ހިތް އެކީ ދެވިއްޖޭ…37

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1. Kaakubaa first? ???

   1. Thi dhen myhaku ahane echehtha fahe.. Kaehnnu first aky

   2. Ingijje mivaa gotheh.. Thihen ahaigen vx myhunge samaalukan nuhoadhigen dhw kae thi ulheny

2. Thankyou guys for ur support and thanks to the ones who tell my whats wrong in my stories!! cx really! i just got kind a power where i just thought to try my best to prove that i really can do what i love! And i wont give up! i will try my best till everyone say that I can write stories i can do what i love! and well dont compare me with succcchhhh a great writer i dont even think im the best one even in esfiya! But i hope there will b a day when even i can see ppl giving good ones and not bad ones but it doesnt mean i feel bad as i just said i just got a spirit kind a thing which just made me more confident to write well and just do my best in everything! and to the who called me sis! i forgot ur name! well u can call me ingey im glad 😉 tc and c u guys tomorrw morning.. Bye

3. Abadhu eh vaahaka eh hurihaa ep ga

4. love u ryn

5. Wow
   Speechless
   Adhi eh part Morey up khdheeba please ?

6. Wow. Varah reethi

7. puh! maa kuru ???

8. ebunaa hen ad hi eh Pratt plese

9. Aharen echcheh bunee baeh readers over vegen dhaathee. Ekamakuves ryn ah bunelan. U cn do better than this.

   1. 5 ingili fas varah hunnany dhw..
      Ehen v ma eki meehunge hunnaanii eki hunaruthah…baeh meehu ehaa molheh nuvaane n baeh meehunah reethi vedhaane varah hadi ehchehves..
      E usoolun min bunii im proud of her ey. Cox i like it …
      N mulhi esfiyaiga ryn dhefayey buniii ryn ah v varakun nuvatha engey fenvarehga mikan ebakure ey .ehen v ma..
      Mee hama hagee gathugaives vaahaka liyaa hiyy vaa kuhjehge gothugai mashah fennaathiii proud vanyy…
      Liyuntherikamuge fenvaru konne gothakah huttas she try ebakureythaa mikan kuran thats y…
      Maaa over v ki nun …
      Magey dhekey goii bunii
      Faharehgaa ves thibeyfulhaa dhekey goii mi gothaa ehgoiy vaakah nujehey…

10. ma sha allah vaahaka v reethi…. Good Luck… adhi mirey 1 part genes dheyba plx …

11. Mirey dhn neii thr ehn prt ehh??? Mirey adhi eh prt Plllllxxxxx

12. Adhi eh prt pls mirey..vaahaka reethi kamun

13. Ryn thank u. Adhi eh part plx

14. Inu thibunee thedheh

15. Vvv salhi mi part vxx.

16. Toooooooo short ryn……. bt nice ingey

17. Samaah.. why are u not leaving me kia yaan dheke loabi vaairu vx.. I tried a lot to love you sam but i couldnt.. Annd zaain plx gabool kohbba yaan vx kia dheke loabivaa kamah.. And help me yaan hoadhan.. Cox yaan can only make me happy..

    1. R u all the caracters in the story 4 real. Or just fun . M confussin

    2. Koachekey hithaa thi ulheny masheh nulhen gaboolu kurakah…

    3. Alhaanula dharifulha!!! dad dharifulhah e soru hoadha dheynan

    4. Alhaanula dharifulha!!! dad dharifulhah e soru hoadha dheynan

    5. ohh really dad….thnxs u Sooo muchhiy

    6. Zain mashah maafukurey ma loabivany kiara dheke.. Ahannah visnijje

    7. keekey hithah araagen tha thi ulheny???? bunefymeh nun magey firimeehaa eba othey nunidhifa….

18. Wow ryn v v v reethi mi bai vx . Alhey ryn shaff vx story ehliyefa onnaaany. Rangalhu tho balaadhy faanan tha???? N mi vaahaka ma vaaadha nukureveyne ehn story aakaa. Ehaa vx furihama. ??????

