ލޯބި ވެވުމުން ……….20 (ފަހުބައި)

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1. yey mi first dho

   1. Thanx for waitingg

   2. I am so jealous of u btw stry is awsmmm

   3. Awwh..thanx reen

2. Ma first dho. Adhi nuves kiyan. Thank u noor.

   1. Wc shan

3. Yes

4. yeyyyy 2 nd dhw… vvvvvvvobi… salhi

   1. Thanx dear

5. Ehves reecheh noon yaaniu maruveema

   1. Sorry to dissapoint u

6. Ehvx reehcheh noon.. insaanakaa jinni akaa gulhuvey tha.. ahchee.. yaaniu vx maraalee.. husnaa vx.. pis pis.. boahalaaku.. mikahala ninmun meehun ninmaatha.. ma hama kos vejje.. chee..

   1. Ebunaahen
      Jinni akaa insi eh e gulhuvee.
      Mi in midhenee goas message eh

   2. Sorry to disappoint u..but mee hama khiyaalee vaahakaeh

7. wow… nice cute lovely… hama angain bas hutifa. mi story nice kamun. new story eh dhen kiyaalan libeynee kon irakun tha????

   1. Thanx Aarny…adhi nenge dear

8. Storyy nice.. ekm yaaniu maru veema varah dhera vejje.. ehvx varakah hiyeh nukuran jiaan kahala jinni akah gulheyne kamakah.. hehe.. ekm aslu v v salhi storyy… ?

   1. Mee jinni story ehvyma egothah ending mi genaee…anyways. thanx

9. Ma sha allah…vaahaka vv reethi….ehen vaahaka eh kiyaalan libeyne kamuge ummeedhuga hurin….

   1. Thanx Azu..hopefully

10. Wow.. mivareh neiyy… jinni akaa gulhunyma v v v reethi.. omg… reethi kamun bas huhtifa… lol.. just kidding… ehvx reehcheh noon.. cheedi.. story nice ekm ninmun chee.. yak.. jinni akaa.. lol.. kada vaane.. ??

    1. Copying me not good

    2. Kada vaane ah bunelan beynunvany hama eggothakahves kadaeh nuveyey..n hurihaa readers beynun vaagothah ending aumaky vaanekameh noon..

    3. egolaa mihaaru hunnaanee vrh kataafa dho noor… hahahaa.. btw story habeys ingey…

    4. Aslu evves meehaku rulhi anna kahala echcheh bunaakah beynumeh noon.but v put so much effort to bring even one part of the story..even if u dnt like the story also u can express ur views with manners..

11. sabahey mee hiyaalee vahaka ekey reethi mivahaka ekamu aaniu maruveema kada

    1. Thanx dear…n sorry to disappoint u..

12. alhey yaaniu hama maraalynu … huh.. ekam ves v reethi mi story … waiting 4 next story <3

    1. Thanx naju

13. A very unexpected ending,
    And Shanaya living with Jinns. Anyhow thanks for this lovely story. I really enjoyed reading , but I didn’t expect yaaniu and mom to die.. goodluck

    1. Thanx Subaa

14. Nice mi ninmun vx ekm I thought Jian sacrifice vegen yaaniu aa shanaya kamah eky ulheyny.. Accident vy iru vx me hykury. Jian sacrifice vegen e dhemyhun salaamai kurany ey.. But this ending is also very different and nice.. Keep up. Waiting for another story from you

    1. Thanx Lim.

15. Yaniu maraly kyvetha ..alhey …n jinniaka insiakah marry thikuruvy . .n kuhliakah 2 y ge kuhjeh kihineh libny .. btw nice n hykuran noorge ehn stry eh kiyaln libeyne kmah

    1. Thanx Rau.n after marrying 3yrs they got a 2yr baby..its written dear..

16. Alhey kihineh thi ninmaalee. Vaahka kithanmehaa ves rythi. Ekamu dho ninmun ninmaafa in goeh.. Eoh lobi yaniu ves maraalee. V dhera.. Hiyaalee vaahaka eh vyma mihen vedhaane but hageegathah ves jinninge dhunie ah dheveybaa ey.. Dhn yaniuge mamma menves sanaya eh nuhoadhaatha.

