ކާމިޔާބު (ފަހުބައި)

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1. Hiivanii thaakah dhaan las vegen vaahaka nimmali hen.. thankolheh dhigu kon genesdhin nama mi ah vre rythi vys

   1. Sorry someone dear ??Aslu vaguthu nuvaathy aee…I am really sorry

2. Stry hama vvv salhi… ekm sifakurun thah ithuru khlaafa thnklheh detail kh mi stry genaii nama adhi maa rythi vys kanneynge… keep it up dear???

   1. Awwwn ☺☺haadha inthizaaru kury mey Twinkle ?dear ge comment akah…Anyways miothy ekan vefa dhww…happy vejje dear ah mi story kamudhiyaeema..

   2. E kyhve vaki twinkle ah inthizaaru kury??? Myhun kiyaa ehchissah alhaanulahchey… knme kamehga vs hunnaane gonjehun thakeh… dhn jeheyny hihhvaraa eku e gonjehun thakaa kurimathilaan… furathama kaamiyaabu nuvedhaane… ekm naakaamiyaaby aky kaamiyaabyge thalhudhandi kan abadhu vs hndhaan kurahchey… gud luck dear❤❤❤

3. alheyh dear vvv reethi maasha allah… bt thakolheh kury….

   1. Sorry dear, mi part kuruvi kamahtakai…Aslu vaguthu nuvaathy..And type kuran vx gina iru nagaathy..ehve kurukoh vhk liyefa up kurany..Awwwn ??vrh happy vejje dear ah mi story kamudhiyaeema…

4. it’s ok ey dear.. adhi srry bunaa vareh nuve ennu…. dear ge hurihaa stry eh vx naash ah vvvv kamudhey.. vvv kiyaahithn vvv interest aa eku kiyanii vx…

   1. Jazakhallah khairan, naash dear..Dandelion mi visnany kiyuntherin kiyaa hihvaane gothah vaahaka liyeveythww??

5. Mi ves dhen vaahaka eththa? Hithuga ‘raskan’ kuraa ‘raany’… Vrh foohi vaahaka eh. Ninmaali goiy ves vrh hadi!

   1. Sorry dear ??I’m a young writer so may it happens…It’s a mistake..Thanks for highliting the mistakes

6. Alhey. Ehnme fahun school captain aa deputy captain aa dhw e gulhuny…

   1. I’m really sorry ingey ??Ekam liyefa..final vefa in ehcheh delete eh nukureveynu dhww

7. Stry v reethi. Thankolhehh kuru veema. Thankolheh khaadhisa ithurah detail kohh geness dhinn nama v furihama vees. BTW stry reethi.

   1. I’m glad cox u like this part??Thanks dhonkanbulo dear..Aslu time nulibeythy kurukoh genesdheveny

8. Wot is this??? Mi Dhn vaahaka eh tha????? Vaahaka liyan nygenya nulibun maa rangalhu kanneyge mi kahala tha akun thaaku nujehey ehcheh liyumah vureh

   1. Sorry Hakeemu..Emmen evvareh nuvaane..Dandelion ge story kiyan Hakeemu ah time waste vangya it’s better if yuh do not read my stories…It’s better if yuh & all give me advices..so I can improve…☺☺☺

9. Dandelion kyhveyw twinkle ge cmnt akh inthizaaru kury?????? vv ufaa vejje inthizaaru kuryma… thnx dear… n myhun kiyaahaa ehchakh alhaa nulahche… knme kamehga vs gonjehun thakeh kurimathi vaane… ekankamah jeheyny hihhvaraa eku kurimathilaan… gud luck dear

   1. Dhen Twinkle?vx rangalhu kamun dhww..yeah komme kamehgaves gonjehun thakeh kurimathi vaane..After that ekan kaamiyaabu vaany..Eyge misaaleh ‘ Jecika cox’ aky (dhe aiy neh kaamiyaabu anhenaa..

   2. ur right dear… sry nge eh cmnt eh dhefaharah ebain kurevifa…

   3. It’s ok ey dhoonii…heheh..you are right too my dear twinke sis..

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