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ހުރާގެ އިރުމަތީގައި ޒޯޔާ އިށީދެލައިގެން އިނީ ރަށާއި ގާތްތިމާގެމީހުން ދޫކޮށްލާފައި މާލެދިއުމަށް އޭނާ ނިންމި ނިންމުމަކީ ރަނގަޅު ނިންމުމެއްތޯ ވިސްނާލާށެވެ. އެވަގުތުކޮޅު އޭނާ ހޭދަކުރަމުން ދިޔައީ މާޒީގެ ހަނދާންތައް އާކޮށްލުމުގައެވެ. އޭނާގެ ކުރިމަތީގައި ޅައުމުރުގެ 2 އަންހެން ކުދިންނާއި 1 ފިރިހެންކުއްޖަކު އަތިރިމަތީ ދުވެ ސަކަރާތްޖެހުމުގައި އުުޅުނެވެ. އެކުދިންނަށް ބަލަންއިދެ އޭނާގެ މާޒީއަށް އޭނާ ޖެހިލިއެވެ.
އެއީ މީގެ 10 ވަރަކަށް އަހަރުކުރިއެވެ. އަހަރެން މިރަށުން ފުރައިގެން ދިޔަނަމަވެސް މިހަނދާންތައް އަހަންނާއި ވަކިވެގެން ދުވަހަކުވެސް ނުދާނެއެވެ. އަހަންނާ ޒިޔާދު އަދި ރިޝްމީގެ ގުޅުން ދުވަހަކުވެސް ކެނޑިގެން ނުދާނެއެވެ. ދިރިއުޅުމަކީ ހީވެސް ނުކުރާކަހަލަ ގޮތަކަށް ކުރިއަށްދާ އެއްޗެއްކަން މިއަދު އަހަންނަށް އެނގިއްޖެއެވެ. އަހަންނަކީ ދުވަހަކުވެސް މިހާއަވަހަށް ކައިވެނިކުރަން ބޭނުންވި މީހެއްނޫނެވެ. އަހަރެންގެ ހުރިހާވެސް ހުވަފެނަކީ އަހަންނަކީ ކިޔަވައިގެންހުރި މީހުންގެ ޤަދަރުލިބޭފަދަ އަމިއްލަ ފައިމައްޗަށް ކޮޅަށްތެދުވެ ހުރި އަންހެނަކަށްވުމެވެ. ނަމަވެސް މިއަދު އަހަރެންގެ ދިރިއުޅުމުގެ މުޅި މިޞްރާބުމިވަނީ ބަދަލުވެފައެވެ. އެތިބަ ކުދިންފަދައިން އަހަރެންވެސް އަތިރިމަތީގައި ދުވެ ކުޅެން އުޅުނު ހަނދާން އިއްޔެވީ ކަމެއްހެން އެބަހުރިއެވެ.
މަންމައާއި ބައްޕައަށް ސިއްރުން ގެއިން ނުކުމެގެން ޒިޔާދު އާއި ރިޝްމީއާއި އެކު ޒޯޔާވެސް ކުޅެން ނުކުމެ އުޅެމުންދާ މަންޒަރު އެވަގުތު އޭނާގެ ކުރިމަތީގައި ކުޅެންތިބި 3 ކުދިންގެ ސަބަބުން މޫނުމައްޗަށް ސިފަވަމުންދިޔައެވެ…
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Mee ur story eh noon dhw. Mi vaahakayaky vaahaka fothehge sifaaga nerefa oiyh vaahakaeh. Zoya ziya rishmy. I read this story.
reethi..2nd bai thankoleh digukoh genes dhinun edhen..when next part.?..nice fesumeh..keep it up..
