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ބޯ ވެހޭ ވާރެޔާ…….4

shiyaa _anaaa Level 1
June 28, 2018 4 Mins Read
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ދުވަސްތައް މާޒީވަމުން ދިޔައެވެ. މޫސުން ދިޔައީ ބަދަލުވަމުންނެވެ. އެކި މީހުންގެ ހަޔާތުގައި އެކި ކުލަތަށް ޖައްސަމުންނެވެ. މާޒީވެ ގޮސްފައިވާ ދުވަސްތަކުން ގިނަ ބަޔަކު އިބުރަތް ހާސިލްކޮށް ދިރިއުޅުމައިގެ ކުރިއަށް ދިޔައެވެ. އެއާ ޙިލާފަށް އަނެއްބަޔަކު އުޅެމުން ދިޔައީ މާޒީއާމެދު ކަރުނަ އަޅާ މާޒީގައި ހިނގި ކަންތައް ތަކުން އަރައިނުގަނެވޭ ހާލު ހިތާމަ ކުރަމުންނެވެ. ކޮންމެ ދުވަހެއްވެސް ފާއިތުވަމުން ދިޔައީ އެތަށް ސަތޭކަ ބަޔަކު މި ދުނިޔެއިން ޢަލްވަދާޢު ކިޔާ އަދި އެތަށް ބަޔަކު މިދުނިޔެއަށް މަރުހަބާ ކިޔާމުންނެވެ.

އަލާނިޔާއާއި ރަޔާންގެ ލޯބީގެ ގުޅުމަށް ހަތަރުު އަހަރު ފުރުނު ރޭ އެ ދެމެދުގައި ހިނގި ކަންތަކަށްފަހު އެ ދެމީހުންގެ ދޭތެރޭގައި އޮތް ގުޅުން ދިޔައީ ވަރަގަދަ ވަމުންނެވެ. ދުވާލުގެ ވަގުތު މަސަތްކަތުގެ މާހައުލުގައި ބުރަކޮށް އުޅުމަށްފަހު ގިނަ ރޭރޭ އެ ދެ ލޯބިވެރިން ހޭދަކުރަނީ އެކީގައެވެ. ދެމަފިރިންނެކޭ ތަފާތެއް ނެތެވެ. އެ ޙާއްސަ ރެއަށްފަހު މިހާރު އެއްއަހަރު ފާއިތުވީއިރު ކުރިމަތިވާ އުޅޭ ކަޅު ބޯ ވިލާގަނޑުގެ ހިލަމެއް ނެތިއެެވެ.

އާރކިޓެކްޓު ކަން ކިޔަވައިގެން އައި ނަމަވެސް ރަޔާން މަސަތްކަތް ކުރަނީ އޭނާގެ ބައްޕަގެ ބިސްނަސްގެ ތެރޭގައެވެ. އެހެންނަމަވެސް އާރކިޓެކްޓު ކަން ޕާރޓް ޓައިމް ކޮށް ކޮންއުޅެއެވެ. ފަހަކަށް އައިސް ގެއަށް ނިދަން ނައުމުގެ އިތުރުން އޭނާގެ ކިބައިން ފެންނަ ތަފާތު އުޅުމުގެ ސަބަބުން އާއިލާ އަންނަނީ ކަންބޮޑުވުން ފާޅުކުރަމުންނެވެ.

ލަންޑަންގައި ކިޔަވަމުން ދާ އަލާނިޔާގެ ބޭބެގެ ގްރެޖުއޭޝަންއަށް މަންމައާއި ބައްޕަ ލަންޑަންއަށް ދިއުމުން ގޭގެ ވެރިކަން މިހާރު އޮތީ ހަވާލުވެފައި އޮތީ އަލާނިޔާއާއެވެ. އަމިއްލަ ކުންފުޏެއްގައި މަސަތްކަތް ކުރަމުން އަންނަ ފެޝަން ޑިޒައިނަރ އެއް ކަމަށްވާ އަލާނިޔާއާއި ސަރުކާރު އޮފީހެއްގައި އުޅެމުން އަންނަ އެކައުންޓެންޓު އީވާ ، އެ ބޮޑު ގޭގައި ދިރިއުޅެ މުން ދާއިރު ރަޔާންއާއި އައިޝަމްވެސް ގިނަ ވަގުތު ހޭދަކުރަނީ އެތާއެވެ.އުފަލުގައި މި ލޯބިވެރިން އުޅެމުން ދިޔައިރު ހަސަދަ އާއި ރުޅިވެރިކަން އުފެދޭ ނަޒަރަކުން އެ މީހުންނަށް ފާރަލާ ބަޔަކު އުޅޭ ކަމެއް ނުދެނެހުއްޓެވެ.

” އޭތް..ކަލޭ ކައިރީ އެ ސޮރުގެ އޮފީސް ކައިރީ ބުރު ޖަހަން ދާށޭ ބުނީމަވެސް ގަދަ ގުގުރީގައި ނިދަން އޮތީތަ އަދިވެސް..މިހާރު އަހަރެއްވީއޭ…އޭނާގެ ނަން ފިޔަވައި އިތުރު އެއްޗެއް އަހަރުމެންނަށް އެނގޭ ވަރުވެއްޖެތަ…” ލަހާމްގެ ކޮޓަރި ދޮރު ހުޅުވާ އަޅާފައި އެތެރެއަށް ވަތް ދާނިޝް ނިދާފައި އޮތް ލަހާމް ގައިގައި ތަޅައިގަތެވެ.

” ބޮޑު އުނދަގުލެއްނު..ކަލޭ އަމިއްލަ އަށް ދޭބަލަ އޭނާ ތިހާ ހޯދާ ހިތުން އުޅެންޏާ….ކެލެއެކޭ އެ ސޮރާ ހިތާވެގެން އުޅޭ އަންހެނެކޭ އެއްވަރެއްނު…މަ ނިދިޔަދީބަލަ…” ލަހާމުވެސް ނިދި އަޑަކުން ހަޅޭއް ފަޅޭއް ޖަހައިގަތެވެ. ދާނިޝްގެ ފަރާތުން އިތުރު ޖަވާބެއް ނުލިބުމުން ނިދީގެ ތެރެއަށް ފީނައިގަތެވެ.

ޗޮކެއް ކަނޑާލަމުން ލަހާމް ކޮޓަރި ދޮރު ބަންލާފައި ޖެހި ދާނިޝްހުރީ ރަނގަޅަށްވެސް ” ކަޑަ ” ވެފައެވެ. ރުޅިއައިސް ރަތްވެފައި ހުރެ އޭނާގެ ސައިކަލަށް އަރައިގެން ދުއްވާލިއިރު އޭނާގެ ސައިކަލު ދާ ކޮންމެ މަގެއްގައި އެ ސައިކަލުގެ ބާރު އަޑު ގުގުމާލައެވެ. ދާނިޝް އެ ދުއްވާލެއް އެހާވެސް އަވަހެވެ. ހީވަނީ ދެންމެ ދެންމެ މީހެއް ގައިގައި ޖައްސަފާނެ ހެންނެވެ.

ދާނިޝްގެ ސައިކަލު މަޑުކޮށްލީ ޑްރީމް ޑެސްޓިނޭޝަން ކުންފުނީގެ ކުރިމައްޗަށެވެ. އޭނާ ދިޔައީ ހަތަރު ގަޑި ސުމިނެޓު ވަންދެން އޭނާ ދިޔައީ އިންތިޒާރުގެ މިނެޓު ތަށް ގުނަމުންންވެ މާގިނަ އިރެއްނުވިއެވެ. އޮފީހުގެ ބިއްލޫރި ދޮރު ދެފަރާތަށް ކެހުމާއެކު ނިކުމެގެން އައި ރަޔާން ފެނުމުން އޭނާ އިދިމާއަށް މިސްރާބު ޖެހީ ކަންކުރާނެ ގޮތް ސިކުނޑީގައި ރާވައިލަމުންނެވެ.

އޭނާގެ ނަސީބު ހަމަ ރަނގަޅީއެވެ. ހިނގާފައި ކަރާ ދިމާލަށް  ދިޔަ ވަގުތު ރަޔާންގެ ޖީބުން ފޯނު ނެގުމުގެ ތެރޭަގައި ވޮލެޓު ވެއްޓުނީއެވެ. ރަޔާންއަކަށް ނޭނގުނެވެ. ބިންމަތީގައި އޮތް ވޮލެޓަށް ފަސްދީފައި ރަޔާން ހިނގައިގަތެވެ. ދާނިޝް އެ ފުރުސަތުގެ ބޭނުން ރަނގަޅު ގޮތުގައި ހިފާލިއެވެ. އޭނާ ދިޔަ ގޮތަށް ގޮސް ވޮލެޓު ނެގިއެވެ. އޭތި ޖީބަށް ލަމުން ސައިކަލަށް އަރި ދުއްވާލިއެވެ. ރަޔާންގެ ކާރާ އެކުއެކީގައި ކަހަލަ ގޮތަކަށެވެ. އެހެންނަމަވެސް ތަފާތު ދެ މިސްރާބަށެވެ.