    1. No. Thidhogen.dheevaana hama enme reethee.evaahakaige jumlakaaves gaaiy nukurey mivaahaka. Shaff ah adhi thi nukiyenee reethi vaahakaeh

    2. Nuney reethi baivaru vaahaka kiyan but mivaahaka v intrestin n i mi vaahaka ah v inthizaaru vx kureve eba☺?

    3. ehen viyya thedhah bunebala dheevaana ah vure mivaahaka reethitha?

    4. Ushally gadha . Agreed with her

    5. Dheevaanaa ey???? Nukiyan thi vaahaka eh. Kn thaaku iny

    6. its not real ushaali. huh LOL

    7. liyuntheringe bayah gos esfiya ah dhey eyrun fennaane.

    8. Who knows mithaa ulhey ayaan vx kiyaaraa vx . E lol vaa varu ge kameh tha .haha. n thnks inge dheevaanaa fan????

    9. ur wc shaff. mashah eyruves heevejjey shaff evaahaka nukiya a. va salhi story eh ee. i just loved it

    10. Haha ehen viyya mire thi vaahaka kiyaafa nideyny . Hehe

    11. Aslu dheevana ahvure mi vaahaka maa bodah ves reethi…. Dheevaana ves hadi ekey noon but mi vaahaka enme reethy….

    12. dhevana fahun fahun ais v hadi v… ahrn mi dheevaana kiyan kurin moya vi myheh… bt fahun bored vi misha afxal aa marry kurryma…

    13. “Dheevaanaa” akee kaakuge story eh tha? Nufenigen miulheny!?

    14. Dheevana aky aslu shine ge story eh.. Ekm innnany esfiya ge name n register vefa indha upkohfa

    15. Hm kiyaafin dheevaanaa . Reathi dhn dhw . But mivaahaka v heart touchin 4 me . ☺

19. Vv reethi. Next part ge inthizaruga…

20. Thankolhe kuru dhw mi part. Hehehe. Reethi hama. If ayaan is a story ge hero. Aslu ayaan ge baa thankolhe madhu. I mean aliyaa n ayaan dhw mee main characters. Ayaan ah vure zaain men ge baatha thankolhe gina hen heevanee. Ayaan ge feelings tha boda genes dheynama. Ayaan aliyaa(kiyara) aa medhu visnaa varaa dheken beynun vaa kamaa etc. Ayaan ge hithuga kiyaa aa medhu feelings huri kan mihaaru readers ah othee engifa. Ehenveema dhuruga hunan eyna ninmaan huttas ekamun undagoo vaa varaa eyna ge feelings boda genaama story ithurah furihama vaane hen heevanee.

    1. Gud point

21. Thedheh ryn adhi eh part plxxxxxx. Vvvvv nice…

22. vrh vrh nice.dhn oii part kiyan hama keii madhu vefa..

23. Nyx…bt mi story ga sifa kurun n beykaaru vaahaka maa bodu…ekan rangalhu kollaifi nama varah salhi vaane kanneyge

24. Ryn ge huriha stories eh kiyan.. Bt v faahaga khlkeve, ryn ge knme story ehggavx v over react vaane, n knme episide ehgga vx hus eh kameh vaany, v madhun haadhisaathah badhalu vaany, abadhu vx aaliya ayaan dheke lwbuva vaahaka, eyna fenumun goi goi vaahaka..abadhu ekan thah vaany, e vx sifa kh deefa innaanu over iver reacted kh knme faharehgga, mi kahala beykaaru baithaka hure story innany abadhu eh level ehgga, eha adventouros eh nun.. Me reethi vaahakeh, bt iverreactiin kuda khllai, sifa koh dhinun reethi kohlleema vaahaka v v furihamavaane.. I jst wanna be true, vaahaka v v reethi, bt genes dhey goi kamaku nudhe,