Second person in liyefa second para ga frst person ah change vy?ethan kolhu v odd gotheh hurey.btw story v rythi vaane hn hyvany.name in vx v curios vejje.hope nimendhn kiyaalan libeyne kamah.gud luck?
awwn…. insha allah… nimendhn kiyaalan libeyne….thanks ingey,…♥?
nerefa hama eh nan thakeh beynun kohfa huredhaane dhw…… hiyaalu vx ehvatharu vedhaane dhw…. dhn vaahaka nimen dhn kiyaalaa…. eyrun thibeyfulhaa ah vx ingeyne nerifa oi vaahaka eh kan…?
heevey reethi vaanehen
heevey reethi vaanehen waiting for the next part avahah up kolachey
V reethi vaane hen heevey nimendhen kiyaalan beynumee
thak you… insha allah nimendhn kiyaalan libeyne…
Mi 100% completed story eh.. Aharen mi story ky enme faharaku noon.. This story’s authour aky iq.. Noon nama iqbaal.. For god sake,bring something new.. Dont be a thief.. Ehn myhunge bura masahkai copy koh adhi ehves changeh nugenes liyumaku dhn maa molhu kameh noon.. I already hate this.. ????
lets see dhw… nerifa oi story eh tho….
Hey.. alhugadu vx mi vaahaka keen.. baivaru mi copy eh dhw… mi feshun vx hama e gothah e othy…
Mii vaahaka ehtha??
Nunii paragraph eh tha?
Vaahaka dhigu koh liyan nukerenyaa nuliyan v nu..?
Dear im not supporting…but its only two paragraph up yet..who knows,she may have different ideas for the upcoming parts…
Dnt worry dear,ths is the beginning, even i came across two or three comment telling that my story is a coppy story..but i gav my best n completed my story..n im v.sure abt that no one will b able to say it was a coppy story honestly..keep faith in urself.gdluck dear..?????
100% copy eh v ma copy ey dhw bunaany.. Vaahakaige nan ves hama eh nameh. Furathama jumlathakuga ves nei thafaatheh.. Whn smeone is wrong, dont support them… This is not accepted… I hate to say this, but ehenas hama loabiveyey ge authour ge story eh my.. Maybe neekko thy iq nama bunelaign ulhn v nu dhw… Fothehge sifaiha publish kohffa oi proffesional writer eh ge story copy kohgen liyumaky varah dhashu dharajaige kameh.. U can write ur own ideas and plot.. Not someone else’s.. Urrrgg… I think i am wasting my time explaining this… E story ky kujjakah ingeyne my thedhukan… V salaam.
Copy eh v ma ey copy ey bunani…bookshop thakuga mihaaru vx mi foyy liben huhnaane…??…Allah ah takaa vx thedu hadaabala dhw…thi vaahaka eh nimen daa iiru konmes reemaa eh vx ahnaane….ehisaabun zoya ge married life halaak vaanii..dhn eyna divorce vagen beyrah kiyavan vx daane…rishmee ihnaanee vx azee kiyaa myhakaa…ziyad loabi vaane zoya deke….such a lier??
Hey someone..bunedhybala…thi story kiyaalaane gotheh…cause neynge mi vaahaka eh adhi ehnve..
=Tinkerbell=
Story available at bookshops
For ur kind information vaahaka nerefa otheekee esfiya inneh noon.. Si eah aharemennah nukiyeyyne copyy ekeyy… U guyss r so shame.. Kiyaalan vahaka eh liyuneema thi ehchehi govanee.. Aan mageyy vx kin thivaahaka .. Gaamu filn thah vx e balanee thin hatharu faharu .. Dhn bunan v star gold copy kuree eyy …nooneyy zee cinemaa vahkan kuree eyy..