    1. Thanx Yailee..hoadhaane..but jian ekkoh dhiya hisaa shana ge e life dhakkaafa inyma ebai naee

17. Kobaitha yaaniu aa shanà ge dharifulhu..shanaya preg viennu.

    1. Yaaniu nd shanaya ge baby maruvi vaahaka liyefa othenu..ragalha stry nukiyaa suvaal kurany

    2. Thanx for the comment both of u

18. hama heekuri gotha mivii… vaahaka feshigen ves ehaa hama nujehe… ehen v ma mivaruge vaahaka ehge nimun ves onaanii hamanujehe gothakanu… I’m not kidding. Vaahaka kamaku nudhei…

    1. Vaahaka feshigen nimendhen kiyaalyma varah ufaavejje. N let me tell u…im also no different frm u..so its not possible to meet each n every readers expectations..

19. Nice story…..

    1. Thanx Zee

20. Kobaatha jian aai hedhi ulhu jinni.. Ejinni ah ves v gotheh neynge.. Adhi yaniu mamma nuhoadhaatha sanaya eh sanaya gehligenneh noolheytha. Vaahaka kithanme haa ves rythi ekamu mi suvaaluthakuge javaabu nulibi vaahaka nimuny adhi eves jinni akah libigen…

    1. Thanx dear.gelligen ulheyne..but shanaayaa e life ah dhiyaeema ebai nugenaee..n mee jinni vaahakaeh veema jinni ah elibuny…n mee hama khiyaalee vaahakaeh..dhen jian aa hedhi ulhun jinni ge mathin handhaanves nethuny..mistake balaigannaane kamah heekuran..

21. Aslu vaahaka varah reethi ekam nimun gothun meeni katu vefa

    1. Thanx Shai..n v.dheravejje beynunvi gothah nimun nugenesdhevunyma..

22. Yaaniu Maraalee Kyhkurantha ..? ?

    1. Sorry dear

23. Mi 1st v reethinimun enmebeybun gothah thi ninmaalee adhives noor ge reethi story ehge inthixaar ga….thanx noor

    1. Thanx lily

24. Story varah unique ???

    1. Thanx dear

25. Jiaan aki muslim jinnieh ves nun. muslim jinni ge sifa huthuru nuvaane. ekam ves yaaniu maraalaafa jinni akaa ae gulhuvee. vaahaka furihama vees yaniu maraa nulinama. vaeah vai ninmun.

    1. Sorry to disappoint u dear..mee hama khiyaalee vaahakaeh jinnieh insaanehge loabi kaamiyaabu kuri gothuge…

26. Haadha reehchey ninmungadaa ehchihi. V.nice story. Good job.

    1. Thanx dear

27. V fahun mi story kiyan feshyvx…vaahaka kiyamun dhiyairu v kamudhey kuriyah dhiya gothaamedhu…bt end v hadi…yaaniu n shanaaya maa bodahvx gulhey…yaaniu maraa nulaa jian e dhemeehun ge life in dhurah fonuvaalinama it would be a nice ending…anyway noor ge ithuru story akah inthizaaru kuran…

    1. Dhen mifaharu veegoiy dhw..thanx dear

28. Esfiyain mihaareethi nimumeh ai story eh adhi nukiyan v salhi…luv u noor

    1. Thanx soanoo

29. Mivaahaka varah reethi koh genesdhemun aiee. But ninmaali goy kamaku nudhey. There was nothing real.

    1. Mee hama khiyaalee vaahakeh dear

30. Nimeynee dho. Ithuru vaahaka eh annaane kamah inthizaaru kuran. Meethi v. Salhi.

    1. Thanx dear

31. Noor mi story vv reethi keep it up.hiyaalee vahaka aky beynun gothakah liyeveyne echeh.vahakaga vaa komme kameh hagygathakah vaakah nujehey.kiyaameehun beynun vaha gothakahnun story nimman jeheynyky.moyaan thakehtha comment mikurany..amilla meehunge galhikan furathama visnala ehn meehunge stories ah achi kiyaairu..d grade kan…

    1. Thanx Hau.haters will hate..y waste time on them…

32. alhe dhn hama mi nimunytha? noor ge ehn vaahakaeh avas musthagubalehga kiyan libeyne kamh heekuran.. vaahaka vv reethi..