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ކޮޓަރީގައި ނިދިފައި އޮތް އަލާނިޔާގެ ބޮލުގައި ފިރުމާލަމުން ބޮކިތަށް ނިންވާލިއެވެ. ހުސް ނުކޮށް ހުރި ނޫޑުލިސް ތަށްޓަކާވެސް އެކު އެކޮޓަރިން ނިކުތް އީވާގެ މޫނުމަތީގައި ވަނީ ވަރުބަލިކަމެވެ. ކަން ބޮޑުވުމެވެ.

” ހަލޯ…އާން ބޭސް ދިނިން….ހަތަރު ފަހަރަށް ހޮޑުވެސް ލި…ނޫޑިލިސް އޭ ކާނީ ބުނީމަ ނޫޑުލިސް ހަދައިދިނިން އެކަމު ނުއެއްކޭ…އެނބުރުން އަރަނީއޭ ކިޔާފަ ނިދާފަ މިހާރު އެ އޮތީ ” ފޯނުން ރަޔާންއާއި ވާހަކަ ދެެއްކި އީވާގެ މަޑުމައިތިރި އަޑުގައި އޭނާގެ ކޮއްކޮ އާއިމެދު ކަންބޮޑުވާ ރާގެއް ހުއްޓެވެ. ” މަ އެބަދަން..ހޭލީމަ ޑޮކްޓަރަށް ދައްކަން ދާނީ ދެން…” ރަޔާންގެ އަޑުގައިވެސްމެއެވެ.

އީވާއާ ރަޔާންގެ ފޯނު ކޯލު ކެނޑުނުތާ ތިރީސް މިނެޓު ފަހުން އެގޭ ދޮރުގައި ބެލް އަޅާ އަޑު އިވުނެވެ. ދޮރު ހުޅުވީ އީވާއެވެ. ” އޮފީސް ނިންމި ގޮތަށްތަ ތިޔައީ..” ގޭތެރެއަށް ވަދެގެން އައި ރަޔާން ލައިގެން ހުރި ކޯޓާއި ފަޓުލޫނު ފެނުމުން އީވާ ސުވާލުކޮށްލިއެވެ. ރަޔާން ބޯޖަހާލަމުން ދެތިން ވާހަކައެއް ދައްކާލަން މަޑުކޮށްލުމަށްފަހު މިސްރާބުޖެހީ އަލާނިޔާގެ ކޮޓަރިއާ ދިމާއަށެވެ.

އޮރެންޖު ކުލައިގެ ނިދާ ބޮކީގެ ފަނޑު އަލީގައި މައުސޫމު ގޮތަކަށް ނިދާފައި އޮތް އަލާނިޔާގެ ދޮން މޫނު ފެންނަލެއް ވަރަށް ލޯތްބެވެ. އެނދުގައި އިށީނދެގެން އިން ރަޔާންއަށް އެ މޫނުކޮޅުގައި ފިރުމާނުލާ ނީންދެވުނު ސަބަބަކީ އެއީއެވެ. އެ މޫނުގައި ރަޔާންގެ އިނގިލިތަށް ބީހިލުމާއެކު އަލާނިޔާ މަޑުމަޑުން ލޯ ހުޅުބވާލިއެވެ.

” އޯހް..ސޮރީ ބޭބީ..އަދި ނިދާލާ ބޭނުމިއްޔާ…” ރަޔާން ހީކުރީ އަލާނިޔާ ހޭލީ އޭނާ އަތްލީމައި ކަމަށެވެ. އަލާނިޔާ ބޯ ހޫރުވާލީ ދެން ނުނިދާަނަމޭ ބުނާ ފަދައަކުންނެވެ. ” ހުމެއް ނެތްދޯ….ހިނގާ ޑޮކްޓަރަށް ދައްކަން..ޑޮކްޓަރ ދޭ ބޭސް ކޭމަ ރަނގަޅުވެދާނެ…” އެނދުގެ ފަޑީގައި ލެނގިލައިގެން އިން އަލާނިޔާގެ ނިއްކުރީގައި ރަޔާން އަތްޖައްސާލިއެވެ.

” ނޯ..ޑޮކްޓަރު އިންޖެކްޝަން ޖަހާނެ…ޕެނަޑޯލް ކޭމަ އޯކޭ….” އިންޖެކްޝަން ދެކެ ކުޑައިރުއްސުރެ ބިރުގަންނަ އަލާނިޔާއަށް ބުނެވުނީ ޖުމްލައިގެ އެއްބަޔެވެ. އަނެއް ބައި ފުރިހަމަ ކުރެވޭ ގޮތެއް ނުވިއެވެ. އޯކަށް ދެމެގަތުމަށް ފަހު ފާހަނާއާ ދިމާލަށް ދުއްވައިގަތެވެ. ކުޑަކޮށް އަރިއަޅާލި ނަމަވެސް ފަރުވާލެއް ނުބަހަށްޓައެވެ.

ރަޔާން ދެ ބުމަ ހިއްލާލިއެވެ. އަލާނިޔާ ނިކުތް އިރުވެސް އޭނާ އިނީ އެހެންނެވެ. ފާހަނައިގެ ތަންޑުއަޅުވަން އުޅުމުގެ ތެރޭގައި ދެވަނަ ފަހަރަށް އަލާނިޔާ އަރިއަޅާލިއެވެ. އޭނާ ބޮލުގައި ހިފައްޓާލިއެވެ. ވަރު ދޫވެގެން ބިންމައްޗަށް ވެއްޓެން އުޅުން ވަގުތު ހިމާޔަތް ލިބުނީ ރަޔާންގެ ބާރުގަދަ މުލައްދަނޑިންނެވެ.

އަތްދަނޑި މައްޗަށް އަލާނިޔާ ނަގަައިގެން ގެންގޮސް އެނދުގައި ބޭއްވި ރަޔާން ހުރީ އޭނާ ދުވަހަކުވެސް ނުވާވަރަށް ހާސްވެފައެވެ. ” ބޭބީ އެހެންވެގެންނޭ މި ބުނީ..ބޮޑުވަރު ނުވަނީސް ދާން…އިންޖެކްޝަނެއް ނުޖަހާނެއެއްނު ޑޮކްޓަރަށް ދައްކަންދާ ކޮންމެ ފަހަރަކުއެއް ޕްލީސް…ބޭބީ ސޮޓޮޕް މޭކިންމީ ވޮރީޑް…” ރަޔާން އޭނާގެ ލޯބިވެރިޔާގެ ފަން އިސްތަށިގަނޑުަގައި ފިރުމާލީ ނުހަނު ލޯތަބާއެކުގައެވެ.

ރަޔާން ކުރުނުކޮށް ކިޔަން ފެށުމުން ގޮތުގައި ހުރުން ދޫކޮށް ކުޑަގޮތަކަށް ތައްޔާރުވެލަމުން ރަޔާންއައެކު ހޮސްޕިޓަލަށް ދާން އޭނަ މިސްރާބުޖެހިއެވެ. ކާރުގައި ދިޔުމުގެ ބަދަލުގައި އަލާނިޔާ ހިޔާރުކުރީ ސައިކަލެވެ. އީވާ އަކީ ސައިކަލު ދުއްވާ މީހެއްކަުން ރަޔާން އަލާނިޔާ ގޮވައިގެން ދިޔައީ އީވާގެ ސައިކަލުގައެވެ. ކާރުގައި ދިޔަނަމަ އެންބުރުން އެރުން ދެގުނަ އިތުރު ވާނެތީއެވެ.

އެމަޖެންސީ ރޫމްއިން ނިކުތް އަލާނިޔާ އޭނާގެ އަތުގައި އަޅާފައި އިން ބޭސް ޓޭޕް ކޮޅާ ކަފަ ކޮޅަށް ބަލާލަމުން ރަޔާން އަށް ބަލާލިއިރު އޭނާގެ ތުން ހުރީ އޫ ވެފައެވެ. ” އެވަރުކަމެކޭ…ބަރަށް ބްރޭވް އިނގޭ މަގޭ ބޭބީގަނޑު…ރިޕޯޓު ލިބެން ވާއިރަށް ހިނގާ އައިސްކްރީމް ބޯން ދާން ” އަލާނިޔާގެ ކޮނޑުގައި ހިފައި ގަޔާ ކައިރިކޮށްލަމުން ރަޔާން ބުނެލިއެވެ. މަޖާ އެއްޗެއް ކިޔައި ވަރުބަލިވެފައި ހުރި އަލާނިޔާ ހެއްވާވެސް ލަމުންނެވެ.