    1. aslu mivaahakayah thedhu thedha faadeh kiyaameeha aa dhimaaha dhen thibi meehun echchehi govan fashaane. hama hageegathugaves mivaahaka akee meehaku moyavaahaa reethi vaahakaehnoon. sifakurunves dialogues ves gr5 ge kujjakuves liyaa fenvaruga mihuree. jumlathakugaves ehves fashuvikameh hiyygaimu kameh nuhurey. dhivehivahah huthuru aruvaafa liyefa oiy bodu haasareh dhen. boduthakurufaanu vaahaka ahvure vaahaka dhigu. ekamaku maagina kameh nuhinga. offehun geyan gein ofeehah. dhen magumathin ayaan fenuneema nimunee. meehunge hithaa kulhelaafa romantic feeling eh noonee sad feeling ehves touching gothakah genesdheykan neyge. ekamakuves mee binma vattaalaafa huri meeheko. midhen bodu jokeh noontha. miyahvure reethi story eh ebain nargis kiyaa kujjaju fashaafaves. eyge sifakurun kiyaalabala. engeyne sifakuraanee kihinehkan. vrh salaam ryn ah and ryn ge over reacting fans ah

25. Ryn kibihini hirey vrah veskuriah nudhy abadhu ehthan kolheh heevanee hama ehpaateh kiaalevey hen feshumeh nimumeh neh hama ehthan koleh bodu haasaru gadeh

    1. hmmm abadhu ekacheh kiyunas foohinuvaa meehun ulheynehnu. ekahala meehunah liya story eh mee. 62 vana episodege inthizaaruga mihuree. esfiya ah vadhejjeyya minoon echcheh mihaaru nufeney viyya. bolah undhangoo. boduvaru mee

26. It’s nice??
    Gud nyts luv u rynnnnn??

27. V v v v reeethiiii as like before….

28. Faathee ebunee thedheh

29. Enmen dhefai dhandiah guireebala

    1. Keeve tha mikahala comments post kurany… v bey adhaby koh thi liyanee…. Comment nukuriyas OK vaane… some negative cmoments are filthy and rude…. adhu ge haalathu

    2. seriously majey!!!
       if you can’t say something good from your mouth than SHUT UP!!!!

30. “Kithahh masaikathaheh kurevihje” …v odd dhw mihen inyma eyge badhalu gai kihaa masaikatheh kurevihje innama jumla furihama vys …

31. Goruhan’daabala enmen baiverigen

    1. mind your language majey!!!!

32. I agree with anon. konme hen ehchehi kiyani kee noon. ekamu vaahaka kiyaa kudhinah ves igeyne hama nujehey jumla thakaa hama nujehey goi tha vaakan. igey ryn ah bae jumlatha liyan adhives neygey kan. thats not a problem. you van improve. ekamu vaahaakige dhebai kulha eh baya ai iru ves ibaarai kurumaa jumlatha mi hunani hama nujehey gotha. mi site ithururu vaahaka tha kiyaali ma igeyna sifakurun genesfa hunna goi. misaalakah kurin Hood kiyaa kujje liyun varah reethi vaane sifakurun. Layaal ves and Shazlyn men kahala liyuntheringe vaahaka kiyaigen gen learn something. konme hen jahsalaign neh noon mi ulheni. aslu theda bunaana nama dhuvaalaku thin hatharu episode up kuraairu ves hunani eh vaahaaka eh liyefa. Ryn liyun hadi ekey ekakuves nubuney. vaahaka concept ves reethi vaahaka emmehun ves ebunani. so nicely appriciate it. no need for people to say hajam nuvaniye. grow up guys.

33. Vaahaka ehkon maadhan up kuran fenani. ehenya mi site hulhuvaa irah mi vaahka eh mi ebureni. eh dhuvahun ninmaalafa make this easier.

