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1. Haadha imlaa kusheh eba huttey. Double click kiyaa echcheh onnaane. Eyge beynun hifumah naseyhaih therivan.

   1. Double check ***

   2. Double Click ????

2. Enmen sifakuran jeheytha hama mivarah. Haadha bolah undhagoo.

3. Midhen vaahaka eh tha??Sifakurunthah genesdheefa hurigothun vara hadi vaahaka. Maa haasaraugandu bodee.

4. Huh.. Chydi…!

5. Sifakurumuge bai maa dhigeeye.

6. omg….what is this!!!!! sifa kurun mee hahha not e stroyyy

7. N name thah haadha ehgothey… Better chanj dhem… Dhemyhun dhemyhun couple hadhaafa viyya e hunnany… Loll

8. mihaar ingihjje ey enmen hunna goiy..dhen story avahah faashaa..BTW reethi ingey..??

   1. biruveri story eh v ma v kiyaahiyvey..?

9. are you still studying school ga?hama ahalee ingey.work even harder and make this story a good one ingey.all the very best!

10. Haadha varakah sifakurun..v bolah undhagu..ebai ragalhu kohleema ok waane hen heewani

    1. whash it

11. Mi a kiyaani sifa kurun…….not story

12. Eyy maavashey. So v kiyaahiyvehje maavah veema

13. Maavashaa behey vaahaka akiyyaa reethivaan vaane vara

    1. ?????

14. Sifa kuri kureenun OVER vefa ennu
    ??…….. ehen kakamaka ulhey!

15. Mee dhen varah kada vanee. Maa ginavanee sifa kurun. Aharen boagovanee

16. ??

17. Haadha varakah sifakoh fa … Thankolheh gayaa vaahen story lieba..

18. Miiga ulhey hurihaa anhen kudhing moonuga kalhu thila hurey..mi arathehtha noonii vaahaka ehtha????

19. Kudakoh Meehun Ge Details Madhu Kohlaaafa Story Continue Kohleema Reethi Vaane… Varah Reethi Vaane Henn Heevanee Mi Story.. Best Of Luck Dear ?
    And Negative feedback Thah Balaaganegen Rangalhu Kohlaaa ❤
    Looking Forward?

20. Hehe

21. sifakurunthah limit ga liyeba….dn haadha noo loa thakaa kalhuthila thah ginaey…?? dn adhi kuriah othy kanneynge sifakurunthah…??

22. hehe mee dhn kocheh ?

23. Knme kuhjjege kuda nose akaa blue eyes aa.. ahahaa.. Thi hurihaa enmn thi ehbandu ehbafaa eh noontha.. n nujehey hurihaa characters tha dhuniye mathin reethi hus khlaa varakah reethi vrrkah .. story reethi v ma k vrrne.. but i’ll continue reading this story cx this is a horror story.. try to improve .. actually this story is nice aside those problems. looking forward more from yh.. best of luck!

24. Sifakurun maadhigu, kurukon finikon buneema kiyaahiyyvanee, keep it up

25. Sifakuri kureenun gos ehmen jahanee ehvahthareh
    Maa side characters gina
    Islaahukohlaa

26. Eyee adhi aa veema vaa goith ?

27. Not bad.. hyvany varah salhi vaane henn… ummydhu kurany dhn oiy bai salhi vaane kamah .. n update thankolheh avahah.. plx .. anehhenn bunaanama salhi.. good work

28. Sorry everyone I will improve, hope that you will read my next story I think that story will make you feel happy

29. not so interesting.

30. mi dhn kwcheh? sifa kuran beynun vaa nama stry nuliye ninmaalun eden.. 2 aharu nuvaa kudakudinnah ves mihaa rythi koah liyeveyynekan.. boahalaaku.. adhi koba mistake thah ves varah gina.. mashah heyo nuliye ninmaaliyas.. sifakurun eh nu vaahakaige namakah ves liyanvee?????????????????????????????

31. thy adhi fashai ganna hujjeh vyma mistakes huredhaane. but visnaaleemaves ingeyne. raahje kudhinge thibunaahaa vareh nuvaanekan. blue loleh nuhunnaane dho. aslu raahje ais ulhey beyru baehge vaahaka gothah liyaa nama gulheyne. sifa kurunthah ithuru kuraa nama let me give u a tip. story therein meehun kiyaa hiyvaa gothah ebai genes dheveyne. misaalakah rulhi aisgen eynaage noo kulaige bodu dhelolun balaalieve. nuny height describe koh dhevidhaane eyna thedhuve dhigu hashigandu dhamaali eve. eyrun dhaany story aa ehkon sifa kurunthah. mihaaru adhives story eh nufeshey dho. if u are new i will be glade to help u. dont give up. adhives try kohllaa.

32. Mey ves vaahaka ehge freshmen.goaheh nun

33. Sifa kuri goi kamu nudani next story reethi vane kama hikuran.. good work

34. Huvaa hee hee gayah see levey varu vejje.

    -Nurse Sama-

35. Just LOL .. 😛

36. Biruveri vaguthukolhah inthizaaru gaa……Good job…. But correct the mistakes nxt tym……..

37. Manjey maavashu kujjeh tha dhanna kujjeh vahtharu jahaathy bunely ingey

38. vvv rythi feshun

39. Kaley men dhen thee boduvaru????☠☠??

40. It’s good.. u don’t have to be so harsh ppl.. it takes time to be very good at writing stories..

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