ދެ އައިސްކޯނު ގަނެގެން އައިސްް ފިހާރަ ސޭޓު ކުރިމަތީގައި ހުއްޓިލިއެވެ. ” ތިރީސް ރުފިޔާ..” ބަންގްލަދޭޝްއަށް ނިސްބަތްވާ ސޭޓު އަގުކިޔާލިއެވެ. އަލާނިޔާ އޭނާގެ ޖީބުން ލާރި ނަގަން ހެދުމުން ރަޔާން އެކަން މަނާކުރިއެވެ. ” ޑޮކްޓަރަށް ދައްކަންވެސް ލާރި ދެއްކީމެއްނު އެހެންވީމަ މީ މަގޭ ޗާންސޭ..” މިހެން ބުނުމަށްފަހު ރަޔާން އޭނާގެ ޖީބަށް އަތްކޮށްޕާލީ ވޮލެޓު ނެގުމަށެވެ. ޖީބުގައި އަބަދުވެސް އޮންނަ ވޮލެޓު ނެތުމުން އޭނާގެ ދެބުމަ ކައިރިވިއެވެ. ” ގޭގަ ބޭއްވުނީ ކަންނޭނގޭ ދޯ….” އަލާނިޔާ ބުނެލިއެވެ. އަލާނިޔާގެ ބަސް ރަޔާންވެސް ގަބޫލުކުރިއެވެ. އެހެންކަމުން ލާރި ދެއްކީ އަލާނިޔާއެވެ.

ރަސްރަނި ބަގީޗާގައި އައިސްކޯނު ބޯން ތިބި ޖޯޑު ދިޔައީ ލޯބީގެ އެކި ސަކަރާތް ޖަހަމުންނެވެ. މީހުންގެ ނަޒަރު ހުއްޓިފައި ވިޔަސް ހެޔޮ ކަމަށެވެ.

އަލާނިޔާ މެން އިށީނދެގެން ތިބި ބެންޗުގެ ފަހަތުގައި ހުއްޓި ހުރި ދާނިޝް އޭނާގެ އަތުގައި އޮތް ވޮލެޓު މޭގައި ޖައްސާލަމުން ފުންނޭވާއެއްލިއެވެ. އަދި ކުރިޔަށް ހިނގައިގަތެވެ. ބެންޗާ ދިމާލަށެވެ.

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ނޯޓު؛ ވަރަށް ކުއްލި ގޮތަކަށް ރާއްޖޭން ބޭރަށް ފުރަން ޖެހުމާއެކު އަޅުަގަނޑު މިހާރު ލިޔަމުން މި ގެންދާ ވާހަކަ ދެން ގެނެސްދެވޭނީ ދެ ހަފްތާ ފަހުން ކަމަށް ވަރަށް ހިތާމަޔާއެކު ދަންނަވަމެވެ. އަދި ހުރިހާ ކިޔުންތެރިންވެސް ތި ދެއްވާ ސަޕޯޓަށް ނިހާޔަތަށް ޝުކުރު ދަންނަވަމެވެ. ހުރިހާ ކިޔުންތެރިންވެސް ޝިޔާގެ މި ޑިސިޝަންއަށް ރެސްޕެކްޓު ކުރާނެ ކަމަށް އުންމީދުކުރަމެވެ.

 

 

 

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192 Comments!

  1. unique says:
    June 28, 2018 at 12:11 pm

    am i first

    1. shiyaa _anaaa says:
      June 28, 2018 at 12:41 pm

      Yes dear congratulations ???? dhenfaharakun ves first hoadhachey ???

  2. unique says:
    June 28, 2018 at 12:25 pm

    vvv reethi n we’ll respect ur decision dear………..

    1. shiyaa _anaaa says:
      June 28, 2018 at 12:50 pm

      Thank you ….❤??

  3. Mariyam says:
    June 28, 2018 at 12:52 pm

    Very nice story and I respect ur decision dear.

  4. maya says:
    June 28, 2018 at 12:55 pm

    okay dear we will wat,,vv reethi as always….

    1. Twinkle? says:
      June 28, 2018 at 7:18 pm

      Hey maya wat eh nun… wait… 10 nimey iru vs wait ge spelling neynge dhwww… hahha… kada vaane… ??????

  5. Me says:
    June 28, 2018 at 1:00 pm

    Boa vehey vaareya; mahuge boa tha insaanunge boatha vaarey ga vehenee ?

    1. shiyaa _anaaa says:
      June 28, 2018 at 1:35 pm

      Mahuge boleh Nuneyy…masthah vaareyaa themeybaa????misunderstood vee dhw…it’s actually boakoh vehey fenuge vihsaaraige vaahaka hehe….

    2. Me says:
      June 28, 2018 at 3:59 pm

      Noon alhugandu heekuree acid vaarey hilaige vaarey vehey gothah boluge vaarey vehey vaahaka kamah eothee. Ehenve mahuge boa thoa insaanunge boa thoa ahaalee; mihaaru egijje molhu echcheh liyelan ulhenikoh bodu goahekkan hedhifa eothee

    3. Kudy says:
      June 28, 2018 at 7:29 pm

      Aslu innaany “vehey boa vaareya”
      Lhemuga liyafa aee basmag olhuvaagen, aee vaki raagakah fahthan. Migothah liyaairu rangalhu vaany rangalhah luyun.ehen nuny maana olheyne.

  6. Anonymous says:
    June 28, 2018 at 1:17 pm

    its ok
    aissa liyedhehchey
    vv reethi mi part ves

  7. naash says:
    June 28, 2018 at 1:47 pm

    it’s ok dear we will wait…. aissa liyaanii ok ennu dhw… anyways stry hama v baraabaru ngey…. ehn vey naash bunany hama shiyaa vareh nethey hehe…. nd i respect ur decision

    1. Twinkle? says:
      June 28, 2018 at 7:22 pm

      Twinkle vs naash ge e cmnt ah v thaaeedh… shiyaa annan dhn hunnaanan… ekm v haa vs avahah stry liyan fashahchey… ehn noony kehtherikan kolhun laifaane… n stry hama habeys… twinkle vs hama naash hn shiyaa ge decision ah respect kuran… abadhu vs… hve a safe trip dear…❤❤❤

  8. Amee says:
    June 28, 2018 at 3:18 pm

    Vv reethi mi part vess??? nd i respect ur decission…

  9. ilee says:
    June 28, 2018 at 3:28 pm

    dhn beyrah gossa aissa avahah up kohla dhehchey ingey shiya
    shiya ge story varah kiyaahithun ilee kiyanee

  10. Roxy says:
    June 28, 2018 at 4:56 pm

    Vvvvvv lwbi nge n buddy dhey nge hv fun n cme bck we wil mis u sis ???

  11. Psenhi says:
    June 28, 2018 at 7:52 pm

    Interesting. Waiting. Hope to see something new in next episode

  12. kitty says:
    June 28, 2018 at 8:27 pm

    vaahaka v nyc.. we will until u come back .. have a safe trip. 🙂

  13. Reader says:
    June 28, 2018 at 9:31 pm

    Hey twinkle… keyboard in type kuraairu mistakes vx liyeveyne… thats not becox maya dnt know the spelling of wait.. ehchekey bunaairu e bunevey ehcheh ranglhah visnaalaathi.. twinkle haa molheh nuvaane knme myhaku…

    1. maya says:
      June 29, 2018 at 7:38 pm

      hey ..stop it guys,,..its alright ey…twinkle e maja kohly ey…and thnk u ….u r sweet n kind…..

    2. Twinkle? says:
      June 29, 2018 at 9:09 pm

      Keyboard in type kuraa iru mistakes hunnaane kan ngey… n I knw that maya ah wait ge spelling rngalhah ngey kan vs… ae majalakh maya r dhimaalah buni ehcheh… ekan hama rngalhah maya ah ngeyne…
      maya ladhu gannavaa dhera kuraakah nun… n maya vs egothah twinkle r dhimaa kuraane… ekm ae rulhi aisgenneh nun… ae enme kuda irussure vs onna varugadha frndship ge sababun… furathama reader vs visnaalaafa buni nama mihn… n reader thi hykuraahaa molheh nuvaane twinkle eh vs type kuraakah… so let’s stop this… twinkle beynumeh nun mikamaa hedhi reader rulhi ais hunnaakah… v dhera vejje mikahala kameh twinkle ge sababun v ma vs… sry…???