LOL
Rishmy ziyadh and zoya are best freinds. Ziya loabivaany zoya dheke. Dhen rishmy ge kaaveni kurevey boy ge frendeh e rashah aisgen zoya aa dhimaave e dhemyhun like vaany. And ziyadh ekamaa v hasadha veri vaane. Azee ge fai ves bindheyne football kulhen ulhenikoh. Zoya ziyadh kamah azee ge gayah kula ves jahaaane eyna kondah araa ove. Aslu olhigen azee ah hureveyny ziya ge t shirt levigen. Ehnve zoya hykuraany eay azee kamah.. rishmy men ran kiyaa rey ves ziya try kuraane eyna loabivaa vaahaka bunan. But eyanayah foaneh aisgen nubuneveyne. And dhen ahnnaany azee and zoya ge love story. E dhemyhun marry kuraany v simple koh and marry kuraa iru ziyaa nuhunnaane rashugaeh. Zoya men marry kohgen furanvegen dhoani nahtaalaa thanun ziya ehn dhoannehga rashah lafaany. Ethanun edhemyhun fehnnaane. And dhen ahnnaany zoya and azee male ga ulhey life. And dhuvas kolhakun ziyadh ves ahnnaane kiyavan male. And v ginain ziya dhaane zoya men geyah. Dhen ekamaa azee hiyhama nujeheyne and shahku kuraane zoya yah. And ziya ulhey men gey kuhjakaa ziyaa yaa ves frnd vaane. Mee kuru hulaasaaeh. And mihen goss so many. So lets dhw. Mee copy ehkan noony noonkan engeyne thaa kuriah ohthaanga. Good luck for ur story. We are readers. We never lie. Lets wait and read.
Assu vx..ekam reader ge comment ga ebain mistake eh..zoya marry kuraanii shimaau kiyaa myhakaa i think…azee aee rismee ge husband….mii copy story eh
Haadha molhu kudhin kolhekey dw… miha molhu kudhin kolheh adhi mi dhekuny alah… kuda kuda than kolheh fenunakas neygeyne ethereyga oeth ehcheh… gamaaras ther dhn boduvaru… alskah noon dw thihen thikiyany… kurin faharves copy ekey kiya kiya ovva liye ninmy … ehn ky meehunves knme parteh kiyamun dhiyaeee nimunu iru mulhin thafaathu… heekuri gothakah ekkamehves nuvi…
alhey copy akas original akas mivaahaka kiyaa hiy vejje, i want to read it,cant wait for the next part. people will judge make rude remarks,but dnt let it stop u from doing wat u love. best of luck 🙂
Alhugaaa es kin mi storyy… Ahmed iqbal ge story eh mii… V v v v riithi story eh miii… Dhn neynge bunaaakh siidhaaa oiy gothah kameh miothiikiii..m e varu hndhaineh neh… Btt hama e nan thah… N story ge name ess hama same…
Feshun varah reethi.. Waiting neekko ?
thanks oll….. meege feshun ehn vaahaka yakaa ehvahtharu vumaky alhugandu ge kusheh nun…. alhuganduge hiyaal aee…. n alhugandu thikiyaa vaahaka eh nuves kiyan…. hope mi vaahaka nimendhn hurihaa kudhin ves kiyaane kamah…
U thief.. I hate you so much.. Dnt u dare to lie!!!! My nulahiku famous v story eh.. Thihaa hihvvareh huriyya liyeba dhw looser…
Mai ves keen mi story… hama gaimuves feshun hama same…
Mihaaru ves athuga eba oii mi story… mi thaa photo eh ves post eh nukurevey vihya
ehkka baigandhu feshee ey dho eyna ebunanee mi thafaathu vahakaekey dhen konha vhthareh thi jassanee madhun thibebala engey meehun maithirivegen thibeema nimuneenun nukiyaa neyngey meehunkiyaanee ekamaku iru iru kolha govaane vaahaka haadha lahey avas avas hama thimeehun onthaku mijehunee
Aslu vx i agree with u anonymous.. Mivaahaka adhi 2 part vx nunerevi ulhenikoh ekujja eba faleehai kureyy…any wayy waitingg for next part?…
insha allah v avahah up kohdheynan 2 part…. scul test there v ma kudakoh bxy…. thank you….
mi vaahaka salhi vaane kamah ummeedhu kuran eba
thank you…?
Thienmen thikiyaa story ehge nan bunedhybala eyrunrnun aharenaves engeyni thi vaahaka aa ehvahtharukameh?? and…. neekko don’t think about others and keep it up