34. Mi vaahakai ge mihaathanah genes dhinn part thah dhe dhuvas thin dhuvas fahun up kuriyas aharenn bunaanan mi vaahaka reehchey..
    Cox mihaathanah nerunu baithah vv salhi..
    Aharun mi vaahaka reehchey bunany mi vaahaka dhuvahaku two parts or more parts up kohh dheythy ehh noon… Mi vaahaka hama reethi kamum…dhn baehh meehun nakah kamaku nudhaan meehaku kithahme varakah rangalhu kurann try kuriyass..
    Kaey men nahh meehaku enme furihama vaahaka ehh liyegen esfiya site ahh e vaahaka nerunas kaey menn bunaane haadha hadi eyy haadha foohsey abadhu ekahchekoa..

    1. reethi nooniyya hama buneveynee hadi a dho. anonymous bunihen gr5 ge kujjaaves liyaane mifenvaran. samething happen over n over again hindi series akah vure kanthah fala. mihaathanah ai iru kiyaara n zaain abadhu offieehuga. ayaan magumtheega,..bla bla bla. so dramatic. bodu accidenteh hinag 1 duvahun heyara. only 3 months ge kanthah handhaan nethi. anehka kuhli kah handhaanve. wat nonsense.. hadikamun obinees to tha max LOL

    2. brainless veema dhen vaanee ves thihen. mi writer ah nataional award dheyn feney. vaahaka kiyaa enmen “speechless” kohlaaha molhu liyuntherieh veema award haggu hama. binmaves bandah jehijje mihaaru. GARUNUGE LIYUNTHERIYA he he he LOL

    3. Brainless thi buny rangalhu vaahakaeh kanneyge…. Aslu mashah heevany rangalhu kuranjehey kanthahthah kiyaadhinyma rangalhu vaane kanneyge thi gothah comment kurumah vure

35. vaahaka liyevey varuge myhunn ge vaahaka ehnu hulhuvaa konmefaharaku ebureyni. eheney kiyaafa vakihisaabakunn vaahaka huttaala myhunn keenkuraani. mivaahaka hama v reethi. ryn ge ehnn vaahaka thahves v rythi. thihaaa burakoh ulhemunn ves thikuraa hiyyvarah hma saabas

    1. nooney. thee real ushaali ah nuviyas ushaali vaahakathah mi Ryn ge avaahaka ah vure maa reethi. maa real. mithaa konmehen up kuraneekee vaahaka liyeveyha meehunge echchehseh noon. hama thaakun thaaku nujehey echchehives eba upkurey. like this one. waiting for ushaali story

36. don’t be too harsh guys. ryn is trying to improve her writing. evves myhaki professional writer eh noon dho. ryn ge level in ryn vaahaka e liyanee. gabool kuran eh kameh mivanee gina episode thakuga. dhen ryn ekan balaigane dhen ryn liyaane story eh ga ekan rangalhu kuraane dho. negative comment kurumaki massala eh noon. ekam ekan ves reethi gothuga kureema rangalhu vaanee. rangalhu. rangalhu kuran v kanthah ryn ah kiyuntherin bunedheebala. ehaa busy koh ulhemun ves kiyuntherin evarakah edheythythaa dho komme dhuvahaku 3 parts upload kohdheynee. ekan balaigane kamunudha kankan reethi koh bunedheeebala. don’t make fun of her writing. if you really hate this story please stop commenting like that.

    1. massala akee Ryn eh noon .massala akee fans. Ryn akee raajjeygaves neiyvaruge molhu liyuntheriehkan angan baeh meehun massahkaiy kurany. most famous writers aa alhaa kiyaa emeehun nakee ehves baeh noonkan dhakkan massakaiy kuranee. konme meehakahves emeehaka ekasheegenva gothah thaureefu kuranvaanee. aharemenge rasoolaage sunnathunve ekan dheyhavey. ekaleygefaanu engevee khudhu ekaleyge faanahves haggu noon varaha thaureefu nukuran. e ee hamaekani dhuiye dhuh perfect insaanaa. ehen vma haggu nuvaa thaureeefu kohgen molhukuran ulhunakas molheh nuvaane. rynge level in ryn ah thaureef kohbala. eyrun okvaane. best of luck ryn