    3. Twinkle? says:
      June 29, 2018 at 9:11 pm

      Keyboard in type kuraa iru mistakes hunnaane kan ngey… n I knw that maya ah wait ge spelling rngalhah ngey kan vs… ae majalakh maya r dhimaalah buni ehcheh… ekan hama rngalhah maya ah ngeyne… ae enme kuda irussure vs onna varugadha frndship ge sababun… furathama reader vs visnaalaafa buni nama mihn… n reader thi hykuraahaa molheh nuvaane twinkle eh vs type kuraakah… so let’s stop this… twinkle beynumeh nun mikamaa hedhi reader rulhi ais hunnaakah… v dhera vejje mikahala kameh twinkle ge sababun v ma vs… sry…???

  14. Aishath says:
    June 28, 2018 at 11:16 pm

    Very nice

  15. ranaa says:
    June 29, 2018 at 9:51 pm

    dont say like that twinkle……..twinkle ge sababunnennooney ehen v… u trust me ehhnu dhoa sweet heart……

  16. ranaa says:
    June 29, 2018 at 9:53 pm

    mii rulhiaisgen rana bunaa vaahaka ehhnnoon ingey dear do u knw twinkle n maya….

  17. naash says:
    June 30, 2018 at 11:05 am

    OMG Ronaldo nd Messi dhandu mathii araarn vgn tha miulhenyy….. HEHE

  18. naash says:
    June 30, 2018 at 11:18 am

    magey sis haadha imotional ey dhw.. haha… dhera nuvey insha allah hurihaa kameh vx ok vrne… dhn nuvisnache ekama… nd plus reader ah vx maya nd sis ge relation neyngunyyma ey ehn e buny.. luv u sis…

    1. Twinkle? says:
      June 30, 2018 at 6:15 pm

      Vedhaane ehn vs naash… omg twinkle sis haadha rngalhey… masha allah… thikahala sis eh libeyny madhu myhakah… nge ehnu thihn bunaa iru vs twinkle v emotional kan… hehhe… luv u bodukh sis…❤❤❤

  19. no name? says:
    June 30, 2018 at 11:59 am

    hahaha….lol….17 years ge kujjaku beyrah furany…so funny….hehe…..story nuliyan vegen dhakka vaahaka…gabooleh nukure vey….and shiyaa ah dhogu hadhaigen ehves faidhaa eh nulibeyne…..kon school akunno kiyevy…..so fanny…..dhogeh hedhyma so sad?i am not angry with you shiyaa

  20. rana says:
    June 30, 2018 at 1:22 pm

    shiyaa dhogu hadhaane heneh hiyeh nuvey….;(??
    no name dear majaa kollii dhoa….

  21. no name says:
    June 30, 2018 at 3:07 pm

    yup rana….i don’t think shiya dhogu hadhaane ekey….hama majaa kohlee….n i am abadhuves vrh sakaraai jahaa kujjeh….so hithah eri ehcheh….11ga ulhey kuhjaku nudhaane dhw beyrah….maybe shiyaa 11n 12 nukiyavanee kanney ge….srry ingey shiyaa dear….i luv you so much….???and will wait to nxt prt…ly

  22. rana says:
    June 30, 2018 at 3:59 pm

    oh…..thii boy eh thr….vrh hihama jehihge ingey rana dear rulhinaiima…name balailaafa hiivanii boy enhen just ahaalii….kameh vegeneh noon ingey…..dont think in negative way dud

    1. no name says:
      June 30, 2018 at 9:28 pm

      yup…how did you know i am a boy?hama ahaaly

  23. rana says:
    June 30, 2018 at 4:06 pm

    ….majaa kudhinna ekii ulhey hihvey vrh…..
    rana ge hurihaa frnds ves vrh majaa vaane……vrh agaves gadha vaane..ehaa heyoves vaane…..ingey thr psycho vaane emmen ves….hehehe.just kidding

    1. Twinkle? says:
      June 30, 2018 at 6:16 pm

      Rana hama rngalhah thihury frnds describe khfa… v molhu… hehehe… luv u…❤❤❤

  24. no name says:
    June 30, 2018 at 9:40 pm

    rana buddy….kon grade aku ulheny n kon rashehge school eh ga???just don’t be angry….i wanna know about you….rana ge hunnany hus girls dhw friends ah?….boy eh hurinama engeyne majaakan???hehe….ly all readers and the writer of the story?(shiyaa)??hehe???hama heveny mithaage readers serious kamun??…majaa vx nukurevey

  25. naash says:
    June 30, 2018 at 9:58 pm

    ohohoho ranaa OMG magey rana dhooni gandu… twinkle sis ah vx nge ennu rana v molhah describe kuraakan….. haha… finally aharemn ge rana vx boy eh hoadhii dhw i mean frnd eh

  26. no name says:
    June 30, 2018 at 11:04 pm

    nooo…naash gandaa…pis pis dhw…dhahkaa vaahaka….actually baeh faharu girls aa vaahaka dhahkaa iru i am so shy…. nukerey vaahaka dhahkaakah….anga vx olhey…..haha???but thikahala friends vrh beynun…..ingey heveyne kanvx mi comment kiyaafa?i’m not angry…n beynun vey thikahala friends….i mean majaa vaahaka dhehky ma rulhi nadhevey…..luv yuh all

  27. no name says:
    June 30, 2018 at 11:08 pm

    n yess….. thi kudhin ge age kihaa vareh…hee vy v kuda hen…hehe….thikudhin bunee ma alhugandu age bunaa ny

  28. rana says:
    July 1, 2018 at 9:40 am

    65yrs ….hahahaha

  29. rana says:
    July 1, 2018 at 9:42 am

    rana akah vs nenge rulhi annaakah…hamaekani age bunefaanan……14yra

  30. no name says:
    July 1, 2018 at 12:40 pm

    bunee mehnu kuda vaane ey….hehe…i am 16yrs….mi aharu 17 vaane…..

  31. rana says:
    July 1, 2018 at 12:47 pm

    hahahahahahahah…

  32. naash says:
    July 1, 2018 at 12:47 pm

    hey no name dear gaanoonun balaairu aharn kudaii.. hehe …. anyways i’m14 yrs

    1. hehe says:
      July 2, 2018 at 4:39 pm

      ahmadhiyya ga tha ulheny

  33. Twinkle? says:
    July 1, 2018 at 12:51 pm

    A naash adhi 14 eh nuve ehnu… like me… miaharu ge fahukolhuga thibey grp ehnu mii… rana mennah vias…

  34. Twinkle? says:
    July 1, 2018 at 12:52 pm

    No name dear thii hama aslah vs boy ehthr

  35. Twinkle? says:
    July 1, 2018 at 12:53 pm

    No name dear thii hama aslah vs boy eh thr???

  36. Twinkle? says:
    July 1, 2018 at 12:54 pm

    Ooops… sry olhign hama eh cmnt eh dhw mi fonuvuny

  37. rana says:
    July 1, 2018 at 1:37 pm

    hahahaha….thii boy girl eh thr……hahahahahahaah
    mihen mibunii anhen kudhinna vaahaka dhakka iru anga olheyey bunii ma…..eyyy….dont take it in serious way budii

  38. rani says:
    July 1, 2018 at 1:40 pm

    ey ingy thr aslu ranaa vrh rulhi gahdhavaane…….all frndx ah vc ingyne……hehehehehehe……..hellow mii rani rannaa ge twns sis……..twinkle kaari n naash kairi ahaa bala rani n ranaa thereyn kaaaku thw rulhi madee n enme anga gadha e…..

  39. rani says:
    July 1, 2018 at 1:49 pm

    balaaba dhahkka vrhk ……..ehn kiyan vaanethr …..mii dhntha a….pis pis pis …..mizamaa nu kudhin ulhey gotheh dhww….asluvx naash thibunee thedheh….asluvx libunee a dhw…frndh boy……heheheheeheehee

  40. rani says:
    July 1, 2018 at 1:52 pm

    ….pis pis pis …..mizamaa nu kudhin ulhey gotheh dhww….asluvx naash thibunee thedheh…

  41. rani says:
    July 1, 2018 at 1:56 pm

    ey raani lwbi haadha varakah ahaarn nan thi gannany hahaahaahaaha…..

  42. naash says:
    July 1, 2018 at 1:58 pm

    oooops raani kantha key mii…. haha… aslu naash ge namuga innany…………..

  43. no name says:
    July 1, 2018 at 2:21 pm

    hehe….let me guess….ummm…kon atoll eh tha….eirun guess kuraa nann island….hihi…vedhaane eh rashakah vx…

  44. no name says:
    July 1, 2018 at 2:22 pm

    me too…mi aharu August ga 17 vaany

  45. naash says:
    July 1, 2018 at 4:45 pm

    thi hii v hama rangalhah budii… eh rasheh naash r rana r rani miii…..