    1. THANKS DEAR

33. Mi storyge ninmunvx v v reethi .. aslu ninmun hadi kamah e bunaameehun e ulheny reethikamun j vegen .. alhanula noor .. aslu jinni storyrhga real life aa ehgoi nuvaanekan gabool kuran v r meehun .. keep it up noor .. n thanks for the story??

    1. Thanx Ridhi

34. Story akee kiyuntherin liyaa ehcheh noon. Story liyaa meehaa ah ending gennan vaa gotheh engeynee. Enmen hinhama jehey gothakah nuliyeveyne ekakah ves. Keep going noor. Ur story is awesome. Waiting for ur next story. Unmmeedhu kuran anehkkaaves biruveri story eh genesdheyne kamah. And avahah upkohlladhineema varah bodah thanks.

    1. Thanx Princess Yaa..love ur comment.

35. Story v v reethi .. jinni vahakaehga mi varuge reethi ninmumeh nudheken.. thanks dear noor❤❤❤

    1. Thanx Ham..happy to hear that

36. Wow. Nice story. Mivaru reethi vaahakaeh adhi nukiye. Thanks fur the beautiful story dear

    1. Thanx Sheen.sweet words dear

37. Mivaruge reethi story eh adhi nukiye.. thanks noor..??

    1. Thanx Faree.varah ufaavejje..

38. Vv.reethi vaahakaeh minimuneee. Vaahaka feshuneessure nimendhenves vv.furihama. waiting for ur next story dear noor

    1. Thanx Shanaya..ur comment is so cute dear..in sha allah after Ramxaan.

39. Heekuri gotha dho mi v ? Shanaya nd jiaan gulhuneema vara ufaa vehje..stry ge nimune vara reethi…Waiting for your another story ❤

    1. Thanx Rainy princess..happy to c ur comment..

40. Kiyaahithun indha thi ninmaalee. Noorah bunelan othee haadha reethi vaahakaekey . Thi gothugai kuriyahdhaashey.

    1. Thanx michle…v.happy to know that..

41. V.furihama vaahakaeh. V.reethi. thanks noir

    1. Thanx for the lovely comment dear

42. nice ending hope kuran varah avahah new story eh kiyaalan libaynekamah thankx ??

    1. Thanx nux..love ur comment dear

43. Nice, varah thafaathu story eh, new story akah inthizaaru kuran..????

    1. Thanx Eeny..hopefully

44. Oops ..neyguny ingey noor …v beynun nooruge frndakah vaan can i

    1. Rau Y not..i wud love to..

45. Kon irakun dhen noor ge ehen stry eh fenaany……v.reethi ninmun

    1. Thanx @I..hopefully after Ramzaan…

46. Story feshubissurevs v reethi. BT ninmaliir kihineh mivy. Kamunudhanieh noon ekm yaniu n shanaya gulhuvafa Jinan ah konmes Ehen jinnieh hodhadhin nama maa rythivyshen heevey. Hope 2 c your new story

    1. Thanx cenhi..aslu vaahaka feshunyves shanaayaa ah jinni jian dheke loabi vevumun…….anyways happy to c ur comment dear..

47. Mi part ga yaaniu died vi fahun ves shanaya yaaniuge athuthereyga indhe roifa eba in ….ethankolhu ekani mashah faahanga v ehen noony hurihaa ibaaraatheh ves v reethi…intresting…waiting ur another story…❤️?

    1. Even i noticed that dear..it was a mistake. Happy to c ur comment Ana.

48. ma v like ve story ye mee. v v v salhe. hama habeys eingeyyy noor.????????

