writer.. Thats y sometimes i might be or someone else might be harsh to u.. But let me be frank.. They r doing this to improve u.. They say it nuseedhaa gothakah but they say it so that u might get hurt and u might give ur best and the story be much better than before… Ur improving day by day insha Allah… Kurinahvuren vaahaka liyaa goi rangalhu… Plx ishu dnt get angry with me… I just want u to improve.. Thats it.. Nothing else… Im sorry if i said something which would hurt u…. And one more thing, i do say things to the ppl who give negative comments to isha.. Thats bcox i dont like the way they say it… If they say it a bit politely then i wouldn’t say anything insha Allah…. Ok… This is it

8. V kamu nudhey… Thi umuruge kujjakaa balaafa haadha dhashey liumuge fennavar..vaa nuvaa eh nayge. 7yrs ge kujjaku vaahaka dhahkaa gothah vaahaka liyefa thi hunnani. Ishaa vy furathama vaahaka liyan dhas kuran. Ibaaraiyy kuran dhas kuran.. Vaahaka adhi liyan noolhe vaahaka thah kiyaaba. Eyrun vaahaka liyen vee goiyy dhas vaane…

   1. I agree with you

9. You are improving day by day. If you don’t want to find mistakes in your stories, reread and edit it before publishing. Also make your stories a little longer, I don’t mean the length of the chapter, I mean the original story as a whole. You can do this by adding side plots, fillers and more conflict on top of another. Read more stories and passages to improve your sentence structure. I don’t care if you take this advice or not, these are just tips you can use to improve your writing skills. Anyway, I appreciate your work. Good luck

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