  46. naash says:
    July 1, 2018 at 4:48 pm

    vedhaane ennun vefa mi othy… hahaha… anyways first u have to say ur atoll…. naash mnneh nu first age vx buny.. so tell us….

  47. no name says:
    July 1, 2018 at 4:52 pm

    Ok….baa atoll kujjeh me…then tell me

    1. maya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 6:51 pm

      dharavandhoo thr??????

    2. maya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 6:52 pm

      umm dharavandhoo????

    3. no name says:
      July 3, 2018 at 12:25 pm

      nop…

  48. Twinkle? says:
    July 1, 2018 at 7:26 pm

    Ur August 17 dhw… I’m August 19…

    1. no name says:
      July 1, 2018 at 9:21 pm

      Yep

  49. Twinkle? says:
    July 1, 2018 at 7:27 pm

    Hey guys… mihury fakka fr.d eh libifa dhw…

  50. Twinkle? says:
    July 1, 2018 at 7:28 pm

    Rana babe thnx mikahala frnd eh hwdha dhinyma… heheh… rana ge sababun libun frnd eh viyya mii dhww…

  51. naash says:
    July 1, 2018 at 8:04 pm

    h.dh atoll… hehe dhn guess

  52. naash says:
    July 1, 2018 at 8:06 pm

    kn rasheh kan

  53. Twinkle? says:
    July 1, 2018 at 9:13 pm

    Ae thedheh… dhn clue eh dhyfaanan… naturally gothun knmes kamakh v popular rasheh… dhn guess khba kn rasheh kan…

  54. rana says:
    July 1, 2018 at 9:27 pm

    hahaha….no name ah nameh nukiyaathr.hahahahahahha

    1. no name says:
      July 1, 2018 at 9:32 pm

      no name ah kiyanee no name….kihaa dhera kameh…hehe…majaa koh li

    2. Twinkle? says:
      July 1, 2018 at 9:45 pm

      Lol… rana vs dhw… dhn no name thihaa kada kuraakh nuvaanehnu… hehehe

  55. no name says:
    July 1, 2018 at 9:30 pm

    ummm…..sorry…i won’t guess your island…e ee if i guess your island and then u men ahaane alhugandu kon rasheh hey…but i couldn’t tell…sorry guys….asluves alugadah maafu koh dhee ba my dear friends….luv yuh

    1. Twinkle? says:
      July 1, 2018 at 9:48 pm

      It’s ok dear… no name maafah edhn jehey varuge kameh adhi nukuramehnu… so maafah edheyne kameh neii… n we will always forgive u frnd…

  56. rana says:
    July 1, 2018 at 9:48 pm

    haha…noolhemey komme hen rah nengi geneh…

    1. Twinkle? says:
      July 1, 2018 at 9:54 pm

      Dhww ranaa

  57. no name says:
    July 2, 2018 at 9:15 am

    ??

  58. maya says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:09 pm

    bahyeh thi enmen esoru gohvany dhw…rana.naashiya,raaniya and mizuha..no name iney thr..mi vv laneih bayeh…v sakaraaih bodu vaane…e enmen ulheny 8 ga bt maya men nah vure hyper vaane…..maya ves mi mi myhunge vvv close frnd + cousin eh…and by the way no one ge mom 7 dhuvas vyma dheyne dhw knmes namehh…hahah just kidding

    1. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 1:25 pm

      Maayaa gandaa… ma kithah faharu bunaany thihn nukiyaashey… v seriour ey bunin dhw kurin vs… dhn nukiyaathi…

    2. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 1:27 pm

      No name… she’s right… aharumn v laaneih vaane n v sakaraaih jahaane… mi maya vs v kanthah bodu vaane ehn huttas…

    3. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 1:30 pm

      Maya myhunge nan rngalhah kiyaa!!!???

    4. no name says:
      July 2, 2018 at 1:39 pm

      LOL….mihaar enguny thaa thi kudhinge nan….and alhugandu ge nan hoadan bey numiyya mu shiyaa ge cousin eh kairy ahan jehey ni….e noon meehakah neingeyne alugadu mi site bey nun kuraakan vx….hihi…eynayah engeyne alhuhandu…dhw…n shiyaa kairy alhugandu ge vaahaka bune fiyya she will also know me…dhw…hehe

    5. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 1:41 pm

      Dhn hevey… ekm maya ehbaehge nan eky nubai kh aslu…

  59. no name says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:28 pm

    maya haadha serious ey dhw….hahaha

    1. maya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 6:13 pm

      eii dhogeh aslu vaa gothaky mizu vv biruganey eyna ge sis ah bust vedhaanethy ehenve ekiyani maya name thah ky nubai koshey..n u lheny a level ga thr no name buddy

  60. no name says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:32 pm

    alhugandu gothah dhw….school ga ulhunu iru kiriyaa suspend nuvy 1week ah….me laaneih kamun anhen group akaadhimaalah gandu kolhehga majalakah ehcheh liyefa ehli then mazna kiyaa kujjeh bust kohlli principal ah….hehe

  61. Twinkle? says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:36 pm

    Haha… aharumn vs thikahala kankan kuran… ekm bust nukuraane v… eythi kada dhw

  62. Twinkle? says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:37 pm

    Haha… aharumn vs thikahala kankan kuran… ekm bust nukuraane v… eythi kada ey dhw

  63. Twinkle? says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:38 pm

    Alhey anehka eh cmnt eh 2 faharu

  64. Ilu says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:50 pm

    ey kaloa….kihinei vegen tha thi grls aa vhk dhkny….moya vy tha…adhi no name oo..lols

    1. maya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 6:18 pm

      ilu thy anehka no name ge ryt hand thr???????

  65. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:52 pm

    koyaa mihaaru koyaa feshii dhoa…miina vaahaka eh huheh nuvaane dhuvahakuves….agamaithiri kuranvii…ehnyya dhevaafaanan no name ar…..hihi

  66. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:55 pm

    rana hunnaane ingey friends dhevahtharun……vrh sakaraih jahan frnds hunna thaa ekm..mamma n teachers kairi happu…..hahahahaah

  67. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 1:57 pm

    ilu thii kaaku frnd eh thr no name ge…
    vrh majaley aslu…lol

    1. Ilu says:
      July 2, 2018 at 2:04 pm

      Ya…no name ge friend eh…eyna yaa ilu aa ice cream boan gossa ahutte v majaa kanthah kuraane….hehe

  68. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 2:04 pm

    hahaha kadavrne mixuhaaa sisii gandu

    1. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 10:02 pm

      Alhey rana gandu vs thr… v dhera vejje

  69. Ilu says:
    July 2, 2018 at 2:06 pm

    n ahutte ei eynage frnds kiyaa nameh noon…only me kiyaa nameh

  70. no name says:
    July 2, 2018 at 2:07 pm

    mixuhaa ei twinkle dhw..hehe…hee vaa ehcheh

  71. naash says:
    July 2, 2018 at 2:08 pm

    yeah

  72. no name says:
    July 2, 2018 at 2:10 pm

    Ey..ilu hingaa miadhu rasrani ah dhaan 4.30ga ingey…n pls nubunaathi ahutte ge aslu nan…ok ilu ahutte kiyas

    1. maya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 6:07 pm

      maya ah hyvany hama ahutte eii dhw ur name ..let me guess..ahusandhw kiyani….ilu ah bunevunyma mihaaru thi kan thi ohbaalany..n maya nuvaane vv seriuos….vvv madun hunaany ..ekamu ehen hurefa kohlaa kanthakun teacharun kiyavaidhinun huhtaalaane..hhihihih

  73. naash says:
    July 2, 2018 at 2:10 pm

    ice cream boy…. hahaha

  74. naash says:
    July 2, 2018 at 2:13 pm

    hama ekani Ilu ennu ahutte kiyan jeheny dhw… so naash kiyaanii ice cream boy

    1. no name says:
      July 2, 2018 at 4:48 pm

      Ok naash buddy

  75. maya says:
    July 2, 2018 at 6:09 pm

    maya ah hyvany hama ahutte eii dhw ur name ..let me guess..ahusandhw kiyani….ilu ah bunevunyma mihaaru thi kan thi ohbaalany..n maya nuvaane vv seriuos….vvv madun hunaany ..ekamu ehen hurefa kohlaa kanthakun teacharun kiyavaidhinun huhtaalaane..hhihihih+school captian vyma vv balaigen dhw ulhen jeheyny n maya dad aky school principle mom aki dhivehi teacher..hahah

    1. maya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 6:16 pm

      dad ah ekamu ehen ulhefa bust vaane eco teachara hedhi..egola v fuhpaaane..

