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44 Comments!

1. Mives vaahaka eh tha.. feshunu iru v interesting.. heekuree v dhigu story eh kamah..

2. Mi koncheh tha. Story akah nuvey ??

3. Vaahaka liyaa mehunves huthuru dho..

4. Assalamalaikum .. This is my very first story .. Please read and comment

5. Hey aiphare.. Its oki for the first time ingeyyy u can do better keep trying. Ull succeed one day
   ❤️❤️??

6. Good try?? but try to improve next time… will wait for your next story… best of luck… ☺☺☺ …

   1. Thank you ?

7. Hiii….i m mai… Its nice….but ehaa hih hama eh nujeheyy…Btw comment mi kolh Lee hama hihvareh dhen vegen…u can do it…I knw aiphare ves varah comments kiyaa hih vaanekan…I m also a writer…but if some one say something negative plx take it positive… N don’t stop story write kurun….best of luck…love u…waiting for the your next story…..???????

8. Thankyou .. Love u more ☺️❤️❤️

9. heevaneee v kuda kujje hen story liyefa meeneee. so mee feshumeh kamah balamaaa.. u go girl.. u can do it.. but next time dhigu kohllathi ingey

10. ?? Thankyou .. Yes adhi 18 years eh nuveyy ..

    1. How old are you?

    2. Maybe same age as you ?

11. U can improve insha allah

12. Insha allah… Thankyou

13. Varah reethi?
    Vaahaka liyan masakah kohfiyaa liyeveene ?
    Try kuraa iru mi kala story eh super ???
    Keep trying???

    1. Thankyou

14. Mee dhen meehun vaahaka liyaa goiyy tha. Kiyaa meehun foohi vaa gothah vaahaka liyan yaa support libun madhu vaane ??

    1. Thankyou

15. Feshun vrh vrh vrh interesting.. plus vrh reethi.. ekam nimmaalaifa inyma ehaa ehaa eh noon.. mihen bunyma ehgthakah ves maayoos nuvaathi ingey… meethi miee kuriyah dhaan libey hiyy vareh kamuga dhekey.. so, miee feshumeh kamah balaifa story dhigu kollan v nu? story ehga maigandu massala eh onnan vaane.. fudheyvarakah bodu.. mi story ga e thankolhu madhu.. ekm you’ve tried.. so its really good.. ehn v ma kunneh himanaigen adhi vrh vrh reethi story eh kiyaalan libeyne kamah ummeedhu kuran.. avas mustaqbalegga… in sha allah.. 🙂 practice makes perfect. so try harder and correct the mistakes you’ve made in this writing. in sha allah, one day you could make a superb one… 🙂 and plus don’t loose hope and keep faith in allah.. 🙂 that is most important.. 🙂

    1. Thankyou

16. Vaahaka aky loabeege vaahaka eh noonen Ekam feshun dhn ok furathama faharaa balaafa …..keep it up????

    1. Thankyou☺️

17. Story is very interesting…love it!❤ Make it little longer, then it will be mre interesting..?..srry lahun commnt kollevunyma…i was damn busy! Curiously waiting for ur new story dear..lysm <3 <3

18. Thankyouuuu☺️☺️??and its okay lahun viyas . Love you even more ❤️❤️

19. plx dhevana faharu vaahaka eh liyumuge kurin defaharu visnaa fa hama jehey vaahaka liyaathi..plz..its a request..

    1. Thankyou

20. Aslu how old are you? N I love ur story u go girl u can do it

    2. Adhi 16 years ves Nuveyyy?? … Thankyou nadhee

21. This is not story it’s a thing that happened
    Is it real?

22. Nice try… keep it up…

    1. Thankyou

23. 10 years vehgeh tha ehen veeruh

24. Reethi vvv. 10 years vehgeh tha ehen veeruh

    1. Yes..between 10 n 16…a teenager

25. story vrh rythi… thankolheh dhigu kolli nama… btw loved it n waitin 4 ur next story ??

    1. Thankyou

26. Nice??

27. Thankyou

28. Assalaam alaikum aiphare…. ur story is very beautiful and i understand you just started story writing so pls take ur time to improve ur stories. I believe that one day u will become a great story writer. Best of luck :))

29. Oooh thankkk youuu soo muchh … insha allah .. thankkk youuuuuu

30. Omgshh aifa ur story is AMAZING. I know u said it would be nice but i didnt know ehaa reethi vaane kameh. Dont mind what people say ingey, no matter what anyone says i know u better than anyone and i know what a great author u are. Eyy u know what u shud post that story u wrote for our dhivehi work. That one was really nice. These rude ppl might regret saying those things bout u if u post that. Well anyways i didnt mean to say too much but good luck aifa. And to everyone readin this Aiphare is going to post a new story very soon insha allah so keep a watch out! ?

    1. Oh my goshhhhh .. thank you so much ..well i dont even know what to sayy soo just thannnnkkkkkk youu❤❤❤ insha allah ill post one sooner or later ; ))

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