    2. Saloo ebuny thedeh . Ryn is tryin her best dhw

    3. I think you’re right…..

    4. I’m also with you ryn… N I love you’re stories….❤

    5. you guys are right!!!
       and for readers learn to appretiate

37. mashah engey magey comments nujahaakan. keiynuvee dho. please accept the truth

    1. massala akee haggu noon thaureefu kuraathee. emeehehge level in thaureef kohbala. maa molhu meehakah hadhaigen bolah lumuge maanaeh neiy minoonkas mi raajjeyga liyuntherin ulhey.

    2. Eii bolah lanyky nuney. E hiyvaru dheny. Ekimeehun ge hunnaany eki goiy dhw . N ryn eba v try kurey dhw. Try kuraa meehakah kuriyah dheveyny vx ehn meehunge hiy varaa eh kon . So kmme gotheh viyas i am with ryn

    3. dhuiye dhuh hamaekani perfect insaanakee aharemenge rasoolaa. ekaleyge faanuves angavanee haggunoon varah ekaleyge faanan thaureefu nukuran. ehenveema meehehge neiyvarun thaureefu kurumakee sunnathaaves khilaafukameh. emeehaage hithuga bodaakamaai kiburuverikan ufedheyne kameh. haggubas gaboolukuranves jehey.insaafah loabikuranves jehey. V VEDHUN .GOODNIGHT.

    4. hey guys don’t make this a big deal!!!
       each person have different tastes….so maybe one might like it and other might not like it.. anyways the point is even if you don’t like it also just say it politely….

38. Aslu meege msin character aky..ayaan n aaliya..bt mi dhemeehun ge baa gennaleh v v madhu..
    Haassakoh ayaan ge baa v v madhukan faahaga kurevey..maa ginain xaain and kiyaaraage baa genesfa hunnanee..baeh faharu heevey xaain ey meege main character akee..ehenveema kamaku nudhey ..dhen story eh viyyas rom baaves laan jeheyne..eyrun bodah interest vaanee kiuntherin..mi kankan rangalhu kollan feney..thigothah ginain upbkuraathee v ufaavey..

39. Wow..some of these comments tho. If you have ideas on how the author can improve, then share it by all means, but share your criticism constructively. I’m appalled at seeing the nasty comments here. Some of you are downright insulting the author. I’ve only seen readers leaving really insulting and demoralizing comments on this site only. I’m a writer on wattpad and I never see this kind of appalling comments there. Sure, they give negative feedback too but they do it in a friendly and encouraging manner. They don’t personally attack the author. Be kind to one another guys.

    Anyways, i aplogise for the rant but couldn’t help it. And to the author i want to say that you’re doing a great job. Keep improving, keep shining.

    1. your right Ellie
       we readers have to learn to respect the writer!!!!
       And we need to go to serious respecting classes!!!

40. U are the best ryn…????

    1. Gabuulu kuran enmen enme molhu nuvaane kan ves. ekam ves ryn ah ves engen vaane dhw kiyaa iru ves hama nujehey kanthah hunna kan. mee mihaaru 37th ep. ekam adhives maa bodu kameh nuvey. twist thah ves hunnanee over react kohfa abadhu. TBH mee adhi miveehaathanah kiyunu enme hama nujehey enme filmy vaahaka.

41. Story kamunudhanyaà nukiyaaabala….. 5 fingers equal nuvaaa fadhain emmen ehvarakah molheh adhi perfect eh ves nuvaane…. konme meeheh ves try kuraane emeeehehge best dheyn… so màa bodah zaaathee nuvumah govaalan. Thihin hedheema hiy maruvun noon kameh nuvaaane….. hiyvarudheeegen ragalhuves kureveyneee…. ryn u r the best n keep ur work improving…

42. Ryn ah dhivehi bas dhas koh dhybala plx

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