    2. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 10:09 pm

      Ahchy… maya eyna vaahaka nudhakkaa… twinkle r abadhu jassaalaafa hunnaany… dhw naash, rana, rani… hama thedheh v fuppaane eyna…

  76. naash says:
    July 2, 2018 at 6:20 pm

    hey maya eba ulhn dhw… ice cream boy ah ngey tha.. mi maya kuraa kan thakn baeh faharu aharemnnah breath vx nukurevey.. hahahahaha…

    1. maya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 6:55 pm

      eheii dhogeh ..hama roa buhuthaan dhogeh.

    2. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 10:09 pm

      Naash ebuny thedheh…

    3. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 10:20 pm

      Omg… subhaallah… mivaru vaakh nuve ehnu adhi… ngey mii chat kuraa thaneh nun kan… we r humans… insaanunnah mistakes kureveyne… aharumn enmenge faraathun thi enmennah mikurevunu kamah v bodah maafah edhn… migothah vaahaka dhakkaahaa knme bayaky adhi badinneh nun… badieh kameh noony nun kameh vs ngeyny ulhey noolhey hurihaa gotheh ngign dhw… heyo nuvaane allah ah takaa vs mi zuvaabugandu huttaalan hingaa… vvvvv bodah sry mihurihaa kamakah vs… dhn insha allah mikahala kameh ahrumn faraathun thakuraareh nuvaane…

    4. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 10:21 pm

      subhaallah… mivaru vaakh nuve ehnu adhi… ngey mii chat kuraa thaneh nun kan… we r humans… insaanunnah mistakes kureveyne… aharumn enmenge faraathun thi enmennah mikurevunu kamah v bodah maafah edhn… migothah vaahaka dhakkaahaa knme bayaky adhi badinneh nun… badieh kameh noony nun kameh vs ngeyny ulhey noolhey hurihaa gotheh ngign dhw… heyo nuvaane allah ah takaa vs mi zuvaabugandu huttaalan hingaa… vvvvv bodah sry mihurihaa kamakah vs… dhn insha allah mikahala kameh ahrumn faraathun thakuraareh nuvaane…

    5. Twinkle? says:
      July 2, 2018 at 10:23 pm

      subhaallah… mivaru vaakh nuve ehnu adhi…
      insaanunnah mistakes kureveyne… aharumn enmenge faraathun thi enmennah mikurevunu kamah v bodah maafah edhn… migothah vaahaka dhakkaahaa knme bayaky adhi badinneh nun… badieh kameh noony nun kameh vs ngeyny ulhey noolhey hurihaa gotheh ngign dhw… heyo nuvaane allah ah takaa vs mi zuvaabugandu huttaalan hingaa… vvvvv bodah sry mihurihaa kamakah vs… dhn insha allah mikahala kameh ahrumn faraathun thakuraareh nuvaane…

  77. naash says:
    July 2, 2018 at 6:23 pm

    laaneii kamn gos aneh athah alhaafa hunnrny … hahaha .. adhi bunyeh nu naash mnney laa nethy

  78. naash says:
    July 2, 2018 at 6:26 pm

    laaneii kamn gos aneh athah alhaafa hunnrny … hahaha .. adhi bunyeh nu naash mnney laa nethy… e eh nuney maayathuuu practice ah dhiya in tha??

  79. Hahaha says:
    July 2, 2018 at 6:33 pm

    mii koahcheh boegn ulhey ehchihi thakehthr…. 14 aharuga amilla myhaa nylan kiyan ulhey hn hyvany……….

  80. Rofl says:
    July 2, 2018 at 6:42 pm

    Kobaaa kiyaabe dhw… ma vs firihenekey.. anga melhunythr? ma vs beynun thikahala frnd eh…

    1. maya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 6:54 pm

      ehen thr ..vv frnd vaa hih vey thr??????

  81. Heyonuvaaane says:
    July 2, 2018 at 6:43 pm

    Ma vs firihenekey.. ma vs beynun thikahala frnd eh…

  82. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 6:48 pm

    pispis…vaadhayah dhoa

  83. maya says:
    July 2, 2018 at 7:00 pm

    naash be online after 930 ingey maya tuition eba ioh,..and u hehonuvaane and rofI

  84. b**** eh says:
    July 2, 2018 at 7:08 pm

    Hus badin

  85. rani says:
    July 2, 2018 at 8:05 pm

    balaaba no name boy ehvma ennooney tlk kuraneekee……heyonuvaane n illu dhahkka vrhk….pispis….heevane no name frhnh v ma vrhk dhahkany a bunaahen

  86. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 8:09 pm

    thii kaaku thr…..seriouslii………. ok thihen kiyas but…allah dhenevodigen vaane mii badin noon kanves….anheneh fenna irah badinney kiyan vegeyya kobaa salaamaih…..

    1. Ma says:
      July 2, 2018 at 9:07 pm

      Thanakun fennahaa myhakaa vhk dhakkanyrr vs vaki salaamatheh eba oithr?

  87. naash says:
    July 2, 2018 at 8:20 pm

    rana ebuny thedheh… echekey bunaairu visnan vrne kamuge dhekolhu balan + aharemn fiyavaa ehn faraatheh vaakan vx…

  88. naash says:
    July 2, 2018 at 8:24 pm

    naash + rana akah vx hieh nuve migothah frndxx r vrhaka dhakkrln eii massala eh henneh.. thi kudhinnah eii massala eh nama naash ge hurihaa frnds ge namuga vvvv bodah srry…

  89. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 8:29 pm

    n dhen higaa evaahaka ehfaraih kollan……mii badin gothuga dhekey kudhin viyyaa ok vaahaka nudhehkiyas no problem n egothah nudhekey hurihaa kudhin kihineh thr…….

  90. Saabas says:
    July 2, 2018 at 8:53 pm

    Mii chat kuraa thanehthr? Mashah hyvany vhk r behey gothun comment kuraa thaneh hn… Mashah vs olhijje.. Nikan olhun filuvadheebala kudhinney….

  91. Lalala says:
    July 2, 2018 at 9:01 pm

    Arn hama firihen kujjeh kan ingign thiulheny.. Knmehn mathi omaan kuran ulheyne kameh neh. Ma vs ekamah thaaeedhu.. Dhn lalala…. Nikan rangalhah konunyma ingeyne thy kn kahala baeh kan…. Allah vodignveyey dhulun bunumakun nufudheyne… Molhu velan kiyaaane ehchis nethiyyrrr anga madu kohgen thibe Bala… Kiyey nukiyey eh ingign ulhey myhun vma dhw myhaku ehchekey bunaa irah heyvallaa thahyaarey kiyaafa war fattany… Sandhoaku kolhu filaey nukiyabala… Hama lalala

  92. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 9:05 pm

    dhen enough ingey….fudhigge……
    aharemen nubai gothakah kon vaahaka eh thr dhekkii………

    1. Saabas says:
      July 2, 2018 at 9:10 pm

      Ma mikiyany mee zaathee vhk dhakkaa thaneh nooney.. Chat kuraa thaneh vs nooney. Ruku kurin faeba Bala…

  93. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 9:09 pm

    hahaha…..aharemen nahves ingey molhah kan kuran….hama hurelaafa frnd v eyh bunanii moyaehnnu…aharemen ves hamaey insha allah…

  94. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 9:13 pm

    aharemen mii moyaeh nooney thhakun fenna mii hakaa frnd vaakah….ehen ve ehen nan thakeh beynun kurii ves..atoll ves olhuvaalii….thimii hun ge hageegatheh balan…….

  95. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 9:18 pm

    bala thi mii hn ge therein mii hehnu bunii bla bla eyh…alhugandu thii firehenekey bunun eii massalaeh thr…..eyga ebaoih thr evves nubai maanaeh…bunebala

  96. Ingidhaanethaa says:
    July 2, 2018 at 9:22 pm

    Ma Balanthr thee thedhuthoa.. Hageegathah viyyrrr I will copy paste it in here ur every single info.. Ingidhaanethaa.. Kaakah kan fuppeny

  97. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 9:40 pm

    hah….alhugandu ID eh indhegenehnnu……….

  98. rana says:
    July 2, 2018 at 9:59 pm

    vaahaka hus v thr……..

