ވަކިވެދިޔަަޔަސް….(1)

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1. Koniraku next part upp kurani .. varah salhi vaahaka . Waitin next part ah hope varah avahah fonuvaane kamah???

2. Kuriah..

3. Nice

4. Hii.. this is my first story I’m writing to a page. I hope all the readers like this story.. please do comment and point out my mistakes so that i can improve

5. yeah kuriah…….. hope that this will be a nice story… but mihaaru genesdhey story thah kuru kamun dhw…. hehe no matter it is short gavaidhun up kohdheythi.. gud luck

6. Vrh vrh feshun reethi…. dailii kh up khladhehcheyy… nd I guess sifa krn thankolhh ithuru khliima perfect vrnii…. vrh vrh reethi… strii nimn dhn genesdhhcheyy… I hope nxt prt will be lng…lysm..
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7. thank you for your advice. I will try to improve insha allah

8. Masha Allah….Vrh furihama….Dhevana bayah inthizaaru kuran ?

9. Thanks u so much nei bunaa hitheh.. dhn in part tmrw up kohla dheynan insha allah

   1. Oh good thnks

10. maa shaa allah.. vrh reethi vaahakaeh.. thafaathu vaanehen heevaa vaahakaeh miee school kuhjeh ulheythy… teens ge story thah vrh thafaathu vaane.. adhi vrh reethi vaane.. hehe.. kuriyah oiyy bai thankolheh dhigu kohlahchey No one.. vrh furihama vaane eyrah.. mihaaru ves ehaa reehchey… kiyaa hithun huttaa nimeythy dhera vany.. but it’s ok as this is your first.. Gud luck!!! 🙂 vrh avahah kuriyah oiyy bai genesdhehchey.. curiously waitinggg… 🙂

11. Seriously is this your first story? ?. Its awesome. Waiting fot the next parts. Don’t give up continue writting storys u can do this. ?

12. thank u raiman.. insha allah i wont give up

13. Vaahakaige reethikoh kiuntherinnah ingeynee vaahaka thankolheh dhigukoh genesdhinumun.. adhi varah kurukoh fonikoh jumlathah athuraalumu.. mivaahaka feshun rangalhu.. ekam dhen anna partga vaane mi vaan ulhey gothuge hinteh dheyn kiuntherinnah.. thee ves molhukujjeh.. keep it up???

14. Thanks.. insha allah i will improve that in the next part

15. Masha allah. V reethi. ?

16. thanks.naju

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