އިންތިޒާރުގައި ހުންނާނަމޭ ލޯބިން…..1

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1. Here is the first part part of my long story…

2. Vrh reethi ekm thankolheh kuryy…Nxt part up kohladhehchey ingey ishu ???????

   1. THANXX

3. Maashaa alla….. v reethi…when next part…?.?

4. Mi’buru’ eh noon it’s mi ‘faharu’…. Mi kamala than kolhuthah rang albums kohlumun vaahaka vvvv furihama vaane…..vaahaka liyefa up kurumuge kurin proof read kuriima mistakes rangalhu kureveyne…. Overall story vvvvv salhi…. All the best ❤️❤️❤️

   1. I agree with avlyn… But as she said the story is vvvvvv beautiful… And ehaa kurukoh up kurumah vure maa rangalhu vaane dhigukoh liyefa up kurun…. Konme dhuvahaku up kuraane kameh ves nei dhigu koh liyefa up kurey… Eyrah hama baraabaru vaane.. Dnt mind ingey… Me kitty ah heevaa goi

   2. Ok…. but ishu ah time eh nuvey dhigu koh liyaa kah busy.. kamun anehkaa tommorrow also very busy..

   3. Ehen v ma.. Dhn konme dhuvahakau liyevunuvarakah liyaany dhen ehen gos dhigu koh liyevunu dhuvahakun up kuraany.. Ok nun dhw.. Konme dhuvahaku up kuraane kameh nei.. Mi buni gothah hadhaa eyrah maa rangalhu vaane… But up kurumuge kurin handhaan koh e mistakes huritho balaathi ingey

   4. Ok but aslu alhu beynumeh nooon thikudhin inthixaaru kuraakah ehenve..

   5. Dhoonya.. Kehkurumaky konme insaanakuves kuran jehey kameh… So we can wait ey dear… Inthixaar kureven oi varakah inthixaar kuraanan… But mi buni kanthahthah ishu kurey.. Eyrah Kaamiyabu liyuntheri akah vumah eh fiyavalhu e elhuny… Not saying that ur not a good writer.. Ur stories are beautiful… But if u write it longer it will b more interesting and ppl will love to read it.. They wenjoy reading long stories.. Ehnve mi buny mihen.. Not forcing u… But if u do this it will definitely increase the amount of fans u have now… And u will get positive feedback more than negative feedback.. So u should think about it… Rest is up to u

   6. *Will enjoy *

5. Kahala*… Rangalhu*

   1. Umm

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