  99. Manjey says:
    July 2, 2018 at 10:00 pm

    Manjey ma mi buny hoadhan hey ennu…

  100. Twinkle? says:
    July 2, 2018 at 10:04 pm

    Hey no name… mi enmen twinkle ge name nubai kh e kiyany… mizuha eh nun… mizha… u akureh nynnaane nge

  101. Kalo gaya says:
    July 2, 2018 at 10:11 pm

    Ey manje menney thi ulhun islaahu kurey avahah thaubaa vey

    1. Eyi says:
      July 2, 2018 at 10:14 pm

      Mee kaakuthr

    2. Kalo gaya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 10:16 pm

      Mii kalo gaya

  102. Twinkle? says:
    July 2, 2018 at 10:25 pm

    We didn’t meant to do this… vaahaka dhakkamun gos mihn v… sry enmenge faraathun vs… ekm hagygaih vaany hagygathah… insaanunnah kuh vs kureveyne… miige fahun mikahala kameh nuvaane insha allah

  103. Roxy says:
    July 2, 2018 at 11:00 pm

    Twinkle naash maya rana n rani ?? my sweet lil sissies ?? e ehaa kameh nooney kudhinney ehr dhra nuve ? axlu gws v egthah tlk kureven fshyma thi kudhn tlk kurn beynumyyr email ehn nunyyr num bunelrfa kmmx ehn thrkun chat khlyx mithr kudhin k vrne bt aslu thi kudhin thihen tlk kureema roxy nuvsnan gws kosheh bt gws koh vsnr myhun vx thbeyne ?? everyone wnt b sme ehnu dw buddiex ?? dhn thi kudhnge kmh dw ehn myhunh thi kudhnnaky rngalhu kmh kn dhkkumaky vv ufr vhje kuh gboolukhgn mrfh edhunyma ?? thi kudhn dhookhlyma eygn ngeny thi kudhnnh vsney vru u all did a gud job ???

  104. Roxy says:
    July 2, 2018 at 11:03 pm

    Cmmnt vv dhgu dw ?? roxy ah thi kudhnnh vure 2 years bdu vrny ?? vvvvv ufr vhje thi kudhn amilla ah fnign mhsla bdu nukh sry ey bunyma dhn vx cmmnt kuraa iru vsnain kurhchey nge cox this ones public dw ?? hma hyo edheythy bunely ???

    1. Maya says:
      July 2, 2018 at 11:34 pm

      Hey roxy dear ur sweet.. Maya ves naash mennah jehsun kuran vegen egothah talk kuri.????. Bt i don’t have any bad intentions.?????.. Jst for fun….. Bt mi firihen myhunnaky. Maya vvvvvv foohi vaa bayeh.????????????????????… Maya vv close vaane mizu msn enmen naa ves.. And i don’t have enough time to waste for these kind of things like… Love and relationships?????…. Vvv happy vehjee roxy dear ah visnuny thi.. Thanks a lot?????☺️.. Dear. U r kind and soft hearted. ?????????mi myhun hykurani huriha anhen kudhin naky emyhun jahaa haa berakah nashaane bayeh kamah thr ein????? ???????well ehen hyvanyaa thi vv bodu olhumeih.. Iradhakurehviyya maya eh thikahala nuvisney firihenun nakaa faives elhi nulaanan.. Insha Allah. ??????????

  105. Twinkle? says:
    July 3, 2018 at 7:12 pm

    Thnx vvvv bodah roxy dear… migothah mikn kuraakh nun rana vs tlk kuran feshyky… aslu v dhera vejje aharumnaa dhimaalah badinney bunyma… dhuvahaku vs myhaku nubuney adhi thihnneh… hagygaih balaalaafa ehurihaa ehcheh kii nama… ehn myhunge feelings thakah vs respect kuraa nama… hieh nukuran dhn migothah vaahaka dhekkunas mivaru vaane ekey… furathama visnadheyn dhw jeheyny… ehfaharu vs rythi kh mikn mihn nukuraashey buninama vs ahrumn huttaalaanan… roxy ge thi heyo kan umurah vs hndhaan bahattaanan… insha allah… thy kaaku kn neyngunas…

    1. Roxy says:
      July 3, 2018 at 7:57 pm

      Hehe neyngunu thrr i m writr roxana ey roxy latest stry ah cmmnt vx kurymhnu ?? sis eh kmh hykollr ??

    2. Roxy says:
      July 3, 2018 at 8:02 pm

      Kudhinney dhn dhra nuve b strng n jst leave it like a brve grl abdhu ehgtheh nvrnu dw ?? n thi ehvx kujjaku mi kmr hure site dhookhlrfa nudhahche nge ?? axlu mi site emme imp vrny twinkle n roxy mn kahala skool kudhnnh ??

    3. Roxy says:
      July 3, 2018 at 8:07 pm

      N assu mhn bunevunyma u knw i ws terrible at writin kurn hehe ?? mi site ah vhnan fshy vx jst 4 chilin ekm roxy vruge kudhn ehr prfct kh lyrthy u knw i ws kinda inspired by them ?? dhn roxy vx lyr hiy v rythkh ehnve vrhaka thkuga hunna ibaaraaithah roxy skoolga lyr stories ga use kurn fshy n u knw my teachr ws shcked roxy kulliakh mlhu vma hehe ?? dhn roxy hthah ery mi vrkun huttaeh nulrnmey cox u knw stry writin is limitless ??? dhn mhru site ga lyrthy m improvin a lot ?? ehnvma assu v benefit vrne thi kudhnnh ehnve site dhookhnulhche mibuny my xp mi shre khly

  106. maya says:
    July 3, 2018 at 7:39 pm

    hey Roxy,,maya akah nenge thy kaaku kameih ves bt u r sweet..not like others..aslu maya vv jehsun kuran naash mennah school ga ves ..ehenve comment kuran feshy ves..knmehen boy kuhjeh ulhey thi ki nun..and i hate mi firihenun dheke ..e enmen naki ehkahala bayeh eh fothakun kiyavai gen ulhey bayeh..u guys dont have any rights to tell badin neyy..anhen kuhjaku firihen kuhjaka tlk koh fihyaa e ulheni knmes relashion eh ga noony eii bodu badiyeih…u people bunan thr vaahaka eh knme anhen kuhjaky kaley men firihenun jahaa haa berakah nashaane bayeh nun..well ehen hyvanyaa thi vvv bodu olhumeh ..hama gaimu ves maya ah vegen viyaa insha allah vai ves elhi nulaanan..adhi eves thi kahala degrade bayaka…and bunan thr one more thing kaley mennah miadhu thi hurihaa ehcheh ki idhaane .bt thikanthah thah dhenevodigen vaa faraatheh veyy…vvvv dheravehje badin ney bunyma ….life ga vv gina kanthah thah dhimaavefa huri ..bt ehves myhaku adhi eh nubuney badi ekey..dhuvahaku ves adhi nubuney..so kamuge dhekolhu balaafa bunaa ehcheh bunaanama dhww..roxy thnk u u r really sweet,kind and soft hearted..dhuvahaku ves thi ihusaan theri kameh handhaan nah tha eh nulaanan..insha allah…jazaikahlah khairaan …..

  107. Roxy says:
    July 3, 2018 at 7:41 pm

    Hehe mii writer roxana sis eh kmh hykhlr ?? dhra nuve dearie life ga ulhey iru mikahala knthakr vx kurimthi vrne we hv to b strng ehnu dw ?? n roxy ge edhumh thi evvx kujjh mikamuge sababun site dhookhnulhchey ? assu mi site emme imp vrny twinkle n roxy mn kahala studnts ah ngeytha kurn i was terrible at writin stories mi site kiyn fshy vx vki liyun rngalhu kuraakh nun bt roxy age kudhn ehr prfct kh liyrthy i was kinda inspired by thm u knw ?? roxy hthah ery liyun rnghu kurn vhjey dhn hma vrhaka thkuga huhna ibaarai thah dhivehi gdy lyr stry thkuga use kurn fshy.. n my teachr ws shcked hehe roxy mlhu vma kulliakh ??? dhn hthah ery mi vrkun huttaeh nulrnmey cox writin storiex is limitless ehnu dw ? dhn site ga lyn fshy ehn kudhn dhkey goi bln n insha allah m improvin like craxy hehe ?? ehemmr mbuny thi kudhnnh vx mi site beynun khgn improve veveyne so plx dnt leave this site nge sis mn nthyma mi site falhu vnu hehe ?? n once again dnt b sad buddiex jst leave it ??

  108. rani says:
    July 3, 2018 at 9:08 pm

    heheheh ya ur right sis….alhugandu nudhaanamey mi site dhookohfga ….adhi evaru kmh nuveywy….insha allah huri haa kmh rnglhuvaane…

  109. maya says:
    July 3, 2018 at 10:18 pm

    thnk u so much sis..and by the way in which grade u r 10 thr???/vvloves

    1. Roxy says:
      July 3, 2018 at 10:51 pm

      Yhh 10 ga ?? dhn migthah chat nukuramr dw ?