    1. Thanx for the lovely comment yaakko

49. Vaahaka nimunu iru ves dhn huri jinni ah v gothe neygunu..

    1. Aslu ebai miss vefa einy…next time will try to avoid such mistakes dear..

50. Lol.. i didn’t mean to copyy yuhh… and noor.. aslu v v v bodah sorryy… egothah comment kurevunyma.. aslu story v nice ekm yaaniu maru v ma dhera vegen goss ehn kiyunyy.. sorry dear.. aslu story liyan noor v molhu.. ending me ah kamu nidhiya vaahaka aslu bunelyy… aslu average koh story habeys.. sorry once again.. hope to see yur new story soon..

    1. Its ok dear..aslu story thihaa interestaa eku nimumaa hama ah kiyaaleema varah ufaavejje…n nimun Ramee unmeedhu kuri gothah nugenes dhevuneema sorryy..

51. Khiyaaly vaahaka eh ga gaboolu nukurevey kanthah thakuge vaahaka liyeveynetha?

    1. Nuliyeveyne kameh engifaeh nei dear..

52. Warah warah reethi ???❤️

    1. Thanx jummu..hapy to c ur comment dear

    2. Yap I used to read each and evry part but I just commented?❤️
       And your welcome ❤️❤️

    3. Yeah I used to read each and every part
       But I just commented ?❤️ Your most welcome ❤️

    4. ?????

53. Scul ga vaahaka liyaairu gaboolu kurevey kanthahthakuge mahchah vaahaka liyan bunefa onani…ehenve hama ahaaly…nd vaahaka rythi ekm ninmun hyvani v avas aruvaalaafahen…aslu mi ah vure rythi ninmumeh geneveyne

    1. Thanx sama..but mi faharu veegoiy dhw..next time will try to bring something real..

54. Varah ReethI, kobaa jiyaan aa hedhi ulhunu jinni…

    1. Thanx dear…i missed that part..mistake balaigannaane kamah ummeedhu kuran

55. vvvv reethi

    1. Thanx Maree..

56. V v reethi… Bunelan othy mee story haadha reechey.. Ekam story nimuniima vara dheravi..
    NOOR god bless you all ves..
    Inshaa Allah…

    1. Happy to c ur lovely comment Sheni..

57. Varah hadi nimmun. Hw can a human live in jinni ge dhuniyeyga.

    1. Sorry to disappoint u Kudaa..next time will try to bring somethn real..

    2. It’s possible kudaa

58. v v v v v v v reethi waahaka eh mee.. aslu adhives mi vaahaka nunimmaa kuriyah gendhaane nama ey hithah araa..mee mi site ga hud gavaidhun kiyaa hama ekani waahaka. noor you are v talented. goodluck. adhi mikahala stories liyahchey..

    1. Happy to know that u liked my story that much. Thanx HUD.

    2. ur most wc noor.. 🙂

59. Hama vrah hadi mi vaahaka geri bakari aa insaanun gulhun hingeema dharin libeytha. Insaanun naa jinnin ufahdhavaafai vanee thafaath dhe naslakun ehenveema e akun dharin ufan nuvaane.mikahala vaahaka liyaa meehun nah faafa vaane

    1. I didnt have any wrong intention dear..n faafaverinnaky kobaa kan dhenevodigen vany hamaekani Maai.Allah..

    2. vrh late vejeh rwply dheyn bdss ekam mi massage fenifaa hithah erybunanamey… alhugadaa jinni avalaigen ulhunu iru jinni akaa insiakaa dhenasleh kamaku dharin libey nd they have there own world…so before. You say somethink think about it ……u ehen meehakaa ehen govumaakee meeha anehhkaa kufuruvany kan neyngeytha…keerithi quraan ga vess eboy jinni vaahaka emyhunge vess dhari faakolhu vaa vaahaka … ezmaanuga vess jinni naaa insinge gulhun vaakan

    3. nd faafa libey nulivey kada elhigen bunnan thee kaaku…meehaa dheenun beyru vaa iru vess neyngeytha

