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1. mashakah neyge mivaahakaiga vaa ehgotheh ves?

2. Dho vaahaka yakahves nuvey vaaeh nuvaaeh neynge

   1. Dhn nukiyan v nu…. Kiyany kyhkuran tha alhe… Anyways, Ishu varah reethi mi bai ves ❤️❤️

   2. Btw.. I love that cover ??❤️?❤️

   3. Okay i will improve this is the best comment

3. Wow??❤❤??????..vrh vrh rythi..but don’t make zyn sad ingey????..?????waiting for the next…ly?????????

4. Okay i will improve this is the best comment

5. Kitty is the best

   1. bala vaanuvaa neygeytheenu neyge ey bunaani? dhn kitty ey rangalhy adhi kiyaehnu eba

6. Dhivahi vaahaka eh v maa dhivahi bass beynun kurun muhimmu English bass beynun kurumun vaahaka v hadi

7. O hello somebody!! She is a little girl.. So just shut up.. I dnt care thimeehaku kithanme rulhiayakas i will support her.. Ehn noonas somebody ah thankolheh reehchah ehen bunevidhaanehnu.. No hard feelings .. And ishu there r some parts that u need to improve.. Highlight them and improve ok love.. And alhaa nulahchey mimeehun kiyaa ehchihsah.. And Reet i had say that dhivehi vaahakaiga English bas use kuraa meehun madheh noon mithaa. And most of the ppl like it when we include some dialogues in English.. And ishu thank u❤️❤️

8. O plx somebody.. I don’t care even If u get angry with me cox i am supporting a girl who is just 11 and even though she tried writing a story.. And age aa balaa hama rangalhu and she is not mature enough to get emotions and all in the story yet.. So i had rather support her and tell her what she needs to improve.. So as i was saying.. Ishu vaahakaiga Ebahuri rangalhu kohlan jehey than thankolhu.. E highlight kohlaigen rangalhu kohlaathi ingey love… And i just noticed that ishaa u wrote my name in that description of urs liyaa thanuga.. So sweet of u ❤️.. And ehaa ginain English language vaahakaiga use nukuriyya rangalhyves.. Ingey.. Somebody no hard feelings ingey.. And who is this meera in the story?? New character??.. Anyways, waiting for the next part ??❤️❤️

   1. Meeera is his yonger sis but i will not tell anything about meeree this is small hint i said meeraa will know in fifth part and he mwt ameera from school

   2. Kitty I kinda disagree with u. I mean its ok to defend someone but age has nothing to do with maturity or knowing emotions…

9. Meeraa ingeyne fifth part gai dont want be sad and thank you for your suppo

10. Hama asluves mi vaahaakaiga mi vaanuvaa eh neynge
    Is meera an imaginary person? I wish so.
    To be honest, it will be better, if you write a story related to friendship or a scary one. It will be nice if you write love stories when you grow up. But its nice, you ignore the obstacles and keep writing. Though didn’t understand much, waiting for next part and I hope you will write a better story. Keep working.

11. Lets

12. Thank you every one for sopportive
    I first write this rough and now iam uping parts dont mind i think thibey fulhunah ves visneyne dont mind bad thing about me and i always love you all for sopport …..thank you
    I DONT SAID KITTY IS TH GOOD ISAID KITTY COMMENT IS USE FULL TO MEE NEVER NEVER NEVER NEVER MIND WRONG MEANING THATS A BAD HABBIT YOU ALL DONT HAVE MIND TO THINK I ALSO HAVE A HEART BUT I AM SORRY VAAHAKA HADI V MA NEXT PART WILL BE GOOD NEYGEY KANTHAN VES UNDER STAND VAANE

    SORRY SORRY STORY HADI VMA PLS FORGIVE MEE ONE MORE

    1. Alhe alhaa nulaa.. Gud luck

13. Its all ok.. N gud luck ❤️??

14. It’s beautiful…

    1. THANK u

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