  110. no name says:
    July 3, 2018 at 10:57 pm

    yep roxy…then migothah chat nukuraanan alugandaa ilu vx…vrh bodah srry…maaf koh dheveyne nama maafkoh dhinun ey vrh bodu edhumeh me and ilu ge…and one more thing, alhugadu ge kokko vx no name ge namuga comment koffa ebahuri…ehenve ekamah vx maaf koh dhee

  111. no name says:
    July 3, 2018 at 11:01 pm

    n twinkle men beynu vany ehen gothakah vaahaka dhakkan kamugai vany nama u ge number massage kolla….but insha allah dhen alhugandu ehvx anhen kujjaka vaahaka eh nudhah kaanannn…..so u men bey nu miyya mu me ge kokko medhiverikoh alhugadaa message kurevidhaane

  112. no name says:
    July 3, 2018 at 11:03 pm

    n twinkle men beynu vany ehen gothakah vaahaka dhakkan kamugai vany nama u ge number massage kolla….but insha allah dhen alhugandu ehvx anhen kujjakami gotha vaahaka eh nudhah kaanannn…..so u men bey nu miyya mu me ge kokko medhiverikoh alhugadaa message kurevidhaane

  113. no name says:
    July 3, 2018 at 11:04 pm

    n twinkle men beynu vany ehen gothakah vaahaka dhakkan kamugai vany nama u ge number massage kolla….but insha allah dhen alhugandu ehvx anhen kujjakami gotha vaahaka eh nudhah kaanannn…..so u men bey nu miyya mu me ge kokko medhiverikoh message kurevidhaane….e ee vx kokko aa…n u menna ginain vaahaka dhahkaafa iny kokko….srry

  114. no name says:
    July 3, 2018 at 11:07 pm

    insha allah dhen alhugandu ehvx anhen kujjakami gotha vaahaka eh nudhah kaanannn*
    so u men bey nu miyya mu me ge kokko medhiverikoh message kurevidhaane….e ee vx kokko aa…n u menna ginain vaahaka dhahkaafa iny kokko….srry…so kokko aa u mnn friend eh gothah vaahaka dhakkafa iny…dhenme comment thah balaaly….shiya ge coment eh oi tho….n me ge kokko v laanei vaane…as she said befor…eina vaahaka dhekky alhugadah vegen srry

  115. no name says:
    July 3, 2018 at 11:09 pm

    kokko ei girl eh….

  116. Xim says:
    July 3, 2018 at 11:12 pm

    V varah reeethi…next part kiyaalanlibeyne dhuvahakah inthizaaru kuran…gud luck?

  117. no name says:
    July 3, 2018 at 11:22 pm

    n alhugaduge namuga atoll ah baa atoll ey jahaafa einy alugadeh noon…it’s not me….
    me mihaaru bunefin kokko kairy ekuh thakuraar nukuran….she was v v v v sad…enme furathama vx feshy roan maaf kuraashey kiyaafa…n kokko ey v v kuda kujjeh….n she also beynun vey frnd vaan….alugadu kairy buny twinkle menn kairy bunaasho number libidhaane hey….she don’t comment family meehakah egidhaane thy….

    1. no name says:
      July 3, 2018 at 11:25 pm

      kokko buny kokko nujaha mo atoll eh….so who did it…ekankuri meehaku ekuh thakuraar nukuraane kamah ummedhu kuran

    2. Roxy says:
      July 3, 2018 at 11:26 pm

      Hehe mi kudhin sweet kamun x dw ??? ehr dhra vr ehcheh nuney itx nt a big deal itx ok dearie ??

    3. maya says:
      July 4, 2018 at 12:36 pm

      aww so sweet ..n the way kokko ga age kihaa vareh thrr??? thats not ur fault no name u r a sweet guy..

  118. maya says:
    July 4, 2018 at 12:36 pm

    aww so sweet ..n the way kokko ga age kihaa vareh thrr??? thats not ur fault no name u r a sweet guy..

  119. maya says:
    July 4, 2018 at 12:37 pm

    roxy i want u as a frnd..can we?????

    1. Roxy says:
      July 4, 2018 at 5:48 pm

      Hehe yhh y nt ???

  120. maya says:
    July 4, 2018 at 12:45 pm

    by**

  121. Hello says:
    July 4, 2018 at 2:11 pm

    I wanna tell you guys (twinkle, rana naash, no name maya etc..) that this is not a site for chatting inge. ?. Mee vaahakaige liyun theriyaa plus kiyuntherin vaahaka aa beheygothun comment kuran inna comment section eh.. Not a public chatting section.. Hehe hama bunely inge rulhi ais geneh noon???❤️?.

    1. maya says:
      July 4, 2018 at 6:53 pm

      okay ehen myhun ves thihen bunaa nama dhw..any way ve dhiya hurihaa kamakah vv bodah sorry…dhen eheneih nuvaane..insha allah

  122. maya says:
    July 4, 2018 at 6:54 pm

    okay ehen myhun ves thihen bunaa nama dhw..any way ve dhiya hurihaa kamakah vv bodah sorry…dhen eheneih nuvaane..insha allah..vvvv bodah sorryyy…vegen viyya maafu kohdhinun edhen..

    1. Twinkle? says:
      July 4, 2018 at 7:46 pm

      Yhh ur right maya… I agree van… n maya ge cmnt ah twinkle beynun dhethin ehcheh ithuru khlan… maya bunihn vedhiya hurihaa kamakh vvv bodah sry… maaf khdhevn othiyya mi hurihaa enmennah maaf khdhinun edhn… dhn twinkle mnah hihhvaru dhy visnadhin enmennah vvvv bodah thnx… dhn knme myhaku vs gwskh ehcheh bunumuge kurin positive kh visnaathi + ebuneveny kihaa hagygatheh eyga ekulevey ehcheh thw balaalaathi… insha allah dhn mikahala kameh aharumn ge faraathun thakuraareh nuvaane…

  123. rana says:
    July 4, 2018 at 8:21 pm

    i also twimkle dud…reethi koh bunii ma komme miihakuves happii vaane….dhen iraadhakurevviyyaa it will never repeat guys….

  124. rana says:
    July 4, 2018 at 8:45 pm

    jazakallah khairan.reetgi koh vaahaka dhekkii ma…nengey vaahaka dhahkayyaa komme miihevves..sad vaane dhoa…

    1. Roxy says:
      July 4, 2018 at 9:46 pm

      Guyx dhn sad nuvebr dw everyone knw u r sry mhru ehmmr miige fahun thi vrhaka dhkkun mnr nge ????

  125. Roxy says:
    July 4, 2018 at 9:46 pm

    Guyx dhn sad nuvebr dw everyone knw u r sry mhru ehmmr miige fahun thi vrhaka dhkkun mnr nge ????

  126. naash says:
    July 4, 2018 at 10:21 pm

    naash ge faraathn vx vvv bodah srry… n Roxy thnkxx a lot sis.. hithah araa dear ge kokko eh hunna nama eii haadha naseebu gadha kujjakaashey vrny. insha allah

  127. naash says:
    July 4, 2018 at 10:24 pm

    ngeytha e keehve kan??? eii thikahala dhatha eh e kokko ah dhevvi kamah takkaa… kokko eh hunna nama hama alhamdhulillah…

    1. Roxy says:
      July 4, 2018 at 10:30 pm

      Hehe unfortunately roxy ge kokko laanei kmun thfrdh kmh khfa ehr dhra vgnh noolhe ??? ekm vx roxy dhekeny thy hma roxy ge v close baehge gthuga n itx owk dearie dhn sry ey vx bunun mnr ??

  128. maya says:
    July 4, 2018 at 10:55 pm

    ohh love u roxy ..beeeeg koh..thi hama perfect sis eh

  129. maya says:
    July 4, 2018 at 10:56 pm

    and thnkss

  130. Someone says:
    July 11, 2018 at 7:27 pm

    Shiya kn irakn nxt part up Koh dheyny.
    Can’t wait anymore

  131. Baby girl ❤ says:
    July 15, 2018 at 6:16 am

    When next part dear….curiously waiting waiting……. plz plz make little fast to up ur story….

    ??????????

  132. Baby girl ❤ says:
    July 18, 2018 at 12:31 pm

    When next part?????????

  133. Stry Kiyaa ManS says:
    August 31, 2018 at 4:44 pm

    Hey shiya …… dear kn irakun stry up kurany. Avahah stry up koh dhey bala.waiting waiting.
    -salaam-??????

  134. Baby girl ? says:
    November 24, 2018 at 2:59 pm

    Shiya whn are going to start writing the story. Plx we all are waiting ?????

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