60. Vara reethi mivaahaka .. Bt jinni akaa insiakaagulhuneema v dhera

    1. Happy to c ur comment dear..next time will bring somthn different..in sha allah

61. Mi vaahaka varah reethi but nimun ehaa reehcheh noon.. I hope miah vureh reethi vaahaka eh genesdheyne kamma..

    1. Happy to c ur comment Serious..dhen mifaharu veegoiy dhw.. hopefully will b back again….

62. Nice

    1. Thanx dear

63. Alhe nimuny dww.. So sad..stry totally v v reethi hama… Keep it up my dearr..n hope kuran n inthixaaru kuran noor ge stry eh varah avahah kiyaalan libeyne kamah..ingey dearr??

    1. Thanx dear..

64. Varah reethi ninmun.. Noor ge ithuru story eh kiyaalan libeynekameh unmeedhu kuran..

    1. Thanx dear…love ur comment

65. Mi vaahaka v v reethi. Nimun ves varah reethi. jinni vaahaka eh veema jinna aa gulhigen n imunyma hama reethi vaany ves. Jiaan shanaaya dheke vee thedhuveri loabeege badhalu jiaan ah libijje 🙂
    Noor ge ehen vaahaka akah inthizaaru kuran.
    Keep it up Noor 🙂

    1. Thanx for the lovely comment..

66. Nimum V reethi yaaniu maruvun eymivaahakaige emme maslahathu ragalhu goh mihaaru yaaniuahvves adhi moahvves kureveyne shakuvaa ehneh dhelobiveringe hayaathsh bahaaru moosun genesdhee fa vaahaka nimmaali kamattakaa Noor ah thanks????????❤❤❤?

    1. Thanx dear..happy to know that

67. Mivaahakaige nimun Vvvree thi emme reethi yaaniuge maru mihaaru yaaniu shanaa ge momge evves shakuvaaeh neh jiaan shanaage dhuniye Vvv salhi vaahakaige emme maslahathu raglhakah dhemeehun maruvun emmeh salhee thanks Noor ?❤❤???

    1. Awwwhhh..im so happy to know that u liked my story that much..thanx dear..

68. Alhe yaniu hama maruveeenu? ekamuvx reethi story .??

    1. Thanx Axoo.

69. Kihineh frndakah vany vs ..no information abt u noor …i dnt have ure phn no n fb id also dhn how ..can u send mi youra phn no r fb id

70. Bt i knw public ga personal inf nudheveynekun ..bt also ..umydhu kuran knmes kahahala inf eh libey e kamah

    1. Thanx for undstanding..

71. Wow….Varah reeethi ninmun… Unique …Aamukoh jinni eh vehjehya maraalaany… Thankyou soooo much for this story. .Totally loved it …❤❤❤

    1. Thanx for the lovely comment Shifa

72. nice story <3

    1. Thanx dear

73. V thafaathu ninmumeh hurihaa jinni story thakuga jinni maraalaafa insaanun molhu libey gothah ekam hiyaalee story ehviyyaa migohves v reethi thanx noor

    1. I like ur comment..thanx jimeeeee

74. Ahan mi kiyaafa hee hee halaaku… Shahaadeh mi bunny… anehkaa vaahaka eh noon ingey.. comment thah…BTW story hama gadha ey keep up the good work

    1. Thanx juliet..

75. Dear Noor, mi story vareh neh hama bunelan Othy.. Hurihaa part eh ves kee hama kehtheri kameh Nethi.. Konmeh new part akah ehvarah inthixaaru kurevunu.. Meehaku kiyaa ehchakah liyaa comment akah Noor dissapoint vaakah nujeheyne.. Mee hama ekani hiyaalee vaahaka eh real life ga hingaafa huri kameh ge vaahaka eh noon.. Ehmen ehgothakah Hurihaa story eh ge ending genes dheykan nujeheyne.. Egothah comment kuraa meehun amihlayah story liyunyma nimuny ehnun.. Noor ge mi story hama v v v habeyss???.. Ummeedhu kuran mikahala new story eh genes dheyne kaman.. Gudluck Noor.. Keh nuvegen comment mikohlee.. Luv ur stories?????

    1. Awwwwh Shau..i really appriciate such readers like u…love ur comment dear..hopefully will b back with a new story..

76. adhi mihaathanah kiyunu biruveri vaahakaige therein enme reethi nimumeh genes dhin eh vaahaka mee. hama asluves mi bunee.. v hithah araa migothah vaahakaige nimun inna story eh kiyan libeyne namaey… adhi v reethi vees jinninge dhuniyeyge vaahaka thafaathu gothakah genes dhin nama. btw this story. just wow. haha. n mi storyge ninmun gadivegen ulhunu kudhinnah bunelan othee konmehen abadhaku nujehey jinni maraalaakah. mi vaahaka mi nimunee enme insaafah.. cheediyey kiyaa cmnt kohfa ethibi kudhinnah hiyeh nuvey furathama galamu kuri ves jahssaalan engeyne heneh mikahalage reethi vaahakaeh liyelan. so. ?? n dhuniyeyga hageegathuga dhimaa vaa kan kamugaves miulhenee buhdhi gabool nukurevey varuge kan kamaa dhimaa vaa varun. so mikahala khiyaalee vaahakaehga nujehey konmehen thimeehunge moya sikundiah gabool kurevey kanthah thakeh nujeheyne hama konme vaahaka liyun therieh liyaakah. noor. your the best. ?????

    1. Thanx yaanaa..im sure u will also b cute as ur comment…just love ur comment dear..hope to meet u when i come back with a new story

    2. sure. waiting

    3. ?????

77. Mi story vrh vrh salhi.. meesh vrh dhuvas vehje mikahala story eh kiyan nulibign ulheythaa.. bt mi story hama vrh vrh rythi. Knme baeh vx kiyan. Ekm comment nukon mihuhnany ehkn nimen dhn.. i hope vrh avahah mikahala ehn story eh kiyaalan libeyne kamah..
    negetive comments vx ahnaane eyah maa bodah visnaign ulhen vehjihyaa kuriah nudheveyne.. eii noor ah libey kuri erumeh kamah visnaign noor ge enme best dheveythw try kuran vaane..

    1. Thanx mee sh.v.v.happy to c ur comment dear..hope u will wait for my next story too…

78. Story is good
    Ekam biruveri vaahaka ekey nubunevey nei
    You can loabeege vaahaka key or loabi and hithaama

    1. Awwwh…next will definitely try to catogarize the story well…anyways thanx dear…

79. mi story in baehfaharu sifavany beauty and the beast story aa…. hehe

    1. Anyways..hope u liked the story dear.

80. jannath is my daughter’s name too, vaahaka varah salhi. ninmun thankolheh avas kollafa inkamah faahaga kurevenee

81. jannath is my daughter’s name too, vaahaka varah salhi. ninmun thankolheh avas kollafa inkamah faahaga kurevenee??

    1. Masha Allah..Jannath is a cute name..❤

82. vaahaka kithanme haa ves reethi. Emotions were expressed beautifully. Ending was surprising. Notice kurevunu fahun fahun ais story kuda koh rush koh laafa in kan. You write with a lot of details, but shanaya’s mom’s death and yaaniu’s were summarised. Also Diana’s jinni admirer is also not at sight. Plus, Yaaniu keeh ve baa fanditha hadhaa meeheh kairi ah nudhiya ee?
    But anyways, the story was nicely planned. Story plot can still do better. Overall, this was an interesting story 🙂

    1. Thanx Raanee…i really appriciate ur lovely comment dear..ya..i wanted to finish the story b4 Ramxaan Starts…next time will take enough time to complete the story..in sha Allah..❤

83. ninmum warah warh kada igey..:/

84. So sad ??????

85. Noon story hama habeys ninmun vx Mashah vrh kamudhey cuz this is Jinni story eh.. Vvv reethi waiting for next story??hama mikahala reethi story eh genes dheyne kamah ummeedhu kuran??

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